Comments received on poems by Neville
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
May that smile be forever there Neville.
Andy
June 2nd, 2021 00:29
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Doggerel Dave said:
To tell more would be to spoil it, I think, Neville. Best leave it right there, as you so carefully did.
June 1st, 2021 19:55
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
orchidee said:
I might have met some of these fine gals, with notes in my Little Red (?) Book.
But were they too much for me?! lol.
June 1st, 2021 09:25
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
L. B. Mek said:
this was scarily reminiscent
of a crisp clear, cherished memory
I keep close
in those corridors of our heart\'s
where Time, can\'t blemish the sanctity
of a moment that exists
to reaffirm our tethers: to existence, itself...
utilising sumptuous imagery, my friend
a wonderful read
June 1st, 2021 05:02
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrilling as ever your best \"rainbow moment\" with I suspect a new family member.......... such a tender-packed bouquet of poetic wealth to keep and remember forever - - - or maybe the verse recalls another time of first smiles when a different amour struck afresh -- - - I love how the last line ends ........x
June 1st, 2021 03:14
Once Upon a Freckled Cheek
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
dusk arising said:
Delightful. I\'m jealous.
How do you pack so much into short lines?
June 1st, 2021 02:41
Sheen
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Trenz Pruca said:
I get an image of shimmering crystal as I read this. Good poem. Thank you.
May 31st, 2021 19:14
Sheen
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
SureshG said:
Sheen, a film thinner than the thinnest object, that your words colored so poetically
May 31st, 2021 11:36
Sheen
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
orchidee said:
Can ya beat a bit of sheen? And am I talking nonsense now?
And - does anyone notice the difference if I am?! lol.
I thought it was gonna be about polishing. You got any Mr Sheen?
May 31st, 2021 06:49
Riding a Curve
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was like
riding a curve ..
Set in stone
upon a simple
eyelash flutter\'..
see now, that\'s that Poetry: that can never be replicated
merely copied and imitated...
simply, and as ever subtly: Brilliant!
thanks for sharing my friend
May 31st, 2021 03:46
Sheen
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh Yes -- Sheen - you use one of my favourite words in this gloriously readable verse on its meaning Nev -- an intriguingly gorgeous first read of my day and thanking you dearly......x
May 31st, 2021 03:10
Sheen
Caring dove said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Caring dove said:
Lovely words . I liked reading this nicely expressed and flows nicely
May 31st, 2021 02:26
Riding a Curve
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
SureshG said:
One more in a series of sensuous recollections, so thoroughly enjoyed.
May 30th, 2021 16:00
Riding a Curve
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with Fay, Neville. A very sensuous poem.
May 30th, 2021 13:58
Riding a Curve
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a sensuous read - know what you mean by knowing and hope that stone softened in time mon ami.....x
May 30th, 2021 12:43
Virus
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Pre covid. Prophetic or what?
Poignant write on its own, without the current situation, Neville.
Covid, \'cunning\', mutable, aspires to be everything you list , if that\'s not too anthropomorphic.
This one is ready for a re-run, I think.
May 30th, 2021 07:36
Mirrors Cracked
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Got It...and no, I\'m not gonna ask - I see too many bits of my own life and relationships in there to want to take on any of yours.
Thanks for that, Neville.
May 30th, 2021 07:07
Riding a Curve
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve bin battered and bruised by these birds lately, ain\'t you, Neville?
Any chance better times ahead? 😊
Advice to the lovelorn? Surely you could pass one of them on who would not be too damaging to poor old orchi? 😊
May 30th, 2021 05:50
Riding a Curve
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
dusk arising said:
Unforgettable short lived times. Like ehen a beautiful butterfly lands on your forhead, you open your eyes to see its beautiful colours and it shits in your eye. Unforgettable.
May 30th, 2021 04:31
Riding a Curve
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
orchidee said:
A fine write N.
How about this lass? Should I meet her? Could I meet her?!
May 30th, 2021 01:34
Riding a Curve
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sun ray be forever with you Neville.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:47
2 Put it Frankly Â
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write hopefully bring plenty of Monet your way.
Andy
May 30th, 2021 00:21
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SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
SureshG said:
Don’t ever go from TOULON to TOULOUSE. Trust me, it’s a mood killer. I did it once, and she never forgave me.
As they all said, loved your poem tooo.
May 29th, 2021 18:47
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Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
This was so much fun, Neville. Set your alarm or you might miss a opportunity at the \"Crack of Dawn\"
May 29th, 2021 12:39
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Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
Fay Slimm. said:
My smiles ever widen by your cleverly inventive twisting of words Nev. - another twice read verse to set me achuckle with use of Toulouses without one Lautrec - - hopin\' ya sleep tite yerself with all ya ticked boxes my naughtymost friend..............x
May 29th, 2021 04:23
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Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Didn\'t have the Monet to court her for longer? Wasn\'t Degas was it?
May 29th, 2021 04:09
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