Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses



Hilltop Gentle Breeze
spilleronsheet said:

It’s beautiful dear poet
The lines flow lucid with a great imagination running beside
Enjoyed reading the poetic lines

November 13th, 2021 06:12

Hilltop Gentle Breeze
Caring dove said:

Beautiful words 🙂🙂

The morning glory and blue jewels, I\'m

Everything falls into place like a dab of invisible ink

music burrows like a seed in my head

The last rainbow in a storm glittering

I especially like those lines …





November 13th, 2021 02:38

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
Lorna said:

Well done and so poignant......

November 8th, 2021 06:25

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
Caring dove said:

Beautiful words ))

November 7th, 2021 16:51

Nautical
jarcher54 said:

I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said in so few words. It means something to everyone, and says exactly what you mean. Thanks. BTW, why the change in nickname? I like it! Blatantly positive, but full of possibilities!

November 7th, 2021 03:23

Violets Are Blue
Caring dove said:

Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this

November 7th, 2021 00:57

Dewey
Lorna said:

I felt this one very intensely....

November 6th, 2021 08:58

Plishelpme
spilleronsheet said:

Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet

November 3rd, 2021 15:29

All My Love
Caring dove said:

‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )

November 2nd, 2021 00:54

Bloom Under Dark Sun
Caring dove said:

You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )

October 30th, 2021 01:14

Bitch Echo
Caring dove said:

Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .

I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it

You are creative with your words )

Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?

October 15th, 2021 10:10

Bitch Echo
aDarkerMind said:

one worthy of much applause Jordan;

October 15th, 2021 06:46

Bitch Echo
Goddess of the Mist said:

Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!

October 15th, 2021 02:09

White Vintage Star Lover
Caring dove said:

I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .

October 13th, 2021 16:43

Violet Pink Roses
Nicky Byrd said:

Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one

October 12th, 2021 15:37

Violet Pink Roses
Caring dove said:

Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem

October 12th, 2021 15:26

Beauty in the Most Ordinary Places
aDarkerMind said:

thumbs up Jordan;


October 8th, 2021 18:36

Beauty in the Most Ordinary Places
Caring dove said:

Beautiful writing ))

October 8th, 2021 17:58

Pawprints and Stepping Stones
Caring dove said:

Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )

October 7th, 2021 06:36

Pawprints and Stepping Stones
rebmasters said:

Epic x

October 7th, 2021 06:24

Aphotic
Caring dove said:

Your words are truly so beautiful but there’s so much sadness within



I\'m still an empty void

Like some kind of orphan with no one and no home “

That speaks of so much sadness

Great poem ,



October 5th, 2021 16:10

Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Goldfinch60 said:

Super loving words Jordan.

Andy

October 4th, 2021 00:48

Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
James Michael said:

Very well put together and straight from the heart. Excellent!

October 3rd, 2021 23:21

Even Though You Hurt Me I\'d Never Hurt You
Caring dove said:

Lovely choice of words )

October 3rd, 2021 14:58

Silver Lining
Caring dove said:

I really like this ) a strong engaging piece of writing and beautiful , good choice of words .

October 3rd, 2021 01:03

Twin Spirit
Caring dove said:

Lovely words ))

October 1st, 2021 15:58

Mellow Softness Inside
rebmasters said:

\'but inside we are softer than pulp\'

Yes & it gets oh so messy. Beautiful words ❤️

September 30th, 2021 03:06

Mellow Softness Inside
jarcher54 said:

A reason behind madness... this riddle may well drive me crazy! Nice low-key confessional today.

September 30th, 2021 01:03

Mellow Softness Inside
James Michael said:

Introspection is one of the best things to write about. Very well written.

It’s okay to snap and break sometimes. That softness always seems to come back; me thinks.

September 29th, 2021 21:50

Forever Is Never
Eugene S. said:

Wow! A powerfully contiguous descriptive state! A slap in the face of meekness!! Point taken👍.

September 19th, 2021 20:19



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