Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Mediocre Days of Living
Goldfinch60 said:
You are obviously content in your life and contentment in life is what we all seek. Enjoy your life SC, each moment is so precious.
Andy
February 29th, 2020 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
You are obviously content in your life and contentment in life is what we all seek. Enjoy your life SC, each moment is so precious.
Andy
February 29th, 2020 01:18
Tone Deaf?
Neville said:
The idea made me chuckle, then I thought, hell yeah.. an extra ear wouldn\'t go amiss would it … ear ear
Neville
February 28th, 2020 11:32
Neville said:
The idea made me chuckle, then I thought, hell yeah.. an extra ear wouldn\'t go amiss would it … ear ear
Neville
February 28th, 2020 11:32
Mediocre Days of Living
dusk arising said:
Reads like the current page of my life story SC.
Yet still my mind has its adventures to play with though largely restricted by expense and of course the weather.
A pleasant, relaxing read both retrospective and forward looking.
February 28th, 2020 09:52
dusk arising said:
Reads like the current page of my life story SC.
Yet still my mind has its adventures to play with though largely restricted by expense and of course the weather.
A pleasant, relaxing read both retrospective and forward looking.
February 28th, 2020 09:52
Tone Deaf?
Goldfinch60 said:
Two things SC
1 - I believe I know a great deal about music but the more i get to know about music the more ignorant about it I realise I am.
2 - \"So much music - so little time\"
Apart from four ears I need and infinite extension in my life to try and hear it all.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Two things SC
1 - I believe I know a great deal about music but the more i get to know about music the more ignorant about it I realise I am.
2 - \"So much music - so little time\"
Apart from four ears I need and infinite extension in my life to try and hear it all.
Andy
February 28th, 2020 02:07
Tone Deaf?
dusk arising said:
Bring on surround sound...... such an eerie thought though. where would you have these extra ears..... bear in mind they needn\'t be on show above the neckline. You could have one under each arm with earplugs discreetly auditioning music new to you whilst your original ears seek pleasure in old favourites.
I think its plain to see i am warming to your idea already.... hmmm another pair of eyes so i could watch gigs/concerts that i\'d missed too.... an extra larynx so i could sing along too..... i\'m getting carried away
Dammit look what you\'ve started.
February 27th, 2020 17:24
dusk arising said:
Bring on surround sound...... such an eerie thought though. where would you have these extra ears..... bear in mind they needn\'t be on show above the neckline. You could have one under each arm with earplugs discreetly auditioning music new to you whilst your original ears seek pleasure in old favourites.
I think its plain to see i am warming to your idea already.... hmmm another pair of eyes so i could watch gigs/concerts that i\'d missed too.... an extra larynx so i could sing along too..... i\'m getting carried away
Dammit look what you\'ve started.
February 27th, 2020 17:24
Tone Deaf?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SC for an interesting concept ~ an improvement on a key Human Sense ~ HEARING ! Right now Im doing TWO things simultaneously ! Listening to RADIO 3 (Bruckner - Symphony No. Eight ) and composing a Reply to your Poem. They dont clash because ONE is AURAL and the OTHER VISUAL & MENTAL i.e I couldnt watch TV and do your Poem justice @ the same time.
I love SPOTIFY but could not listen to BRYN TERFEL & BRUCKNER symultaneously unless I was a SIAMESE TWIN with FOUR EARS & (importantly) TWO seoarate BRAINS. You imply this in Line 2 No 1. Set of Ears wired to BRAIN 1. No 2. Set of Ears wired to BRAIN 2. If Im listening to the RADIO and my MOBILE RINGS ~ I have to MUTE the RADIO while I take the call. But I can watch FOOTBALL on TV (with the sound off) and have a phone conversation at the same time because I am using two different senses SIGHT & SOUND simultaneously just as when Im listening to a Football Commentary on TV. In the same way I can read Dickens and listen to Bruckner at the same time.
