Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Sounds of the Sixties
Doggerel Dave said:
Sax - you\'ve done it again - thrown something at us which s totally original (to my mind anyway).
Would it be discourteous to ask -memory or research?
July 29th, 2021 01:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Sax - you\'ve done it again - thrown something at us which s totally original (to my mind anyway).
Would it be discourteous to ask -memory or research?
July 29th, 2021 01:24
Sounds of the Sixties
flyingfish said:
Great fun piece. Many things popped out from my memories. I had a 50th birthday party eons ago with a 60\'s theme despite the warnings. The police came three times due to the noise. The last time we offered to pay the fine. But they refused. Just said: Keep it down a bit, OK. Very understanding coppers that bunch.
July 29th, 2021 00:37
flyingfish said:
Great fun piece. Many things popped out from my memories. I had a 50th birthday party eons ago with a 60\'s theme despite the warnings. The police came three times due to the noise. The last time we offered to pay the fine. But they refused. Just said: Keep it down a bit, OK. Very understanding coppers that bunch.
July 29th, 2021 00:37
Sounds of the Sixties
Goldfinch60 said:
If you remember the sixties you weren\'t there SC.
Mind you I remember the sixties and I was there, such wonderful times, a complete change in the way of the world - perhaps we need the sixties back now.
Andy
July 29th, 2021 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
If you remember the sixties you weren\'t there SC.
Mind you I remember the sixties and I was there, such wonderful times, a complete change in the way of the world - perhaps we need the sixties back now.
Andy
July 29th, 2021 00:16
A Fork in the Road
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
Some are hard and some are damnd if you do and damnd if you don\'t.
July 28th, 2021 14:38
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
Some are hard and some are damnd if you do and damnd if you don\'t.
July 28th, 2021 14:38
A Fork in the Road
Neville said:
with few exceptions .. mainly regarding our health circumstances, most of us are where we are today because of the choices we made and the decisions we failed to take
............Your offering today is a great but painful reminder of those various compelling and constraining forces against which we constantly compete .... Neville
July 28th, 2021 11:12
Neville said:
with few exceptions .. mainly regarding our health circumstances, most of us are where we are today because of the choices we made and the decisions we failed to take
............Your offering today is a great but painful reminder of those various compelling and constraining forces against which we constantly compete .... Neville
July 28th, 2021 11:12
A Fork in the Road
Accidental Poet said:
With love, the questions are plentiful, and answers so elusive. Choices aren\'t always easy, but if you listen to your heart, you\'ll find a choice you can live with. Great write Sax. 👍
July 28th, 2021 08:53
Accidental Poet said:
With love, the questions are plentiful, and answers so elusive. Choices aren\'t always easy, but if you listen to your heart, you\'ll find a choice you can live with. Great write Sax. 👍
July 28th, 2021 08:53
A Fork in the Road
dusk arising said:
You describe well the torment of being torn in two directions when the heart is involved. If the trade off is to lose either your lover or an opportunity then the question arises... which will you miss most.
July 28th, 2021 04:57
dusk arising said:
You describe well the torment of being torn in two directions when the heart is involved. If the trade off is to lose either your lover or an opportunity then the question arises... which will you miss most.
July 28th, 2021 04:57
A Fork in the Road
Goldfinch60 said:
May that home always be the place for your eternity SC.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May that home always be the place for your eternity SC.
Andy
July 28th, 2021 01:09
RIP Boffington Town
Accidental Poet said:
If it is the end for Boffington Town, maybe a new town will take it\'s place with new characters. A great series of writes Sax. Keep that quill wet. 😉
July 27th, 2021 09:03
Accidental Poet said:
If it is the end for Boffington Town, maybe a new town will take it\'s place with new characters. A great series of writes Sax. Keep that quill wet. 😉
July 27th, 2021 09:03
RIP Boffington Town
dusk arising said:
Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its nefarious characters.
Damn good reading.
July 27th, 2021 08:24
dusk arising said:
Hopefully tales of Boffington will continue to be heard along with its nefarious characters.
Damn good reading.
July 27th, 2021 08:24
RIP Boffington Town
L. B. Mek said:
that jovial rhymed tone, throughout
and abruptly - morose, yet somehow hilarious
last line, made me want to read this again..
strangely, I found this to be a fun read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(sorry if I\'m being insensitive for writing this)
July 27th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
that jovial rhymed tone, throughout
and abruptly - morose, yet somehow hilarious
last line, made me want to read this again..
strangely, I found this to be a fun read
thanks for sharing dear poet
(sorry if I\'m being insensitive for writing this)
July 27th, 2021 05:19
RIP Boffington Town
Goldfinch60 said:
Many towns resurrect from the ashes, I am sure B Town will be back.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Many towns resurrect from the ashes, I am sure B Town will be back.
Andy
July 27th, 2021 04:41
RIP Boffington Town
Neville said:
from a single abode doth vast cities grow ..
dunno why that phrase came to me .. maybe its just a phrase I\'m going through ...
I guess all good comes to an end ... in the end ...
a great tale told terribly well again sir ....
... the end :)
July 27th, 2021 03:43
Neville said:
from a single abode doth vast cities grow ..
dunno why that phrase came to me .. maybe its just a phrase I\'m going through ...
I guess all good comes to an end ... in the end ...
a great tale told terribly well again sir ....
