Comments received on poems by blue sparkle



Losing Game
yellowrose said:

A sad writing Jordan , tho very expressive )

November 27th, 2021 10:33

Losing Game
dusk arising said:

Moving from third person in verse one to first person tense in verse two was intriguing? Was it intentional.
Reads like a naeve young person\'s outlook hooked on their first real love. Feelings we can all look back upon and be thankful that time (and writing poetry) healed us.

November 27th, 2021 08:35

Blue Echo
yellowrose said:

I think others should comment a little more on your poems …

I like this )

November 26th, 2021 01:00

NECTAR
yellowrose said:

Truly beautiful words … Jordan 🙂

I really like your poem .,, lovely feel to your words

November 25th, 2021 02:25

Hourglass
spilleronsheet said:

That’s an eternal love
Well crafted dear poet

November 22nd, 2021 05:26

Lonely Minds Vacancy
Arborb said:

Very apt title for this excellent piece. Feels like a longing to feel or perhaps not feel at all.

November 20th, 2021 02:12

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
yellowrose said:

Interesting write Jordan although I see such pain in this (

November 14th, 2021 02:20

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Eugene S. said:

\"I light candles and leave them burning like whispering orphans

It\'s palpable, this atmosphere and the decadence\"

What a creative lens to see things through. Your prose flows effortlessly. Truly interesting.

November 14th, 2021 01:35

Ivory Rivers of Silk Blood
Miss Pain said:

hynotizing

November 13th, 2021 19:00

Hilltop Gentle Breeze
spilleronsheet said:

It’s beautiful dear poet
The lines flow lucid with a great imagination running beside
Enjoyed reading the poetic lines

November 13th, 2021 06:12

Hilltop Gentle Breeze
yellowrose said:

Beautiful words 🙂🙂

The morning glory and blue jewels, I\'m

Everything falls into place like a dab of invisible ink

music burrows like a seed in my head

The last rainbow in a storm glittering

I especially like those lines …





November 13th, 2021 02:38

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
Lorna said:

Well done and so poignant......

November 8th, 2021 06:25

Glistening in Blooming Sunlight
yellowrose said:

Beautiful words ))

November 7th, 2021 16:51

Nautical
jarcher54 said:

I truly love \"born with no shield, raised to be knights.\" So much said in so few words. It means something to everyone, and says exactly what you mean. Thanks. BTW, why the change in nickname? I like it! Blatantly positive, but full of possibilities!

November 7th, 2021 03:23

Violets Are Blue
yellowrose said:

Amazing writing )) engaging words .
Really like this

November 7th, 2021 00:57

Dewey
Lorna said:

I felt this one very intensely....

November 6th, 2021 08:58

Nautical
Robert Haigh said:

Some good imagery and poetic expression in this piece.

November 5th, 2021 03:11

Plishelpme
spilleronsheet said:

Woah a plethora of emotions at play
Well penned dear poet

November 3rd, 2021 15:29

All My Love
yellowrose said:

‘ my eyes are stars roaring ‘
I like your words )

November 2nd, 2021 00:54

Bloom Under Dark Sun
yellowrose said:

You have such an engaging way with words … interesting read , and choice of words )

October 30th, 2021 01:14

Bitch Echo
yellowrose said:

Wow ! Really engaging read ... some very strong lines here .

I can’t say I fully understand it , but I do like it

You are creative with your words )

Could you maybe comment on my last poem ?

October 15th, 2021 10:10

Bitch Echo
aDarkerMind said:

one worthy of much applause Jordan;

October 15th, 2021 06:46

Bitch Echo
Goddess of the Mist said:

Wow! A masterpiece with echoings of Jim Morrison. Very nicely done!

October 15th, 2021 02:09

White Vintage Star Lover
yellowrose said:

I like your choice of words in this one . Sometimes it’s easier to be alone .... others can hurt us so much .

October 13th, 2021 16:43

Violet Pink Roses
Nicky Byrd said:

Nice poem, I felt the raw emotion on this one

October 12th, 2021 15:37

Violet Pink Roses
yellowrose said:

Sad but sweet words . Nicely expressed , poem

October 12th, 2021 15:26

Beauty in the Most Ordinary Places
aDarkerMind said:

thumbs up Jordan;


October 8th, 2021 18:36

Beauty in the Most Ordinary Places
yellowrose said:

Beautiful writing ))

October 8th, 2021 17:58

Pawprints and Stepping Stones
yellowrose said:

Wow ... you are so expressive and creative with your words ! )

October 7th, 2021 06:36

Pawprints and Stepping Stones
rebmasters said:

Epic x

October 7th, 2021 06:24

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