Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Feeling Flushed
Doggerel Dave said:
Saxon:
It will not reflect on you
You do what you gotta do
Just feel easy leaving your poo
For another to flush for you.
A big turd a marker of health
What more do you need, bar wealth?
Just do look after yourself
In this situation, only – you’re not someone who ignores yer other social responsibilities, are yer?
June 10th, 2021 06:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Saxon:
It will not reflect on you
You do what you gotta do
Just feel easy leaving your poo
For another to flush for you.
A big turd a marker of health
What more do you need, bar wealth?
Just do look after yourself
In this situation, only – you’re not someone who ignores yer other social responsibilities, are yer?
June 10th, 2021 06:01
Feeling Flushed
Accidental Poet said:
No apology necessary SC. You do what you got to poo. ; )
June 10th, 2021 05:01
Accidental Poet said:
No apology necessary SC. You do what you got to poo. ; )
June 10th, 2021 05:01
Feeling Flushed
dusk arising said:
Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was someone elses before i started but my need was so urgent. Damn thing was still there winking at me. Now i get the blame for someone elses turd with its built in gas pocket of a fart.
June 10th, 2021 04:03
dusk arising said:
Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was someone elses before i started but my need was so urgent. Damn thing was still there winking at me. Now i get the blame for someone elses turd with its built in gas pocket of a fart.
June 10th, 2021 04:03
Feeling Flushed
orchidee said:
I didn\'t explain it well. Oops, now it\'s deleted your reply too!
June 10th, 2021 01:35
orchidee said:
I didn\'t explain it well. Oops, now it\'s deleted your reply too!
June 10th, 2021 01:35
Stolen moment
Accidental Poet said:
\"everything listens to everything else,\" that is brilliant SC. This whole poem is a masterpiece. Certainly a fav. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:35
Accidental Poet said:
\"everything listens to everything else,\" that is brilliant SC. This whole poem is a masterpiece. Certainly a fav. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:35
Stolen moment
SureshG said:
The ultimate silence is when your mind is at rest.
The silence in your words is well displayed.
June 9th, 2021 12:06
SureshG said:
The ultimate silence is when your mind is at rest.
The silence in your words is well displayed.
June 9th, 2021 12:06
Stolen moment
dusk arising said:
Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does happen.... at least it does for me.
Living with tinitus those moments are rare.
June 9th, 2021 02:44
dusk arising said:
Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does happen.... at least it does for me.
Living with tinitus those moments are rare.
June 9th, 2021 02:44
Stolen moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, that silence that comes into our lives can be so meaningful within us.
Andy
https://youtu.be/AWVUp12XPpU
June 9th, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, that silence that comes into our lives can be so meaningful within us.
Andy
https://youtu.be/AWVUp12XPpU
June 9th, 2021 00:59
Stolen moment
orchidee said:
A fine write SC.
We\'re ranting about annoying expressions, such as \'At this moment in time\', and \'Basically...\' starting every sentence! lol.
June 9th, 2021 00:58
orchidee said:
A fine write SC.
We\'re ranting about annoying expressions, such as \'At this moment in time\', and \'Basically...\' starting every sentence! lol.
June 9th, 2021 00:58
Stolen moment
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. The sound of silence also soothes you. It connects you with God.
June 9th, 2021 00:40
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. The sound of silence also soothes you. It connects you with God.
June 9th, 2021 00:40
A taste of salt in the air
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery that brings the scene so alive - - this must fly into my faves for future reads my friend.
June 8th, 2021 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery that brings the scene so alive - - this must fly into my faves for future reads my friend.
June 8th, 2021 15:58
A taste of salt in the air
SureshG said:
Loved your post and the imagery it portrayed.
June 8th, 2021 12:32
SureshG said:
Loved your post and the imagery it portrayed.
June 8th, 2021 12:32
A taste of salt in the air
L. B. Mek said:
\'The nets are cast
like whirling dervishes
through skillfully sculpted hands,
Fairies momentarily tattoo
upon the seas amebous body
before absorbing away
into translucency\'..
fantastic imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 8th, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'The nets are cast
like whirling dervishes
through skillfully sculpted hands,
Fairies momentarily tattoo
upon the seas amebous body
before absorbing away
into translucency\'..
fantastic imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 8th, 2021 06:09
A taste of salt in the air
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a great deal of respect for those who tackle the sea in their boats and bring food back for others.
Good words SC.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a great deal of respect for those who tackle the sea in their boats and bring food back for others.
Good words SC.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:34
Natures Monet
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s not often I say WOW. But WOW! So much in so few words. WOW ; )
June 7th, 2021 19:57
Accidental Poet said:
It\'s not often I say WOW. But WOW! So much in so few words. WOW ; )
June 7th, 2021 19:57
Natures Monet
Michael Edwards said:
I have seen some amazing sunrises and sunsets this year and this little gem is spot on.
June 7th, 2021 15:09
Michael Edwards said:
I have seen some amazing sunrises and sunsets this year and this little gem is spot on.
June 7th, 2021 15:09
Natures Monet
Neville said:
this both looks as good as it reads ..
.. and reads as good as it looks..
June 7th, 2021 06:01
Neville said:
this both looks as good as it reads ..
.. and reads as good as it looks..
June 7th, 2021 06:01
Natures Monet
orchidee said:
Oops lol! Why it take ya ages to write this one?! There ain\'t no extra-long words in it. Well, masterpiece is quite a long word, I admit!
A fine write SC.
June 7th, 2021 01:56
orchidee said:
Oops lol! Why it take ya ages to write this one?! There ain\'t no extra-long words in it. Well, masterpiece is quite a long word, I admit!
A fine write SC.
June 7th, 2021 01:56
Natures Monet
dusk arising said:
Love it, so glad you are posting again.
This is one for my fav\'s for sure.
June 7th, 2021 01:51
dusk arising said:
Love it, so glad you are posting again.
This is one for my fav\'s for sure.
June 7th, 2021 01:51
Natures Monet
Doggerel Dave said:
With a good upending in the title and good ending in four lines, you have, I believe cracked it, Sax.
June 7th, 2021 01:30
Doggerel Dave said:
With a good upending in the title and good ending in four lines, you have, I believe cracked it, Sax.
June 7th, 2021 01:30
Natures Monet
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , says so much in a few lines . I like the idea of the suns shadows “ stretching and yawning “ and it being a masterpiece
June 7th, 2021 01:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words , says so much in a few lines . I like the idea of the suns shadows “ stretching and yawning “ and it being a masterpiece
June 7th, 2021 01:07
Natures Monet
Goldfinch60 said:
Leading us into \' The Starry Night\'. Good words SC.
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Leading us into \' The Starry Night\'. Good words SC.
Andy
June 7th, 2021 00:42
Estuary
Neville said:
.. I love Wales .. and can almost recite the script to Moby Dick without referring to my lines ... seen the film maybe half a dozen times ....
Ya just cant beat a good estuary, whereas, one can beat the hell out of an egg ........................... :)
Neville
June 6th, 2021 16:57
Neville said:
.. I love Wales .. and can almost recite the script to Moby Dick without referring to my lines ... seen the film maybe half a dozen times ....
Ya just cant beat a good estuary, whereas, one can beat the hell out of an egg ........................... :)
Neville
June 6th, 2021 16:57
Estuary
dusk arising said:
Superb analogy. Each tide beyond my control.
May there be many more tides enriching your life experience.
June 6th, 2021 02:13
dusk arising said:
Superb analogy. Each tide beyond my control.
May there be many more tides enriching your life experience.
June 6th, 2021 02:13
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