... the end :)
July 27th, 2021 03:43
RIP Boffington Town
Doggerel Dave said:
OOOOOOh Noooooooo..... You can\'t do that, Sax. Shows complete lack of compassion for B Town\'s residents...Where is your humanity?
Can I suggest you petition Prince Charles to build a second town....that\'s the best I can do at this distance... I feel so powerless...
A skilled chronicler of the end....
July 27th, 2021 02:34
Doggerel Dave said:
OOOOOOh Noooooooo..... You can\'t do that, Sax. Shows complete lack of compassion for B Town\'s residents...Where is your humanity?
Can I suggest you petition Prince Charles to build a second town....that\'s the best I can do at this distance... I feel so powerless...
A skilled chronicler of the end....
July 27th, 2021 02:34
Mortar
Neville said:
there\'s just gotta be mortar life than sadness, misery, getting old, moving on and loosing things ............................. despite me liking todays offering and very much, I cannot put my finger on why exactly I found it so compelling or intriguing .................................... N :)
July 26th, 2021 15:36
Neville said:
there\'s just gotta be mortar life than sadness, misery, getting old, moving on and loosing things ............................. despite me liking todays offering and very much, I cannot put my finger on why exactly I found it so compelling or intriguing .................................... N :)
July 26th, 2021 15:36
Mortar
Accidental Poet said:
As one door closes, another door opens. Nicely penned Sax.
July 26th, 2021 11:54
Accidental Poet said:
As one door closes, another door opens. Nicely penned Sax.
July 26th, 2021 11:54
Mortar
Jerry Reynolds said:
Melancholy write, S.C.
are dreams disposed of
raging on the winds of time
July 26th, 2021 09:26
Jerry Reynolds said:
Melancholy write, S.C.
are dreams disposed of
raging on the winds of time
July 26th, 2021 09:26
Mortar
L. B. Mek said:
\'The mortar is crumbling to dust
And this home I\'ve lived in for so long is falling apart\'
\'Each creak of the floorboards
A symphony of life in motion
But the stairs are ready to topple now
So many times they\'ve been trodden on\'..
yeah, I am there
hovering on that same plank
between, that next step
and:
\'Just shadows and dust
Ghosts and what may have been\'
so I try, to find a view to a future:
\'I breathe deeply and step forward
So goes it with my heart\'..
(such a brilliantly, despairing voice
you\'ve inked alive
for us to connect with and relate-to)
thank you, dear poet
July 26th, 2021 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'The mortar is crumbling to dust
And this home I\'ve lived in for so long is falling apart\'
\'Each creak of the floorboards
A symphony of life in motion
But the stairs are ready to topple now
So many times they\'ve been trodden on\'..
yeah, I am there
hovering on that same plank
between, that next step
and:
\'Just shadows and dust
Ghosts and what may have been\'
so I try, to find a view to a future:
\'I breathe deeply and step forward
So goes it with my heart\'..
(such a brilliantly, despairing voice
you\'ve inked alive
for us to connect with and relate-to)
thank you, dear poet
July 26th, 2021 05:55
Mortar
Doggerel Dave said:
What now - tent? caravan? squat?
No option? Renovation or detonation?
Housing has been a problem for much of my life (until now), Sax - so I\'m up for problem solving.... Got enough to eat and warm clothing?
July 26th, 2021 04:35
Doggerel Dave said:
What now - tent? caravan? squat?
No option? Renovation or detonation?
Housing has been a problem for much of my life (until now), Sax - so I\'m up for problem solving.... Got enough to eat and warm clothing?
July 26th, 2021 04:35
Mortar
Thekkinkkattil said:
Just don\'t say there is no life here.It seems to a very lived in house.With lots of memories
July 26th, 2021 04:15
Thekkinkkattil said:
Just don\'t say there is no life here.It seems to a very lived in house.With lots of memories
July 26th, 2021 04:15
Mortar
orchidee said:
You falling to bits? Will you be just a heap?! A fine write SC.
July 26th, 2021 01:49
orchidee said:
You falling to bits? Will you be just a heap?! A fine write SC.
July 26th, 2021 01:49
Mortar
dusk arising said:
A well described feeling i know only too well on occasion.
July 26th, 2021 01:23
dusk arising said:
A well described feeling i know only too well on occasion.
July 26th, 2021 01:23
Mortar
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC. As you move away from those memories new ones will be created.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words SC. As you move away from those memories new ones will be created.
Andy
July 26th, 2021 01:01
Not A Love Poem
dusk arising said:
Well Saxon, this is really an excellent piece and deserving of much acclaim.
Deserving of more recognition than it will receive if only posted on MPS where it is receiving much praise.
Into my fav\'s for sure
July 25th, 2021 11:27
dusk arising said:
Well Saxon, this is really an excellent piece and deserving of much acclaim.
Deserving of more recognition than it will receive if only posted on MPS where it is receiving much praise.
Into my fav\'s for sure
July 25th, 2021 11:27
Not A Love Poem
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write Sax.
Love knows no limits, no boundaries it can\'t cross, no depths it can\'t reach, no heights it can\'t fly. But it also requires input from a living entity or it is only that what is expected of. Believe in it, and love will believe in you.
July 25th, 2021 10:34
Accidental Poet said:
Excellent write Sax.
Love knows no limits, no boundaries it can\'t cross, no depths it can\'t reach, no heights it can\'t fly. But it also requires input from a living entity or it is only that what is expected of. Believe in it, and love will believe in you.
July 25th, 2021 10:34
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