Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Pink Morning Horizon
FredPeyer said:
At my age sometimes I do feel like a \'son of yesterday\', but don\'t worry, I won\'t invade your bedroom! :-)
February 15th, 2021 20:05
FredPeyer said:
At my age sometimes I do feel like a \'son of yesterday\', but don\'t worry, I won\'t invade your bedroom! :-)
February 15th, 2021 20:05
Duality
RDS said:
Another fine poem Jordan. It seems to me more expansive and unrestrained than some of your best. Not that that makes any more or less expressive but this feels less guided and more ephemeral. As ever, good work.
J
February 12th, 2021 12:47
RDS said:
Another fine poem Jordan. It seems to me more expansive and unrestrained than some of your best. Not that that makes any more or less expressive but this feels less guided and more ephemeral. As ever, good work.
J
February 12th, 2021 12:47
Soft Violins
jarcher54 said:
angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of tinnitus! Welcome back to earth... I think!
February 11th, 2021 22:28
jarcher54 said:
angels playing prehistoric airs in your ears beats the heck out of tinnitus! Welcome back to earth... I think!
February 11th, 2021 22:28
Duality
jarcher54 said:
Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s a play on words and so much more. Some are placed in an asylum because of their minds. Thanks for the deep thought (pun intended).
February 11th, 2021 22:12
jarcher54 said:
Very deft phrase, the mind\'s asylum. Why didn\'t I think of that? It\'s a play on words and so much more. Some are placed in an asylum because of their minds. Thanks for the deep thought (pun intended).
February 11th, 2021 22:12
Broken Flow from the Lake of My Pen
AlitaOpal said:
This poem literally reminds me of an ayhuasca retreat I joined in the Alps of Switzerland.. The whole experience and realisation I had attained afterwards..
Wonderful piece of work 🙌
February 9th, 2021 19:52
AlitaOpal said:
This poem literally reminds me of an ayhuasca retreat I joined in the Alps of Switzerland.. The whole experience and realisation I had attained afterwards..
Wonderful piece of work 🙌
February 9th, 2021 19:52
Gone, Not Forgotten
FredPeyer said:
Losing a loved one is always very hard and does leave a big void. You wrote a very moving elegy, Jordan.
January 31st, 2021 11:28
FredPeyer said:
Losing a loved one is always very hard and does leave a big void. You wrote a very moving elegy, Jordan.
January 31st, 2021 11:28
TRANSCENDENCE
FredPeyer said:
You said it well, Jordan. Don\'t take anything for granted.
January 30th, 2021 21:20
FredPeyer said:
You said it well, Jordan. Don\'t take anything for granted.
January 30th, 2021 21:20
Rose Petals in Vaults
RDS said:
Simply beautiful Jordan, I am not so astonished you keep improving in every poem I read but you\'re style is truly developing to a fine talant. A really enjoyable read/ride.
J
January 22nd, 2021 17:21
RDS said:
Simply beautiful Jordan, I am not so astonished you keep improving in every poem I read but you\'re style is truly developing to a fine talant. A really enjoyable read/ride.
J
January 22nd, 2021 17:21
Rose Petals in Vaults
dusk arising said:
That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls from your fingertips as the poetry you write.
I enjoyed reading this.
January 21st, 2021 22:14
dusk arising said:
That wine is the poetic blood which daily courses through you and falls from your fingertips as the poetry you write.
I enjoyed reading this.
January 21st, 2021 22:14
Infinite Atoms
jarcher54 said:
Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I love them...
January 20th, 2021 10:56
jarcher54 said:
Bite marks indeed! Your outpourings are almost overwhelming! I think I love them...
January 20th, 2021 10:56
When the Hate Fades
lauraoverxo said:
i love this piece, the heartbreak is written between lines of metaphors. the part about coming back to the person you love even if it\'s not healthy, the way that loves actually makes you feel insane sometimes. it has a real message about moving on or trying to move on from someone using geographical terms. :3
January 14th, 2021 11:27
lauraoverxo said:
i love this piece, the heartbreak is written between lines of metaphors. the part about coming back to the person you love even if it\'s not healthy, the way that loves actually makes you feel insane sometimes. it has a real message about moving on or trying to move on from someone using geographical terms. :3
January 14th, 2021 11:27
Kingdom of Dreams
starman74 said:
Excellent how can you help but dig work like this. Well done.
January 10th, 2021 11:08
starman74 said:
Excellent how can you help but dig work like this. Well done.
January 10th, 2021 11:08
Knowing While I\'m Sleeping
Jerry Reynolds said:
That\'s a lot of info. Good read. Stay Safe and Have a happy New Year.
December 30th, 2020 17:53
Jerry Reynolds said:
That\'s a lot of info. Good read. Stay Safe and Have a happy New Year.
December 30th, 2020 17:53
And I Fell into Feelings of Despair
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of images. Good write. Have a Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 16:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of images. Good write. Have a Happy New Year.
December 27th, 2020 16:56
Moon Before the Horizon
RDS said:
Another great poem Jordan. Our word flow stands on metaphorical tableaus\' that create vivid images, naked feelings and sensational association for the reader together imaginatively.
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:29
RDS said:
Another great poem Jordan. Our word flow stands on metaphorical tableaus\' that create vivid images, naked feelings and sensational association for the reader together imaginatively.
