Comments received on poems by The Gifted One



The Meek, The Sinner, The Believer
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

What a thoughtful statement you have made and I hope it will be adhered to by all. Thank you for penning such a wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing such words of wisdom. :)



October 7th, 2018 16:55

Kiss The Rainbow
Scrambled Letters said:

Beautifully choreographed

September 28th, 2018 13:01

Kiss The Rainbow
Theta the scholar said:

As beautiful as a rainbow, such an amazing write, keep up the amazing work, although i don\'t think i can mimic the beauty of a rainbow. Have a nice day.
-Theta

September 28th, 2018 11:48

Sexual Assault
dusk arising said:

Dont be mislead by a sly slippery tongued compliments from potential wolves. After all, you dont know what they do elsewhere, or what motivates them.
ho-hum.

September 27th, 2018 00:17

Rush Of The Fallen Wind
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Your words of wisdom in poetic form are impressive, and the thoughts of the heart extremely romantic.

Great job! :)

September 25th, 2018 13:09

Tattered Angel
fuche_bu said:

Now I feel guilty. I don\'t want others to suffer for my sins.

September 23rd, 2018 08:11

Through A Man’s Heart Is Through His Stomach
fuche_bu said:

What if the man likes to do the cooking?

September 21st, 2018 10:24

Ain’t No Sunshine When He’s Gone
Scrambled Letters said:

Beautifully sated

September 20th, 2018 07:45

I Give You The Stars You Gave Me The Moon
The Gifted One said:

Mmm, you are good. I hope in more ways than one love…wink. Oh, thank you for delving into the abyss of ecstasy raining inside of me…I mean my words, sorry.

The Gifted One





September 19th, 2018 12:40

I Give You The Stars You Gave Me The Moon
Nicholas Browning said:

Ooookkkaaaayyyyy.
So, when I was browsing through today\'s poems on the front page, I came across this. So I said to myself, \"Gosh, with a title like that it had better be something good.\" Now let me tell you, I was not expecting an a,a,a,a, - b,b,b,b, rhyme scheme free verse ballad. That was sneaky. I was expecting some love-junkie mess about feelings being reciprocated and all is well. That\'s not what I\'m here for.

Alrighty then, let\'s do it.
So, the poem is about giving someone your affection and having them return it in a very brief manner, only for them to disappear. That\'s some rough material. I like how it just jumped straight into the whole wishing they would have stayed, and then the transition to how it affected the author. That was a nice touch. Overall, a proportionately cryptic read with a hint of sadness and loathing while the protagonist is trying to identify their emotional state.
I enjoyed it. Thank you for posting.

September 19th, 2018 05:28

I Give You The Stars You Gave Me The Moon
kevin browne said:

Brilliant piece of writing. The flow was really nice to read and the interpretations, the metaphor is alive all the way through to the end. A;so, I\'d love to come and live on the Moon with you. How such fun could be created by living on another planet. Excellent write, my friend.

September 19th, 2018 05:10

My Muse
Unsub said:

Gifted,

highly visual erotic piece.

Unsub.

September 18th, 2018 10:13

Two Minutes
The Gifted One said:

The only reply in my head that comes to mind is, You Make Me Feel Like A Natural Woman, a complimented song, of the late Aretha Franklin. Thanks for reading handsome one. Have a great day, off day for me…yippy

The Gifted One


September 17th, 2018 09:50

Naked Canvas
Poetic Dan said:

Wow that was beautiful captured so well what it feels like to put it all out naked as my soul on the page, as I dance and sing on this stage.
Thank you for this wonderful style you gave to hang in my mental gallery!

Much love and respect

September 17th, 2018 04:02

True Love What Is It
fuche_bu said:

lovely poem.

September 16th, 2018 14:44

Aphrodisiac
fuche_bu said:

So my mistake is calling myself a glorified wordsmith?

September 11th, 2018 19:43

Aphrodisiac
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Very sexy and well written...nice work

September 11th, 2018 11:39

Can I Write You A Love Song
fuche_bu said:

Be still my beating heart. I\'ll comment when I catch my breath.

September 9th, 2018 14:07

Melodies Of The Heart
Crystal Hope said:

such a magnificent and profound read.

September 8th, 2018 19:55

Tarzan
fuche_bu said:

nice imagery.

September 8th, 2018 06:58

Tarzan
Santita said:

Enchanting and vivid write!

September 7th, 2018 13:36

Earthbound
The Gifted One said:

You sure know how to make a woman blush. Thanks for reading and then taking the time to comment handsome one. Have a great Tuesday as well.

The Gifted One

September 4th, 2018 09:25

Troubled Waters
fuche_bu said:

strong imagery. This is a good poem.

September 3rd, 2018 11:41

Troubled Waters
Crystal Hope said:

A fantastic piece. Quite moving!

September 2nd, 2018 20:02

Troubled Waters
Candlewitch said:

hello,

great imagery that brings things into focus and magnifies emotions! nice to meet you!

*hugs, Cat

September 2nd, 2018 13:57