Comments received on poems by Cassie58
Absent Stars
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping!!
A wonderfully, touching
and emotional write!!
Deserves a
standing ovation!, BRAVO!! 👏👏
Great read poetess
a treat to recite!
Best wishes 🐦 🤗. 🌹. Thad
August 15th, 2024 19:42
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping!!
A wonderfully, touching
and emotional write!!
Deserves a
standing ovation!, BRAVO!! 👏👏
Great read poetess
a treat to recite!
Best wishes 🐦 🤗. 🌹. Thad
August 15th, 2024 19:42
Misunderstood
Doggerel Dave said:
A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie.
After the comments above there is little else to say, other than as a reminder that differing points of view can have equal validity in the eyes of the beholders, it makes more sense than my blather right here…. 😊
August 15th, 2024 17:56
Doggerel Dave said:
A wonderfully polished piece with a great message, Cassie.
After the comments above there is little else to say, other than as a reminder that differing points of view can have equal validity in the eyes of the beholders, it makes more sense than my blather right here…. 😊
August 15th, 2024 17:56
Misunderstood
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful story, a great poem, what else can we ask for. Oh yeah, the story has a moral. Great stuff, Cassie.
Loved it. - Phil A.
August 15th, 2024 13:03
MendedFences27 said:
A wonderful story, a great poem, what else can we ask for. Oh yeah, the story has a moral. Great stuff, Cassie.
Loved it. - Phil A.
August 15th, 2024 13:03
Misunderstood
Thoughtless said:
How often a child\'s innocence is lost because of foolish adults. So often children are treated with ignorance and are looked down upon when they are more brilliant and understanding than realized.
Thank you for this reminder of adult failure.
August 15th, 2024 11:00
Thoughtless said:
How often a child\'s innocence is lost because of foolish adults. So often children are treated with ignorance and are looked down upon when they are more brilliant and understanding than realized.
Thank you for this reminder of adult failure.
August 15th, 2024 11:00
Misunderstood
orchidee said:
A fine write Cassie. That was me - I read about 8999 of the 9000 reads! heehee. (Did I?).
August 15th, 2024 10:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Cassie. That was me - I read about 8999 of the 9000 reads! heehee. (Did I?).
August 15th, 2024 10:59
Misunderstood
jim56 said:
totally beautiful poem
beautifully written
lovely words that tells a story
just amazing what a talent you have xxx keep writing
August 15th, 2024 10:50
jim56 said:
totally beautiful poem
beautifully written
lovely words that tells a story
just amazing what a talent you have xxx keep writing
August 15th, 2024 10:50
Misunderstood
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about the punishment of ignorance and good intentions that don\'t go as wone expected. Loved it.
August 15th, 2024 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write about the punishment of ignorance and good intentions that don\'t go as wone expected. Loved it.
August 15th, 2024 09:52
Misunderstood
Teddy.15 said:
You have brought back a thousand memories from home, neighbours in London in the 80\'s was one of my most cherished memories, how we were a community and how everyone just looked after everyone else. I can\'t tell you how much I\'m smiling this is purely beautiful, your Nan, purely beautiful, I was born in south London so the noise in your poem has brought even sound my tiny back garden where we grew blackberries and honeysuckle grew, and most of all, what my dear mum used to tell me, she gave her step sister her last cigarette because she needed it more than my mum. I love this dearest Cassie. Thank you. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 08:13
Teddy.15 said:
You have brought back a thousand memories from home, neighbours in London in the 80\'s was one of my most cherished memories, how we were a community and how everyone just looked after everyone else. I can\'t tell you how much I\'m smiling this is purely beautiful, your Nan, purely beautiful, I was born in south London so the noise in your poem has brought even sound my tiny back garden where we grew blackberries and honeysuckle grew, and most of all, what my dear mum used to tell me, she gave her step sister her last cigarette because she needed it more than my mum. I love this dearest Cassie. Thank you. 🌹
August 15th, 2024 08:13
Evoking The Cologne
sorenbarrett said:
Memories reinforced by physical items seem stronger. Sadness in this poem and a sense of nostalgia. Very nice Cassie.
