Comments received on poems by Neville
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Neville. Sometimes chance and destiny collide and for one moment it all makes sense.
May 28th, 2021 09:12
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
Doggerel Dave said:
I dunno – and as I’ve made it plain elsewhere, believe I most probably will never know…and maybe, I sometimes think, maybe that’s enlightenment… or perhaps enlightenment is the thought I may be wrong…then perhaps your position that it don’t happen all that often …
Anyway Neville....
May 28th, 2021 08:40
A Box Full of Maybe’s
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'life\'s like, a box of Maybe\'s
we never know
which one, we\'re meant to harvest\'..
a brilliant write my friend
lulled me into a satori observation, of my own
I think I\'m a fan of your poetry;
oh wait, I confessed that - already
and oh - so, very Proudly...!
😁😎🍻
May 28th, 2021 05:13
A Box Full of Maybe’s
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
orchidee said:
Maybe I will like this poem. Yep, I sure do, as usual!
Maybe - I will meet one of them gals soon too.
May 28th, 2021 04:50
A Box Full of Maybe’s
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Bending to change can bring an awakening - - and that is no maybe my satorical friend. A write to remember for poets like me.
May 28th, 2021 04:19
A Box Full of Maybe’s
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
dusk arising said:
Kensho - seeing ones essence. A day to sit among natural wonders and let life begin it\'s teachings again.
May 28th, 2021 03:32
Rokhsana
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an awfully sad poem Neville, only alleged but still stoned to death, if it was a man I bet the Afghans would not have stoned him!!
Andy
May 28th, 2021 00:19
Rokhsana
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Short sharp shock there, Neville... read piece first. Your comment only caused the switch.
In your words - Not everything is what it seems. Universal truth there, but in this case it certainly focused attention on something I find difficult to think about.
May 27th, 2021 20:22
Rokhsana
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
a write of such empathy, displayed proudly
exemplifying: with unwavering sincerity...!
I read and learn, my friend
May 27th, 2021 05:26
Rokhsana
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
dusk arising said:
Maybe the world was not ready for true beauty. Maybe it is still not ready. Maybe injustice justifies the existence of some.
How many lines occupy the story of rokhsana, how many missing lines occupied her truth.
May 27th, 2021 03:38
Rokhsana
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Fay Slimm. said:
What a terrible custom Nev. - and so widely used for eons by many cultures - - - being stoned often meant a very slow death -- merely alleged of a crime yet courageously out-spoken was young Rokhsana - hoping your caring post will rouse readers to ever remember with flagrant empathy that beautiful name.
May 27th, 2021 03:35
Scarce Blues
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Was a portion of sky with
a small diagonal crease
and a tear ….
Overflowing it was
with a million or more
jigsaw shaped pieces of
delicate blue\'..
well, what can I say
I read and learn, dear poet..
what an awesome gift
you choose to share, my friend
thank you!
May 27th, 2021 03:20
Rokhsana
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
orchidee said:
Only \'alleged\' and yet stoned - a terrible state.
I can\'t meet her, unfortunately :(
May 27th, 2021 02:54
Scarce Blues
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
MendedFences27 said:
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact. It seems that most things beautiful in nature are short lived. Sometimes human emotions are sensational only to be quick in passing. Maybe both share the same fragility.
Your remembrance of a fleeting moment, or was it more, and the symbolism of butterflies, and blue in particular, of luck, love, and hope become a very allegorical image and well structured poem. Truly a classical pairing. - Phil A.
May 26th, 2021 12:33
Scarce Blues
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Jerry Reynolds said:
Fondly remember the ones who loved you. Grateful for the one who stayed.
Really good write, Neville.
May 26th, 2021 09:20
Scarce Blues
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Fay Slimm. said:
More than a tribute to butterfly-beauty in this clever exposure of memory\'s \"forget-me-not\" visions of long-ago love. A corker agen Nev........x
May 26th, 2021 03:14
Scarce Blues
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
dusk arising said:
In the ending of all things life rests as fragile as butterfly wings seeking shelter in a rainstorm.
Is it our life or the futility which passes thru ones mind on the point of passing.
May 26th, 2021 02:39
Face-ination
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever words Neville that can bring profound thoughts within us.
Andy
May 26th, 2021 00:49
Face-ination
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
\'how sobering
that, what endlessly inspires
is often
the very worst: within us...!\'
(what a poignant write my friend
so many narratives and images
flashed through my mind
trying to decipher wat inspired you;
and ain\'t that the beauty
of this poetry artform, we fight
to keep alive)
May 25th, 2021 05:41
Face-ination
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the coined word in the title Nev. and oh that clever and very telling metaphor - -- - I maybe completely up a gum-tree but judgemental pride comes to mind after reading a second time your bit of intrigue today mon ami.
May 25th, 2021 04:08
Face-ination
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
dusk arising said:
Clouds - bringer of nourishing, rebirthing rain, as are the tears we all shed.
May 25th, 2021 02:32
Journey of Tears
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Dove said:
Oh my some people magically work tears to manipulate
Others, and others though heartfelt turn into works of art
Ultimately fake tears or not, lose their meaning If
lies and tantrums are infused!
Always deeply meaningful words infused in your works
May 21st, 2021 08:50
Paper Cups
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
L. B. Mek said:
this be those kinda whispered \'messages, in a bottle\'
that had the Helen\'s of this world - abandon
their loyalties: for a heart\'s vehement desires
and wars that launch timeless tales
upon that unconquerable sea, of poetic ink..
A great write my friend, wonderfully executed pacing and flow
May 21st, 2021 02:29
Paper Cups
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
I am sure that she will remember Neville, such wonderful memories shared with us all and maybe her.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:22
Paper Cups
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
No thought for the past, no thought for the future, our energies combined in the glorious present – which will last forever…..And it has – in memory….
Thanks Neville.
May 20th, 2021 20:44
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