Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Violet Pink Roses
Nicky Byrd said:
Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one
October 12th, 2021 15:37
Nicky Byrd said:
Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one
October 12th, 2021 15:37
Violet Pink Roses
Caring dove said:
Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem
October 12th, 2021 15:26
Caring dove said:
Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem
October 12th, 2021 15:26
Pawprints and Stepping Stones
Caring dove said:
Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )
October 7th, 2021 06:36
Caring dove said:
Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )
October 7th, 2021 06:36
Aphotic
Caring dove said:
Your words are truly so beautiful but there’s so much sadness within
I\'m still an empty void
Like some kind of orphan with no one and no home “
That speaks of so much sadness
Great poem ,
October 5th, 2021 16:10
Caring dove said:
Your words are truly so beautiful but there’s so much sadness within
I\'m still an empty void
Like some kind of orphan with no one and no home “
That speaks of so much sadness
Great poem ,
October 5th, 2021 16:10
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Goldfinch60 said:
Super loving words Jordan.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super loving words Jordan.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:48
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
James Michael said:
Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!
October 3rd, 2021 23:21
James Michael said:
Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!
October 3rd, 2021 23:21
Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Caring dove said:
Lovely choice of words )
October 3rd, 2021 14:58
Caring dove said:
Lovely choice of words )
October 3rd, 2021 14:58
Silver Lining
Caring dove said:
I really like this ) a strong engaging piece of writing and beautiful , good choice of words .
October 3rd, 2021 01:03
Caring dove said:
I really like this ) a strong engaging piece of writing and beautiful , good choice of words .
October 3rd, 2021 01:03
Mellow Softness Inside
rebmasters said:
\'but inside we are softer than pulp\'
Yes & it gets oh so messy. Beautiful words ❤️
September 30th, 2021 03:06
rebmasters said:
\'but inside we are softer than pulp\'
Yes & it gets oh so messy. Beautiful words ❤️
September 30th, 2021 03:06
Mellow Softness Inside
jarcher54 said:
A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice low-key confessional today.
September 30th, 2021 01:03
jarcher54 said:
A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice low-key confessional today.
September 30th, 2021 01:03
Mellow Softness Inside
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
James Michael said:
Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.
It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.
September 29th, 2021 21:50
Forever Is Never
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Eugene S. said:
Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.
September 19th, 2021 20:19
Wildblue Moonbeams
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
jarcher54 said:
When you mention the lying mirror, I am reminded of all the interesting, fragmented, and stylized pieces of yourself you have used as your avatar. I wonder what that mirror shows! Boneless and vacant is startlingly apropos of the persona you are, at least in the poetry mirror, or is it fun house of mirrors? Bringing the modern windmills into the pastoral scene is quite perfect here. But I wonder, 100 years from now, will anyone know what a \"wind farm\" was? The answer to that is blowing in the... well, a good read, one long breath, very confessional, very compelling, just enough incongruity to create ambiguities. Thanks!
September 12th, 2021 23:48
Wildblue Moonbeams
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
HannahElisabeth said:
Love the references you intertwined here, especially Nikita Gill.
This was beautifully expressed 🖤
September 12th, 2021 23:45
Young But Not Afraid
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
rebmasters said:
Do you ever write longer prose? I would love to read a book by you x
September 12th, 2021 06:42
Dance While You Can
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
James Michael said:
‘breathe underwater’ excellent, I think that’s in a Morphine song. ‘Too proud, sanity means nothing.’. Man oh man, so many great lines with metaphors. Diggin’ this one for real.
September 10th, 2021 18:45
Last Words
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
James Michael said:
Too fucked up to make it through this one. Anyone ever tell you that you look like James Dean?
September 10th, 2021 00:11
Aonaran
Arvy said:
\"I am here. Another year of insanity has passed\" beautiful line!
September 3rd, 2021 02:04
Arvy said:
\"I am here. Another year of insanity has passed\" beautiful line!
September 3rd, 2021 02:04
Te Amo
Florence J said:
I love the pace of this poem!
It really encapsulated the passion and chaos the poem discusses in each stanza.
Incredibly amazing!
August 27th, 2021 04:49
Florence J said:
I love the pace of this poem!
It really encapsulated the passion and chaos the poem discusses in each stanza.
Incredibly amazing!
August 27th, 2021 04:49
Te Amo
rebmasters said:
Love the first stanza - the overwhelming sensory nature of love and how achingly, frustratingly ephemeral it is. Beautiful throughout 🖤
August 27th, 2021 03:23
rebmasters said:
Love the first stanza - the overwhelming sensory nature of love and how achingly, frustratingly ephemeral it is. Beautiful throughout 🖤
August 27th, 2021 03:23
Divine Surrender
rebmasters said:
Beautiful
This great line:
\'I am not a window for your rainfall\'
Perfectly capturing a feeling
August 23rd, 2021 03:27
rebmasters said:
Beautiful
This great line:
\'I am not a window for your rainfall\'
Perfectly capturing a feeling
August 23rd, 2021 03:27
Temple
jarcher54 said:
A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once upon a time. I can relate to this most of all: I swiftly grasp your face, time clenched in my palms. Holding time, if only! Thanks for sharing your vices: smoking, drinking, sex, and poetry!
August 21st, 2021 23:46
jarcher54 said:
A little indulgent, and a little too familiar to most of us, at least once upon a time. I can relate to this most of all: I swiftly grasp your face, time clenched in my palms. Holding time, if only! Thanks for sharing your vices: smoking, drinking, sex, and poetry!
August 21st, 2021 23:46
Summer\'s Over
rebmasters said:
So beautiful ❤
Reminds me of these lyrics:
\'You own me
There\'s nothing you can do
You clean yourself to meet
The man who isn\'t me
You\'re putting on a shirt
A shirt I\'ll never see
The letter\'s in your coat
But no one\'s in your head
\'Cause you\'re too smart to remember
You\'re too smart
Lucky you\'
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
xxx
August 21st, 2021 03:00
rebmasters said:
So beautiful ❤
Reminds me of these lyrics:
\'You own me
There\'s nothing you can do
You clean yourself to meet
The man who isn\'t me
You\'re putting on a shirt
A shirt I\'ll never see
The letter\'s in your coat
But no one\'s in your head
\'Cause you\'re too smart to remember
You\'re too smart
Lucky you\'
https://youtu.be/QcPd1SV8u44
xxx
August 21st, 2021 03:00
My Kind
Arvy said:
\"The city you built on my name, my kind of man, Precious and Tokyo\" beautiful scenery when mixed with imagination!
August 15th, 2021 01:25
Arvy said:
\"The city you built on my name, my kind of man, Precious and Tokyo\" beautiful scenery when mixed with imagination!
August 15th, 2021 01:25
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