Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Nightfall Stardust
Caring dove said:
Sometimes life feels like more pain than joy … doesn’t it , it really shouldn’t be that way , makes no sense to me
I like your choice of words in this 🙂
December 16th, 2021 01:17
Caring dove said:
Sometimes life feels like more pain than joy … doesn’t it , it really shouldn’t be that way , makes no sense to me
I like your choice of words in this 🙂
December 16th, 2021 01:17
Laying in Your Arms
Caring dove said:
So much emotion and feeling in this .
Great expression ))
December 14th, 2021 16:42
Caring dove said:
So much emotion and feeling in this .
Great expression ))
December 14th, 2021 16:42
Long Walks in the Rain
woundedheart said:
I take no notice of the cars, they leave like fathers . Very powerful metaphor showing a deeper meaning towards the pain within your poem
December 10th, 2021 03:38
woundedheart said:
I take no notice of the cars, they leave like fathers . Very powerful metaphor showing a deeper meaning towards the pain within your poem
December 10th, 2021 03:38
Long Walks in the Rain
C E Thomas said:
\"Yes; yes, yes.\"
Good work. I felt emotions I can\'t quite put my finger on, but they seem deeply rooted in the human experience. Keep it up, my friend
December 9th, 2021 21:57
C E Thomas said:
\"Yes; yes, yes.\"
Good work. I felt emotions I can\'t quite put my finger on, but they seem deeply rooted in the human experience. Keep it up, my friend
December 9th, 2021 21:57
My Tears Flow Like Rivers
woundedheart said:
Bitter sweet write but very nicely penned
December 9th, 2021 03:53
woundedheart said:
Bitter sweet write but very nicely penned
December 9th, 2021 03:53
My Tears Flow Like Rivers
jarcher54 said:
The boy who never got to love is kind of your anthem. Short and sweet. Nice work.
December 9th, 2021 02:36
jarcher54 said:
The boy who never got to love is kind of your anthem. Short and sweet. Nice work.
December 9th, 2021 02:36
Roadkill Hatecrime
Draven said:
Heartwrenching... writing full of feeling here. xx
December 7th, 2021 17:47
Draven said:
Heartwrenching... writing full of feeling here. xx
December 7th, 2021 17:47
Wild Waters
A Boy With Roses said:
Thank you for your kind words. When I write, I tend to listen to music the most. Poetic words and sounds coexisting are so therapeutic, like the best medicine for the soul. Maybe it subconsciously affects my writing.
December 4th, 2021 19:58
A Boy With Roses said:
Thank you for your kind words. When I write, I tend to listen to music the most. Poetic words and sounds coexisting are so therapeutic, like the best medicine for the soul. Maybe it subconsciously affects my writing.
December 4th, 2021 19:58
No Immunity
Eugene S. said:
Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.👍
November 30th, 2021 18:57
Eugene S. said:
Your lines are like lashes that cut deep! Awesome! Reeling at the end, \"I see stars...\"
I hear you.👍
November 30th, 2021 18:57
Blind Devotion
Caring dove said:
Simply beautiful … especially like this line
A violin with a beating heart in the light of day ‘
November 29th, 2021 22:46
Caring dove said:
Simply beautiful … especially like this line
A violin with a beating heart in the light of day ‘
November 29th, 2021 22:46
1,000 Tears
Caring dove said:
So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (
Fear makes life feel so difficult
November 28th, 2021 15:34
Caring dove said:
So much pain in this Jordan … but beautifully expressed . I’m sorry if your feeling sad (
Fear makes life feel so difficult
November 28th, 2021 15:34
Turtledove
Caring dove said:
So difficult when life feels empty (
‘ like I was an easy rider in silver rivers ‘ such a beautiful line 🙂
November 28th, 2021 07:03
Caring dove said:
So difficult when life feels empty (
‘ like I was an easy rider in silver rivers ‘ such a beautiful line 🙂
November 28th, 2021 07:03
Turtledove
Lorna said:
I just loved \"easy rider in silver rivers\" - says so much.....
November 28th, 2021 06:52
Lorna said:
I just loved \"easy rider in silver rivers\" - says so much.....
November 28th, 2021 06:52
Losing Game
dusk arising said:
Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.
November 27th, 2021 08:35
dusk arising said:
Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.
November 27th, 2021 08:35
Blue Echo
Caring dove said:
I think others should comment a little more on your poems …
I like this )
November 26th, 2021 01:00
Caring dove said:
I think others should comment a little more on your poems …
I like this )
November 26th, 2021 01:00
NECTAR
Caring dove said:
Truly beautiful words … Jordan 🙂
I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words
November 25th, 2021 02:25
Caring dove said:
Truly beautiful words … Jordan 🙂
I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words
November 25th, 2021 02:25
Hourglass
spilleronsheet said:
That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 05:26
spilleronsheet said:
That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet
November 22nd, 2021 05:26
Lonely Minds Vacancy
Arborb said:
Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.
November 20th, 2021 02:12
Arborb said:
Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.
November 20th, 2021 02:12
Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Caring dove said:
Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (
November 14th, 2021 02:20
Caring dove said:
Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (
November 14th, 2021 02:20
Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Eugene S. said:
\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans
It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"
What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.
November 14th, 2021 01:35
Eugene S. said:
\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans
It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"
What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.
November 14th, 2021 01:35
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