Comments received on poems by Cassie58



Aspects Of Light
Alan R said:

Very beautiful write!

March 9th, 2024 04:19

Aspects Of Light
Neville said:


every once in every while a perfect poem comes along and makes my old heart smile .. this is one of them gems ..

Neville

March 9th, 2024 04:12

Aspects Of Light
Goldfinch60 said:

Light is always there for us all Cassie, some just do not realise it is there for them.

Andy

March 9th, 2024 02:55

Aspects Of Light
Accidental Poet said:

Let the light of love shine forever on this Earth. Great write Cassie. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

March 9th, 2024 02:13

Like River Grass
Thoughtless said:

I enjoyed the use of an extended metaphor, which is hard to do. Thank you for your insight.

March 9th, 2024 00:29

Like River Grass
peto said:

I love how you can look at the grass breeze clouds in such a way
Then get on to our own species
How \"we can bounce back\"
The last 3 verses are amazing
Thoroughly enjoyed reading

March 7th, 2024 15:45

Like River Grass
Cloie said:

This poem beautifully illustrates nature\'s resilience, drawing parallels to human strength in overcoming challenges. Through vivid imagery and thoughtful reflection, it captures the essence of bouncing back after adversity. Great work!

March 7th, 2024 09:28

Like River Grass
Teddy.15 said:

So very elegant and ever, I do see and feel.such beauty in these.limes metaphor could be for so many other.meanings too.



while some sadly break

to become crushed by

all that’s belligerent



not all are resilient

not all can go with the flow

for even in a lakeside show

Beautiful writing dear Cassie58. 🌹

March 7th, 2024 05:36

Like River Grass
Neville said:



Perfectly formed, smooth as silk and flowing both steadily and credibly throughout .. so very much enjoyed .. Neville

March 7th, 2024 02:26

Like River Grass
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Cassie, but Nature\'s beauty always abounds in our lives.

Andy

March 7th, 2024 02:09

Like River Grass
Accidental Poet said:

Beautifully written Cassie. A great metaphor for how life flows from one day to the next. Hope your Wednesday is going well. πŸ‘

March 6th, 2024 16:00

Echoes of Lavender
Neilton said:

I love how you combined nature and love!! Great poem!

March 5th, 2024 10:37

Echoes of Lavender
Reynaldo Casison said:

Sweet have a nice night cassie

March 5th, 2024 04:04

Echoes of Lavender
Cassie58 said:

I like candles too. Many thanks for your time and visit Reynaldo.

March 5th, 2024 03:35

Echoes of Lavender
Reynaldo Casison said:

very beautiful,
Cassie,
heavenly,
Love the lavendar,
Like ya lit a candle

March 4th, 2024 04:38

Echoes of Lavender
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful images that take me to another plane. Lovely feelings go with this piece. Loved it.

March 3rd, 2024 21:45

Echoes of Lavender
Accidental Poet said:

I\'d call it Heaven and Earth. Beautiful written poem Cassie. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘

March 3rd, 2024 10:42

Echoes of Lavender
rhmn_7 said:

I also don\'t know if this is heaven, but that what a very colorful and vivid depiction, great poem!

March 3rd, 2024 07:55

Echoes of Lavender
Neville said:



How amazing is that .. for me a most nostalgic ride .. and we all know don\'t we .. Echoes Don\'t Tell Lies .. Hope yours is a super sunny Sunday too Chris ..

Neville


March 3rd, 2024 03:46

Echoes of Lavender
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Cassie, walking with lavender can be superb.

Andy

March 3rd, 2024 02:14

Echoes of Lavender
Kieron said:

Especially love the romantic imagery in the first stanza. Thank you for sharing, Cassie.

March 2nd, 2024 16:14

Echoes of Lavender
Teddy.15 said:

Echoes of Lavender, your summer day has left me breathless with such beautiful imagery, painted from words into a masterpiece of poetry. So very special and of course your last lines so very clever. Absolutely a joy to read. 🌹

March 2nd, 2024 08:38

When The Heart Chooses
Thomas W Case said:

You paint a beautiful picture.

March 1st, 2024 18:36

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
Parisab said:

then moves slowly upwards
imitating a lark, the messenger
of a brand new morning

And what an uplifting symbolism you brought my morning! Both the bow and the lark pointed me to a beautiful English countryside. Best.

March 1st, 2024 10:54

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
Neville said:


jeez, even if we were not in the same corner, it would be impossible not to pause and pay my respects .. this is another fine example of why I first fell in love with poetry Cassie .. Neville

March 1st, 2024 04:07

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
John Prophet said:

Very nice. Felt swept up in the words.


February 29th, 2024 19:18

On the Scent of Pine
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and vivid use of the senses.

February 29th, 2024 10:45

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
Goldfinch60 said:

Fly away Cassie I will be there as well.

Andy

February 29th, 2024 02:43

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
Accidental Poet said:

Very inspirational Cassie. πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

February 28th, 2024 22:53

Lark Ascending (Vaughan Williams)
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. Very good.

February 28th, 2024 22:43



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