Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
All My Dreams Have Died
Jon Nakapalau said:
Powerful poem - but dreams may still come to dreamers who see the next day - all my best.
May 22nd, 2021 16:11
Jon Nakapalau said:
Powerful poem - but dreams may still come to dreamers who see the next day - all my best.
May 22nd, 2021 16:11
Coconut Splash
rosiedm said:
Coconut splash !
Very expressively written
Then I re-read it backwards 😁😁😁 which also works for me😘
May 20th, 2021 18:10
rosiedm said:
Coconut splash !
Very expressively written
Then I re-read it backwards 😁😁😁 which also works for me😘
May 20th, 2021 18:10
Forget the Old Me
myself and me said:
Live your life with your own pace. One step a time. We all need to take a break from time to time to take care of ourselves. Well penned.
May 17th, 2021 19:43
myself and me said:
Live your life with your own pace. One step a time. We all need to take a break from time to time to take care of ourselves. Well penned.
May 17th, 2021 19:43
Host Again
rebmasters said:
\'Love me like it\'s a ritual\' - gorgeous words and imagery
May 14th, 2021 03:43
rebmasters said:
\'Love me like it\'s a ritual\' - gorgeous words and imagery
May 14th, 2021 03:43
I Fell In Love Last Night
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful 🙂
May 12th, 2021 16:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful 🙂
May 12th, 2021 16:32
We Are Made of Stars
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very engaging and lovely poem
May 12th, 2021 16:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very engaging and lovely poem
May 12th, 2021 16:32
Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes
jarcher54 said:
Hard not to burnish one\'s regrets... all that worrying about them makes them shiny and smooth. Not sure if you were drinking before you spoke, but I can see why you might be imbibing after. Very personal and candid.
May 9th, 2021 00:28
jarcher54 said:
Hard not to burnish one\'s regrets... all that worrying about them makes them shiny and smooth. Not sure if you were drinking before you spoke, but I can see why you might be imbibing after. Very personal and candid.
May 9th, 2021 00:28
Sleep Deprived
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know which i like best, your piece today or your resonse to Jarcher above. Both are excellent and let flow the real you outside the bounds of any poetic \'rules\' or expectations.
May 8th, 2021 14:36
dusk arising said:
I don\'t know which i like best, your piece today or your resonse to Jarcher above. Both are excellent and let flow the real you outside the bounds of any poetic \'rules\' or expectations.
May 8th, 2021 14:36
Through the Lens of Drunk Eyes
dusk arising said:
The motivation behind drunken words can be difficult to face up to for both the speaker and the receiver.
May 8th, 2021 14:27
dusk arising said:
The motivation behind drunken words can be difficult to face up to for both the speaker and the receiver.
May 8th, 2021 14:27
Sleep Deprived
jarcher54 said:
I have come to the unremarkable but little-acknowledged conclusion that most of us are longing for unattainable happiness, in dark hallways, in dark streets, much of our waking, and dreaming, hours.
Your style has navigated toward a more decipherable imagery, but has not lost its joyous freedom to say curiously apt things probably never said or written quite that way before. I kind of miss some of your almost unfathomable outpourings that made one work to figure out the gist... which was through a dark glass wonderously obscure but for its sounds and sensations, but not through its literal linear meaning. The \"celestial light of moon rock\" of course is actually dimly reflected terrestrial light... but I am quite sure no one has described moonlight quite that way! Thanks as always!
May 7th, 2021 22:10
jarcher54 said:
I have come to the unremarkable but little-acknowledged conclusion that most of us are longing for unattainable happiness, in dark hallways, in dark streets, much of our waking, and dreaming, hours.
Your style has navigated toward a more decipherable imagery, but has not lost its joyous freedom to say curiously apt things probably never said or written quite that way before. I kind of miss some of your almost unfathomable outpourings that made one work to figure out the gist... which was through a dark glass wonderously obscure but for its sounds and sensations, but not through its literal linear meaning. The \"celestial light of moon rock\" of course is actually dimly reflected terrestrial light... but I am quite sure no one has described moonlight quite that way! Thanks as always!
May 7th, 2021 22:10
See You In Another Life
rosiedm said:
Deep words we write what is close to our hearts minds souls over time years we can change how we wrote as how we change in our lives
April 30th, 2021 17:03
rosiedm said:
Deep words we write what is close to our hearts minds souls over time years we can change how we wrote as how we change in our lives
April 30th, 2021 17:03
See You In Another Life
aDarkerMind said:
painful in a most beautiful write. your writing has captured me!
April 30th, 2021 15:33
aDarkerMind said:
painful in a most beautiful write. your writing has captured me!