In short you are not just wanting MORE volume with your four EARS ~ You want to hear the BEATLES & BEETHOVEN played simultaniously without interfering with each other ! For that you would also need TWO BRAINS ! I have this vision of you with an upper & lower set of ears ~ each with separate headphones plugged into your separate Brians one BRAIN allowing you to enjoy YESTERDAY and the other BEETHOVENS 5th ~ AMEN ~ The MINDS BOGGLE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS (Brainwise)
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡💙🧡
February 27th, 2020 16:34
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks SC for an interesting concept ~ an improvement on a key Human Sense ~ HEARING ! Right now Im doing TWO things simultaneously ! Listening to RADIO 3 (Bruckner - Symphony No. Eight ) and composing a Reply to your Poem. They dont clash because ONE is AURAL and the OTHER VISUAL & MENTAL i.e I couldnt watch TV and do your Poem justice @ the same time.
I love SPOTIFY but could not listen to BRYN TERFEL & BRUCKNER symultaneously unless I was a SIAMESE TWIN with FOUR EARS & (importantly) TWO seoarate BRAINS. You imply this in Line 2 No 1. Set of Ears wired to BRAIN 1. No 2. Set of Ears wired to BRAIN 2. If Im listening to the RADIO and my MOBILE RINGS ~ I have to MUTE the RADIO while I take the call. But I can watch FOOTBALL on TV (with the sound off) and have a phone conversation at the same time because I am using two different senses SIGHT & SOUND simultaneously just as when Im listening to a Football Commentary on TV. In the same way I can read Dickens and listen to Bruckner at the same time.
In short you are not just wanting MORE volume with your four EARS ~ You want to hear the BEATLES & BEETHOVEN played simultaniously without interfering with each other ! For that you would also need TWO BRAINS ! I have this vision of you with an upper & lower set of ears ~ each with separate headphones plugged into your separate Brians one BRAIN allowing you to enjoy YESTERDAY and the other BEETHOVENS 5th ~ AMEN ~ The MINDS BOGGLE !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS (Brainwise)
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡💙🧡
February 27th, 2020 16:34
Lawless Tears
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC, those tears can appear in many surprising ways.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write SC, those tears can appear in many surprising ways.
Andy
February 27th, 2020 01:44
Lawless Tears
Neville said:
One is forced to wonder sometimes, but in this instance, there can be no mistaking.. Nicely penned my literary friend....
Neville
February 26th, 2020 09:39
Neville said:
One is forced to wonder sometimes, but in this instance, there can be no mistaking.. Nicely penned my literary friend....
Neville
February 26th, 2020 09:39
Lawless Tears
dusk arising said:
Hmmm you seem to be pointing a finger in a certain direction... but.
There\'s more to that poet than you ascribe him here.
Today yours is a well composed piece which i hope is not found to be distressing or annoying to the subject.
February 26th, 2020 07:12
dusk arising said:
Hmmm you seem to be pointing a finger in a certain direction... but.
There\'s more to that poet than you ascribe him here.
Today yours is a well composed piece which i hope is not found to be distressing or annoying to the subject.
February 26th, 2020 07:12
The Greenman
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Is this awesome poem in all its imagery and lament about greenery and trees? I hope it is. You wrote it in a great poetic way wow. Kudos!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 06:12
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Is this awesome poem in all its imagery and lament about greenery and trees? I hope it is. You wrote it in a great poetic way wow. Kudos!
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 26th, 2020 06:12
The Greenman
Goldfinch60 said:
Those old ways were always right and we may, hopefully, one day return to them. Walking with nature can save us from the world.
As many know on this site I put very few poems into my favourites but this will be another one.
Great write SC.
Andy
February 25th, 2020 02:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Those old ways were always right and we may, hopefully, one day return to them. Walking with nature can save us from the world.
As many know on this site I put very few poems into my favourites but this will be another one.
Great write SC.
Andy
February 25th, 2020 02:07
The Greenman
dusk arising said:
This recounts the feelings some of us can begin to experience in meditation among the forest trees or the barren wilderness where the wind levels all.
Encourages to step away from and outside of what we have become and return to the natural beast of this earth which we really are.
Got to go into my favourites.
February 24th, 2020 16:05
dusk arising said:
This recounts the feelings some of us can begin to experience in meditation among the forest trees or the barren wilderness where the wind levels all.
Encourages to step away from and outside of what we have become and return to the natural beast of this earth which we really are.
Got to go into my favourites.