August 14th, 2024 19:24
sorenbarrett said:
Memories reinforced by physical items seem stronger. Sadness in this poem and a sense of nostalgia. Very nice Cassie.
August 14th, 2024 19:24
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write to accompany so beautiful a song by Joan Baez, one of my all-time favs of her. And Dylan, one of my all-time favorite poets. I always felt so sad that they didn\'t stay together. 🌹
August 12th, 2024 21:44
Accidental Poet said:
A fine write to accompany so beautiful a song by Joan Baez, one of my all-time favs of her. And Dylan, one of my all-time favorite poets. I always felt so sad that they didn\'t stay together. 🌹
August 12th, 2024 21:44
In Spirit
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Excellent poem Cassie.
Your words are so realistic. Most people fear death and fail to see that it is a part of the cycle of life.
Bravo
August 12th, 2024 09:57
Saleh Ben Saleh said:
Excellent poem Cassie.
Your words are so realistic. Most people fear death and fail to see that it is a part of the cycle of life.
Bravo
August 12th, 2024 09:57
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Cassie. Loved it. I\'m a fan of both Joan and Bob Dylan.
August 12th, 2024 06:29
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write, Cassie. Loved it. I\'m a fan of both Joan and Bob Dylan.
August 12th, 2024 06:29
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Neville said:
Write from the off, this is such an emotionally charged poem Cassie, so full of love and loss as you mention in your second verse .. it tells a tale that is clearly both autobiographical and reflective ..
Joan B\'s Diamonds & Rust album sits among my very own collection & the track in question is not only one of my personal favourites but must rank amongst one of the very best folk love songs of all time ..
Your concluding verse poses an intriguing question also and one that I imagine each of your fans will decide for themselves ..
I have seen Dylan many times, the last time last year in Cardiff when he was back on form and amazing .. I am due to see him again maybe for the last time this coming November in Bournemouth ..
Our European robins eggs are not blue they are creamy buff or white speckled with a reddish brown colour more so at the large end ..
I reckon Joan was referring to the US version ..
An amazing poem here Cassie, just be sure you never fail to impress and to please .. Have a marvellous Monday chuck .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:11
Neville said:
Write from the off, this is such an emotionally charged poem Cassie, so full of love and loss as you mention in your second verse .. it tells a tale that is clearly both autobiographical and reflective ..
Joan B\'s Diamonds & Rust album sits among my very own collection & the track in question is not only one of my personal favourites but must rank amongst one of the very best folk love songs of all time ..
Your concluding verse poses an intriguing question also and one that I imagine each of your fans will decide for themselves ..
I have seen Dylan many times, the last time last year in Cardiff when he was back on form and amazing .. I am due to see him again maybe for the last time this coming November in Bournemouth ..
Our European robins eggs are not blue they are creamy buff or white speckled with a reddish brown colour more so at the large end ..
I reckon Joan was referring to the US version ..
An amazing poem here Cassie, just be sure you never fail to impress and to please .. Have a marvellous Monday chuck .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:11
Through The Skylight
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) we all need light in darkness / sadness
August 11th, 2024 16:26
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing ) we all need light in darkness / sadness
August 11th, 2024 16:26
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
MendedFences27 said:
Saw them in what was supposed to be a joint concert on Boston Common in the early sixties. Joan sang beautifully for nearly all the time of the concert and Bob was explained as being ill. When nearly all the crowd had left, Bob showed up, stoned out of his mind, and mumbled a couple of songs until security grabbed him and took him to safety. Still two of the greats of the \"Folk\" era, and Bob a supreme poet, ahead of his time.
