Comments received on poems by A Boy With Roses
Is This A Sign?
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
DLewis88 said:
This is a beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
November 12th, 2024 19:27
The Price of Pleasure
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
jarcher54 said:
Addicted to the tears we shed... the very definition of passionate desperate inconsolable love.
November 11th, 2024 01:25
As Hollow As the Drugs I Take
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written. Raw and honest emotions. Well done!
November 8th, 2024 16:35
Is This A Sign?
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
jarcher54 said:
I haven\'t cried at a poem in a while... but now I have. Yes, sleep is a privilege. Astute observation!
October 13th, 2024 00:06
See You, Jimmy
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
jarcher54 said:
I am sweaty and exhausted reading this! And very satisfied. Go figure. This is one of your signature pieces as far as I am concerned. Intense elusive images that individually are haiku, but together are a short epic that tell a very human, very compelling, very universal story. Love to you friend.
October 6th, 2024 10:14
Dirty Boy Heaven
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it. One can get a high from it. As long as one doesn’t abuse it it is a wonderful thing.
September 5th, 2024 06:13
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Lorenz said:
The Brussels dream has produced a monster !
August 19th, 2024 00:46
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
jarcher54 said:
But you will love again... and again... and again. But it will hurt I suspect. You drag the depths of your soul and heart to sing these songs. I\'ve heard you sing so many of them, the effect of each one is often a gut punch or a hollow feeling, but the cumulative effect of them is actually so beautiful I cannot describe it. You are the nightingale smoking a butt outside my window as it sings its little ass off to me.
August 18th, 2024 18:04
Europe Makes Me Nostalgic
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the feeling of hopelessness. Well done.
August 18th, 2024 17:38
Blood Bitch
sorenbarrett said:
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of understanding like a needle in fabric.
August 5th, 2024 16:24
sorenbarrett said:
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of understanding like a needle in fabric.
August 5th, 2024 16:24
Drowning Like An Angel in Despair
Weep little lion girl said:
This is so beautiful! I adore your style of writing!!
July 19th, 2024 22:06
Weep little lion girl said:
This is so beautiful! I adore your style of writing!!
July 19th, 2024 22:06
Am I A Roman Emperor?
2781 said:
Mostly. I wondered if the prodigal habit, you write of leads heavenward.
April 27th, 2024 17:43
2781 said:
Mostly. I wondered if the prodigal habit, you write of leads heavenward.
April 27th, 2024 17:43
Bliss Is A Wound
jarcher54 said:
So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of haunting images. So universal but so particularly you. Pink beverages... yes, perfect.
April 17th, 2024 11:47
jarcher54 said:
So pleased to see a new series from you! This is compact and full of haunting images. So universal but so particularly you. Pink beverages... yes, perfect.
April 17th, 2024 11:47
Second Hand Smoke
Alan R said:
Overdosing on melancholia
I used to crave you like nicotine
I used to hate you like cavities
Now I don\'t even know who I am anymore
I linger like second hand smoke
This is really beautiful
March 5th, 2024 07:11
Alan R said:
Overdosing on melancholia
I used to crave you like nicotine
I used to hate you like cavities
Now I don\'t even know who I am anymore
I linger like second hand smoke
This is really beautiful
March 5th, 2024 07:11
I Want to Die In Your Arms
jarcher54 said:
Oh Jordan... the first stanza-- no, the entire poem-- describes your poetic persona perfectly... you do \"forget everything\" in your florid maze of images and confessions. You are so adept at rendering the most lurid or ugly references... cigarettes, dirty mattresses, piss, corpse... into a powerful thing of beauty, intensity, and yes courage.
Thank you again!
January 26th, 2024 20:11
jarcher54 said:
Oh Jordan... the first stanza-- no, the entire poem-- describes your poetic persona perfectly... you do \"forget everything\" in your florid maze of images and confessions. You are so adept at rendering the most lurid or ugly references... cigarettes, dirty mattresses, piss, corpse... into a powerful thing of beauty, intensity, and yes courage.
Thank you again!
January 26th, 2024 20:11
Omphalos of Verisimilitude
jarcher54 said:
However you arrange your poems, they are clearly a moving (auto)biography.
October 7th, 2023 18:31
jarcher54 said:
However you arrange your poems, they are clearly a moving (auto)biography.
October 7th, 2023 18:31
Summer Nostalgia
Caring dove said:
A good writing 🙂 like the use of nature in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:37
Caring dove said:
A good writing 🙂 like the use of nature in your poem
June 14th, 2023 03:37
I Could Be Your Boyfriend
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the evergreen echoing sadness of love\'
Brilliant!
June 12th, 2023 03:12
L. B. Mek said:
\'In the evergreen echoing sadness of love\'
Brilliant!
June 12th, 2023 03:12
I Could Be Your Boyfriend
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Some deep insight.It even has adjectives.Excellent
June 11th, 2023 18:00
David Wakeling said:
This is well written.Some deep insight.It even has adjectives.Excellent
June 11th, 2023 18:00
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