Prerequisite Rhythm
Caring dove said:

Beautiful poem 🙂🙂 such a great way with words .. again

December 31st, 2021 17:50

Boys Want Love
Draven said:

Nice write

December 27th, 2021 04:23

Skies Asunder
L. B. Mek said:

(please forgive my rudeness, dear Poet
for daring, to mess with your Poetic Genius
but I\'m a fool at my core
and so I couldn\'t resist
to share with you
how your brilliant words, revealed
themselves to me..
and Happy holidays)

\'I see the winter sun
wax in the milky purple, wooded
In a colossal white abyss

A child\'s face staring at me
I see it
slowly changing,
Illuminated pulse wreathe
in the turbulent flood

I am calm, almost numb.\'

\'I am blurry eyed, dancing
in the storm of indifference,
I push myself to remember
the touch of your face

A lifetime ago
when I could hear the cars at night
While you
were asleep, it all came flooding back

The ever lasting sound
of the TV in the background
The cold grey sky
falling
The spray of rain, calling out
my name

In the brume, I seen ghosts
I couldn\'t circumvent

Can\'t avoid
the feeling of dying
I cleave to it, those
blithe moments, in between \'

\'Landlocked, living with you
blue boy
singing ocean songs
Time
is the biggest mountain

Hallucinations
in a morbid desert, rustling leaves
in winter
I kick my feet, tread along
the soaked pavement \'

\'The dark crescent moonlight
fervid, in the white-hot
empyrean
Rapid tides growing
Piercing dolour fluctuating
Flaxen, fulgent beams
frolicking in nightmares

A garden blossomed
in the iris, a city of dreams
Tied to hope
with ribbons, but I\'m powerless

I allude, all the things
I can\'t evade, they see me

Dew in my mouth, lachrymose blood in my hands

I drew a picture of Heaven and seen you like an angel
Lightsome
in the translucent ivory pictures
of tomorrow\'s mind
I splash and rend
I think of myself
in the afterlife
*by your side, once again\'



December 24th, 2021 04:44

Tasquiqui
Draven said:

Nicely written xx

December 23rd, 2021 07:23

Nightfall Stardust
L. B. Mek said:

\'Reading letters in candlelight
by a fiery place
Casting spells in cloudy mirrors
Looking through windows
into fraudulent realty
I hear the rain,
the night\'s music flowing

Divinity in the mind\'s prison burgeoning in hollow pits
My unshaven face, puppy eyes, red blemishes
Days without showering in this depressive gloom

Insane statues
with winter in our bodies, content hands
When we\'re stimulated
and not thinking about the future
Visions like Chromecast unearthed in our ruins
I submit to desire, everyone does
Like moths to light, controlled by impulse\'

December 16th, 2021 05:13

Laying in Your Arms
Caring dove said:

So much emotion and feeling in this .

Great expression ))

December 14th, 2021 16:42

Ferris Wheel
Draven said:

beautifully hurtful, strong words x

December 11th, 2021 13:02

Long Walks in the Rain
C E Thomas said:

\"Yes; yes, yes.\"

Good work. I felt emotions I can\'t quite put my finger on, but they seem deeply rooted in the human experience. Keep it up, my friend

December 9th, 2021 21:57

My Tears Flow Like Rivers
woundedheart said:

Bitter sweet write but very nicely penned

December 9th, 2021 03:53

My Tears Flow Like Rivers
Caring dove said:

Sad writing , but beautiful )

December 8th, 2021 17:20

Poet Insane
Draven said:

Deeply beautiful words x

December 6th, 2021 18:46

Wild Waters
A Boy With Roses said:

Thank you for your kind words. When I write, I tend to listen to music the most. Poetic words and sounds coexisting are so therapeutic, like the best medicine for the soul. Maybe it subconsciously affects my writing.

December 4th, 2021 19:58

Sky Coloured Blue
Draven said:

This is really beautiful.

December 2nd, 2021 18:28

No Immunity
Eugene S. said:

Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.👍

November 30th, 2021 18:57

1,000 Tears
Caring dove said:

So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (

Fear makes life feel so difficult

November 28th, 2021 15:34