Comments received on poems by Neville



War a Senryu
dusk arising said:

Both of which are not dollar earners for the power crazed.

Sadly how true are your words when we look at the history of mankind.

August 16th, 2019 12:17

Through a Tangle of Shadows
FineB said:

Hello Neville

A good write!

Certainly unforgettable.

I hope you were gentle with your lady friend.

Keep writing FineB

August 16th, 2019 12:00

Through a Tangle of Shadows
Fay Slimm. said:

Shadows veer imagination toward the forbidden at times and these beguiling lines have a touch of hidden erotic that leaves a tangle of what, where and why in my curious mind - - - you conjour excitement with veritable ease mon ami.................

August 16th, 2019 06:54

Through a Tangle of Shadows
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Out there Neville...
Out There

August 16th, 2019 06:15

Through a Tangle of Shadows
orchidee said:

What\'s going on there?! Oohh. And should I try it?! lol.

August 16th, 2019 01:46

Singular I’s
Suresh said:

In reality it\'s always been only an \"I\", the we and the us was are imposed relationships.

No regrets

August 15th, 2019 23:32

War a Senryu
PoeticBiscuit said:

Speaking the truth in a nice little write.

August 15th, 2019 23:15

Singular I’s
SerenWise said:

Beautifully written, elegant yet simple

August 15th, 2019 22:27

War a Senryu
Christina8 said:

Great senryu and very true!

August 15th, 2019 10:48

War a Senryu
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Sweet, Sweet observation Neville

August 15th, 2019 04:26

War a Senryu
orchidee said:

Can you help? I took a blue pill by mistake?!

August 15th, 2019 03:31

War a Senryu
sylviasearcher said:

A more true observation I could not have made myself

August 15th, 2019 02:20

War a Senryu
Poetic Dan said:

Wiser than the enemy will ever be!
Poetry will set us all free

August 15th, 2019 01:57

War a Senryu
Fay Slimm. said:

Enlightening senryu dear Nev and so very true. Hate and war indeed beget outcry from poets which rings with experience we cannot forget.

August 15th, 2019 01:55

War a Senryu
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks NEVILLE ~ Our MANTRA has always been *Make Love not War !* Ever since CAIN killed ABEL ~ mankind has been at WAR ! Since 1945 (74 years ~ a lifetime !) there has not been another World War. However in the last 74 years there has always been a *WAR* somewhere on Earth. Millions have been killed - most of them innocent Civilians !

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡

August 15th, 2019 01:53

War a Senryu
Michael Edwards said:

And so it always will be - great little \'un.

August 15th, 2019 01:37

War a Senryu
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

August 15th, 2019 01:27

War a Senryu
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true.

Poem by Spike Milligan:

\"If I die in war,
You will remember me.
If I live in peace,
You won\'t\"

August 15th, 2019 01:20

Singular I’s
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write Neville.

August 14th, 2019 15:40

Singular I’s
PoeticBiscuit said:

I very much enjoy the formatting of your poems, they’re always so appealing to the eyes.

August 14th, 2019 14:06

Talk Me Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:

My eyes fell on this resurrected piece of bold story-telling again and had just as much thrill reading it the second time Nev....... your gift for the atmospheric never fails ........ great read.

August 14th, 2019 10:31

Singular I’s
Christina8 said:

A bit of a sad write for today but very well penned.

August 14th, 2019 09:57

Singular I’s
Michael Edwards said:

Singularly good write Neville
😊

August 14th, 2019 04:24

Singular I’s
FineB said:

Hi Neville,

A wonderful, imaginative write.

Keep writing FineB

August 14th, 2019 04:15

Singular I’s
sylviasearcher said:

You know you just snapped my attention with the formatting.

The lonely page

My favourite line 😊

August 14th, 2019 04:10

Singular I’s
orchidee said:

Doh! I\'m all in a tizzy.
Am I \'I\', \'Me\'. \'or \'Myself\'? Or am I \'You\'?
Nope, I can\'t be you, cos you are you!
I\'m digging this hole deeper, and I\'m in it.... lol.
(Take a purple pill or two, Orchi).

August 14th, 2019 02:58

Singular I’s
Fay Slimm. said:

Sad but inevitable the procession from nearness to singular when love gets forgotten and lonely wings in.......... a telling write Nev and penned with your usual short-line style it has such a poignant feel....................... Fay

August 14th, 2019 02:49

Singular I’s
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

:-(

August 14th, 2019 02:49

Why When Where and How
Silkseduction said:

Great work, Neville.
xx

August 13th, 2019 16:35

Why When Where and How
SerenWise said:

I like this one

August 12th, 2019 19:19



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