Comments received on poems by Neville
Discarded 2
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be known by all but will be known and loved by those who knew us - that is what is important.
Good one Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 03:29
Goldfinch60 said:
We may not be known by all but will be known and loved by those who knew us - that is what is important.
Good one Neville.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 03:29
Sleeper
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write Neville, she loved them \'til the end though.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Strong emotive write Neville, she loved them \'til the end though.
Andy
September 27th, 2020 00:48
Sleeper
MendedFences27 said:
Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed and I feel one regretted by all concerned.
You have given this incident a sense of meaning and of love although both are lost in the finale.
\"We called it slaughter\" is closer to the truth. Giving this a clear enlightenment may save a life or two. Heavy poetry to be sure. It takes courage to write of such things.- Phil A.
September 26th, 2020 13:58
MendedFences27 said:
Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed and I feel one regretted by all concerned.
You have given this incident a sense of meaning and of love although both are lost in the finale.
\"We called it slaughter\" is closer to the truth. Giving this a clear enlightenment may save a life or two. Heavy poetry to be sure. It takes courage to write of such things.- Phil A.
September 26th, 2020 13:58
Sleeper
Dove said:
Interesting there! Deep and profound! You sure weave some supreme tales!
A hint of mystery always, love it though a bit sad
September 26th, 2020 10:43
Dove said:
Interesting there! Deep and profound! You sure weave some supreme tales!
A hint of mystery always, love it though a bit sad
September 26th, 2020 10:43
All the Ends of Me
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that bruises from dying relationships can be more than painful and those who \"savour\" such aches need plain reminders of who holds most blame. A read to view over again in my faves ........x
September 26th, 2020 03:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Powerful imagery makes this write outstanding with its poetic appeal that bruises from dying relationships can be more than painful and those who \"savour\" such aches need plain reminders of who holds most blame. A read to view over again in my faves ........x
September 26th, 2020 03:01
All the Ends of Me
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words have so much depth in them Neville, only a poet can write with such emotion.
Andy
September 26th, 2020 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words have so much depth in them Neville, only a poet can write with such emotion.
Andy
September 26th, 2020 01:34
All the Ends of Me
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by lords\" and other indiscretions. Don\'t we all encounter such as her in life and end up a sea of \"contusions\" or worse yet \"a poet.\"
At least the \"poet\" spoke in artistic terms and never mentioned names. A \"poet\" speaks truth and uses words like brush strokes. I will be hanging this one in my gallery. - Phil A.
September 25th, 2020 19:09
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by lords\" and other indiscretions. Don\'t we all encounter such as her in life and end up a sea of \"contusions\" or worse yet \"a poet.\"
At least the \"poet\" spoke in artistic terms and never mentioned names. A \"poet\" speaks truth and uses words like brush strokes. I will be hanging this one in my gallery. - Phil A.
September 25th, 2020 19:09
Just Supposing
Dove said:
Well Bambi taught me! “If you can’t say anything nice don’t say anything at all”
🤐
September 24th, 2020 14:00
Dove said:
Well Bambi taught me! “If you can’t say anything nice don’t say anything at all”
🤐
September 24th, 2020 14:00
Just Supposing
L. B. Mek said:
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded smearing campaigns: 4 wasted by reds blocking anything blues tried to do in Obama\'s last term and this last four focused mainly on strategically divisive appointments and misdirection tricks: that \'just suppose\' we\'re all gona fall for their archaic ways,
good write
September 24th, 2020 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
I feel USA has lost 8 years to a devolving political system of underhanded smearing campaigns: 4 wasted by reds blocking anything blues tried to do in Obama\'s last term and this last four focused mainly on strategically divisive appointments and misdirection tricks: that \'just suppose\' we\'re all gona fall for their archaic ways,
good write
September 24th, 2020 04:15
Just Supposing
orchidee said:
Well, I don\'t know. It don\'t seem apt to say \'A fine write/good write\'.
Who to trust? Who to believe?
Well, as I said - can we trust one with such a dodgy barnet?!
In a comedy, one said \'Oh, I dunno if I could work for someone who wears red trousers!\' lol.
Looking on the outward appearance - not a good idea in real life.
September 24th, 2020 01:55
orchidee said:
Well, I don\'t know. It don\'t seem apt to say \'A fine write/good write\'.
Who to trust? Who to believe?
Well, as I said - can we trust one with such a dodgy barnet?!
In a comedy, one said \'Oh, I dunno if I could work for someone who wears red trousers!\' lol.
Looking on the outward appearance - not a good idea in real life.
September 24th, 2020 01:55
Just Supposing
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more he proposes new control - - he has a mop of blond wig and he talks total gibberish........x
September 23rd, 2020 13:11
Fay Slimm. said:
Too true that I can think of one who I seem to see right through the more he proposes new control - - he has a mop of blond wig and he talks total gibberish........x
September 23rd, 2020 13:11
Bruises
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet there appears to be no permanence in any of her relationships. \"Sincere and the most considerate of lovers,\" surely are hard to find. (maybe not.) A shaded poem from the darker side of love were we all fear to tread. Such desire for pain, to me, spells a twisted mentality, and yet for sure it exists. You have gently brought it out into the open. A terrific write on a most dark subject. - Phil A.