J
December 23rd, 2020 16:29
Polar Over the Water
RDS said:
That\'s the best one so far, of your collection I\'m slowly digesting. Real heart and a fine nod to your poetic mother.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:47
RDS said:
That\'s the best one so far, of your collection I\'m slowly digesting. Real heart and a fine nod to your poetic mother.
J
December 19th, 2020 17:47
Afternoon Blues
jarcher54 said:
Such a flow. Felt swept along, breaking into that old school sliding down the hose through the inferno. We all have felt that confrontation with fake happiness. By churches and factories, like the touring musician in Simon and Garfunkel\'s Homeward Bound. I was mesmerized.
December 16th, 2020 22:23
jarcher54 said:
Such a flow. Felt swept along, breaking into that old school sliding down the hose through the inferno. We all have felt that confrontation with fake happiness. By churches and factories, like the touring musician in Simon and Garfunkel\'s Homeward Bound. I was mesmerized.
December 16th, 2020 22:23
Sheep and Domestics
RDS said:
Another outstanding tour of thought Jordan. Some absolutely class observations, metaphors and emotional control that creates a flow with real highs and lows.
J
December 12th, 2020 16:04
RDS said:
Another outstanding tour of thought Jordan. Some absolutely class observations, metaphors and emotional control that creates a flow with real highs and lows.
J
December 12th, 2020 16:04
Sheep and Domestics
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting read. Happy Holidays. Stay Safe.
December 12th, 2020 14:57
Jerry Reynolds said:
Haunting read. Happy Holidays. Stay Safe.
December 12th, 2020 14:57
Kingdom of Dreams
RDS said:
Another great work Jordan, the poetic flow adds drama to some bizzare visions and reflections. Another insightful level.
J
December 8th, 2020 15:29
RDS said:
Another great work Jordan, the poetic flow adds drama to some bizzare visions and reflections. Another insightful level.
J
December 8th, 2020 15:29
Noir
RDS said:
Titanic!
What an absolute epic that grips tighter the more I read. What radiates out from your sprawling delight is a supernova intelligence you are honing on razor sharp insights and eclectic impressions you draw out like a skilled cartographer. Reflections that are crystal clear and flow like water.
Disharmonies and disorder in a cacophony of ideas you raise to symphonic proportions.
You dealt Kasparov his last hand, I bet.
I\'d like to say \"Today I hope you can be someone new someone you\'ve never known\" but I really don\'t want to disturb the rhythm you\'re in.
Absolutely fascinating thanks Jordan, a firm favourite of mine.
J
November 30th, 2020 22:55
RDS said:
Titanic!
What an absolute epic that grips tighter the more I read. What radiates out from your sprawling delight is a supernova intelligence you are honing on razor sharp insights and eclectic impressions you draw out like a skilled cartographer. Reflections that are crystal clear and flow like water.
Disharmonies and disorder in a cacophony of ideas you raise to symphonic proportions.
You dealt Kasparov his last hand, I bet.
I\'d like to say \"Today I hope you can be someone new someone you\'ve never known\" but I really don\'t want to disturb the rhythm you\'re in.
Absolutely fascinating thanks Jordan, a firm favourite of mine.
J
November 30th, 2020 22:55
Pretending I\'m Okay
RDS said:
XIdlepoetX fantastic epic, by typical shorter standards. Tense, moody and dreamy I really enjoyed the drift of time and rhythm. Time. It is not anyone\'s friend in its relentless, ceaseless separation. Our salvation and even joy is found in the growing sense of holding more of it together.
Nicely penned.
\"... Jar of go to words...\" I sometimes despise myself for the same guity pleasure and the failure of inventiveness.
J
November 28th, 2020 07:34
RDS said:
XIdlepoetX fantastic epic, by typical shorter standards. Tense, moody and dreamy I really enjoyed the drift of time and rhythm. Time. It is not anyone\'s friend in its relentless, ceaseless separation. Our salvation and even joy is found in the growing sense of holding more of it together.
Nicely penned.
\"... Jar of go to words...\" I sometimes despise myself for the same guity pleasure and the failure of inventiveness.
J
November 28th, 2020 07:34
Hardest Poem to Publish
RDS said:
A great wide-ranging epic with fine details, thanks for sharing this poem that brings to my mind a tension between tease and torment. I can attest to poems burning if, in a fit of madness, you set fire to your notebooks..
November 20th, 2020 14:34
RDS said:
A great wide-ranging epic with fine details, thanks for sharing this poem that brings to my mind a tension between tease and torment. I can attest to poems burning if, in a fit of madness, you set fire to your notebooks..
November 20th, 2020 14:34
Butterfly
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I think you have a wonderful gift for innovative imagery and I liked your write
in my humble opinion if you were to tone down the dramatic elements within your style, it will help streamline your message a little clearer,
please take no offense, I would not bother commenting if I didn\'t value your writing and I am certainly no authority on write or wrong, just sharing a humble suggestion: my 2 cents - for all it\'s worth,
November 5th, 2020 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
firstly, I think you have a wonderful gift for innovative imagery and I liked your write
in my humble opinion if you were to tone down the dramatic elements within your style, it will help streamline your message a little clearer,
please take no offense, I would not bother commenting if I didn\'t value your writing and I am certainly no authority on write or wrong, just sharing a humble suggestion: my 2 cents - for all it\'s worth,
November 5th, 2020 05:21
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