Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Mellow Softness Inside
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
Forever Is Never
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Wildblue Moonbeams
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
Wildblue Moonbeams
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
Young But Not Afraid
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
Dance While You Can
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
Last Words
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
Aonaran
Arvy said:
\"I am here. Another year of insanity has passed\" beautiful line!
September 3rd, 2021 02:04
Arvy said:
\"I am here. Another year of insanity has passed\" beautiful line!
September 3rd, 2021 02:04
Te Amo
Florence J said:
I love the pace of this poem!
It really encapsulated the passion and chaos the poem discusses in each stanza.
Incredibly amazing!
August 27th, 2021 04:49
Florence J said:
I love the pace of this poem!
It really encapsulated the passion and chaos the poem discusses in each stanza.
Incredibly amazing!
August 27th, 2021 04:49
Te Amo
rebmasters said:
Love the first stanza - the overwhelming sensory nature of love and how achingly, frustratingly ephemeral it is. Beautiful throughout 🖤
August 27th, 2021 03:23
rebmasters said:
Love the first stanza - the overwhelming sensory nature of love and how achingly, frustratingly ephemeral it is. Beautiful throughout 🖤
August 27th, 2021 03:23
Divine Surrender
rebmasters said:
Beautiful
This great line:
\'I am not a window for your rainfall\'
Perfectly capturing a feeling
August 23rd, 2021 03:27
rebmasters said:
Beautiful
This great line:
\'I am not a window for your rainfall\'
Perfectly capturing a feeling
August 23rd, 2021 03:27
Temple
jarcher54 said:
A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once upon a time. I can relate to this most of all: I swiftly grasp your face, time clenched in my palms. Holding time, if only! Thanks for sharing your vices: smoking, drinking, sex, and poetry!
August 21st, 2021 23:46
jarcher54 said:
A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once upon a time. I can relate to this most of all: I swiftly grasp your face, time clenched in my palms. Holding time, if only! Thanks for sharing your vices: smoking, drinking, sex, and poetry!
August 21st, 2021 23:46
Summer\'s Over
rebmasters said:
So beautiful ❤
Reminds me of these lyrics:
\'You own me
There\'s nothing you can do
You clean yourself to meet
The man who isn\'t me
You\'re putting on a shirt
A shirt I\'ll never see
The letter\'s in your coat
But no one\'s in your head
\'Cause you\'re too smart to remember
You\'re too smart
Lucky you\'
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
xxx
August 21st, 2021 03:00
rebmasters said:
So beautiful ❤
Reminds me of these lyrics:
\'You own me
There\'s nothing you can do
You clean yourself to meet
The man who isn\'t me
You\'re putting on a shirt
A shirt I\'ll never see
The letter\'s in your coat
But no one\'s in your head
\'Cause you\'re too smart to remember
You\'re too smart
Lucky you\'
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
xxx
August 21st, 2021 03:00
My Kind
Arvy said:
\"The city you built on my name, my kind of man, Precious and Tokyo\" beautiful scenery when mixed with imagination!
August 15th, 2021 01:25
Arvy said:
\"The city you built on my name, my kind of man, Precious and Tokyo\" beautiful scenery when mixed with imagination!
August 15th, 2021 01:25
California Love
Arvy said:
I truly appreciate your ability of being vulnerable in your poetry! Incredibly beautiful!
August 13th, 2021 01:51
Arvy said:
I truly appreciate your ability of being vulnerable in your poetry! Incredibly beautiful!
August 13th, 2021 01:51
California Love
HannahElisabeth said:
\"Our love is criminal but I wouldn\'t want it any other way\"
I absolutely love this
August 12th, 2021 17:28
HannahElisabeth said:
\"Our love is criminal but I wouldn\'t want it any other way\"
I absolutely love this
August 12th, 2021 17:28
Don\'t Say Goodbye
Freni Karaluthara said:
I want to use different colours, to paint a different scene
To realise, I am more than who I am.
Nice Poem dear poet
August 6th, 2021 03:48
Freni Karaluthara said:
I want to use different colours, to paint a different scene
To realise, I am more than who I am.
Nice Poem dear poet
August 6th, 2021 03:48
Don\'t Say Goodbye
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Beautiful, strong emotions and very sad feeling regrets too. Good job hun 🙂
August 5th, 2021 23:56
Nancy Rdz LL said:
Beautiful, strong emotions and very sad feeling regrets too. Good job hun 🙂
August 5th, 2021 23:56
Black Cherry
rebmasters said:
Beautiful opening lines and lucid, incredible imagery from you as always 🖤
July 23rd, 2021 03:21
rebmasters said:
Beautiful opening lines and lucid, incredible imagery from you as always 🖤
July 23rd, 2021 03:21
Happy Never Ending
jarcher54 said:
It is both beautiful and frightful that dark experiences, or at least the imagining or recollection of them, commands so much of your work. I think I\'m looking forward (for your own good?) to you actually BEING OK. You are an enigma in the best sense of the word. But don\'t stop moving forward.
July 20th, 2021 11:46
jarcher54 said:
It is both beautiful and frightful that dark experiences, or at least the imagining or recollection of them, commands so much of your work. I think I\'m looking forward (for your own good?) to you actually BEING OK. You are an enigma in the best sense of the word. But don\'t stop moving forward.
July 20th, 2021 11:46
Life Commodity
rebmasters said:
So true & poignant:
\'I want to tell you how I feel
But I don\'t know how to tell you how I feel\'
July 16th, 2021 13:05
rebmasters said:
So true & poignant:
\'I want to tell you how I feel
But I don\'t know how to tell you how I feel\'
July 16th, 2021 13:05
Swanfeather Overflow
rebmasters said:
Beautiful & aching - \'I decorate my house with tears\' is my favourite line too
July 15th, 2021 04:15
rebmasters said:
Beautiful & aching - \'I decorate my house with tears\' is my favourite line too
July 15th, 2021 04:15
Swanfeather Overflow
AzaleaTruth said:
\'I decorate my house with tears....\' the best line!!
July 14th, 2021 23:06
AzaleaTruth said:
\'I decorate my house with tears....\' the best line!!
July 14th, 2021 23:06
Happiness I\'ve Never Known
flyingfish said:
I avoid being in snaps, cause it ages one\'s id. I enjoyed reading your poem. It triggered memories. Cheers
July 9th, 2021 12:36
flyingfish said:
I avoid being in snaps, cause it ages one\'s id. I enjoyed reading your poem. It triggered memories. Cheers
July 9th, 2021 12:36
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