February 24th, 2020 16:05
The Greenman
orchidee said:
Good write Crow. Ain\'t no tears need to be shed, except if hearing me sing! lol.
February 24th, 2020 11:53
orchidee said:
Good write Crow. Ain\'t no tears need to be shed, except if hearing me sing! lol.
February 24th, 2020 11:53
The Greenman
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s acceptance of mans\' arrogance yet warns with that \"blindness will grow\" - and the appeal of your final lines brought me near tears -- so this poem is going to my faves. for sure.
February 24th, 2020 11:25
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the flow of this tribute to old ways - - your pen evokes nature\'s acceptance of mans\' arrogance yet warns with that \"blindness will grow\" - and the appeal of your final lines brought me near tears -- so this poem is going to my faves. for sure.
February 24th, 2020 11:25
My Dad Moves On
Goldfinch60 said:
In all our lives life must go on perhaps your Dad realises this and and has moved into a new life.
We must all move on in life in spite of any sorrows in our life.
Great last line - smiles all around.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
In all our lives life must go on perhaps your Dad realises this and and has moved into a new life.
We must all move on in life in spite of any sorrows in our life.
Great last line - smiles all around.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:10
My Dad Moves On
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well maybe he meant till the rest of his days
February 21st, 2020 14:27
ron parrish aka wordman said:
well maybe he meant till the rest of his days
February 21st, 2020 14:27
My Dad Moves On
orchidee said:
Why yes, a relative, an \'aunt\', married two months before her 80th birthday, for the first time!
February 21st, 2020 11:40
orchidee said:
Why yes, a relative, an \'aunt\', married two months before her 80th birthday, for the first time!
February 21st, 2020 11:40
My Dad Moves On
Michael Edwards said:
No never too old. I have a friend who was widowed in her early eighties and has now found a new partner through an online agency. They are so suitable for each other and so happy - he has moved in with her whilst keeping his own property where his daughter now lives. That\'s the only problem - ensuring proper wills are in place to protect the families inheritances. Fine write.
February 21st, 2020 04:47
Michael Edwards said:
No never too old. I have a friend who was widowed in her early eighties and has now found a new partner through an online agency. They are so suitable for each other and so happy - he has moved in with her whilst keeping his own property where his daughter now lives. That\'s the only problem - ensuring proper wills are in place to protect the families inheritances. Fine write.
February 21st, 2020 04:47
My Dad Moves On
Poetic Dan said:
Lol, great ending and I\'m sure many will agree! We\'re all here for the moment!
Thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2020 04:18
Poetic Dan said:
Lol, great ending and I\'m sure many will agree! We\'re all here for the moment!
Thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2020 04:18
Dead End
Goldfinch60 said:
May that care be shared with us all as you write your words SC.
Andy
February 21st, 2020 02:05
Goldfinch60 said:
May that care be shared with us all as you write your words SC.
Andy
February 21st, 2020 02:05
Circles not spirals
Goldfinch60 said:
If you stop trudging around your world and stop for a moment clarity will come to you and your life ahead will be there for you to enjoy.
Andy
February 20th, 2020 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
If you stop trudging around your world and stop for a moment clarity will come to you and your life ahead will be there for you to enjoy.
Andy
February 20th, 2020 01:59
Pensieve moment
Vacancy said:
Love the poem! The music i listen to reflects my mood tremendously. Excited for the next poem. :)
February 18th, 2020 23:07
Vacancy said:
Love the poem! The music i listen to reflects my mood tremendously. Excited for the next poem. :)
February 18th, 2020 23:07
Pensieve moment
orchidee said:
I don\'t mind, if you don\'t mind Crow - pensive or pensieve!
February 18th, 2020 15:49
orchidee said:
I don\'t mind, if you don\'t mind Crow - pensive or pensieve!
February 18th, 2020 15:49
Pensieve moment
dusk arising said:
Nice picture you painted here and you painted it well.
On the premise that \'less is more\' do you think you could paint an equally pensive picture in your readers mind in just five or six lines?
February 18th, 2020 04:09
dusk arising said:
Nice picture you painted here and you painted it well.
On the premise that \'less is more\' do you think you could paint an equally pensive picture in your readers mind in just five or six lines?
February 18th, 2020 04:09
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