Comments received on poems by Neville



The Very first Time
orchidee said:

Swoon! I thought this would be about the first time ya tried Christmas Pudding or summat like that?! heehee.

December 28th, 2018 04:57

Secrets of the Field
Viv Wade said:

I wondered what that noise was coming from behind the hedge when I walked past! :) Nice write, Neville.

December 27th, 2018 23:22

Secrets of the Field
orchidee said:

Oh don\'t mind me and Fido. If poems are not too swoony, they might not need to be marked \'18+\'. Don\'t be afraid of Fido, though he\'s an over-enthusiastic watchdog sometimes with a terrible bark - worse than his bite! heehee.

December 27th, 2018 11:44

Secrets of the Field
Simon Bromley said:

Very good write. Your descriptive nature and word usage has the reader compelled. Excellent poet.

December 27th, 2018 11:36

Secrets of the Field
sue.evans said:

If a sigh was words then this is it. Lovely!

December 27th, 2018 03:49

Secrets of the Field
Neville said:

always carry a few sugar cubes with ya when out and keep taking the medicine.. they say a swoon full of sugar helps the medicine go down a treat..... cheers

December 27th, 2018 03:14

Secrets of the Field
orchidee said:

I would swoon if I went past that bit of the field! Fido, me watchdog would bark to warn me! heehee.

December 27th, 2018 03:01

Talk Me Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write, they will walk forever by the wild oceans reading your words.

December 27th, 2018 02:04

Talk Me Poetry
Viv Wade said:

Beautiful love story, beautifully written. Nice job, Neville!

December 26th, 2018 23:55

Talk Me Poetry
sylviasearcher said:

I like this one

December 26th, 2018 19:59

Talk Me Poetry
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

December 26th, 2018 11:05

Talk Me Poetry
Fay Slimm. said:

An amazing flow and a wonderful metre to this delight read Neville. nto my favs. with this little gem.

December 26th, 2018 06:51

Hark
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful message Neville.

December 26th, 2018 01:17

Hark
Viv Wade said:

A worthy reminder that it\'s good to just stop everything once in a while, and tune in to the sounds of nature. Nice write!

December 26th, 2018 00:01

Hark
ron parrish aka wordman said:

the world is a movie screen,with all the sounds and colors you could want
all you need do is look and listen

December 25th, 2018 23:28

Queue of Longing
sylviasearcher said:

Are you calling me far?

December 25th, 2018 13:50

Hark
sylviasearcher said:

I like this one

December 25th, 2018 13:50

Hark
orchidee said:

Well, I harked to the Carol: \'Hark a herald voice is sounding\'. Pity it was me singing, so it sounded like two cats fighting! lol.

December 25th, 2018 07:29

Hark
orchidee said:

You heard - harked to - some herald angels there, N?! A fine write, and Seasons Greetings.

December 25th, 2018 07:28

Hark
Michael Edwards said:

Sweet, simple spot on.

December 25th, 2018 07:13

Queue of Longing
Fay Slimm. said:

Love your metaphors in this tribute to poets whose inspiration has taken a leave - - loved too the mystery used in that second stanza - hope that fat lady stays quiet forever - clever one Neville .

December 24th, 2018 12:05

Queue of Longing
Michael Edwards said:

And when she does sing - have a great one Neville

December 24th, 2018 06:27

Queue of Longing
orchidee said:

I\'ll send ya me discarded inspiration. Me old rubbish, that is! Got plenty of it. heehee. Well, actually, I rarely thrown away any poems or start again from scratch.

December 24th, 2018 04:28

Old Sunlight
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a visual write, I too was there seeing this.

December 24th, 2018 01:03

Old Sunlight
orchidee said:

A good write N.

December 23rd, 2018 13:12

Old Sunlight
Simon Bromley said:

Oops sent without commenting lol. Thoroughly enjoyed. Glad I joined this website as there are some talented poets here. Well done.

December 23rd, 2018 09:11

Old Sunlight
Michael Edwards said:

I could see this as I read it - Most of us will recall scenes such as this.

December 23rd, 2018 05:08

Bride of the Hedgerows
Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Neville, I was there amongst Autumns wonderful times as she looked for winter.

December 23rd, 2018 01:47

Bride of the Hedgerows
Laura🌻 said:

Neville,

A beautifully penned poem lending itself to a seamless, enjoyable read!
Awesome!

~Laura~


December 22nd, 2018 20:49

Bride of the Hedgerows
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Neville, your poem is excellent. I love the way you\'ve woven all the things you love about her through the lines. A silver weave through the fabric that is representative of your admiration. Great job and keep posting.

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

December 22nd, 2018 19:03



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