Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Pawing At Nightfall
Poetic Licence said:
A true sense of loss and desperation in this write, well expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 03:29
Poetic Licence said:
A true sense of loss and desperation in this write, well expressed and written
March 20th, 2025 03:29
Pawing At Nightfall
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
March 19th, 2025 18:00
sorenbarrett said:
A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
March 19th, 2025 18:00
Gloryhole
sorenbarrett said:
Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
Passion builds tension in this poem of desire and fantasy. Well done.
March 11th, 2025 17:01
Nectarine
arqios said:
Not sure of the connection but found some nectarines to be supremely sweeter than peaches, apricots, plums or pluots combined.
February 9th, 2025 04:06
arqios said:
Not sure of the connection but found some nectarines to be supremely sweeter than peaches, apricots, plums or pluots combined.
February 9th, 2025 04:06
Leather Daddy
jarcher54 said:
JC, I love how you drop by and leave a loaded gun with a hair trigger on the bed table! Well before I got to the dying rose, I thought about roses and your pen name and how a rose is like a brutal kiss... it can leave you breathless and bleeding! No \"?\" from me. I get you. You make me feel young and dirty again!
January 25th, 2025 23:31
jarcher54 said:
JC, I love how you drop by and leave a loaded gun with a hair trigger on the bed table! Well before I got to the dying rose, I thought about roses and your pen name and how a rose is like a brutal kiss... it can leave you breathless and bleeding! No \"?\" from me. I get you. You make me feel young and dirty again!
January 25th, 2025 23:31
Is This A Sign?
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
The Price of Pleasure
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
As Hollow As the Drugs I Take
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Is This A Sign?
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
See You, Jimmy
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
Dirty Boy Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
Blood Bitch
sorenbarrett said:
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of understanding like a needle in fabric.
August 5th, 2024 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of understanding like a needle in fabric.
August 5th, 2024 16:24
Drowning Like An Angel in Despair
Weep little lion girl said:
This is so beautiful! I adore your style of writing!!
July 19th, 2024 22:06
Weep little lion girl said:
This is so beautiful! I adore your style of writing!!
July 19th, 2024 22:06
Am I A Roman Emperor?
2781 said:
Mostly. I wondered if the prodigal habit, you write of leads heavenward.
April 27th, 2024 17:43
2781 said:
Mostly. I wondered if the prodigal habit, you write of leads heavenward.
April 27th, 2024 17:43
Bliss Is A Wound
jarcher54 said:
So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of haunting images. So universal but so particularly you. Pink beverages... yes, perfect.
April 17th, 2024 11:47
jarcher54 said:
So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of haunting images. So universal but so particularly you. Pink beverages... yes, perfect.
April 17th, 2024 11:47
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