Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this is poetic indeed it has several wonderful lines“ harvest hardship in monochrome “ Is my favorite. Other poetic inferences add depth to this poem. The draining of color from the picture as the draining of lives that are in it. Then there is the last line the analogy of the small hurt fingers that cry out just as the small children do beautiful
December 4th, 2024 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this is poetic indeed it has several wonderful lines“ harvest hardship in monochrome “ Is my favorite. Other poetic inferences add depth to this poem. The draining of color from the picture as the draining of lives that are in it. Then there is the last line the analogy of the small hurt fingers that cry out just as the small children do beautiful
December 4th, 2024 04:56
Maternal Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful meaningful words soren, love is ageless.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful meaningful words soren, love is ageless.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:58
Maternal Love
Dan Williams said:
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:27
Dan Williams said:
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:27
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Dan Williams said:
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18
Dan Williams said:
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special.I was transported to that spot.I made you a cup of peppermint tea and you told me your lies and I told you mine. Inspirational poem
December 3rd, 2024 20:39
David Wakeling said:
Wow this is special.I was transported to that spot.I made you a cup of peppermint tea and you told me your lies and I told you mine. Inspirational poem
December 3rd, 2024 20:39
Maternal Love
Teddy.15 said:
Your beloved Mother, your imagery has let me meet Lily, a very precious name for me too, how sad to see the end of our mum\'s yet also a magnificent gift if we think about it deeply, mine died at work very suddenly. Gorgeous write dearest Cassie. ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 12:57
Teddy.15 said:
Your beloved Mother, your imagery has let me meet Lily, a very precious name for me too, how sad to see the end of our mum\'s yet also a magnificent gift if we think about it deeply, mine died at work very suddenly. Gorgeous write dearest Cassie. ❤️
December 3rd, 2024 12:57
Maternal Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The ending! Wow! I have been in this situation, visiting with people in memory support caring for a doll like baby. Nothing, not even severe memory loss, can take a true mother’s love or faith away. This poem brought tears to my eyes friend. Bless you for expressing this. 🙏❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! The ending! Wow! I have been in this situation, visiting with people in memory support caring for a doll like baby. Nothing, not even severe memory loss, can take a true mother’s love or faith away. This poem brought tears to my eyes friend. Bless you for expressing this. 🙏❤️
December 3rd, 2024 09:35
Maternal Love
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written tender and sensitive poem, Thank you Cassie
December 3rd, 2024 05:39
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written tender and sensitive poem, Thank you Cassie
December 3rd, 2024 05:39
Maternal Love
arqios said:
Hey Cassie, this poem is a moving tribute to the enduring power of love and the human need for connection, even in the face of aging and cognitive decline. It invites its reader to reflect on the complexities of memory and identity and the small, tender moments that define our humanity. Much enjoyed!
December 3rd, 2024 05:15
arqios said:
Hey Cassie, this poem is a moving tribute to the enduring power of love and the human need for connection, even in the face of aging and cognitive decline. It invites its reader to reflect on the complexities of memory and identity and the small, tender moments that define our humanity. Much enjoyed!
December 3rd, 2024 05:15
Maternal Love
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this poem presents strong contrast between an infant in arms and an aging mother. The image I get is one of a very hard life for a woman who gives birth up through her later years. This seems to have taken a toll in her stare and tuning out of even the sound around her. Her mission is to take care of the child and that is all. Mother’s take care of their young at their own expense and to their last ounce of strength. Wonderfully written.
December 3rd, 2024 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this poem presents strong contrast between an infant in arms and an aging mother. The image I get is one of a very hard life for a woman who gives birth up through her later years. This seems to have taken a toll in her stare and tuning out of even the sound around her. Her mission is to take care of the child and that is all. Mother’s take care of their young at their own expense and to their last ounce of strength. Wonderfully written.
December 3rd, 2024 04:59
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is so wonderful to be in harmony with Cassie.
Andy
December 3rd, 2024 03:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Nature is so wonderful to be in harmony with Cassie.
Andy
December 3rd, 2024 03:09
Seen With Sadness
NafisaSB said:
such a hauntingly tender, beautiful and tragic poem that immediately touches your heart-strings.
may her soul rest in peace, Amen
May you continue sharing such amazingly lovely poems..
December 3rd, 2024 00:17
NafisaSB said:
such a hauntingly tender, beautiful and tragic poem that immediately touches your heart-strings.
may her soul rest in peace, Amen
May you continue sharing such amazingly lovely poems..
