Comments received on poems by Cassie58



In Spirit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful write with great rhyme. Loved the playfulness in this piece as it traverses the heavens in a comet over oceans, mountains, clouds and sky. Lovely!

August 9th, 2024 05:16

In Spirit
Tom Dylan said:

An absolute delight to read. Love it. Thanks for sharing. Cheers, Tom.

August 9th, 2024 03:36

In Spirit
Accidental Poet said:

Close your eyes, you\'re all these things and more. 😉👍

August 9th, 2024 02:32

In Spirit
Neville said:



Now then, don\'t that feels so much better .. I could feel it coming .. thank you Cassie



August 9th, 2024 02:23

In Spirit
orchidee said:

A fine write Cassie.
I will have to wait, to grow my wings, though I try now to be \'The Birdman\'. Do ya hear me fall off the cliff? - \'arrghhhhhh! Mrs Botox causes me to do mad things. lol.

August 9th, 2024 02:20

In Spirit
Teddy.15 said:

Wow I can only say Magnificent, you just took me on the ride of my life. Wow. Your imagery is outstanding dearest Cassie, and yes so is your theme, I definitely believe in reincarnation I too would like to be an Angel. Breathtaking truly beautiful 🌹

August 9th, 2024 02:20

Perfect Integration
Doggerel Dave said:

Neva tried a Haiku before....So....

Although I don’t know
The starlings of which you speak
Thanks for the window.

I believe rhyming\'s banned - couldn\'t help myself...🙃

Crits welcome _ Thanks also for popping in, Cassie.



August 9th, 2024 00:04

Perfect Integration
Thad Wilk said:

An awesome haiku thank you!
Lovely imagery I must say! 🕊️ ☁️
Eloquently penned poetess,
a treat to read today! ☺️
Best wishes 🌹 🐦 🤗 Thad


August 8th, 2024 21:32

Interlude
Caring dove said:

Especially love this line …


gentle waves of crystal kindness
edging closer to my feet

A lovely writing

August 8th, 2024 19:20

Gratitude
rrodriguez said:

Excellent! Poignant message! Thank you for sharing. Be bleseed!

August 7th, 2024 20:26

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
MendedFences27 said:

And so it is. My, but you captured the
way some less fortunate are forced to live. Your poem is beautiful in that way. It also hammers out much of the cause. Your last lines sum it all up. Well done. Loved it.- Phil A.

August 3rd, 2024 09:01

Forget Me Not
Cocamedo said:

I can’t… this brings a sense of sadness and love swirling together. Wonderful work.

August 3rd, 2024 00:31

When The Heart Chooses
Cocamedo said:

Your poetry is awesome. Great job. What a wonderful description

August 3rd, 2024 00:29

Things I Wish I’d Said
Cocamedo said:

Beautiful…

August 3rd, 2024 00:27

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Alan R said:

This is remarkable!!! What a warm sentiment…

August 2nd, 2024 14:50

Perfect Integration
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful Haiku. My favorite Haikus are about nature and this is one.

July 31st, 2024 16:05

Resilience
Neville said:

I really don\'t know how I managed to miss this until just now .. Bloomin glad I checked but reckon it was calling me .. Both you & it as far as poetry is concerned are inspirational .. Neville

July 31st, 2024 12:55

Conversing With Blake
sorenbarrett said:

Great lines here
\"like ink blots on yellowed parchment
crows in random rows \"
Beautifully imaged Cassie

July 30th, 2024 07:28

Through The Skylight
Thad Wilk said:

\' clapping\'
You have painted a
most lovely scene. 😊
So picturesque and serene!
A stunning write,
thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!
Best wishes 🐦 🤗 🌹 Thad

July 29th, 2024 23:13

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
aDarkerMind said:

a most impressive write Cassie.

and every line a gem.

July 28th, 2024 12:56

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Thad Wilk said:

A very heart touching and poignant
poem and true indeed. 😢
I see how horrible that situation
is these days. Awesome presentation
poetess, thank you for sharing!! ✌️
Best wishes 🐦 🌹 Thad

July 20th, 2024 09:47

Stones
sorenbarrett said:

How interesting the symbolism of this poem the metaphor seems to apply to us all we leave small relics behind for others to look at and puzzle over very nicely, written Cassie and nostalgic and somewhat sad remembrance of those in our past

July 20th, 2024 06:29

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful flow to this poem of the darkness of the human situation. So nicely worded Cassie

July 19th, 2024 05:44

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
jim56 said:

another great poem
from a great writer
well written and powerful
good work

July 19th, 2024 03:55

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Teddy.15 said:

Cassie, your poetry is always exquisite how you can paint such a picture so very elegantly is truly your talent.



so I think of the city

and its burnished bright lights

and the plight of the homeless

forgotten at night

as they huddle for cover

and keep out of sight

Kudos dear friend. 🌹

July 19th, 2024 03:32

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
orchidee said:

Good write Cassie - seems so. An ongoing matter, though we may think of them more in wintry seasons.
Now me next poem - \'If the cap/hat don\'t fit, don\'t wear it!\' I bought KP a full-face balaclava, so I see her even less. lol.

July 19th, 2024 01:46

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Neville said:


Reality encapsulated within an extraordinarily fine poem .. Neville

July 19th, 2024 01:41

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Goldfinch60 said:

So true in many cases Cassie but I have a philosophy in my life that when you look at me and don\'t like what you see it is not my problem it is yours.

Andy

July 19th, 2024 01:26

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Powerful and poignant.

July 18th, 2024 23:58

If Your Face Doesn’t Fit
Doggerel Dave said:

Your verses always flow smoothly through for me, Cassie. And this one is no exception.
That “your face doesn’t fit” covers a multitude of factors such as social disadvantage, dysfunctional families, economic value and so on covers it all and should be evident to everyone.
Great write.


July 18th, 2024 19:15



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