September 20th, 2020 11:13
MendedFences27 said:
Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet there appears to be no permanence in any of her relationships. \"Sincere and the most considerate of lovers,\" surely are hard to find. (maybe not.) A shaded poem from the darker side of love were we all fear to tread. Such desire for pain, to me, spells a twisted mentality, and yet for sure it exists. You have gently brought it out into the open. A terrific write on a most dark subject. - Phil A.
September 20th, 2020 11:13
Bruises
Dove said:
Well written! Harsh realities laced with a bit
Of femininity and hopes!
Tis really sad, women have to endure
Red Black and Blue marks!
September 20th, 2020 09:00
Dove said:
Well written! Harsh realities laced with a bit
Of femininity and hopes!
Tis really sad, women have to endure
Red Black and Blue marks!
September 20th, 2020 09:00
Bruises
jarcher54 said:
Covered in them eh? That explains the sunglasses and folded arms! Some of the worst bruises don\'t show on the skin of course. But they still get covered up don\'t they.
September 20th, 2020 07:23
jarcher54 said:
Covered in them eh? That explains the sunglasses and folded arms! Some of the worst bruises don\'t show on the skin of course. But they still get covered up don\'t they.
September 20th, 2020 07:23
Bruises
Fay Slimm. said:
A most moving write that stirs the heart Nev........... bruises leave scars despite trying to hide them........x
September 20th, 2020 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A most moving write that stirs the heart Nev........... bruises leave scars despite trying to hide them........x
September 20th, 2020 02:51
Bruises
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, nobody should hurt anybody else.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write Neville, nobody should hurt anybody else.
Andy
September 20th, 2020 02:44
Geographia
L. B. Mek said:
contemplative write, or maybe just musings under heat stroke? lol,
September 16th, 2020 02:07
L. B. Mek said:
contemplative write, or maybe just musings under heat stroke? lol,
September 16th, 2020 02:07
Geographia
Goldfinch60 said:
Be it seen in triangles, squares, pentagons or trapeziums where ever home is it is the right shape for you.
Andy
September 16th, 2020 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Be it seen in triangles, squares, pentagons or trapeziums where ever home is it is the right shape for you.
Andy
September 16th, 2020 01:00
Geographia
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know you were related to a womble - good old uncle bulgaria.
Three blue triangle as in https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Archivo:Logo_UNICIT.svg but no i\'m sure i\'ve got that wrong.
On a bright day if i close my eyes and cover them maybe with my fingertips then on opening them i get impressions of blue or green curvy triangles.
However something here has clearly taken your thoughts back to a memory of home... fond memories i hope.
Have you had surgery again i\'m wondering?
September 15th, 2020 10:57
dusk arising said:
I didn\'t know you were related to a womble - good old uncle bulgaria.
Three blue triangle as in https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Archivo:Logo_UNICIT.svg but no i\'m sure i\'ve got that wrong.
On a bright day if i close my eyes and cover them maybe with my fingertips then on opening them i get impressions of blue or green curvy triangles.
However something here has clearly taken your thoughts back to a memory of home... fond memories i hope.
Have you had surgery again i\'m wondering?
September 15th, 2020 10:57
Geographia
Dove said:
Aside from the geography of a beautiful woman, home sweet home is certainly divine!
September 15th, 2020 10:20
Dove said:
Aside from the geography of a beautiful woman, home sweet home is certainly divine!
September 15th, 2020 10:20
Geographia
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite the attraction of sky-play triangles home is certainly where the heart is my friend ...........x
September 15th, 2020 04:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes despite the attraction of sky-play triangles home is certainly where the heart is my friend ...........x
September 15th, 2020 04:01
Inevitability
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm though I\'m not sure what you are talking about but it makes me think of lots of different theories. So it is an awesome creatively ambiguous poem, great intrigue. Kudos for it!!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 02:41
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hmm though I\'m not sure what you are talking about but it makes me think of lots of different theories. So it is an awesome creatively ambiguous poem, great intrigue. Kudos for it!!!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 02:41
Inevitability
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
I don\'t think we could, any of us, stand the coincidences if they were probable though.
Far too fragile
And man will never invent a watch that never stops. Built-in Obsolescence ... You have to enjoy the dance you only get to put the shoes on once
September 6th, 2020 03:27
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Excellent Neville
I don\'t think we could, any of us, stand the coincidences if they were probable though.
Far too fragile
And man will never invent a watch that never stops. Built-in Obsolescence ... You have to enjoy the dance you only get to put the shoes on once
September 6th, 2020 03:27
Inevitability
Goldfinch60 said:
Those improbable coincidences have been with us all our lives and have lead us to where we are now.
Fun write Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Those improbable coincidences have been with us all our lives and have lead us to where we are now.
Fun write Neville.
Andy
September 6th, 2020 01:03
Inevitability
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure what it means but it is so true. Well said Neville
September 5th, 2020 14:26
Michael Edwards said:
Not sure what it means but it is so true. Well said Neville
September 5th, 2020 14:26
Inevitability
L. B. Mek said:
a Pyramid of truth you have shared, though like all truth\'s the angles are never as smooth if we zoom-in too close,
creative structure
September 5th, 2020 03:32
L. B. Mek said:
a Pyramid of truth you have shared, though like all truth\'s the angles are never as smooth if we zoom-in too close,
creative structure
September 5th, 2020 03:32
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