Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Semiosis
jarcher54 said:
Four final words, very insightful and connecting your experience with your art: the poetry in surviving. A memorable phrase indeed.
March 9th, 2021 01:35
jarcher54 said:
Four final words, very insightful and connecting your experience with your art: the poetry in surviving. A memorable phrase indeed.
March 9th, 2021 01:35
Changing Times
dusk arising said:
To me this speaks of a deep wound of love ungiven when it was needed the most.
Very easy for me to relate to having left home for life on big city streets at just fifteen. You brought back many memories and thoughts.
I read this several times and it\'s really well constructed.
I\'m inspired to write something similar one day when I revisit old haunts.
A must for my favourites
March 8th, 2021 01:55
dusk arising said:
To me this speaks of a deep wound of love ungiven when it was needed the most.
Very easy for me to relate to having left home for life on big city streets at just fifteen. You brought back many memories and thoughts.
I read this several times and it\'s really well constructed.
I\'m inspired to write something similar one day when I revisit old haunts.
A must for my favourites
March 8th, 2021 01:55
Changing Times
jarcher54 said:
There is little as moving as revisiting scenes of one\'s less happy past. You are somehow free of it yet still embroiled in the pain. A sensational account of both the physical journey and the journey of the soul. Love the unexpected use of \"I caught fire.\" Yes you did. And you made this old soul cry too, right there with you.
March 8th, 2021 01:42
jarcher54 said:
There is little as moving as revisiting scenes of one\'s less happy past. You are somehow free of it yet still embroiled in the pain. A sensational account of both the physical journey and the journey of the soul. Love the unexpected use of \"I caught fire.\" Yes you did. And you made this old soul cry too, right there with you.
March 8th, 2021 01:42
Let\'s Kiss in the Rain
dusk arising said:
The magic of idealistic romantic brought into stark contrast with life\'s reality of loss and pain. We cannot be the ideal beings we dream of..... but do the dreams ever stop... they shouldn\'t.
March 7th, 2021 00:10
dusk arising said:
The magic of idealistic romantic brought into stark contrast with life\'s reality of loss and pain. We cannot be the ideal beings we dream of..... but do the dreams ever stop... they shouldn\'t.
March 7th, 2021 00:10
Hypnotic
dusk arising said:
Wow! What an amazing journey you took me on through the lines of this piece.
\"My thoughts are flowers waiting to be picked\" what a wonderful phrase any great poet would be proud of.
March 5th, 2021 08:37
dusk arising said:
Wow! What an amazing journey you took me on through the lines of this piece.
\"My thoughts are flowers waiting to be picked\" what a wonderful phrase any great poet would be proud of.
March 5th, 2021 08:37
The Water I Sing To
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful song, Jordan, next you gotta sing to the stars.
March 1st, 2021 23:16
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful song, Jordan, next you gotta sing to the stars.
March 1st, 2021 23:16
Songs of Hope and Peace
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Jordan. I will have to read it a few more times to lose myself in it and to understand.
February 28th, 2021 20:43
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, Jordan. I will have to read it a few more times to lose myself in it and to understand.
February 28th, 2021 20:43
6:46 Sun Is Rising
BLACKGOLDKING said:
Nice work, very relatable to heart ache and pain, walks that we go through personally.
Love it great write
February 27th, 2021 21:40
BLACKGOLDKING said:
Nice work, very relatable to heart ache and pain, walks that we go through personally.
Love it great write
February 27th, 2021 21:40
Shadow Flame
FredPeyer said:
\"Waiting for the loveless morning to appear\" How do you know it will be \'loveless\'? Yes, we will get hurt, but we also heal!
February 26th, 2021 21:07
FredPeyer said:
\"Waiting for the loveless morning to appear\" How do you know it will be \'loveless\'? Yes, we will get hurt, but we also heal!
February 26th, 2021 21:07
Pink Morning Horizon
FredPeyer said:
At my age sometimes I do feel like a \'son of yesterday\', but don\'t worry, I won\'t invade your bedroom! :-)
February 15th, 2021 20:05
FredPeyer said:
At my age sometimes I do feel like a \'son of yesterday\', but don\'t worry, I won\'t invade your bedroom! :-)
February 15th, 2021 20:05
Duality
RDS said:
Another fine poem Jordan. It seems to me more expansive and unrestrained than some of your best. Not that that makes any more or less expressive but this feels less guided and more ephemeral. As ever, good work.