December 3rd, 2024 00:17
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
arqios said:
I imagine that as a reverse tree hug of sorts, having reclined against a low lying branch myself and splashing the streams flow below. Oh for those days. Even now some people would view that as lazing away our productive sunlight hours. But I dare go back! Thanks for bringing us there Cassie.
December 2nd, 2024 22:50
arqios said:
I imagine that as a reverse tree hug of sorts, having reclined against a low lying branch myself and splashing the streams flow below. Oh for those days. Even now some people would view that as lazing away our productive sunlight hours. But I dare go back! Thanks for bringing us there Cassie.
December 2nd, 2024 22:50
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Sara Teasdale.
Lovely Poem.
December 2nd, 2024 19:51
Kevin Hulme said:
Very Sara Teasdale.
Lovely Poem.
December 2nd, 2024 19:51
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Mutley Ravishes said:
I`m sure Tolkien would like this one!
December 2nd, 2024 18:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
I`m sure Tolkien would like this one!
December 2nd, 2024 18:53
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Doggerel Dave said:
My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself, Cassie.
December 2nd, 2024 16:02
Doggerel Dave said:
My heartbeat slows, I drift, it all feels far away... almost there myself, Cassie.
December 2nd, 2024 16:02
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery I\'m thinking you have many memories of your days abroad too, nothing like England on a sunny day either. Last time I flew into Heathrow I saw London on my left I\'d never flown in blue skies true story. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 14:42
Teddy.15 said:
Breathtaking imagery I\'m thinking you have many memories of your days abroad too, nothing like England on a sunny day either. Last time I flew into Heathrow I saw London on my left I\'d never flown in blue skies true story. 🌹
December 2nd, 2024 14:42
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for bringing summer to us, Cassie! I absolutely loved this poem and I could imagine myself doing exactly what you were describing. Indeed, the world is absent and it can wait! Well done! 🌹👏
December 2nd, 2024 13:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you for bringing summer to us, Cassie! I absolutely loved this poem and I could imagine myself doing exactly what you were describing. Indeed, the world is absent and it can wait! Well done! 🌹👏
December 2nd, 2024 13:39
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Caring dove said:
Soft and peaceful .. beautiful writing 🙂
December 2nd, 2024 12:39
Caring dove said:
Soft and peaceful .. beautiful writing 🙂
December 2nd, 2024 12:39
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful state is formed by this poem. It flowes with the stream and wind. Beautiful images painted.
December 2nd, 2024 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful state is formed by this poem. It flowes with the stream and wind. Beautiful images painted.
December 2nd, 2024 09:28
When The Heart Chooses
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem nicely expressed Cassie .. especially like the words ‘ diamond strength
December 2nd, 2024 07:29
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem nicely expressed Cassie .. especially like the words ‘ diamond strength
December 2nd, 2024 07:29
I Should Have
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Cassie, the glory of reality will be there when you return from your marvelous dreams.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Cassie, the glory of reality will be there when you return from your marvelous dreams.
Andy
December 2nd, 2024 02:24
Flood
Dan Williams said:
Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good thing. \"graceful willow trees bathed\" is killer line.
knee deep \"
December 2nd, 2024 00:25
Dan Williams said:
Very nice. leaves me wondering if this describes a good or not so good thing. \"graceful willow trees bathed\" is killer line.
knee deep \"
December 2nd, 2024 00:25
I Should Have
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, indulgent sleep! Dearest visions and realms in which our spirits gaily soar beyond these mundane regions whose own delights we\'d rather not miss. How you remind me of the chagrin culled in likewise missing treats I cherish for other transient joys. Charmingly rendered with daintily haunting poignancy and superb imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:21
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, indulgent sleep! Dearest visions and realms in which our spirits gaily soar beyond these mundane regions whose own delights we\'d rather not miss. How you remind me of the chagrin culled in likewise missing treats I cherish for other transient joys. Charmingly rendered with daintily haunting poignancy and superb imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:21
I Should Have
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I was ageless newly born.” Profound Cassie! A wonderful write! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“I was ageless newly born.” Profound Cassie! A wonderful write! 🌹👏
December 1st, 2024 13:46
I Should Have
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, takes me to a world i might actually want to live in, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:32
Poetic Licence said:
Beautifully written, takes me to a world i might actually want to live in, Thank you
December 1st, 2024 13:32
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