Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Sunset and Wind Farms
Doggerel Dave said:
From the very first sighting I loved the look of those graceful structures (Form and function and all that.)
Your poem is a fitting tribute to them, many thanks, Cassie.
Side issues: I don’t detect any spelling errors here; none in mine if my disciplinarian spell checker has any say. If you find any, at any time, please let me know directly.
Wasn’t particularly aware of those avian tragedies; how reliable are the studies?
December 6th, 2024 15:05
Doggerel Dave said:
From the very first sighting I loved the look of those graceful structures (Form and function and all that.)
Your poem is a fitting tribute to them, many thanks, Cassie.
Side issues: I don’t detect any spelling errors here; none in mine if my disciplinarian spell checker has any say. If you find any, at any time, please let me know directly.
Wasn’t particularly aware of those avian tragedies; how reliable are the studies?
December 6th, 2024 15:05
Sunset and Wind Farms
arqios said:
Had they made them prettier in shape (not economically appealing to the magnates I imagine) would probably imaginable mark them more attractive to the subscribing public). But when was the last time any of 5hem really cared for the little people. Oops, went off on a tangent there… a thousand pardons.
December 6th, 2024 14:46
arqios said:
Had they made them prettier in shape (not economically appealing to the magnates I imagine) would probably imaginable mark them more attractive to the subscribing public). But when was the last time any of 5hem really cared for the little people. Oops, went off on a tangent there… a thousand pardons.
December 6th, 2024 14:46
Sunset and Wind Farms
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe just sunset and wind? Oh what a different picture and smell lol off to annoy my loved ones now ❤️
December 6th, 2024 14:38
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe just sunset and wind? Oh what a different picture and smell lol off to annoy my loved ones now ❤️
December 6th, 2024 14:38
Sunset and Wind Farms
Teddy.15 said:
Shakespear lol ok now I\'m really enjoying this one dear Cassie and sorrenbarret 🌹💐 take your bows
December 6th, 2024 14:36
Teddy.15 said:
Shakespear lol ok now I\'m really enjoying this one dear Cassie and sorrenbarret 🌹💐 take your bows
December 6th, 2024 14:36
Sunset and Wind Farms
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great poem, Cassie. Clean energy is the way to go. Of course nothing has zero impact. These lines reminded me of that:
\"row on row they stand
embracing air
as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"
Not sure if this is what you had in mind, but I think of the wildlife, particularly birds, that get \"sacrificed\" (if you will) for such clean energy. That said, it is not a reason to stop using wind (like some people try to argue)...as look at what oil does to the wildlife...let alone the planet. So, a far safer and CLEANER source of energy for sure. One that people have been using for the longest time actually. Anyway, all of that to say, this poem is not only beautifully rendered, it touches on such an important topic as well. 🙏🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 13:13
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Great poem, Cassie. Clean energy is the way to go. Of course nothing has zero impact. These lines reminded me of that:
\"row on row they stand
embracing air
as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"
Not sure if this is what you had in mind, but I think of the wildlife, particularly birds, that get \"sacrificed\" (if you will) for such clean energy. That said, it is not a reason to stop using wind (like some people try to argue)...as look at what oil does to the wildlife...let alone the planet. So, a far safer and CLEANER source of energy for sure. One that people have been using for the longest time actually. Anyway, all of that to say, this poem is not only beautifully rendered, it touches on such an important topic as well. 🙏🌹👏
December 6th, 2024 13:13
Sunset and Wind Farms
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Cassie for another enjoyable read
December 6th, 2024 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you Cassie for another enjoyable read
December 6th, 2024 13:13
Sunset and Wind Farms
sorenbarrett said:
Such vivid imagery in this poem.
\"as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"
Really very good poetic lines Cassie.
December 6th, 2024 12:41
sorenbarrett said:
Such vivid imagery in this poem.
\"as though a surgeon’s knife
sliced through sky’s heart
rip roaring red no sutures
as crimson clots appear \"
Really very good poetic lines Cassie.
