Comments received on poems by Neville



The Weavers Knot
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I think this is a favourite of your erotic pieces

You paint your subject with a mystical magical sensual shade

January 16th, 2019 08:34

Borrowed Characters
Fay Slimm. said:

Borrowed indeed are the characters of people who like to ferment both hatred and judgement - - this verse hits the nail on its head Neville. in that we are all waiting on this beautiful planet for shadows as stated to disappear.

January 15th, 2019 10:43

Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:

Oh I struggle because I want to have hope for the wretched and the damned too.

I want to believe that perhaps evil is man made and can be erased?

But people tell me I\'m naive and foolish and I know it\'s true. It\'s just my way...

January 15th, 2019 08:18

Borrowed Characters
dusk arising said:

Yep, sylviasearcher is right with her corinthians point...... all you/they need is love.
Except the last verse. This god is supposed to be full of love... but look at all the awful stuff that he, in his omnipotent glory, reigns down upon us. Worth our adoration? I think not.

January 15th, 2019 07:07

Borrowed Characters
orchidee said:

Me singing is a waste of space (lol), let alone some people being like a dark shadow, as a waste of space seemingly.

January 15th, 2019 06:48

Borrowed Characters
sylviasearcher said:

I actually really love this one.

It played like a 70s song in my head.

Feel like I need to quote Corinthians 13:1 for the second time today.

Now dis that surprise you?

January 15th, 2019 04:18

Street Art
psychofemale said:

I love to see street art :)

January 14th, 2019 22:07

Street Art
dusk arising said:

Though provoking and confusing .... but... i came out of it thinking about crowds of people gathering around a patch of pubic hair..... those little circles.... curly wirly pubes...
Now that would be street art... till the breeze picks up

January 14th, 2019 18:33

Street Art
orchidee said:

Doh! I\'m keen. I said it twice, I said \'I said it...…\' Wish I would shut up. lol

January 14th, 2019 13:27

Street Art
orchidee said:

You using that dystonia as an excuse, or maybe as a way to stop me swooning?! heehee.
I appreciate it\'s a real unpleasant condition to experience though.

January 14th, 2019 10:55

Street Art
Michael Edwards said:

Well I read into it but it doesn\'t matter does it? Great write which ever way you take it.

January 14th, 2019 04:28

Street Art
sylviasearcher said:

This instilled different notions in my head.

Very different.

Then I thought I didn\'t understand it at all.

But isn\'t that what is great about art. You think you see it, then you don\'t

Happy Monday 🙃

January 14th, 2019 03:39

Street Art
orchidee said:

Something about backs arching? Whoops! I would not know about this, of course. lol.

January 14th, 2019 03:09

Street Art
orchidee said:

Anything swoony in this if I read between the lines?! heehee.

January 14th, 2019 03:00

Street Art
Goldfinch60 said:

I have seen some wonderful street art in my time, \'tis a pity it gets cleaned away.

January 14th, 2019 02:33

Keep These Broken Shards
Gary Edward Geraci said:

An interesting and mystical write plunging the reader into the realm of supernatural possibilities.

January 13th, 2019 18:23

Keep These Broken Shards
Goldfinch60 said:

Superb write and thinking Neveille.

January 13th, 2019 15:15

Keep These Broken Shards
dusk arising said:

I did exactly a bid. So far it is keeping all sorts of lovers from my bedroom. Should i break more crocs?

January 13th, 2019 14:00

Keep These Broken Shards
sylviasearcher said:

This reminds me of something I remember hearing once. And now it is buzzing in my head.

Broken shards like \'collisions\' help us grow

January 13th, 2019 12:41

Keep These Broken Shards
orchidee said:

I didn\'t get the hang of this. I sat on a shard instead, then sang high! doh!

January 13th, 2019 10:41

Keep These Broken Shards
Michael Edwards said:

Love the simplicity of this delightful write - so original and a sure fave - first for several months.

January 13th, 2019 04:02

Leave the Buttons on Your Blouse Undone
orchidee said:

Well, some peoples are still having fun on \'ere. I\'m glad to hear it! lol.
Ohh I dunno, I must do something else. Get a veggie sausage roll from Greggs or summat.

January 12th, 2019 05:46

Students
Goldfinch60 said:

Those mirrors can be misleading, I was in a store once and I saw this old man coming towards me - I was walking towards a mirror!

January 12th, 2019 01:09

Students
Michael Edwards said:

I saw a great painting of a most handsome fellow - then reality kicked in - mirrors have that effect on me.

January 11th, 2019 11:36

Students
Neville said:

Maybe we should form a cult, in the meantime though I thank you for taking time to consider these words of mine..... Neville

January 11th, 2019 11:14

Students
dusk arising said:

Its all done with mirrors and trickery. Least ways, that was the story of my success. However, as i sit here reminiscent of my failures, i guess i must have broken a mirror or two.

January 11th, 2019 11:07

Students
orchidee said:

A fine write N.

January 11th, 2019 10:58

Students
Neville said:

you may be write... but you are certainly a diamond...

January 11th, 2019 09:36

Tell Me
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

A great, in-depth, romantic poem Neville.

You appear to be quite the romantic.
Thanks for posting. :-)

January 10th, 2019 12:53

Tell Me
Seek said:

Who says romance is history? Not a chance after reading this!

January 10th, 2019 12:24



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