Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Where There Is Empty Space
dusk arising said:
Told like it is! This is a man\'s world if he gets up off his ass and makes it his world.
Temptations call beckons.
(Man\'s/Woman\'s either way)
May 12th, 2020 08:17
dusk arising said:
Told like it is! This is a man\'s world if he gets up off his ass and makes it his world.
Temptations call beckons.
(Man\'s/Woman\'s either way)
May 12th, 2020 08:17
Restless Soul
myself and me said:
Alive, mere as existence. This feeling is such a torment, could tear you apart at any moment. Well penned.
May 5th, 2020 14:55
myself and me said:
Alive, mere as existence. This feeling is such a torment, could tear you apart at any moment. Well penned.
May 5th, 2020 14:55
Pollock VVV
Markthetabor said:
I LOVE THIS!!! You provoked emotion while expressing it yourself.
April 28th, 2020 20:55
Markthetabor said:
I LOVE THIS!!! You provoked emotion while expressing it yourself.
April 28th, 2020 20:55
Seagull Dispute
Goddess of the Mist said:
Darkly interesting...I enjoyed this!
April 19th, 2020 22:12
Goddess of the Mist said:
Darkly interesting...I enjoyed this!
April 19th, 2020 22:12
Ablution
FredPeyer said:
X, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And what, may I ask, is the moon teaching you?
April 16th, 2020 11:49
FredPeyer said:
X, I really enjoyed reading this poem. And what, may I ask, is the moon teaching you?
April 16th, 2020 11:49
A Creative Night
FredPeyer said:
I like this one very much, Jordan. Well written.
March 22nd, 2020 12:48
FredPeyer said:
I like this one very much, Jordan. Well written.
March 22nd, 2020 12:48
Went Swimming and Died
anonymousblue said:
This poem assaulted me with its cornucopia of references and dazzling images. I can\'t make out its precise meaning but there\'s a strong feeling of despair and anxiety arising from what you\'ve written. Good poem.
March 16th, 2020 16:00
anonymousblue said:
This poem assaulted me with its cornucopia of references and dazzling images. I can\'t make out its precise meaning but there\'s a strong feeling of despair and anxiety arising from what you\'ve written. Good poem.
March 16th, 2020 16:00
Future Self
Nemo said:
Well written,👍
Love this line tho
\"stubborn as a bruised ego
Holding a grudge\"
🌹
March 9th, 2020 22:14
Nemo said:
Well written,👍
Love this line tho
\"stubborn as a bruised ego
Holding a grudge\"
🌹
March 9th, 2020 22:14
Tale of the Time
PotbellyPleb said:
I appreciate this poem on so many levels.
It\'s mysterious and the wording isn\'t predictable, where it goes keeps you surprised. I may still not know the meaning of this poem, but that\'s part of what makes it good--it requires discovery. The imagery is thought-provoking, which is refreshing. We need more poems like this on MPS. Thank you.
February 5th, 2020 22:43
PotbellyPleb said:
I appreciate this poem on so many levels.
It\'s mysterious and the wording isn\'t predictable, where it goes keeps you surprised. I may still not know the meaning of this poem, but that\'s part of what makes it good--it requires discovery. The imagery is thought-provoking, which is refreshing. We need more poems like this on MPS. Thank you.
February 5th, 2020 22:43
Tale of the Time
dusk arising said:
Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto another tangent. Exciting reading this though i remain confused but that\'s in me not you.
A unique style i applaud with a hope of seeing more.
February 5th, 2020 20:11
dusk arising said:
Full of mystery and enchanting, bewildering nuance only to jet off onto another tangent. Exciting reading this though i remain confused but that\'s in me not you.
A unique style i applaud with a hope of seeing more.
February 5th, 2020 20:11
Contemporary Roethke
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words here ... Makes for an interesting and engaging read ! I especially love this line \" I watch the world spin like a lady wearing a dress \"
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I really like your choice of words here ... Makes for an interesting and engaging read ! I especially love this line \" I watch the world spin like a lady wearing a dress \"
January 30th, 2020 01:14
Eternal Youth
BluebirdBlack said:
Ohhh I love the imagery and what a beautiful way with words you have. Thoroughly enjoyed! Thankyou :)
January 25th, 2020 17:42
BluebirdBlack said:
Ohhh I love the imagery and what a beautiful way with words you have. Thoroughly enjoyed! Thankyou :)
January 25th, 2020 17:42
Sentiment Expressed
Nicholas Browning said:
A wild ride through what seems to be a young man or woman on the trail of youth, and self discovery. A powerful write, and a good read. Nice.
January 13th, 2020 22:12
Nicholas Browning said:
A wild ride through what seems to be a young man or woman on the trail of youth, and self discovery. A powerful write, and a good read. Nice.
January 13th, 2020 22:12
Bedroom Thoughts
Evergreen said:
This write is awesome. I related to it. Looking forward to reading more from you.
January 9th, 2020 23:55
Evergreen said:
This write is awesome. I related to it. Looking forward to reading more from you.
January 9th, 2020 23:55
Milk Thistle
orchidee said:
Ooh, I wouldn\'t like to consult a witch doctor! Have some cough mixture, or a pill or two! (heehee).
January 8th, 2020 04:54
orchidee said:
Ooh, I wouldn\'t like to consult a witch doctor! Have some cough mixture, or a pill or two! (heehee).
January 8th, 2020 04:54
Ode to Midnight
FineB said:
Thanks Jordan
That was a stunning write.
Keep writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:41
FineB said:
Thanks Jordan
That was a stunning write.
Keep writing FineB
January 6th, 2020 08:41
Ode to Midnight
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Wow! What a ride! enjoyed it and felt the emotion.
January 5th, 2020 17:43
Memoirsofamadlife said:
Wow! What a ride! enjoyed it and felt the emotion.
January 5th, 2020 17:43
Satire X
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING X X POET ~ Welcome to MPS it is a interesting Site Poetrywise ! I t operates by reading (and commenting if you wish !) on each other Poetry. We look forward to more of your POETRY !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
We are engaged & share the site ~ OK
December 27th, 2019 06:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING X X POET ~ Welcome to MPS it is a interesting Site Poetrywise ! I t operates by reading (and commenting if you wish !) on each other Poetry. We look forward to more of your POETRY !
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA
We are engaged & share the site ~ OK
December 27th, 2019 06:15
Satire X
orchidee said:
Well if you say you\'re a genius, I can\'t argue with that! heehee.
December 27th, 2019 04:50
orchidee said:
Well if you say you\'re a genius, I can\'t argue with that! heehee.
December 27th, 2019 04:50
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