December 6th, 2024 12:41
Sunset and Wind Farms
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Cassie your imagery is fantastic I could almost feel that wind, we have them close to Pisa, they are enormous and they actually do a super job, a brilliant and most informative peice of poetry. Happy Friday ❤️
December 6th, 2024 12:31
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Cassie your imagery is fantastic I could almost feel that wind, we have them close to Pisa, they are enormous and they actually do a super job, a brilliant and most informative peice of poetry. Happy Friday ❤️
December 6th, 2024 12:31
A Losing Game
teardrop said:
My dad was an extremely bad alcoholic, he would make himself at least 3 large half and half vodka and grapefruit juice to set by his bed at night so he would have them to calm his shakes when he woke up in the morning. Needless to say, growing up was a story its self. I\'m babbling on....love ypur sty;e of writting and nice to meet you as well.
December 6th, 2024 05:40
teardrop said:
My dad was an extremely bad alcoholic, he would make himself at least 3 large half and half vodka and grapefruit juice to set by his bed at night so he would have them to calm his shakes when he woke up in the morning. Needless to say, growing up was a story its self. I\'m babbling on....love ypur sty;e of writting and nice to meet you as well.
December 6th, 2024 05:40
Veils Of Mystique
Goldfinch60 said:
Very treu words Cassie, we must always speak the truth.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very treu words Cassie, we must always speak the truth.
Andy
December 6th, 2024 02:44
Veils Of Mystique
Dan Williams said:
So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
December 6th, 2024 00:58
Dan Williams said:
So clever, and well expressed truths. Nice work.
December 6th, 2024 00:58
Veils Of Mystique
David Wakeling said:
The perils of communication. A really thoughtful poem that that highlights real courage and communication.Wonderful
December 5th, 2024 15:20
David Wakeling said:
The perils of communication. A really thoughtful poem that that highlights real courage and communication.Wonderful
December 5th, 2024 15:20
Veils Of Mystique
Teddy.15 said:
A form of great communication, I face this on a daily basis being from a different culture and language, I never fail to get my point across and in most cas s I\'m respected for it, a brilliant theme dearest Cassie, say what you mean and mean what you say. Kudos. 🌹
December 5th, 2024 15:15
Teddy.15 said:
A form of great communication, I face this on a daily basis being from a different culture and language, I never fail to get my point across and in most cas s I\'m respected for it, a brilliant theme dearest Cassie, say what you mean and mean what you say. Kudos. 🌹
December 5th, 2024 15:15
Veils Of Mystique
MendedFences27 said:
Say what you will, this is a damn fine poem. It is best that we share ideas and thoughts rather than dealing in secret. Openness mainly brings with it, truth, while secrecy harbors evil. A fine poem Cassie. - Phil A.
December 5th, 2024 13:47
MendedFences27 said:
Say what you will, this is a damn fine poem. It is best that we share ideas and thoughts rather than dealing in secret. Openness mainly brings with it, truth, while secrecy harbors evil. A fine poem Cassie. - Phil A.
December 5th, 2024 13:47
Veils Of Mystique
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Cassie yes, it is the rare person that stands up against the crowd. Most people go along, even if they don’t feel like it. What we don’t realize is that one person can change the tide of a majority. Standing up for what one believes gives others courage to do the same.
December 5th, 2024 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice Cassie yes, it is the rare person that stands up against the crowd. Most people go along, even if they don’t feel like it. What we don’t realize is that one person can change the tide of a majority. Standing up for what one believes gives others courage to do the same.
December 5th, 2024 08:39
Veils Of Mystique
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth 💯. And you used very clear, unveiled, language to convey it. i hope this didn\'t happen on here, but regardless, this poem is absolutely true and should be read by everyone! That said, I am certainly glad you are here for poetry...heck, I\'m glad you are here period! Keep sharing your poetic wisodm, Cassie. It\'s much needed in this world! 🌹👏🤗❤️
December 5th, 2024 08:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth 💯. And you used very clear, unveiled, language to convey it. i hope this didn\'t happen on here, but regardless, this poem is absolutely true and should be read by everyone! That said, I am certainly glad you are here for poetry...heck, I\'m glad you are here period! Keep sharing your poetic wisodm, Cassie. It\'s much needed in this world! 🌹👏🤗❤️
December 5th, 2024 08:31
Veils Of Mystique
orchidee said:
I always run away form KP when she wants more botox money! lol.
