Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Be Like Fox
dusk arising said:
I envy the wind which drifts where it will doing natures bidding. In contrast the nearest i get to being the wind is passing it and theres this awful smell.
July 19th, 2021 04:22
dusk arising said:
I envy the wind which drifts where it will doing natures bidding. In contrast the nearest i get to being the wind is passing it and theres this awful smell.
July 19th, 2021 04:22
Be Like Fox
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words on nature SC, it can be so wonderful to be with it.
A baby hare came onto the croquet lawn last week and I go with a couple of yards of it, beautiful creature.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words on nature SC, it can be so wonderful to be with it.
A baby hare came onto the croquet lawn last week and I go with a couple of yards of it, beautiful creature.
Andy
July 19th, 2021 01:28
Be Like Fox
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read š I liked reading this poem . Yes , itās not just us with concerns and worries
July 19th, 2021 00:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read š I liked reading this poem . Yes , itās not just us with concerns and worries
July 19th, 2021 00:47
Empty Words
AzaleaTruth said:
I had lost my inner muse once...I wasn\'t even able to express what exactly I felt back then.... But today I think I finally got a good explanation for my misery!!
Very well done Sax!
July 18th, 2021 23:31
AzaleaTruth said:
I had lost my inner muse once...I wasn\'t even able to express what exactly I felt back then.... But today I think I finally got a good explanation for my misery!!
Very well done Sax!
July 18th, 2021 23:31
Empty Words
Accidental Poet said:
Have Muse will write, even if subject of none. ; )
July 18th, 2021 09:55
Accidental Poet said:
Have Muse will write, even if subject of none. ; )
July 18th, 2021 09:55
Empty Words
Jayasree said:
I can totally relate to that. The need to write is there but it\'s a blank sometimes. Beautifully expressed, you have made that dilemma into a poem. well done :)
July 18th, 2021 08:35
Jayasree said:
I can totally relate to that. The need to write is there but it\'s a blank sometimes. Beautifully expressed, you have made that dilemma into a poem. well done :)
July 18th, 2021 08:35
Empty Words
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
We ebb and we flow. The sun doesn\'t rise the earth rolls down we just can\'t feel it that way.
July 18th, 2021 08:03
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.C.
We ebb and we flow. The sun doesn\'t rise the earth rolls down we just can\'t feel it that way.
July 18th, 2021 08:03
Empty Words
Lauraš» said:
Saxon Crow,
Youāre truly a messenger of what we all have felt at some time or other.
Your āsimple reflection of all thatā youāre feeling is inspirational.
Laura š»
July 18th, 2021 05:19
Lauraš» said:
Saxon Crow,
Youāre truly a messenger of what we all have felt at some time or other.
Your āsimple reflection of all thatā youāre feeling is inspirational.
Laura š»
July 18th, 2021 05:19
Empty Words
Poetic Dan said:
And yet in feeling nothing, you\'ve felt everything so small!
Fantastic work, yes an ink addiction still has its flaws. When I just can\'t sleep and need to write a bit more.
July 18th, 2021 04:20
Poetic Dan said:
And yet in feeling nothing, you\'ve felt everything so small!
Fantastic work, yes an ink addiction still has its flaws. When I just can\'t sleep and need to write a bit more.
July 18th, 2021 04:20
Empty Words
Neville said:
.. it happens all the bloomin time .. nice bit o self disclosive prose on a sunny Sunday mane goes down a treat with me toast n marmalade ...
tomorrow will be different just you wait n see :)
July 18th, 2021 02:49
Neville said:
.. it happens all the bloomin time .. nice bit o self disclosive prose on a sunny Sunday mane goes down a treat with me toast n marmalade ...
tomorrow will be different just you wait n see :)
July 18th, 2021 02:49
Empty Words
Doggerel Dave said:
Just don\'t go away Sax.
l\'ve got a poem on this situation stashed away...hope it stays there. I teeter on the edge of pinning it but need MPS - especially while in lockdown as I am right now.
I strain with all me might.....
