Comments received on poems by Neville



In a Moment of Poetry #2
Fay Slimm. said:

The end of a sensuous dream should read like these sumptuous words on a moment of poetry.......... another sigh of a read my evocative friend.

December 29th, 2020 06:00

In a Moment of Poetry #2
Suresh said:

I had to read the first one, and I am not the one to disagree with you, the romance is indistinguishable

Very very enjoyable

December 29th, 2020 05:56

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Christina8 said:

Love this simple but cozy write........C

December 28th, 2020 22:07

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Jerry Reynolds said:

:-) Those were the days

December 27th, 2020 14:35

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dusk arising said:

mmmm can\'t help but get a warm feeling from your post today. Sadly the reality of my aging is that i get terrible back pains if i stay in bed too long but..... i can think of one or two incentives...

December 27th, 2020 11:12

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Fay Slimm. said:

Mmmm -- - Hibernate eh - - snuggling all winter under a duvet - sounds invitingly cosy - - put me down for a try.......x

December 27th, 2020 05:46

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Michael Edwards said:

With me? Gosh! πŸ™‚



December 27th, 2020 04:44

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Poetic Dan said:

Most definitely ride with this out from the winter smog looking forward to spring!

December 27th, 2020 03:55

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orchidee said:

Who is this lass? I\'m gonna meet her! lol.

December 27th, 2020 03:11

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Goldfinch60 said:

Not with me you don\'t Neville. LOL

Andy

December 27th, 2020 02:59

In a Moment of Poetry
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful passionate write Neville.

Andy

December 27th, 2020 01:52

In a Moment of Poetry
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

Lips - what do we in poetry call the lips of the vulva? - I say \"love-lips\" for both the labia majora and the labia minora of the vulva (NOT vagina).

But remember I was a pathologist in my day job, before I retired - I\'m 81.

December 26th, 2020 19:25

In a Moment of Poetry
Dove said:

Nice Poetry, inhaled with passion and taste upon thy lips

December 26th, 2020 11:34

In a Moment of Poetry
orchidee said:

A swoony moment?! Seasons Greetings N. I must meet her! lol.

December 26th, 2020 10:28

In a Moment of Poetry
Jerry Reynolds said:

Happy New Year. Good read

December 26th, 2020 10:28

Truism
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend

December 22nd, 2020 06:57

Mastication
Christina8 said:

Yummy.....

December 18th, 2020 19:01

Mastication
L. B. Mek said:

I\'m gona \'choose\' to just tiptoe around the deeper and darker possible meaning to your write, blink my ignorance over your words and simply state,
some of the most treasured memories I have been gifted in my life: involved a woman who angelical deigned to intrust her love within my fickle heart and a white button-up business shirt - ruffled around the collar, cos before she \'chose\' to pick it up - it was all tapped-out...
a great write my friend, back to those deceptively subtle write\'s that only your insightfully witty imagination can conjure-up!

December 17th, 2020 05:44

Mastication
Goldfinch60 said:

As da has said those flavours must be savoured over time.

Andy

December 17th, 2020 01:25

Mastication
jarcher54 said:

Oh, MASTICATED... my bad


December 16th, 2020 23:01

Mastication
FredPeyer said:

Well put, Neville, and dusk arising said it all.

December 16th, 2020 11:40

Mastication
dusk arising said:

BIG smile here. I like that very much. A beautiful woman is like an exquisitely prepared meal. She must be served well and time taken so that all flavours of her femininity may be savoured.

December 16th, 2020 11:05

Mastication
orchidee said:

Now I must meet this fine gal! lol.

December 16th, 2020 10:01

Mastication
Jerry Reynolds said:

So was she when she put on that shirt. Good write.

December 16th, 2020 09:32

Head Rest
L. B. Mek said:

of youth\'s vehemence in all thing\'s impassioned into brilliance: these song celebrates, and how!
\'fool\'s rush-in\' goes the well trodden wisdom, but nay: dear Poet, I\'m with you - may we all go out as the brilliant flames of volatile vitality, we were born to be...
Brilliant my friend! another nugget uncovered to quench my poetic need\'s, (well, for a little while at least) lol


December 14th, 2020 07:03

Vermeil
Dove said:

Oh might she be a radiant star
Whose shine is feather light
Golden beams flowing from afar
Upon the eyes such a delight

Oh might she be beautiful gal
Whose skin is the fabric of gold
Who makes men’s ego swell
A beautiful sight to behold


( such loveliness your poetic words hold)
Much enjoyed

December 12th, 2020 07:50

Carbonito de Sophie
Dove said:

Oh to be lost in a fairytale
where dreams come true
On the wings of a dove
dulce tones of β€œ I love you β€œ
Lavender scented skies
But alas away she flew

Awesome little nursery rhyme,!
For the young at heart

December 12th, 2020 07:38

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Poetic Dan said:

I needed this to see what\'s right in front of me!
So much more passion in your words, leaves me blissfully thoughtless!

Thank you!

December 9th, 2020 16:29

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Suresh said:

You have so preciously captured the permanence of one laid over the other, as only your words could

December 9th, 2020 04:57

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Christina8 said:

Beautiful poem, flows well!..C

December 8th, 2020 21:48



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