Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Kiss Me and Never Let Me Go
jarcher54 said:
You often make me sigh, but you seldom make me cry. Direct hit. I\'m not sure if it\'s my heart, my head, or my gut you pierced.
June 10th, 2025 20:46
jarcher54 said:
You often make me sigh, but you seldom make me cry. Direct hit. I\'m not sure if it\'s my heart, my head, or my gut you pierced.
June 10th, 2025 20:46
Kiss Me and Never Let Me Go
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines in this surreal poem of a time that never was but is. A lovely write
June 8th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
Wonderful lines in this surreal poem of a time that never was but is. A lovely write
June 8th, 2025 14:00
Ecstasy Boy
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts in a poetic weave. Nicely done
May 10th, 2025 16:37
sorenbarrett said:
Different thoughts in a poetic weave. Nicely done
May 10th, 2025 16:37
With Eyes Like Candytuft
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections and observations that is somewhat dysphoric and dark very well expressed
April 22nd, 2025 17:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of reflections and observations that is somewhat dysphoric and dark very well expressed
April 22nd, 2025 17:07
Desire By the Orange Tree
Poetic Licence said:
The age old question do we really know someone, we\'ve all had experience\'s where we thought we did only to find out when it mattered, we didn\'t know them at all, nicely expressed and written
April 10th, 2025 13:37
Poetic Licence said:
The age old question do we really know someone, we\'ve all had experience\'s where we thought we did only to find out when it mattered, we didn\'t know them at all, nicely expressed and written
April 10th, 2025 13:37
Desire By the Orange Tree
sorenbarrett said:
Does anyone really know anyone? The poem poses the question (If you knew me) Sometimes after years we find we don\'t. Well written with intriguing thoughts.
April 10th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Does anyone really know anyone? The poem poses the question (If you knew me) Sometimes after years we find we don\'t. Well written with intriguing thoughts.
April 10th, 2025 12:15
Te Amo Cafe Blues
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve made it a rule no alcohol before 10:00 AM. A poem of passion and emotion calling out for another that can meet your needs. A passionaholic looking for a fix. Well written.
April 6th, 2025 13:31
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ve made it a rule no alcohol before 10:00 AM. A poem of passion and emotion calling out for another that can meet your needs. A passionaholic looking for a fix. Well written.
April 6th, 2025 13:31
Pawing At Nightfall
Poetic Licence said:
A true sense of loss and desperation in this write, well expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
A true sense of loss and desperation in this write, well expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 03:29
Pawing At Nightfall
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
March 19th, 2025 18:00
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
March 19th, 2025 18:00
Gloryhole
sorenbarrett said:
Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 17:01
Nectarine
arqios said:
Not sure of the connection but found some nectarines to be supremely sweeter than peaches, apricots, plums or pluots combined.
February 9th, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
Not sure of the connection but found some nectarines to be supremely sweeter than peaches, apricots, plums or pluots combined.
February 9th, 2025 04:06
Leather Daddy
jarcher54 said:
JC, I love how you drop by and leave a loaded gun with a hair trigger on the bed table! Well before I got to the dying rose, I thought about roses and your pen name and how a rose is like a brutal kiss... it can leave you breathless and bleeding! No \"?\" from me. I get you. You make me feel young and dirty again!
January 25th, 2025 23:31
jarcher54 said:
JC, I love how you drop by and leave a loaded gun with a hair trigger on the bed table! Well before I got to the dying rose, I thought about roses and your pen name and how a rose is like a brutal kiss... it can leave you breathless and bleeding! No \"?\" from me. I get you. You make me feel young and dirty again!
January 25th, 2025 23:31
Is This A Sign?
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
The Price of Pleasure
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
As Hollow As the Drugs I Take
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Is This A Sign?
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
See You, Jimmy
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
Dirty Boy Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
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