April 30th, 2021 15:33
Be Careful My Lover
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed 🙂
April 25th, 2021 02:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Nicely expressed 🙂
April 25th, 2021 02:29
Angels Talk To Me
Liam Power said:
I really like this poetry which is almost prose. Reads very well.
April 14th, 2021 16:13
Liam Power said:
I really like this poetry which is almost prose. Reads very well.
April 14th, 2021 16:13
My Body Is A Holy City
jarcher54 said:
You do indeed carve faces into trees, into pretty much everything! I love how you use the whole dictionary, like you don\'t want any word to go to waste!
April 10th, 2021 09:30
jarcher54 said:
You do indeed carve faces into trees, into pretty much everything! I love how you use the whole dictionary, like you don\'t want any word to go to waste!
April 10th, 2021 09:30
Rush of Ecstasy
jarcher54 said:
Reason to live? Is this really you?
Seriously, watching you move through your feelings and experiences through your almost daily tumult of images and joyously confusing phrases, words combined unexpectedly to create chimeras and platypuses and centaurs, is like experiencing a series of sunsets on the beach, each day different weather, tides, waves, birds, clouds, boats, and sounds... for someone whose writing is as dense and sometimes seemingly impenetrable as yours, your feelings are always pretty clear, and one can almost intuit how your last day went and what you experienced.
April 10th, 2021 01:43
jarcher54 said:
Reason to live? Is this really you?
Seriously, watching you move through your feelings and experiences through your almost daily tumult of images and joyously confusing phrases, words combined unexpectedly to create chimeras and platypuses and centaurs, is like experiencing a series of sunsets on the beach, each day different weather, tides, waves, birds, clouds, boats, and sounds... for someone whose writing is as dense and sometimes seemingly impenetrable as yours, your feelings are always pretty clear, and one can almost intuit how your last day went and what you experienced.
April 10th, 2021 01:43
Stranger Reality
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful and emotional as I have ever read.
April 4th, 2021 10:38
aDarkerMind said:
as powerful and emotional as I have ever read.
April 4th, 2021 10:38
Ripple Through
MendedFences27 said:
As we age the days do indeed seem shorter. We shouldn\'t lose hope as it will only spoil the party called life.
Your words say many deep thoughts. Some of your metaphors are dark but beautiful.
Enjoyed the read. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2021 19:11
MendedFences27 said:
As we age the days do indeed seem shorter. We shouldn\'t lose hope as it will only spoil the party called life.
Your words say many deep thoughts. Some of your metaphors are dark but beautiful.
Enjoyed the read. - Phil A.
April 2nd, 2021 19:11
Last Romantic
jarcher54 said:
Wandering is exactly what you are doing here, wandering though images and emotions and memories. By the way, the \"algia\" in nostalgia means pain, so yes nostalgia is painful! Thanks for sharing your reverie.
March 25th, 2021 22:42
jarcher54 said:
Wandering is exactly what you are doing here, wandering though images and emotions and memories. By the way, the \"algia\" in nostalgia means pain, so yes nostalgia is painful! Thanks for sharing your reverie.
March 25th, 2021 22:42
Last Romantic
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive and engaging read
March 25th, 2021 01:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very expressive and engaging read
March 25th, 2021 01:57
Pendulum
FredPeyer said:
Jordan, well written! This is what happens when one meets its soul mate.
March 21st, 2021 21:09
FredPeyer said:
Jordan, well written! This is what happens when one meets its soul mate.
March 21st, 2021 21:09
Beautiful Creature
Goddess of the Mist said:
How lovely, ethereal. I got lost in it.
March 14th, 2021 22:46
Goddess of the Mist said:
How lovely, ethereal. I got lost in it.
March 14th, 2021 22:46
Million Dollars in A River
dusk arising said:
Distraction upon distraction prevents us from airing what we truly are, what we truly feel. Is what we truly need a compassionate society where acceptance is a norm?
Your interwoven way with verse left me with these feelings. I hope i am becoming more attuned to you individualistic style. A style reminiscent of the late kevin browne who posted on here regularly https://mypoeticside.com/user-6993
March 11th, 2021 03:04
dusk arising said:
Distraction upon distraction prevents us from airing what we truly are, what we truly feel. Is what we truly need a compassionate society where acceptance is a norm?
Your interwoven way with verse left me with these feelings. I hope i am becoming more attuned to you individualistic style. A style reminiscent of the late kevin browne who posted on here regularly https://mypoeticside.com/user-6993
March 11th, 2021 03:04
So Fucking Tired of the Pain
dusk arising said:
Great expression of lifes frustrations and the results of our feeble attempts to remove the sharp edges.
March 10th, 2021 04:35
dusk arising said:
Great expression of lifes frustrations and the results of our feeble attempts to remove the sharp edges.
March 10th, 2021 04:35
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