Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
land of vended broken heart
jarcher54 said:
What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and specificity. We can hear the crinkle of the bags of chips and jerky, see the sad smile... we love Charlie and we don\'t even know him!
May 29th, 2021 01:58
jarcher54 said:
What a portrait! Your little vignette is poignant in its simplicity and specificity. We can hear the crinkle of the bags of chips and jerky, see the sad smile... we love Charlie and we don\'t even know him!
May 29th, 2021 01:58
in the shadow of a shadow
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all and can lead us to the wonder in our lives.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all and can lead us to the wonder in our lives.
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:35
it must have been in summers past
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking for perfection will fail, but if you accept hat you have in life all will be well.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking for perfection will fail, but if you accept hat you have in life all will be well.
Andy
May 27th, 2021 00:44
it must have been in summers past
rosiedm said:
Nice thoughts about the past
Waiting for time but then hunger ate it lol
May 26th, 2021 17:18
rosiedm said:
Nice thoughts about the past
Waiting for time but then hunger ate it lol
May 26th, 2021 17:18
how i have looked for that single point
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have such points in our life but if we count them there will be more points of happiness than sadness.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have such points in our life but if we count them there will be more points of happiness than sadness.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 01:09
To Aiden Leos
Goldfinch60 said:
So very sad that a six year old should lose his life in this way.
Andy
May 25th, 2021 00:57
Goldfinch60 said:
So very sad that a six year old should lose his life in this way.
Andy
May 25th, 2021 00:57
blue dragonfly
dusk arising said:
Thank you for reminding me of this wonderful spectacle seen beneath bright sunlight. A great natural reward for anyones eye.
May 17th, 2021 17:05
dusk arising said:
Thank you for reminding me of this wonderful spectacle seen beneath bright sunlight. A great natural reward for anyones eye.
May 17th, 2021 17:05
the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
rosiedm said:
Is there more please seems unfinished..fall awake into that place 🤔😚
May 6th, 2021 12:52
rosiedm said:
Is there more please seems unfinished..fall awake into that place 🤔😚
May 6th, 2021 12:52
the ghost of a blue rose haunts pierrot this winter evening
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Jon.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 23:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive words Jon.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 23:58
[vampire pool parties are fun]
Jon Nakapalau said:
Now you have made me hungry Andy!
May 5th, 2021 15:57
Jon Nakapalau said:
Now you have made me hungry Andy!
May 5th, 2021 15:57
[vampire pool parties are fun]
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Don\'t put any garlic in the sauce to go with the lobsters.🤣
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:05
sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you back Jon with such a good poem.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Good to see you back Jon with such a good poem.
Andy
April 27th, 2021 00:17
can
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans eh. A fab poem indeed. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
July 7th, 2020 05:49
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Woah wow clever and witty!! How a lil thing can offset and upset big plans eh. A fab poem indeed. Kudos.
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too. Thanks
July 7th, 2020 05:49
spring soil is always a canvas
Goldfinch60 said:
May that masterpiece bring colour and delight to us all.
Andy
March 7th, 2020 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
May that masterpiece bring colour and delight to us all.
Andy
March 7th, 2020 01:58
imaginary cowboy quotes #34
Goldfinch60 said:
I see those tumbleweeds in a shopping centre in our town that is gradually dieting.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I see those tumbleweeds in a shopping centre in our town that is gradually dieting.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:18
dream - 3/2/20
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page can have so many messages put onto it.
March 3rd, 2020 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page can have so many messages put onto it.
March 3rd, 2020 01:58
that love which you leave behind
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be so hurtful but always remembered.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be so hurtful but always remembered.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:30
that love which you leave behind
myself and me said:
\"is that your heart can echo beat
for something that is dead\"
that is why the heart ache so much. Well penned.
February 27th, 2020 23:12
myself and me said:
\"is that your heart can echo beat
for something that is dead\"
that is why the heart ache so much. Well penned.
February 27th, 2020 23:12
that love which you leave behind
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted love, this is truly highly remarkable, the ending lines were the jewel in the crown if brilliance, this must be of your masterpieces!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem here too.
February 27th, 2020 23:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted love, this is truly highly remarkable, the ending lines were the jewel in the crown if brilliance, this must be of your masterpieces!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem here too.
February 27th, 2020 23:10
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