J
February 12th, 2021 12:47
RDS said:
Another fine poem Jordan. It seems to me more expansive and unrestrained than some of your best. Not that that makes any more or less expressive but this feels less guided and more ephemeral. As ever, good work.
J
February 12th, 2021 12:47
Soft Violins
jarcher54 said:
angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of tinnitus! Welcome back to earth... I think!
February 11th, 2021 22:28
jarcher54 said:
angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of tinnitus! Welcome back to earth... I think!
February 11th, 2021 22:28
Duality
jarcher54 said:
Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s a play on words and so much more. Some are placed in an asylum because of their minds. Thanks for the deep thought (pun intended).
February 11th, 2021 22:12
jarcher54 said:
Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s a play on words and so much more. Some are placed in an asylum because of their minds. Thanks for the deep thought (pun intended).
February 11th, 2021 22:12
Broken Flow from the Lake of My Pen
AlitaOpal said:
This poem literally reminds me of an ayhuasca retreat I joined in the Alps of Switzerland.. The whole experience and realisation I had attained afterwards..
Wonderful piece of work 🙌
February 9th, 2021 19:52
AlitaOpal said:
This poem literally reminds me of an ayhuasca retreat I joined in the Alps of Switzerland.. The whole experience and realisation I had attained afterwards..
Wonderful piece of work 🙌
February 9th, 2021 19:52
Gone, Not Forgotten
FredPeyer said:
Losing a loved one is always very hard and does leave a big void. You wrote a very moving elegy, Jordan.
January 31st, 2021 11:28
FredPeyer said:
Losing a loved one is always very hard and does leave a big void. You wrote a very moving elegy, Jordan.
January 31st, 2021 11:28
TRANSCENDENCE
FredPeyer said:
You said it well, Jordan. Don\'t take anything for granted.
January 30th, 2021 21:20
FredPeyer said:
You said it well, Jordan. Don\'t take anything for granted.
January 30th, 2021 21:20
Rose Petals in Vaults
RDS said:
Simply beautiful Jordan, I am not so astonished you keep improving in every poem I read but you\'re style is truly developing to a fine talant. A really enjoyable read/ride.
J
January 22nd, 2021 17:21
RDS said:
Simply beautiful Jordan, I am not so astonished you keep improving in every poem I read but you\'re style is truly developing to a fine talant. A really enjoyable read/ride.
J
January 22nd, 2021 17:21
Rose Petals in Vaults
dusk arising said:
That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls from your fingertips as the poetry you write.
I enjoyed reading this.
January 21st, 2021 22:14
dusk arising said:
That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls from your fingertips as the poetry you write.
I enjoyed reading this.
January 21st, 2021 22:14
Infinite Atoms
jarcher54 said:
Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I love them...
January 20th, 2021 10:56
jarcher54 said:
Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I love them...
January 20th, 2021 10:56
When the Hate Fades
lauraoverxo said:
i love this piece, the heartbreak is written between lines of metaphors. the part about coming back to the person you love even if it\'s not healthy, the way that loves actually makes you feel insane sometimes. it has a real message about moving on or trying to move on from someone using geographical terms. :3
January 14th, 2021 11:27
lauraoverxo said:
i love this piece, the heartbreak is written between lines of metaphors. the part about coming back to the person you love even if it\'s not healthy, the way that loves actually makes you feel insane sometimes. it has a real message about moving on or trying to move on from someone using geographical terms. :3
January 14th, 2021 11:27
Kingdom of Dreams
starman74 said:
Excellent how can you help but dig work like this. Well done.
January 10th, 2021 11:08
starman74 said:
Excellent how can you help but dig work like this. Well done.
January 10th, 2021 11:08
Knowing While I\'m Sleeping
Jerry Reynolds said:
That\'s a lot of info. Good read. Stay Safe and Have a happy New Year.
December 30th, 2020 17:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
That\'s a lot of info. Good read. Stay Safe and Have a happy New Year.
December 30th, 2020 17:53
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