Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses



Lavender in the Air
dusk arising said:

Revealing the personal which has made you a poet.

June 12th, 2021 07:38

Lavender in the Air
Goldfinch60 said:

That stalemate can be broken with the strength that you have in your words Jordan.

Andy

June 12th, 2021 01:08

Lavender in the Air
Saxon Crow said:

Nicely penned Jordan

June 12th, 2021 00:41

I Thought You Had Forgotten Me
Goldfinch60 said:

You will arise from that accident Jordan and find the proper reality in you life.

Andy

June 11th, 2021 00:32

Every Falling Petal Is A Gunshot
Goldfinch60 said:

Those glints in the fire show that there will be better times to be had, may they be with you.

Andy

June 10th, 2021 00:19

Every Falling Petal Is A Gunshot
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you.

June 9th, 2021 17:14

Heaven Is Now
rebmasters said:

This poem and you remind me of another poet I was very much in love with, who used to always say \'every beautiful moment is now\'

June 8th, 2021 09:49

Summer Rain
Trenz Pruca said:

Nice emotions. Thank you. I hope it works.

June 6th, 2021 12:57

Igloo Wink
jarcher54 said:

You are truly the poet of the inner life of the mind, the heart, and the body electric.

May 31st, 2021 20:47

Morning Fog
jarcher54 said:

Oh, X, you liar! You are an EXPERT at putting pain into words, and you know it! (-:

You are always evolving... never dull!

May 31st, 2021 02:26

Morning Fog
Jayasree said:

Beautiful poem.

May 31st, 2021 02:10

Morning Fog
Caring dove said:

Great poem πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ I like your words , and flows so nicely

May 31st, 2021 00:48

Morning Fog
aDarkerMind said:

both touching and sad.
another of your writes fot me to lose myself in.
you have a gift XIdlepoetX

May 30th, 2021 21:27

Quicksand in Zenith
Goddess of the Mist said:

This flowed very nicely and I enjoyed the format.

May 29th, 2021 22:32

Bluebird
Accidental Poet said:

Great writes always come from the deepest source. Very well penned. ; )

May 29th, 2021 08:38

Bluebird
aDarkerMind said:

a picture of darkness that takes me to a new world.
cant wait to get there!

May 28th, 2021 10:38

Militant
rebmasters said:

\'So abrasive
I cut myself on your edge\'

Wonderful imagery as always

May 28th, 2021 03:04

Dark Velvet
aDarkerMind said:

strong, powerful and dark.
you have me in the gemstone of your stronghold!


May 24th, 2021 13:22

You Don\'t Know Me
jarcher54 said:

You are brave enough to be morbid sometimes. I love you because you are morbid.

May 23rd, 2021 01:11

You Don\'t Know Me
myself and me said:

I do not know you, but I can feel you. The struggle pierce the heart. Such a strong and emotional read.

May 22nd, 2021 22:02

All My Dreams Have Died
Jon Nakapalau said:

Powerful poem - but dreams may still come to dreamers who see the next day - all my best.

May 22nd, 2021 16:11

Coconut Splash
rosiedm said:

Coconut splash !
Very expressively written
Then I re-read it backwards 😁😁😁 which also works for me😘

May 20th, 2021 18:10

Coconut Splash
Caring dove said:

Very beautiful πŸ™‚

May 20th, 2021 16:32

Forget the Old Me
myself and me said:

Live your life with your own pace. One step a time. We all need to take a break from time to time to take care of ourselves. Well penned.

May 17th, 2021 19:43

Host Again
rebmasters said:

\'Love me like it\'s a ritual\' - gorgeous words and imagery

May 14th, 2021 03:43

I Fell In Love Last Night
Caring dove said:

Beautiful πŸ™‚

May 12th, 2021 16:32

We Are Made of Stars
Caring dove said:

Very engaging and lovely poem

May 12th, 2021 16:32

Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes
jarcher54 said:

Hard not to burnish one\'s regrets... all that worrying about them makes them shiny and smooth. Not sure if you were drinking before you spoke, but I can see why you might be imbibing after. Very personal and candid.

May 9th, 2021 00:28

Sleep Deprived
dusk arising said:

I don\'t know which i like best, your piece today or your resonse to Jarcher above. Both are excellent and let flow the real you outside the bounds of any poetic \'rules\' or expectations.

May 8th, 2021 14:36

Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes
dusk arising said:

The motivation behind drunken words can be difficult to face up to for both the speaker and the receiver.

May 8th, 2021 14:27

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