Needless to say, your poem brought back memories for me. I\'ve been a fan of both, all my life. Your poem was a wonderful adaptation of \"Diamonds and Rust.\" Very inventive. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 16:03
MendedFences27 said:
Saw them in what was supposed to be a joint concert on Boston Common in the early sixties. Joan sang beautifully for nearly all the time of the concert and Bob was explained as being ill. When nearly all the crowd had left, Bob showed up, stoned out of his mind, and mumbled a couple of songs until security grabbed him and took him to safety. Still two of the greats of the \"Folk\" era, and Bob a supreme poet, ahead of his time.
Needless to say, your poem brought back memories for me. I\'ve been a fan of both, all my life. Your poem was a wonderful adaptation of \"Diamonds and Rust.\" Very inventive. Loved it. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2024 16:03
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderfuly expressive write Cassie.
am most impressed.
August 11th, 2024 11:43
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderfuly expressive write Cassie.
am most impressed.
August 11th, 2024 11:43
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Cassie, even without ever hearing this album I know this poem is amazing, such imagery woven in emotion, I\'m going to read up on Dylon and joan for sure and find the album, you\'ve inspired my curiosity too. Absolutely wonderful poetry as always. 🌹
August 11th, 2024 09:43
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Cassie, even without ever hearing this album I know this poem is amazing, such imagery woven in emotion, I\'m going to read up on Dylon and joan for sure and find the album, you\'ve inspired my curiosity too. Absolutely wonderful poetry as always. 🌹
August 11th, 2024 09:43
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
sorenbarrett said:
Joan Baez and her song Diamonds and Rust has always been a favorite of mine. She tells of her relationship with Bob Dylan and it applies so well in this poem metaphor or not. Wonderful wording and flow with a bit of a question at the end. Very nice Cassie
August 11th, 2024 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Joan Baez and her song Diamonds and Rust has always been a favorite of mine. She tells of her relationship with Bob Dylan and it applies so well in this poem metaphor or not. Wonderful wording and flow with a bit of a question at the end. Very nice Cassie
August 11th, 2024 09:36
Blue Eyes, Blue Eggs, Lost Love.
2781 said:
I\'ve been listening to Dylan this week.
August 11th, 2024 09:07
2781 said:
I\'ve been listening to Dylan this week.
August 11th, 2024 09:07
Forget Me Not
sorenbarrett said:
A most sweet and hauntingly innocent poem of love and loss through the fanciful eyes of a child. The imagery was wonderful and the rhyme scheme was perfect for this piece. Brilliant!
August 11th, 2024 05:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most sweet and hauntingly innocent poem of love and loss through the fanciful eyes of a child. The imagery was wonderful and the rhyme scheme was perfect for this piece. Brilliant!
August 11th, 2024 05:05
In Spirit
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all join you above the clouds Cassie.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
We will all join you above the clouds Cassie.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:17
In Spirit
Dan Williams said:
Dance and pin prick, wings and spirit. Nice work.
August 9th, 2024 23:51
Dan Williams said:
Dance and pin prick, wings and spirit. Nice work.
August 9th, 2024 23:51
In Spirit
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know who to attribute to, I kind of borrowed it \"The price of living is death\" sums thing up. Nice work.
August 9th, 2024 23:40
Dan Williams said:
I don\'t know who to attribute to, I kind of borrowed it \"The price of living is death\" sums thing up. Nice work.
August 9th, 2024 23:40
There Lingers Dignity
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem,
such eye pleasing
and inviting imagery!! 🙏
Poetic perfection,
penned superbly!
Much enjoyed poetess!!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 🐦. Thad
August 9th, 2024 22:16
Thad Wilk said:
A stunning poem,
such eye pleasing
and inviting imagery!! 🙏
Poetic perfection,
penned superbly!
Much enjoyed poetess!!
Best wishes 🤗 🌹 🐦. Thad
August 9th, 2024 22:16
In Spirit
Doggerel Dave said:
Swung through that in no time, Cassie; the smoothness of the ride was something special.
And IF your second stanza should come to pass, I\'d love to dance with you.
August 9th, 2024 07:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Swung through that in no time, Cassie; the smoothness of the ride was something special.
And IF your second stanza should come to pass, I\'d love to dance with you.
August 9th, 2024 07:28
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