July 18th, 2021 02:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Just don\'t go away Sax.
l\'ve got a poem on this situation stashed away...hope it stays there. I teeter on the edge of pinning it but need MPS - especially while in lockdown as I am right now.
I strain with all me might.....
July 18th, 2021 02:48
Empty Words
Goldfinch60 said:
This does happen but your words today will give you the inspiration to write more words.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
This does happen but your words today will give you the inspiration to write more words.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 01:27
Never a Dull Moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Families can be so strange sometimes but they teach us so much and we wouldn\'t be without them.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Families can be so strange sometimes but they teach us so much and we wouldn\'t be without them.
Andy
July 18th, 2021 00:23
Never a Dull Moment
Doggerel Dave said:
So many elements - some of which made me smile with recognition, some sigh with resignation.
You got the inevitable complexity just right Sax. Thanks.
July 17th, 2021 21:25
Doggerel Dave said:
So many elements - some of which made me smile with recognition, some sigh with resignation.
You got the inevitable complexity just right Sax. Thanks.
July 17th, 2021 21:25
Never a Dull Moment
Poetic Dan said:
This is a pattern I can only hope I created with my little crew but my upbringing was for from the delight of just bad!
Still we get the lessons we get and all the better to enjoy your words with!
Much appreciated
Keep it real
July 17th, 2021 09:56
Poetic Dan said:
This is a pattern I can only hope I created with my little crew but my upbringing was for from the delight of just bad!
Still we get the lessons we get and all the better to enjoy your words with!
Much appreciated
Keep it real
July 17th, 2021 09:56
Never a Dull Moment
dusk arising said:
Its a super write,
it\'s just as it is
it\'s OK by me
It sounds like my secrets are out of the box
July 17th, 2021 07:09
dusk arising said:
Its a super write,
it\'s just as it is
it\'s OK by me
It sounds like my secrets are out of the box
July 17th, 2021 07:09
Never a Dull Moment
Accidental Poet said:
You can pick your friends, but not your family. But some friends don\'t last, family will always be there. Awesome write Sax. ; )
July 17th, 2021 06:09
Accidental Poet said:
You can pick your friends, but not your family. But some friends don\'t last, family will always be there. Awesome write Sax. ; )
July 17th, 2021 06:09
War of Contrition
Neville said:
the middle way has always kinda worked for me ...........
what a gift you have bestowed upon us here today sir :)
July 16th, 2021 16:30
Neville said:
the middle way has always kinda worked for me ...........
what a gift you have bestowed upon us here today sir :)
July 16th, 2021 16:30
War of Contrition
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, S.C.
We have been \"Huck Finned\" from the beginning.
July 16th, 2021 15:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, S.C.
We have been \"Huck Finned\" from the beginning.
July 16th, 2021 15:42
War of Contrition
L. B. Mek said:
(really sorry for hijacking your comment section, dear poet
I was just inspired by your words
and couldn\'t control my overzealous nature,
I meant no disrespect by doing so)..
some people delight at an ice cream treat
others shake their head in bewilderment
at how sugared milk - frozen
can improve someone\'s mood;
science went and explained it all
used words like dopamine hits
to validate its mood swing effects;
but we forget
there was a time - before,
when milk and sugar, was only
for kings and queens
and their aristocracy feeders,
while people\'s lives were valued by
their muscles or weapons
or the power to make other\'s wield
those oppressive resources
for a name or banner;
in those days, some inked words
shared - freely, was all people had
to believe that they had something
more: to aim for, in life;
now fast-forward a few centuries
and we all own, handbag sized guns
with silencers thrown-in for free
but expect \'civility\' to insure
nobody uses them: on us - righteously;
a time where
humanity\'s fallible - fingerprints
has distorted all-things goodness
in what was once
our theological appeasement of life,
now people scream and hate a deity
they don\'t believe-in, absurdly?
while the Pope rides
a gold bulletproof Rolls Royce, accompanied
by motorcades, armed
with those all-important donation boxes
a 10% minimum premium, of all you earn
your price of inclusion, non-negotiable for entry
into your miraged depiction of heaven,
and Ayatollah\'s fight democracy
for modernity\'s truly empowering capacity
to wield Nuclear bombs, freely;
and the Jews, as always
spend their day-to-day, counted-out existence
plotting an economical path
to their continued survival,
cursing the day
they ever shared, \'their God\'
with such an ungrateful world...
