Comments received on poems by Neville
In a Moment of Poetry #2
Fay Slimm. said:
The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a moment of poetry.......... another sigh of a read my evocative friend.
December 29th, 2020 06:00
Fay Slimm. said:
The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a moment of poetry.......... another sigh of a read my evocative friend.
December 29th, 2020 06:00
In a Moment of Poetry #2
Suresh said:
I had to read the first one, and I am not the one to disagree with you, the romance is indistinguishable
Very very enjoyable
December 29th, 2020 05:56
Suresh said:
I had to read the first one, and I am not the one to disagree with you, the romance is indistinguishable
Very very enjoyable
December 29th, 2020 05:56
Bare
dusk arising said:
mmmm can\'t help but get a warm feeling from your post today. Sadly the reality of my aging is that i get terrible back pains if i stay in bed too long but..... i can think of one or two incentives...
December 27th, 2020 11:12
dusk arising said:
mmmm can\'t help but get a warm feeling from your post today. Sadly the reality of my aging is that i get terrible back pains if i stay in bed too long but..... i can think of one or two incentives...
December 27th, 2020 11:12
Bare
Fay Slimm. said:
Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds invitingly cosy - - put me down for a try.......x
December 27th, 2020 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds invitingly cosy - - put me down for a try.......x
December 27th, 2020 05:46
Bare
Poetic Dan said:
Most definitely ride with this out from the winter smog looking forward to spring!
December 27th, 2020 03:55
Poetic Dan said:
Most definitely ride with this out from the winter smog looking forward to spring!
December 27th, 2020 03:55
In a Moment of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful passionate write Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful passionate write Neville.
Andy
December 27th, 2020 01:52
In a Moment of Poetry
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Lips - what do we in poetry call the lips of the vulva? - I say \"love-lips\" for both the labia majora and the labia minora of the vulva (NOT vagina).
But remember I was a pathologist in my day job, before I retired - I\'m 81.
December 26th, 2020 19:25
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Lips - what do we in poetry call the lips of the vulva? - I say \"love-lips\" for both the labia majora and the labia minora of the vulva (NOT vagina).
But remember I was a pathologist in my day job, before I retired - I\'m 81.
December 26th, 2020 19:25
In a Moment of Poetry
Dove said:
Nice Poetry, inhaled with passion and taste upon thy lips
December 26th, 2020 11:34
Dove said:
Nice Poetry, inhaled with passion and taste upon thy lips
December 26th, 2020 11:34
In a Moment of Poetry
orchidee said:
A swoony moment?! Seasons Greetings N. I must meet her! lol.
December 26th, 2020 10:28
orchidee said:
A swoony moment?! Seasons Greetings N. I must meet her! lol.
December 26th, 2020 10:28
Truism
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend
December 22nd, 2020 06:57
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend
December 22nd, 2020 06:57
Mastication
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m gona \'choose\' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she \'chose\' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write\'s that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!
December 17th, 2020 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
I\'m gona \'choose\' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she \'chose\' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write\'s that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!
December 17th, 2020 05:44
Mastication
Goldfinch60 said:
As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.
Andy
December 17th, 2020 01:25
Mastication
FredPeyer said:
Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.
December 16th, 2020 11:40
FredPeyer said:
Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.
December 16th, 2020 11:40
Mastication
dusk arising said:
BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.
December 16th, 2020 11:05
dusk arising said:
BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.
December 16th, 2020 11:05
Mastication
Jerry Reynolds said:
So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.
December 16th, 2020 09:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.
December 16th, 2020 09:32
Head Rest
L. B. Mek said:
of youth\'s vehemence in all thing\'s impassioned into brilliance: these song celebrates, and how!
\'fool\'s rush-in\' goes the well trodden wisdom, but nay: dear Poet, I\'m with you - may we all go out as the brilliant flames of volatile vitality, we were born to be...
Brilliant my friend! another nugget uncovered to quench my poetic need\'s, (well, for a little while at least) lol
December 14th, 2020 07:03
L. B. Mek said:
of youth\'s vehemence in all thing\'s impassioned into brilliance: these song celebrates, and how!
\'fool\'s rush-in\' goes the well trodden wisdom, but nay: dear Poet, I\'m with you - may we all go out as the brilliant flames of volatile vitality, we were born to be...
Brilliant my friend! another nugget uncovered to quench my poetic need\'s, (well, for a little while at least) lol
December 14th, 2020 07:03
Vermeil
Dove said:
Oh might she be a radiant star
Whose shine is feather light
Golden beams flowing from afar
Upon the eyes such a delight
Oh might she be beautiful gal
Whose skin is the fabric of gold
Who makes menβs ego swell
A beautiful sight to behold
( such loveliness your poetic words hold)
Much enjoyed
December 12th, 2020 07:50
Dove said:
Oh might she be a radiant star
Whose shine is feather light
Golden beams flowing from afar
Upon the eyes such a delight
Oh might she be beautiful gal
Whose skin is the fabric of gold
Who makes menβs ego swell
A beautiful sight to behold
( such loveliness your poetic words hold)
Much enjoyed
December 12th, 2020 07:50
Carbonito de Sophie
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of β I love you β
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Dove said:
Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of β I love you β
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew
Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart
December 12th, 2020 07:38
Vermeil
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Poetic Dan said:
I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!
Thank you!
December 9th, 2020 16:29
Vermeil
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
Suresh said:
You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could
December 9th, 2020 04:57
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