Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
when you are feeling unloved
Doggerel Dave said:
How many possibilities have been lost because withdrawal was the strategy.? Well said my friend.
November 16th, 2021 05:31
Doggerel Dave said:
How many possibilities have been lost because withdrawal was the strategy.? Well said my friend.
November 16th, 2021 05:31
when you are feeling unloved
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Jon, one day home will be filled.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong words Jon, one day home will be filled.
Andy
November 16th, 2021 01:47
when you are feeling unloved
notformymother said:
I love this. Stay kind to yourself, and keep sharing your words - they\'re spectacular.
November 15th, 2021 20:57
notformymother said:
I love this. Stay kind to yourself, and keep sharing your words - they\'re spectacular.
November 15th, 2021 20:57
when you are feeling unloved
dusk arising said:
Deep and meaningful when these words fall at the right moment.
Into my favourites
November 15th, 2021 20:31
dusk arising said:
Deep and meaningful when these words fall at the right moment.
Into my favourites
November 15th, 2021 20:31
the field of poppies
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will always be in your memory.
Andy
November 13th, 2021 03:51
Goldfinch60 said:
That day will always be in your memory.
Andy
November 13th, 2021 03:51
Mother Earth at COP26
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words John, that illusion they are trying to give to us is a complete farce.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true words John, that illusion they are trying to give to us is a complete farce.
Andy
November 6th, 2021 01:47
Mother Earth at COP26
spilleronsheet said:
So we’ll crafted are the true words
Can’t deny the fact that’s the truth
And the last lines so poignant -
“ That last breath was traded for the illusion that cut through you.”
Thank you so much dear poet for sharing such a valuable note and have a great day ahead
November 6th, 2021 01:41
spilleronsheet said:
So we’ll crafted are the true words
Can’t deny the fact that’s the truth
And the last lines so poignant -
“ That last breath was traded for the illusion that cut through you.”
Thank you so much dear poet for sharing such a valuable note and have a great day ahead
November 6th, 2021 01:41
Dracula in Vietnam
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Jon, may they who died be remembered.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Jon, may they who died be remembered.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:41
oyster gray clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness be always with you Jon.
Andy
October 5th, 2021 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
May that brightness be always with you Jon.
Andy
October 5th, 2021 01:04
amber moon
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Jon, sometimes your heart does not join your mind.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Emotive words Jon, sometimes your heart does not join your mind.
Andy
September 30th, 2021 00:35
the wealthy merchant then drowned in the river
Trenz Pruca said:
Great read. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 18:27
Trenz Pruca said:
Great read. Thank you.
September 27th, 2021 18:27
old cans of paint
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from things found from the past can be so moving Jon.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories from things found from the past can be so moving Jon.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:26
aimlessly the summer clouds
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines are so powerful Jon.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Those last two lines are so powerful Jon.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 01:08
Untitled 2021-09-13
Goldfinch60 said:
That new place will always be in your dreams Jon.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That new place will always be in your dreams Jon.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 01:04
he will always haunt you
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a friend who has just got out of such a relationship, it lasted 25 years!
Andy
September 8th, 2021 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a friend who has just got out of such a relationship, it lasted 25 years!
Andy
September 8th, 2021 01:03
the wealthy merchant then drowned in the river
Goldfinch60 said:
Serves him right.
September 4th, 2021 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Serves him right.
September 4th, 2021 00:31
the god of forgotten things
Goldfinch60 said:
Age has this problem of not remembering,
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Age has this problem of not remembering,
Andy
August 31st, 2021 00:59
dictators are like amplifiers
Doggerel Dave said:
You might classify this as surrealist, Jon, but the symbiotic relationship here is clear - and true.
Thanks
August 25th, 2021 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
You might classify this as surrealist, Jon, but the symbiotic relationship here is clear - and true.
Thanks
August 25th, 2021 21:46
The King and The Master Bridge Builders
Goldfinch60 said:
Very thought provoking write Jon which shows so much of what is wrong in this world.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very thought provoking write Jon which shows so much of what is wrong in this world.
Andy
August 21st, 2021 00:54
The Battle of Brandy Station
jarcher54 said:
A fine action poem turned into a meditation on violence, human frailty, and the meaning of life. God has a lot to shake her head about, that\'s for sure. And maybe shed a tear... at some point does God stop trying?
August 19th, 2021 23:15
jarcher54 said:
A fine action poem turned into a meditation on violence, human frailty, and the meaning of life. God has a lot to shake her head about, that\'s for sure. And maybe shed a tear... at some point does God stop trying?
August 19th, 2021 23:15
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