Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses



My Tears Flow Like Rivers
woundedheart said:

Bitter sweet write but very nicely penned

December 9th, 2021 03:53

My Tears Flow Like Rivers
jarcher54 said:

The boy who never got to love is kind of your anthem. Short and sweet. Nice work.

December 9th, 2021 02:36

My Tears Flow Like Rivers
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Sad writing , but beautiful )

December 8th, 2021 17:20

Roadkill Hatecrime
Draven said:

Heartwrenching... writing full of feeling here. xx

December 7th, 2021 17:47

Poet Insane
Draven said:

Deeply beautiful words x

December 6th, 2021 18:46

Forever Jewels Sparkle
Draven said:

Beautiful

December 4th, 2021 20:46

Wild Waters
A Boy With Roses said:

Thank you for your kind words. When I write, I tend to listen to music the most. Poetic words and sounds coexisting are so therapeutic, like the best medicine for the soul. Maybe it subconsciously affects my writing.

December 4th, 2021 19:58

Wild Waters
Draven said:

Beautiful, I feel like this could be a song

December 4th, 2021 04:23

Sky Coloured Blue
Draven said:

This is really beautiful.

December 2nd, 2021 18:28

Sky Coloured Blue
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful poem ))

December 2nd, 2021 17:30

No Immunity
Eugene S. said:

Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.πŸ‘

November 30th, 2021 18:57

Blind Devotion
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Simply beautiful … especially like this line

A violin with a beating heart in the light of day β€˜

November 29th, 2021 22:46

1,000 Tears
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (

Fear makes life feel so difficult

November 28th, 2021 15:34

Turtledove
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

So difficult when life feels empty (

β€˜ like I was an easy rider in silver rivers β€˜ such a beautiful line πŸ™‚

November 28th, 2021 07:03

Turtledove
Lorna said:

I just loved \"easy rider in silver rivers\" - says so much.....

November 28th, 2021 06:52

Losing Game
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A sad writing Jordan , tho very expressive )

November 27th, 2021 10:33

Losing Game
dusk arising said:

Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.

November 27th, 2021 08:35

Blue Echo
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I think others should comment a little more on your poems …

I like this )

November 26th, 2021 01:00

NECTAR
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Truly beautiful words … Jordan πŸ™‚

I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words

November 25th, 2021 02:25

Hourglass
spilleronsheet said:

That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet

November 22nd, 2021 05:26

Lonely Minds Vacancy
Arborb said:

Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.

November 20th, 2021 02:12

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (

November 14th, 2021 02:20

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Eugene S. said:

\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans

It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"

What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.

November 14th, 2021 01:35

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Miss Pain said:

hynotizing

November 13th, 2021 19:00

Hilltop Gentle Breeze
spilleronsheet said:

It’s beautiful dear poet
The lines flow lucid with a great imagination running beside
Enjoyed reading the poetic lines

November 13th, 2021 06:12

Hilltop Gentle Breeze
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

The morning glory and blue jewels, I\'m

Everything falls into place like a dab of invisible ink

music burrows like a seed in my head

The last rainbow in a storm glittering

I especially like those lines …





November 13th, 2021 02:38

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
Lorna said:

Well done and so poignant......

November 8th, 2021 06:25

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words ))

November 7th, 2021 16:51

Nautical
jarcher54 said:

I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said in so few words. It means something to everyone, and says exactly what you mean. Thanks. BTW, why the change in nickname? I like it! Blatantly positive, but full of possibilities!

November 7th, 2021 03:23

Violets Are Blue
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this

November 7th, 2021 00:57

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