Comments received on poems by Neville
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone walls and versed to perfection I saw those frolics and leave-takings so clearly - a fantastic read Nev. and thank you.
August 29th, 2019 03:02
Fay Slimm. said:
A poet\'s look at the residue left by many a happening between old stone walls and versed to perfection I saw those frolics and leave-takings so clearly - a fantastic read Nev. and thank you.
August 29th, 2019 03:02
Bedroom Walls & Borrowers
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I don\'t know any wenches, whores, or milk maids. Should I get to know some? I said - I only popped in for a pint of milk - that\'s my \'excuse\' (or should I go back to sleep?! lol).
August 29th, 2019 01:30
orchidee said:
A fine write N. I don\'t know any wenches, whores, or milk maids. Should I get to know some? I said - I only popped in for a pint of milk - that\'s my \'excuse\' (or should I go back to sleep?! lol).
August 29th, 2019 01:30
Trapped
Goldfinch60 said:
A strong write Neville. I too cannot understand why it happens to the young. When I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets one of the young ladies self harmed but she would not talk about it with me.
August 29th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
A strong write Neville. I too cannot understand why it happens to the young. When I was Chaplain to the Sea Cadets one of the young ladies self harmed but she would not talk about it with me.
August 29th, 2019 00:49
Trapped
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE for many (often Teens) Self-harm is their only way of gaining attention ~ a *cri de coeur !* Alas often it is *The most unkindest cut of all* often with tragic results ! I (BRIAN) teach mostly 16\'s to 25\'s the Age group in which self-harm peaks ! In 1 to 1 councelling (I am aqualified Councellor ~ as is Angela) they say *I just wanted someone to listen to ME* ! Fortunately (so far) I have never lost a Student ~ and they see me as a Neutral Listening Ear ! We don\'t have Parents Evenings in College ! We treat all our Students as *Responsible Adults*. You have opened Pandoras Famous Box !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 28th, 2019 11:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for sharing NEVILLE for many (often Teens) Self-harm is their only way of gaining attention ~ a *cri de coeur !* Alas often it is *The most unkindest cut of all* often with tragic results ! I (BRIAN) teach mostly 16\'s to 25\'s the Age group in which self-harm peaks ! In 1 to 1 councelling (I am aqualified Councellor ~ as is Angela) they say *I just wanted someone to listen to ME* ! Fortunately (so far) I have never lost a Student ~ and they see me as a Neutral Listening Ear ! We don\'t have Parents Evenings in College ! We treat all our Students as *Responsible Adults*. You have opened Pandoras Famous Box !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙
August 28th, 2019 11:30
Trapped
sylviasearcher said:
This was written with an acceptance that only those with experience directly or indirectly could understand the necessity of.
August 28th, 2019 08:26
sylviasearcher said:
This was written with an acceptance that only those with experience directly or indirectly could understand the necessity of.
August 28th, 2019 08:26
Trapped
kevin browne said:
This brought home to the sentiments of my Bi-polar brother who has attemted suicide on many occassions. I pray for him everyday that the next day he stays with us. You have written some reality which a lot of peple are troubled with. This dis-order needs more attention and suggestions of how to make these types of people look on the brighter side to life. You brought tears to my eyes reading this poem...
August 28th, 2019 08:17
kevin browne said:
This brought home to the sentiments of my Bi-polar brother who has attemted suicide on many occassions. I pray for him everyday that the next day he stays with us. You have written some reality which a lot of peple are troubled with. This dis-order needs more attention and suggestions of how to make these types of people look on the brighter side to life. You brought tears to my eyes reading this poem...
August 28th, 2019 08:17
Trapped
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too hasty an entrapment to love or lust............ a powerful piece of writing Neville.
August 28th, 2019 03:25
Fay Slimm. said:
Sad but familiar - harming of self in some measure seems to come from too hasty an entrapment to love or lust............ a powerful piece of writing Neville.
August 28th, 2019 03:25
Trapped
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
orchidee said:
OOhh, I\'m all faint now. I\'ve heard some horror stories. \'Cutting up\' happens, but I would rather cut up a joint of meat.
I\'m all of a shudder now. I hate the theme really - hate hearing details, that is.
A cry for help? Yet desperately so.
August 28th, 2019 02:54
Trapped
dusk arising said:
Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever reason. I have to admit that i cannot get my head around understanding the phenomenon.
A really powerful, punchy and disturbing piece from you today Neville.
August 28th, 2019 02:23
dusk arising said:
Ouch! It is truly tragic to hear of young people self harming for whatever reason. I have to admit that i cannot get my head around understanding the phenomenon.
A really powerful, punchy and disturbing piece from you today Neville.
August 28th, 2019 02:23
The Wind Cried Mary
sylviasearcher said:
What a warm and tender tribute, I am so sorry for your loss 😔💫
August 27th, 2019 02:18
sylviasearcher said:
What a warm and tender tribute, I am so sorry for your loss 😔💫
August 27th, 2019 02:18
Love and Warm Toast
Suresh said:
One can never forget the smell of Mom\'s love and warm toast.
August 26th, 2019 00:54
Suresh said:
One can never forget the smell of Mom\'s love and warm toast.
August 26th, 2019 00:54
Love and Warm Toast
Christina8 said:
A loving and beautiful write Neville....you are in my thoughts at this difficult time...Christina
August 25th, 2019 12:39
Christina8 said:
A loving and beautiful write Neville....you are in my thoughts at this difficult time...Christina
August 25th, 2019 12:39
Love and Warm Toast
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ! A very evocative title and a Perfect Pome ! This week Brother Boris has been touring the Hospitals and telling the Staff & Residents all they need is WARM BUTTERED TOAST ! Personally its a throwback to traditional fare in Public Schools & Oxford Colleges ~ and a bid to save the NHS 95% of its Catering Bill ! However I agree with him *Hot Buttered Toast* is indeed *CIBUS DEI !* TOAST without LOVE is just scorched bread ! Toast is a Generational thing ! WAGS make Toast ~ Mums make BETTER Toast ~ Grannies make the BEST Toast ~ AMEN.
