Comments received on poems by Neville
Flawed
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
FineB said:
Hello Neville,
An excellent write.
Vivid and brilliant!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2019 09:19
Flawed
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
orchidee said:
Oh no, I took a blue pill (eh, you know them?) by mistake. Swoon!
August 10th, 2019 07:55
Flawed
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
orchidee said:
Someone having fun there? or a couple? The only buttercup Fido lets me have is the story of Buttercup The Cow, aimed at 3 year olds! heehee.
Oohh I could never have piercings *shudders*.
August 10th, 2019 07:51
Flawed
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Michael Edwards said:
Well this really held the attention - she\'s some minx - wonder what that scar is all about - I\'m intrigued.
August 10th, 2019 05:04
Flawed
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
A rose too has thorns on their stem
I wrote hat once and lost it... This is a much better interpretation very well done Neville
August 10th, 2019 04:38
Flawed
dusk arising said:
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning pictures in mans brain. Pictures which will inspire the romantic poet to yearn his melancholy would yield as it does to wisdom and the smile of knowing human nature.
A great teaser you are sir, shrouded in poetic majesty.
August 10th, 2019 04:10
dusk arising said:
Find me the woman who doesn\'t hide the desire to leave such questioning pictures in mans brain. Pictures which will inspire the romantic poet to yearn his melancholy would yield as it does to wisdom and the smile of knowing human nature.
A great teaser you are sir, shrouded in poetic majesty.
August 10th, 2019 04:10
Flawed
Fay Slimm. said:
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written so expertly it holds attention to that final revealing line. You are a word-smith par excellence mon ami.
August 10th, 2019 03:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Caustic the questions addressed to a female playing the field and written so expertly it holds attention to that final revealing line. You are a word-smith par excellence mon ami.
August 10th, 2019 03:42
Why When Where and How
orchidee said:
You seen any more \'e\'ermore\'s\' around? (Time for a pill, Orchi. Don\'t stop taking them! lol).
August 10th, 2019 02:01
orchidee said:
You seen any more \'e\'ermore\'s\' around? (Time for a pill, Orchi. Don\'t stop taking them! lol).
August 10th, 2019 02:01
Why When Where and How
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve wonderfully penned the ”Why When Where and How”...now I’m waiting for the What!
An enjoyable read!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 00:14
Laura🌻 said:
Neville,
You’ve wonderfully penned the ”Why When Where and How”...now I’m waiting for the What!
An enjoyable read!
~Laura~
August 10th, 2019 00:14
Why When Where and How
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet entertaining, keep it up!
August 9th, 2019 20:06
PoeticBiscuit said:
Simple yet entertaining, keep it up!
August 9th, 2019 20:06
Why When Where and How
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s what she said to me - I\'m getting worried.
August 9th, 2019 15:16
Michael Edwards said:
That\'s what she said to me - I\'m getting worried.
August 9th, 2019 15:16
Why When Where and How
Suresh said:
Love you
Always
Here and
Forever
That\'s what lust does to me.
Thnx
August 9th, 2019 13:03
Suresh said:
Love you
Always
Here and
Forever
That\'s what lust does to me.
Thnx
August 9th, 2019 13:03
Why When Where and How
Christina8 said:
Thats just like a woman for ya...lol...well written! I like the style that you wrote this in...
August 9th, 2019 09:05
Christina8 said:
Thats just like a woman for ya...lol...well written! I like the style that you wrote this in...
August 9th, 2019 09:05
Why When Where and How
dusk arising said:
A bit one sided when all she wanted was a coffee.
I like it. Alluringly different approach and style.
August 9th, 2019 08:26
dusk arising said:
A bit one sided when all she wanted was a coffee.
I like it. Alluringly different approach and style.
August 9th, 2019 08:26
Why When Where and How
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of questions. I would be worn out before I finished answering them all, innit! Aww, you use up all the \'W\'s now. Just one left over for me there.
August 9th, 2019 03:19
orchidee said:
That\'s a lot of questions. I would be worn out before I finished answering them all, innit! Aww, you use up all the \'W\'s now. Just one left over for me there.
August 9th, 2019 03:19
Why When Where and How
Fay Slimm. said:
Two hearts in union and I say what could be better !!! .......... I love the exciting style and formation of this vivid pen-picture my romantic friend.
August 9th, 2019 02:40
Fay Slimm. said:
Two hearts in union and I say what could be better !!! .......... I love the exciting style and formation of this vivid pen-picture my romantic friend.
August 9th, 2019 02:40
Why When Where and How
Goldfinch60 said:
May those answers be forever wonderful for you.
August 9th, 2019 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
May those answers be forever wonderful for you.
August 9th, 2019 02:30
That Secret Place
dusk arising said:
Neville at his poetic sensual best again.
Gosh how many more discrete encounters will fall from those creative fingers to net our curiosity and imagination.
Great stuff... i do feel titillated!
August 8th, 2019 13:25
dusk arising said:
Neville at his poetic sensual best again.
Gosh how many more discrete encounters will fall from those creative fingers to net our curiosity and imagination.
Great stuff... i do feel titillated!
August 8th, 2019 13:25
That Secret Place
PoeticBiscuit said:
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.
August 8th, 2019 12:45
PoeticBiscuit said:
I’m glad I decided to take a look into your writing because now I don’t think I can ever stop! Your skill only seems to grow.
August 8th, 2019 12:45
That Secret Place
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.
August 8th, 2019 10:49
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with Christina (not literally) - your writing goes from strength to strength.
August 8th, 2019 10:49
That Secret Place
Christina8 said:
So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina
August 8th, 2019 10:44
Christina8 said:
So well written, Neville. Love the repeating last 2 lines! I think your writing continues to get better....is that possible??...Christina
August 8th, 2019 10:44
That Secret Place
Suresh said:
....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...
August 8th, 2019 10:05
Suresh said:
....you will only be complete, when your efforts make your lover sigh in estacy...
August 8th, 2019 10:05
That Secret Place
Fay Slimm. said:
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........
August 8th, 2019 04:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A medley of clever double-entendres cascade effortlessly down these interpretive lines
- -Your aptness for setting alight imagination is second to none mon ami - - a real gasp of a read...........
August 8th, 2019 04:24
That Secret Place
Goldfinch60 said:
My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.
August 8th, 2019 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
My secret place is where My River meets My Spirit. Good write Neville.
August 8th, 2019 02:49
That Secret Place
sylviasearcher said:
Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...
August 8th, 2019 02:39
sylviasearcher said:
Well mine is a forest with a river and a waterfall but it is hidden under a rainbow so you probably would never find it ...
August 8th, 2019 02:39
That Secret Place
orchidee said:
A good write N. I can\'t find ya. Oh, you\'re in a secret place, that\'s why!
Or as I say; \'Take me to a secret place, my love\' / \'Anywhere away from Orchi\'s singing\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2019 01:49
orchidee said:
A good write N. I can\'t find ya. Oh, you\'re in a secret place, that\'s why!
Or as I say; \'Take me to a secret place, my love\' / \'Anywhere away from Orchi\'s singing\'. heehee.
August 8th, 2019 01:49
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