Comments received on poems by Jon Nakapalau
imaginary cowboy quotes #34
Goldfinch60 said:
I see those tumbleweeds in a shopping centre in our town that is gradually dieting.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I see those tumbleweeds in a shopping centre in our town that is gradually dieting.
Andy
March 4th, 2020 02:18
dream - 3/2/20
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page can have so many messages put onto it.
March 3rd, 2020 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
That blank page can have so many messages put onto it.
March 3rd, 2020 01:58
that love which you leave behind
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be so hurtful but always remembered.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
That love can be so hurtful but always remembered.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:30
that love which you leave behind
myself and me said:
\"is that your heart can echo beat
for something that is dead\"
that is why the heart ache so much. Well penned.
February 27th, 2020 23:12
myself and me said:
\"is that your heart can echo beat
for something that is dead\"
that is why the heart ache so much. Well penned.
February 27th, 2020 23:12
that love which you leave behind
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted love, this is truly highly remarkable, the ending lines were the jewel in the crown if brilliance, this must be of your masterpieces!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem here too.
February 27th, 2020 23:10
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wowww such an awesomely creative poem on the effect of the ex and jilted love, this is truly highly remarkable, the ending lines were the jewel in the crown if brilliance, this must be of your masterpieces!!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem here too.
February 27th, 2020 23:10
evening traffic on the highway
Goldfinch60 said:
Been there, done that, got the T-shirt.
February 13th, 2020 03:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Been there, done that, got the T-shirt.
February 13th, 2020 03:06
it was not your leaving
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write Jon.
Andy
February 10th, 2020 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderfully emotive write Jon.
Andy
February 10th, 2020 02:49
this was the last time
Goldfinch60 said:
Most times that noose can be untied and all will be well.
January 25th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Most times that noose can be untied and all will be well.
January 25th, 2020 01:17
early in the morning
Goldfinch60 said:
Eternity is there for us all - see you there Jon.
January 12th, 2020 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Eternity is there for us all - see you there Jon.
January 12th, 2020 02:16
once there was (#3)
Nicholas Browning said:
And they can stay there! We\'ve got enough problems on our little orb as it is. Might be bad if they go absorbing the moon too, though. Hmmm. Quite the conundrum.
January 3rd, 2020 17:03
Nicholas Browning said:
And they can stay there! We\'ve got enough problems on our little orb as it is. Might be bad if they go absorbing the moon too, though. Hmmm. Quite the conundrum.
January 3rd, 2020 17:03
do you remember the night
Goldfinch60 said:
A memory that will never leave you.
December 30th, 2019 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
A memory that will never leave you.
December 30th, 2019 01:46
broken
Goldfinch60 said:
It may not be, as hell is in my garage where there are more than one broken vacuum cleaners
December 27th, 2019 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
It may not be, as hell is in my garage where there are more than one broken vacuum cleaners
December 27th, 2019 02:56
numbness burns out
Goldfinch60 said:
May that buoyancy be forever with you.
December 22nd, 2019 02:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May that buoyancy be forever with you.
December 22nd, 2019 02:57
Eurydice Brand Sneakers
Goldfinch60 said:
On my feet safe maybe but certainly not fast! LOL
December 19th, 2019 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
On my feet safe maybe but certainly not fast! LOL
December 19th, 2019 01:38
the
Goldfinch60 said:
We need a great cycle repair shop to start mending those spokes.
December 16th, 2019 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
We need a great cycle repair shop to start mending those spokes.
December 16th, 2019 01:10
dont
myself and me said:
How could you hide from yourself. Simple but deep.
December 12th, 2019 19:04
myself and me said:
How could you hide from yourself. Simple but deep.
December 12th, 2019 19:04
dream - 12/11/19
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.
December 12th, 2019 02:00
Goldfinch60 said:
May that kiss free all the pain from your dreams.
December 12th, 2019 02:00
all of your time can be spent
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jon - live for the moment.
December 11th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Jon - live for the moment.
December 11th, 2019 01:25
Wildean Quip #39
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been that second bottle of wine.
December 10th, 2019 01:32
Goldfinch60 said:
It must have been that second bottle of wine.
December 10th, 2019 01:32
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