Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses



Aonaran
Arvy said:

\"I am here. Another year of insanity has passed\" beautiful line!

September 3rd, 2021 02:04

Te Amo
Florence J said:

I love the pace of this poem!
It really encapsulated the passion and chaos the poem discusses in each stanza.
Incredibly amazing!

August 27th, 2021 04:49

Te Amo
rebmasters said:

Love the first stanza - the overwhelming sensory nature of love and how achingly, frustratingly ephemeral it is. Beautiful throughout 🖤

August 27th, 2021 03:23

So You Must Take The Risk
Arvy said:

Beautiful as always!

August 24th, 2021 03:28

Divine Surrender
rebmasters said:

Beautiful

This great line:

\'I am not a window for your rainfall\'

Perfectly capturing a feeling

August 23rd, 2021 03:27

Temple
jarcher54 said:

A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once upon a time. I can relate to this most of all: I swiftly grasp your face, time clenched in my palms. Holding time, if only! Thanks for sharing your vices: smoking, drinking, sex, and poetry!

August 21st, 2021 23:46

Summer\'s Over
rebmasters said:

So beautiful ❤

Reminds me of these lyrics:

\'You own me
There\'s nothing you can do

You clean yourself to meet
The man who isn\'t me
You\'re putting on a shirt
A shirt I\'ll never see
The letter\'s in your coat
But no one\'s in your head
\'Cause you\'re too smart to remember
You\'re too smart

Lucky you\'

https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44

xxx

August 21st, 2021 03:00

Angel Avatar
aDarkerMind said:

to be applauded!

August 15th, 2021 13:51

My Kind
Arvy said:

\"The city you built on my name, my kind of man, Precious and Tokyo\" beautiful scenery when mixed with imagination!

August 15th, 2021 01:25

Don\'t Say Goodbye
Arvy said:

BEAUTIFUL!

August 13th, 2021 02:02

California Love
Arvy said:

I truly appreciate your ability of being vulnerable in your poetry! Incredibly beautiful!

August 13th, 2021 01:51

California Love
HannahElisabeth said:

\"Our love is criminal but I wouldn\'t want it any other way\"

I absolutely love this

August 12th, 2021 17:28

Soft Blue
Arvy said:

So raw and so real! Stay safe dear Jordan

August 11th, 2021 03:33

Soft Blue
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful , but sad .

August 10th, 2021 15:55

Don\'t Say Goodbye
Freni Karaluthara said:

I want to use different colours, to paint a different scene
To realise, I am more than who I am.

Nice Poem dear poet

August 6th, 2021 03:48

Don\'t Say Goodbye
Nancy Rdz LL said:

Beautiful, strong emotions and very sad feeling regrets too. Good job hun 🙂

August 5th, 2021 23:56

Stars Becoming Dust
Saxon Crow said:

Beautiful

August 2nd, 2021 00:05

Black Cherry
rebmasters said:

Beautiful opening lines and lucid, incredible imagery from you as always 🖤

July 23rd, 2021 03:21

Happy Never Ending
jarcher54 said:

It is both beautiful and frightful that dark experiences, or at least the imagining or recollection of them, commands so much of your work. I think I\'m looking forward (for your own good?) to you actually BEING OK. You are an enigma in the best sense of the word. But don\'t stop moving forward.

July 20th, 2021 11:46

Life Commodity
rebmasters said:

So true & poignant:

\'I want to tell you how I feel

But I don\'t know how to tell you how I feel\'

July 16th, 2021 13:05

Swanfeather Overflow
rebmasters said:

Beautiful & aching - \'I decorate my house with tears\' is my favourite line too

July 15th, 2021 04:15

Swanfeather Overflow
AzaleaTruth said:

\'I decorate my house with tears....\' the best line!!

July 14th, 2021 23:06

Happiness I\'ve Never Known
flyingfish said:

I avoid being in snaps, cause it ages one\'s id. I enjoyed reading your poem. It triggered memories. Cheers

July 9th, 2021 12:36

Lost But I\'ll Find My Way
Goldfinch60 said:

That way is always there for you XX, it is through the next door you come to.

Andy

July 9th, 2021 00:59

Hurts Just A Little
dusk arising said:

Well written expression of the pain of an ending.
Life will get better as time does it\'s healing trick. Hold your head up.

July 7th, 2021 01:34

Don\'t Wanna Think Anymore
jarcher54 said:

A moving, bittersweet love confession... a flood of fading emotions indeed. That\'s a clever, apt image. The emotions flood in yet somehow are fading. We\'ve all been there but few have said it so neatly.

July 5th, 2021 12:58

Night Flowing Body Transcending
Goldfinch60 said:

May that music be forever in yhour life Jordan.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:35

Seed Cycle
Goldfinch60 said:

One day Jordan that hand me reach out and be clasped.

Andy

June 30th, 2021 00:20

Gone and Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Jordan.

Andy

June 29th, 2021 00:37

As Far As the Wind Dances
aDarkerMind said:

brilliant!

June 27th, 2021 13:31

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