Blessings & Peace & Granny Toast
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 25th, 2019 10:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks NEVILLE ! A very evocative title and a Perfect Pome ! This week Brother Boris has been touring the Hospitals and telling the Staff & Residents all they need is WARM BUTTERED TOAST ! Personally its a throwback to traditional fare in Public Schools & Oxford Colleges ~ and a bid to save the NHS 95% of its Catering Bill ! However I agree with him *Hot Buttered Toast* is indeed *CIBUS DEI !* TOAST without LOVE is just scorched bread ! Toast is a Generational thing ! WAGS make Toast ~ Mums make BETTER Toast ~ Grannies make the BEST Toast ~ AMEN.
Blessings & Peace & Granny Toast
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
August 25th, 2019 10:55
Love and Warm Toast
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A good feeling write wrapped with love!
The first two stanzas remind me of my great grandparents...
...and the last one of my maternal grandmother...
love and warmth...
my security blanket!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 09:47
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
A good feeling write wrapped with love!
The first two stanzas remind me of my great grandparents...
...and the last one of my maternal grandmother...
love and warmth...
my security blanket!
~Laura~
August 25th, 2019 09:47
Love and Warm Toast
dusk arising said:
A toast in a country bar always takes me back.
Seldom does the landlord let me back.
August 25th, 2019 02:52
dusk arising said:
A toast in a country bar always takes me back.
Seldom does the landlord let me back.
August 25th, 2019 02:52
Love and Warm Toast
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful feelings Neville. Love and warm toast are so memorable.
August 25th, 2019 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful feelings Neville. Love and warm toast are so memorable.
August 25th, 2019 01:09
Love and Warm Toast
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile - Doh! I was in the wrong field. All I smelt was manure wafting across on the breeze. heehee.
Just a fun thing - nothing deep or psychological to read into this, compared to your \'field\'.
August 25th, 2019 00:55
orchidee said:
A lovely write N.
Meanwhile - Doh! I was in the wrong field. All I smelt was manure wafting across on the breeze. heehee.
Just a fun thing - nothing deep or psychological to read into this, compared to your \'field\'.
August 25th, 2019 00:55
The Wind Cried Mary
Suresh said:
Dear N
Please accept my deepest sympathies on your very personal loss. My mother passed away last year.
May your words be a true reflection of your mother, Mary\'s, resting place, and her star shine be the brightest, as she lives on, on the heavenly stage.
August 24th, 2019 09:35
Suresh said:
Dear N
Please accept my deepest sympathies on your very personal loss. My mother passed away last year.
May your words be a true reflection of your mother, Mary\'s, resting place, and her star shine be the brightest, as she lives on, on the heavenly stage.
August 24th, 2019 09:35
The Wind Cried Mary
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful words for a bright new star that shall shine upon you forevermore...💫
My condolences to you and your family!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 05:55
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Beautiful words for a bright new star that shall shine upon you forevermore...💫
My condolences to you and your family!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 05:55
The Wind Cried Mary
orchidee said:
Time to sing still.... but a lament? Yet thanks too, recalling happy times. Thinking of you N.
August 24th, 2019 05:44
orchidee said:
Time to sing still.... but a lament? Yet thanks too, recalling happy times. Thinking of you N.
August 24th, 2019 05:44
The Wind Cried Mary
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry about your loss but that star will shine forever on you.
August 24th, 2019 03:35
Goldfinch60 said:
So sorry about your loss but that star will shine forever on you.
August 24th, 2019 03:35
The Wind Cried Mary
Fay Slimm. said:
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute to your much loved mother - - Mary now bright as a star will I am sure comfort your sudden loss and is with you in spirit dear Neville - - sending sincere sympathy to you and the family...................... Fay
August 24th, 2019 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
The trauma of letting loved ones go is expressed in this tender tribute to your much loved mother - - Mary now bright as a star will I am sure comfort your sudden loss and is with you in spirit dear Neville - - sending sincere sympathy to you and the family...................... Fay
August 24th, 2019 02:51
My Chest it Flutters
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
Metaphorically rich...
an enjoyable read...
indeed!
~Laura~
August 24th, 2019 01:48
My Chest it Flutters
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
That heart fluttering first feeling was enhanced by the growth of love throughout life.
August 24th, 2019 00:34
My Chest it Flutters
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
kevin browne said:
And how so many Moons away are there sat to discover the futility of ones life..This is a cheeky one though I must say...
August 23rd, 2019 09:46
My Chest it Flutters
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
Fay Slimm. said:
A fluttering chest and a heart that dances could be time to see the Doc. but knowing why it is again happening shows a love that does not give up - a delicately worded verse of time flying and thanks for the read dear ageless friend..........
August 23rd, 2019 07:29
My Chest it Flutters
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
orchidee said:
Glad someone\'s enjoying themselves! heehee.
August 23rd, 2019 03:26
My Chest it Flutters
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
dusk arising said:
I can\'t hold a candle to this kind of verse sir!
Though i did have concerns over your hitherto masked menopausal transsexuality until i read your author\'s comment.
Next time i pass the girls high school i shall carefully listen for juvenile coo-coo-ing.
Certainly had me scratching my smiling head today.
August 23rd, 2019 03:25
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