Comments received on poems by Neville
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Seek said:
Poignancy coming to life as inspired words fall on deaf ears answered with silence. A fine write, Neville!
September 5th, 2019 08:42
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderful write dear Nev! A read much enjoyed.
September 5th, 2019 06:25
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A wonderful and poignant write.
Keep writing FineB
September 5th, 2019 04:09
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Michael Edwards said:
Broken words that fall on arid lands
will no more grow again
nor will the words you sow on unreceptive minds.
Just had a little poetic moment inspired by your fine write N.
September 5th, 2019 03:08
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
dusk arising said:
Reads like wishful thinking. The desire to forget that which haunts ones mind.
Last verse is a nice twist.
September 5th, 2019 02:18
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Fay Slimm. said:
Words that break needed silence are but as this strong poem relates - a sin of sorts........... behind the eyes is where memory stores hurts....... An engaging read again Nev.
September 5th, 2019 02:15
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I won\'t punish ya with silence - rather with sound - of me singing! heehee.
I\'m cruel - I must punish everyone then! lol.
September 5th, 2019 01:29
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will forever be within you and within others as we read them on the page.
September 5th, 2019 00:48
A Ladies Man
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
Poetic Dan said:
Brilliant ! I still am and many came close but in the end I think I died as ever day I do feel reborn.
Never stop sailing, being who you are!
September 4th, 2019 16:36
A Ladies Man
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
Suresh said:
......ain\'t it so that in the end there\'s always the one for whom we will even choose death.....
September 4th, 2019 09:49
A Ladies Man
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
Christina8 said:
Great cadence to this...and who wants to be single?? This is a superb write!!
September 4th, 2019 09:46
A Ladies Man
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
Clara said:
N,
There\'s such a rhythm to these words that I enjoy! Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:33
A Ladies Man
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Wow...
An extraordinary write which I enjoyed reading!
~Laura~
September 4th, 2019 04:16
A Ladies Man
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Neville. Once you have found the right person the \' Ladies man\' need not exist anymore.
September 4th, 2019 01:43
A Ladies Man
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
dusk arising said:
Singleton lifestyle is freedom to do exactly as u like..... and retain that roaming eye (convinced of course one still has those ladykiller looks).
On the other hand, a good cook and bottlewasher?
September 4th, 2019 01:37
A Ladies Man
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
orchidee said:
Some of these poems on this site will be the death of me - or the swoon of me! lol.
September 4th, 2019 01:35
For The Sake of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
The thoughts of the past are ever intriguing.
September 4th, 2019 01:07
For The Sake of Poetry
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
A good write
Good.
Keep writing FineB
September 3rd, 2019 10:12
For The Sake of Poetry
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
Poetic Dan said:
What a great ending!
Much appreciated
September 3rd, 2019 09:47
For The Sake of Poetry
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
Christina8 said:
Great write, Nev..wonderful dangling ending I must say...
September 3rd, 2019 07:07
For The Sake of Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Great write and I love the dangling ending.
September 3rd, 2019 03:26
For The Sake of Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
Fay Slimm. said:
A smile for this beguiling end again Nev --- you are a master at leaving mystery in your tale-endings.
September 3rd, 2019 03:12
For The Sake of Poetry
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write Nev. I was gonna write a poem: \'Oh, for the sake of...\' or \'Oh for the love of...\'
Aww, why did they suggest \'For the love of God, or for the love of me ear-drums, no more singing from me\'?! heehee.
Where\'s the purple tablets?
September 3rd, 2019 01:52
For The Sake of Poetry
kevin browne said:
In the sprin of justifying a love bound attraction to this kilted girly sounding so beautiful and rare. Graet write, Nev and you never let us down with the pen you hold. Nice work...
September 3rd, 2019 01:43
kevin browne said:
In the sprin of justifying a love bound attraction to this kilted girly sounding so beautiful and rare. Graet write, Nev and you never let us down with the pen you hold. Nice work...
September 3rd, 2019 01:43
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
dusk arising said:
In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown places which have not seen the light of day for years - thank goodness for navy blue knickers and linoleum.
Your bedroom walls must have witnessed many a romp compared to my woodchip surrounds.
Great entertaining writing, romancing the stone walls.
August 29th, 2019 11:39
dusk arising said:
In my trade i have lifted many a floorboard Put my hand into dark unknown places which have not seen the light of day for years - thank goodness for navy blue knickers and linoleum.
Your bedroom walls must have witnessed many a romp compared to my woodchip surrounds.
Great entertaining writing, romancing the stone walls.
August 29th, 2019 11:39
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ~ Something which I (Brian) can relate to ! I love rooms with *Old Stone Walls* and have stayed in several in my time. We all leave some of our DNA (Destination Note Alert !) wherever we lay our Heads. We leave Our Presence for them to sense and they in their turn leave theirs ! My experience is that when I sleep in an Antique Room in my slumber I always hear voices and see spectres moving through the Walls ~ the reminder of previous occupants. However they are never tangible always ephemeral ~ SPOOKY. Warner Hotels (UK) have some excellent old Bedrooms one can stay in ~ at your own risk !
Thanks for scaring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 29th, 2019 10:21
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE ~ Something which I (Brian) can relate to ! I love rooms with *Old Stone Walls* and have stayed in several in my time. We all leave some of our DNA (Destination Note Alert !) wherever we lay our Heads. We leave Our Presence for them to sense and they in their turn leave theirs ! My experience is that when I sleep in an Antique Room in my slumber I always hear voices and see spectres moving through the Walls ~ the reminder of previous occupants. However they are never tangible always ephemeral ~ SPOOKY. Warner Hotels (UK) have some excellent old Bedrooms one can stay in ~ at your own risk !
Thanks for scaring !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours B & A 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 29th, 2019 10:21
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Suresh said:
\"If walls could only talk\"
well, you just made them sing
August 29th, 2019 09:11
Suresh said:
\"If walls could only talk\"
well, you just made them sing
August 29th, 2019 09:11
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Christina8 said:
It\'s fascinating, the history of your bedroom walls....read so perfectly! A wonderful read Neville.
August 29th, 2019 06:33
Christina8 said:
It\'s fascinating, the history of your bedroom walls....read so perfectly! A wonderful read Neville.
August 29th, 2019 06:33
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