December 5th, 2024 08:31
orchidee said:
I always run away form KP when she wants more botox money! lol.
December 5th, 2024 08:31
Veils Of Mystique
Doggerel Dave said:
Passing strange from you, Cassie: \"don’t hide what you’re saying behind veils of mystique\" So what\'s it all about, then?
December 5th, 2024 07:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Passing strange from you, Cassie: \"don’t hide what you’re saying behind veils of mystique\" So what\'s it all about, then?
December 5th, 2024 07:57
Veils Of Mystique
arqios said:
A gale of truth blowing right at my cryptic tendencies.But the truth is the truth! Nothing like the value and privilege of understanding and being understood.
December 5th, 2024 07:09
arqios said:
A gale of truth blowing right at my cryptic tendencies.But the truth is the truth! Nothing like the value and privilege of understanding and being understood.
December 5th, 2024 07:09
Veils Of Mystique
Poetic Licence said:
The message in the well written poem is true, it can be very difficult at times to carry it. A very enjoyable read. Thank you Cassie
December 5th, 2024 06:32
Poetic Licence said:
The message in the well written poem is true, it can be very difficult at times to carry it. A very enjoyable read. Thank you Cassie
December 5th, 2024 06:32
Flood
NafisaSB said:
beautiful to look at - but the consequences are sometimes so difficult to manage
lovely composition
December 5th, 2024 02:23
NafisaSB said:
beautiful to look at - but the consequences are sometimes so difficult to manage
lovely composition
December 5th, 2024 02:23
Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls
NafisaSB said:
thank heavens that those days are a dark distant memory - it was such a hard life for these little angels..
and yet, there is still child labour existing in some developing countries.. hope it disappears altoghether
December 5th, 2024 02:18
NafisaSB said:
thank heavens that those days are a dark distant memory - it was such a hard life for these little angels..
and yet, there is still child labour existing in some developing countries.. hope it disappears altoghether
December 5th, 2024 02:18
Maternal Love
NafisaSB said:
you have painted a sad but tender message - one can visualize it so clearly.. touched my heart
December 5th, 2024 02:14
NafisaSB said:
you have painted a sad but tender message - one can visualize it so clearly.. touched my heart
December 5th, 2024 02:14
Maternal Love
aDarkerMind said:
a very touching write Cassie.
and one I shall store and read many more times.
December 4th, 2024 13:42
aDarkerMind said:
a very touching write Cassie.
and one I shall store and read many more times.
December 4th, 2024 13:42
Oyster Shucking - Factory Girls
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this is poetic indeed it has several wonderful lines“ harvest hardship in monochrome “ Is my favorite. Other poetic inferences add depth to this poem. The draining of color from the picture as the draining of lives that are in it. Then there is the last line the analogy of the small hurt fingers that cry out just as the small children do beautiful
December 4th, 2024 04:56
sorenbarrett said:
Cassie, this is poetic indeed it has several wonderful lines“ harvest hardship in monochrome “ Is my favorite. Other poetic inferences add depth to this poem. The draining of color from the picture as the draining of lives that are in it. Then there is the last line the analogy of the small hurt fingers that cry out just as the small children do beautiful
December 4th, 2024 04:56
Maternal Love
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful meaningful words soren, love is ageless.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful meaningful words soren, love is ageless.
Andy
December 4th, 2024 01:58
Maternal Love
Dan Williams said:
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:27
Dan Williams said:
An admirable depiction of a mother\'s love, brings out hope in me. Nice work.
December 4th, 2024 01:27
When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky
Dan Williams said:
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18
Dan Williams said:
A wonderful lullaby, soothing. Nice.
December 4th, 2024 01:18
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