Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



In the Name of Freedom
dusk arising said:

The art of 21st century life is finding your own personal freedom within the system..... i have found mine.
Most children have theirs.

June 26th, 2021 07:50

In the Name of Freedom
Accidental Poet said:

One might ask, Who\'s freedom?
Great write Sax. ; )

June 26th, 2021 07:29

In the Name of Freedom
orchidee said:

I was depressed when me digit slipped! lol.

June 26th, 2021 01:59

In the Name of Freedom
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words SC.
Freedom may be a poor mans dream but my dreams are full of light as in my long life I have had so many wonderful moments, so many with the wife now departed but is still with me in my reality.

Andy

June 26th, 2021 01:00

Freedom?
SureshG said:

Guilty, your honor
We are truly prisoners of our heart

No BS
loved it

June 25th, 2021 13:14

Freedom?
Accidental Poet said:

True freedom is in the depths of your heart. ; )

June 25th, 2021 05:02

Freedom?
Doggerel Dave said:

Too much freedom (depending on what is out here) is not freedom at all - it is confusion. More fun to push against limits. Makes for creativity.
an intriguing little nugget, Sax.

June 25th, 2021 02:39

Freedom?
dusk arising said:

At least you\'re guaranteed three square meals a day that way.

June 25th, 2021 02:12

Freedom?
orchidee said:

Now how you gonna get out?
Call to me through your prison cell - yell out \'Coeee, Orchi!\' and I will help ya find the key. Where did ya throw it?
(Do shut up now Orchi. lol).

June 25th, 2021 01:54

Freedom?
Goldfinch60 said:

Your heart is your being and must always be your own freedom no matter what tempts you in life.

Andy

June 25th, 2021 01:21

Black December
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine tale, S.C.


June 24th, 2021 15:21

Black December
SureshG said:

No matter from where the inspiration comes, you have earnestly crafted a superb poem, for its not enough to just read it once.

June 24th, 2021 12:30

Black December
dusk arising said:

Oh yes, a delicious spook. That was a really enjoyable read. You kept the suspension going very well and it\'s quite a long piece.
Excellent.

June 24th, 2021 09:06

Black December
Neville said:


to have tried to craft this bit of noir poetry minus rhyme sir, would have been a serious crhyme sir .......... :)

June 24th, 2021 08:50

Black December
Accidental Poet said:

I can hear Vincent Price reciting this in his chilling passion. Excellent Sax. ; )

June 24th, 2021 05:36

Black December
L. B. Mek said:

your first lines made me recall:
\'Remember, remember, the fifth of November,
Gunpowder, treason and plot!\'..
how poetically, if somewhat morosely: apt, I thought
when reading your last few lines... lol
thanks for sharing, dear poet

June 24th, 2021 05:30

Black December
Doggerel Dave said:

Had a bit of a difficult time there, old chap? Hope it all turns out OK.......

Great piece there Sax; I just hope I can get a reasonably peaceful sleep in tonight.....


June 24th, 2021 02:14

Black December
Fay Slimm. said:

Brilliant rhyming and after Poe\'s style this dark write should come a close second to The Raven methinks.

June 24th, 2021 02:08

Black December
orchidee said:

Good write SC.

June 24th, 2021 02:01

Black December
Goldfinch60 said:

Magnificent words SC, glad you survived.

Andy

June 24th, 2021 00:57

Look Around
SureshG said:

If only……

Thanks

June 23rd, 2021 12:55

Look Around
Accidental Poet said:

The beauty is all around us, IF one chooses to see it. And I see it here in your words. ; )

June 23rd, 2021 05:24

Look Around
Neville said:


Took the words write from many a mouth ... so bloomin true it hurts ...

June 23rd, 2021 03:22

Look Around
dusk arising said:

Wonderful piece. Some people just don\'t see do they.

Into my favourites.

June 23rd, 2021 02:12

Look Around
orchidee said:

You used more than 30 words in this fine write SC.
I was expecting a short poem of two words - \'Look Around\'! lol.

June 23rd, 2021 01:52

Look Around
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true SC.

Andy

June 23rd, 2021 01:00

Look Around
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Great poem 🙂🙂

June 23rd, 2021 00:20

Purpose
dusk arising said:

yes.

June 22nd, 2021 07:27

Purpose
L. B. Mek said:

so very true, in many diverse ways
minimalism: has purpose
in our daily lives, I really do think;
and who needs originality or length
to showcase Poetry\'s, depth;
when that boldness of Poetic ingenuity
unearths and cultivates
our own imagination\'s, innate creativity...
a great shorty!

June 22nd, 2021 04:16

Purpose
orchidee said:

Why use 3 words when 30 will do, I say! Do I mean it?! lol.

June 22nd, 2021 02:05



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