Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Violets Are Blue
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this
November 7th, 2021 00:57
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this
November 7th, 2021 00:57
Plishelpme
spilleronsheet said:
Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 15:29
spilleronsheet said:
Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 15:29
All My Love
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )
November 2nd, 2021 00:54
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )
November 2nd, 2021 00:54
Bloom Under Dark Sun
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )
October 30th, 2021 01:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )
October 30th, 2021 01:14
Bitch Echo
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .
I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it
You are creative with your words )
Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?
October 15th, 2021 10:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .
I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it
You are creative with your words )
Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?
October 15th, 2021 10:10
Bitch Echo
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!
October 15th, 2021 02:09
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!
October 15th, 2021 02:09
White Vintage Star Lover
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .
October 13th, 2021 16:43
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .
October 13th, 2021 16:43
Violet Pink Roses
Nicky Byrd said:
Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one
October 12th, 2021 15:37
Nicky Byrd said:
Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one
October 12th, 2021 15:37
Violet Pink Roses
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem
October 12th, 2021 15:26
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem
October 12th, 2021 15:26
Beauty in the Most Ordinary Places
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ))
October 8th, 2021 17:58
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing ))
October 8th, 2021 17:58
Pawprints and Stepping Stones
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )
October 7th, 2021 06:36
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )
October 7th, 2021 06:36
Aphotic
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your words are truly so beautiful but there’s so much sadness within
I\'m still an empty void
Like some kind of orphan with no one and no home “
That speaks of so much sadness
Great poem ,
October 5th, 2021 16:10
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Your words are truly so beautiful but there’s so much sadness within
I\'m still an empty void
Like some kind of orphan with no one and no home “
That speaks of so much sadness
Great poem ,
October 5th, 2021 16:10
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Goldfinch60 said:
Super loving words Jordan.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super loving words Jordan.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:48
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
James Michael said:
Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!
October 3rd, 2021 23:21
James Michael said:
Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!
October 3rd, 2021 23:21
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely choice of words )
October 3rd, 2021 14:58
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely choice of words )
October 3rd, 2021 14:58
Silver Lining
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like this ) a strong engaging piece of writing and beautiful , good choice of words .
October 3rd, 2021 01:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like this ) a strong engaging piece of writing and beautiful , good choice of words .
October 3rd, 2021 01:03
Mellow Softness Inside
rebmasters said:
\'but inside we are softer than pulp\'
Yes & it gets oh so messy. Beautiful words ❤️
September 30th, 2021 03:06
rebmasters said:
\'but inside we are softer than pulp\'
Yes & it gets oh so messy. Beautiful words ❤️
September 30th, 2021 03:06
Mellow Softness Inside
jarcher54 said:
A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice low-key confessional today.
September 30th, 2021 01:03
jarcher54 said:
A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice low-key confessional today.
September 30th, 2021 01:03
Mellow Softness Inside
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
Forever Is Never
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Wildblue Moonbeams
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
Wildblue Moonbeams
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
Young But Not Afraid
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
Dance While You Can
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
Last Words
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
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