Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau



Eurydice Brand Sneakers
Goldfinch60 said:

On my feet safe maybe but certainly not fast! LOL

December 19th, 2019 01:38

sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:

or
have
to
smile
for
found
love.

December 18th, 2019 02:00

what
Goldfinch60 said:

Need
to
be
reformed.

December 17th, 2019 02:17

the
Goldfinch60 said:

We need a great cycle repair shop to start mending those spokes.

December 16th, 2019 01:10

lies
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

December 14th, 2019 01:46

dont
Goldfinch60 said:

So
True
In
This
Day
And
Age.

December 13th, 2019 02:21

dont
myself and me said:

How could you hide from yourself. Simple but deep.

December 12th, 2019 19:04

dream - 12/11/19
Goldfinch60 said:

May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.

December 12th, 2019 02:00

all of your time can be spent
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Jon - live for the moment.

December 11th, 2019 01:25

Wildean Quip #39
Goldfinch60 said:

It must have been that second bottle of wine.

December 10th, 2019 01:32

fast
Goldfinch60 said:

Falling
Slowly
Into
Wonder.

December 9th, 2019 01:55

my imaginary oracular statements from delphi #1
Goldfinch60 said:

It could direct the Spirits of those within into a place of light.

December 8th, 2019 02:39

justice
Goldfinch60 said:

If only.....

December 7th, 2019 01:35

done
Goldfinch60 said:

May that trip now be over and life is now innocent.

December 5th, 2019 02:53

done
A said:

Its so simple yet very real. I get it, and honestly I love your style.
its raw.

December 4th, 2019 23:16

looking out my kitchen window
Goldfinch60 said:

So sad Jon.

November 27th, 2019 01:31

my imaginary cicero quotes #6
Goldfinch60 said:

One day maybe - but not yet.

November 26th, 2019 01:00

the turkey is in the fridge
Goldfinch60 said:

A telling thought indeed.

November 25th, 2019 01:54

near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, I have so far avoided the hook for many years, it got close once but I managed to throw out the hook.

November 24th, 2019 01:56

near the dark stream that flows through all hearts
FredPeyer said:

Great metaphors and visual design!

November 23rd, 2019 22:56

this year i have been a punching bag
FredPeyer said:

There are days when I would love to hear that bell!
Well said, Jon.

November 23rd, 2019 13:56

this year i have been a punching bag
Goldfinch60 said:

The round is now over Jon as I have rung the bell.

November 23rd, 2019 01:12

hiding behind a mirror
Goldfinch60 said:

I take it that you won the contest with this incredible write.

November 21st, 2019 02:17

happiness
Goldfinch60 said:

Happiness will be there waiting for you when you wake.

November 15th, 2019 01:52

never
Goldfinch60 said:

I have been working very hard at it for many years, it is nearly complete.

November 14th, 2019 01:22

the
Goldfinch60 said:

So true Jon.

November 13th, 2019 03:23

think
Goldfinch60 said:

Her box is so full of questions that may never be answered.

November 8th, 2019 02:00

my legal ponderings #1
Goldfinch60 said:

So many questions of legality get asked and explained in words that can be misunderstood by many.

November 7th, 2019 01:26

[under amplified concern]
Aislinn Wilson said:

The last line really drives your whole poem home.

November 5th, 2019 22:23

realization
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true.

November 5th, 2019 01:55



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