Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
No Immunity
Eugene S. said:
Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.👍
November 30th, 2021 18:57
Eugene S. said:
Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.👍
November 30th, 2021 18:57
Blind Devotion
Caring dove said:
Simply beautiful … especially like this line
A violin with a beating heart in the light of day ‘
November 29th, 2021 22:46
Caring dove said:
Simply beautiful … especially like this line
A violin with a beating heart in the light of day ‘
November 29th, 2021 22:46
1,000 Tears
Caring dove said:
So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (
Fear makes life feel so difficult
November 28th, 2021 15:34
Caring dove said:
So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (
Fear makes life feel so difficult
November 28th, 2021 15:34
Turtledove
Caring dove said:
So difficult when life feels empty (
‘ like I was an easy rider in silver rivers ‘ such a beautiful line 🙂
November 28th, 2021 07:03
Caring dove said:
So difficult when life feels empty (
‘ like I was an easy rider in silver rivers ‘ such a beautiful line 🙂
November 28th, 2021 07:03
Turtledove
Lorna said:
I just loved \"easy rider in silver rivers\" - says so much.....
November 28th, 2021 06:52
Lorna said:
I just loved \"easy rider in silver rivers\" - says so much.....
November 28th, 2021 06:52
Losing Game
dusk arising said:
Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.
November 27th, 2021 08:35
dusk arising said:
Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.
November 27th, 2021 08:35
Blue Echo
Caring dove said:
I think others should comment a little more on your poems …
I like this )
November 26th, 2021 01:00
Caring dove said:
I think others should comment a little more on your poems …
I like this )
November 26th, 2021 01:00
NECTAR
Caring dove said:
Truly beautiful words … Jordan 🙂
I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words
November 25th, 2021 02:25
Caring dove said:
Truly beautiful words … Jordan 🙂
I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words
November 25th, 2021 02:25
Hourglass
spilleronsheet said:
That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 05:26
spilleronsheet said:
That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 05:26
Lonely Minds Vacancy
Arborb said:
Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.
November 20th, 2021 02:12
Arborb said:
Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.
November 20th, 2021 02:12
Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Caring dove said:
Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (
November 14th, 2021 02:20
Caring dove said:
Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (
November 14th, 2021 02:20
Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Eugene S. said:
\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans
It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"
What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.
November 14th, 2021 01:35
Eugene S. said:
\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans
It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"
What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.
November 14th, 2021 01:35
Hilltop Gentle Breeze
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful dear poet
The lines flow lucid with a great imagination running beside
Enjoyed reading the poetic lines
November 13th, 2021 06:12
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful dear poet
The lines flow lucid with a great imagination running beside
Enjoyed reading the poetic lines
November 13th, 2021 06:12
Hilltop Gentle Breeze
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂🙂
The morning glory and blue jewels, I\'m
Everything falls into place like a dab of invisible ink
music burrows like a seed in my head
The last rainbow in a storm glittering
I especially like those lines …
November 13th, 2021 02:38
Caring dove said:
Beautiful words 🙂🙂
The morning glory and blue jewels, I\'m
Everything falls into place like a dab of invisible ink
music burrows like a seed in my head
The last rainbow in a storm glittering
I especially like those lines …
November 13th, 2021 02:38
Nautical
jarcher54 said:
I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said in so few words. It means something to everyone, and says exactly what you mean. Thanks. BTW, why the change in nickname? I like it! Blatantly positive, but full of possibilities!
November 7th, 2021 03:23
jarcher54 said:
I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said in so few words. It means something to everyone, and says exactly what you mean. Thanks. BTW, why the change in nickname? I like it! Blatantly positive, but full of possibilities!
November 7th, 2021 03:23
Violets Are Blue
Caring dove said:
Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this
November 7th, 2021 00:57
Caring dove said:
Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this
November 7th, 2021 00:57
Plishelpme
spilleronsheet said:
Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 15:29
spilleronsheet said:
Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 15:29
All My Love
Caring dove said:
‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )
November 2nd, 2021 00:54
Caring dove said:
‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )
November 2nd, 2021 00:54
Bloom Under Dark Sun
Caring dove said:
You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )
October 30th, 2021 01:14
Caring dove said:
You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )
October 30th, 2021 01:14
Bitch Echo
Caring dove said:
Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .
I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it
You are creative with your words )
Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?
October 15th, 2021 10:10
Caring dove said:
Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .
I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it
You are creative with your words )
Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?
October 15th, 2021 10:10
Bitch Echo
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!
October 15th, 2021 02:09
Goddess of the Mist said:
Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!
October 15th, 2021 02:09
White Vintage Star Lover
Caring dove said:
I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .
October 13th, 2021 16:43
Caring dove said:
I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .
October 13th, 2021 16:43
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