July 16th, 2021 05:49
L. B. Mek said:
(really sorry for hijacking your comment section, dear poet
I was just inspired by your words
and couldn\'t control my overzealous nature,
I meant no disrespect by doing so)..
some people delight at an ice cream treat
others shake their head in bewilderment
at how sugared milk - frozen
can improve someone\'s mood;
science went and explained it all
used words like dopamine hits
to validate its mood swing effects;
but we forget
there was a time - before,
when milk and sugar, was only
for kings and queens
and their aristocracy feeders,
while people\'s lives were valued by
their muscles or weapons
or the power to make other\'s wield
those oppressive resources
for a name or banner;
in those days, some inked words
shared - freely, was all people had
to believe that they had something
more: to aim for, in life;
now fast-forward a few centuries
and we all own, handbag sized guns
with silencers thrown-in for free
but expect \'civility\' to insure
nobody uses them: on us - righteously;
a time where
humanity\'s fallible - fingerprints
has distorted all-things goodness
in what was once
our theological appeasement of life,
now people scream and hate a deity
they don\'t believe-in, absurdly?
while the Pope rides
a gold bulletproof Rolls Royce, accompanied
by motorcades, armed
with those all-important donation boxes
a 10% minimum premium, of all you earn
your price of inclusion, non-negotiable for entry
into your miraged depiction of heaven,
and Ayatollah\'s fight democracy
for modernity\'s truly empowering capacity
to wield Nuclear bombs, freely;
and the Jews, as always
spend their day-to-day, counted-out existence
plotting an economical path
to their continued survival,
cursing the day
they ever shared, \'their God\'
with such an ungrateful world...
July 16th, 2021 05:49
War of Contrition
dusk arising said:
A huge con instigated and perpetuated by the christian churches to subtly place the believer in their emotional control.
Once a person frees themselves from christian doctrine and accepts the natural spirituality within us all then the truth begins to dawn if one lets it.
Your poem is a good expression of the guilty opressive burden christianity, be it protestant or catholic, places upon every innocent soul it captures - usually from tender years.
July 16th, 2021 04:57
dusk arising said:
A huge con instigated and perpetuated by the christian churches to subtly place the believer in their emotional control.
Once a person frees themselves from christian doctrine and accepts the natural spirituality within us all then the truth begins to dawn if one lets it.
Your poem is a good expression of the guilty opressive burden christianity, be it protestant or catholic, places upon every innocent soul it captures - usually from tender years.
July 16th, 2021 04:57
War of Contrition
Doggerel Dave said:
\'your silence\' says it all, Sax - why do you bother?
Great write but too many words for me; however who knows, it might get someone else ....thinking?
July 16th, 2021 03:39
Doggerel Dave said:
\'your silence\' says it all, Sax - why do you bother?
Great write but too many words for me; however who knows, it might get someone else ....thinking?
July 16th, 2021 03:39
War of Attrition
L. B. Mek said:
\'The waters rise up from the deepest sea
To wash away the best of me
But the current of life within this body
Creates a tidal wave of deeper courage\'..
an empowering message, thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'The waters rise up from the deepest sea
To wash away the best of me
But the current of life within this body
Creates a tidal wave of deeper courage\'..
an empowering message, thanks for sharing
July 15th, 2021 05:10
War of Attrition
Doggerel Dave said:
Come back Boffington Town - you are out of lockdown - all is forgiven.
July 15th, 2021 04:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Come back Boffington Town - you are out of lockdown - all is forgiven.
July 15th, 2021 04:49
War of Attrition
dusk arising said:
And so it will continue. Mankind in all his foibles will continue, polarized or not.
July 15th, 2021 02:10
dusk arising said:
And so it will continue. Mankind in all his foibles will continue, polarized or not.
July 15th, 2021 02:10
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