Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow



Estuary
orchidee said:

Good write SC.
Now what you doing, knowing how to spell words like symbiosis?! heehee.
There\'s intelligent life on this site, ya know. Aww, \'Where?\' some reply! lol

June 6th, 2021 01:57

Estuary
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words SC, that chaos my well be there but it does have its parts where smoothness and peace convey the beauty of life in our world.

Andy

June 6th, 2021 01:47

Kintsugi
Saxon Crow said:

Thanks yellow rose. Much appreciated

June 6th, 2021 00:47

Kintsugi
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Good poem , I especially like the last two lines 🙂

June 6th, 2021 00:34

Kintsugi
Michael Edwards said:

love the poem and love the idea of Kintsugi - must look into it.


June 5th, 2021 15:56

Kintsugi
Neville said:


... I read these words first thing this mane ... and .. am I now glad you took me at my word and checked it out ...

June 5th, 2021 10:34

Kintsugi
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, S.C. In the middle of the woods, it doesn\'t matter which way you go.

June 5th, 2021 08:26

Kintsugi
Doggerel Dave said:

Now that’s a deep look at the compromises and ambiguities of a long term relationship, SC. Note you only use ‘love’ once in the whole piece and the whole puts that nebulous term in its place….
Great write – Respect.


June 5th, 2021 07:46

New History
dusk arising said:

Here we are with a government doing its best to do the right thing so that it gets re-elected and all the media picking holes in their every move (even friggin decorators bill for gawd\'s sake).
Do governments ever do anything right according to the media? Other than gaining scorn from the man in the street who could do a better job (mostly dummies) it seems they do. e.g. UK covid condition compared to some other countries.

Of course governments \'could have done better\' is easy to see once one has the luxury of hindsight.

A very though provoking write SC.

June 5th, 2021 07:30

Same old same
Doggerel Dave said:

OK if I get a rubber stamp made up with those words on it? Usage? Varies - medium frequency. Not complaining - ordinary ain\'t so bad, in fact rather good, mostly.

June 5th, 2021 07:14

New History
Doggerel Dave said:

On review SC, I note date of posting as May 2020. Now it seems to me that nothing much has changed, in particular the prevarication of the Political Class and the quiet coup of that well known old soldier General Incompetence. And in the meantime the people struggle on the best they can.
However I do hope that at least some of the optimistic paint in the latter half of your piece does not fade…...
Well said anyway.


June 5th, 2021 07:02

Kintsugi
dusk arising said:

So long as you are both happy to keep using the repaired relationship, it works.
Compromise saves lives.

June 5th, 2021 05:48

Kintsugi
orchidee said:

Good write SC.
You fixed that pot? The one in the pic!

June 5th, 2021 01:59

Kintsugi
Saxon Crow said:

Or there is beauty in sadness?

June 5th, 2021 01:43

Kintsugi
Goldfinch60 said:

But that repair can be so fulfilling and bring back those wonderful memories of our passed lives.

Andy

June 5th, 2021 01:40

Tapestry of Scars
myself and me said:

Beneath the scars is a tender heart filled with love. Well penned.

June 4th, 2021 20:25

Tapestry of Scars
Jerry Reynolds said:

Beautifully, written S.C.

June 4th, 2021 09:59

Tapestry of Scars
Neville said:


to put it simply this is simply beautiful ...

.. indeed, I have a thing about things being beautifully broken and kintsugi .. (check it out) I have written about both of them in the distant past ...

... To coin a phrase, gurt lush say\'s me ... :)



June 4th, 2021 06:12

Tapestry of Scars
dusk arising said:

Such wonderful words which reach into our soul. When confidence is damaged we do become broken and fear to reach out for love where once we boldly trod and were hurt.

Re-read this several times and i want to keep it. It goes into my favourites.

June 4th, 2021 02:14

Tapestry of Scars
orchidee said:

A fine write SC.

June 4th, 2021 01:46

Tapestry of Scars
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong emotive words SC. I am sure that your heart is not shattered as you can see that tapestry in others that I am sure is within you. Stitch your hearts together and you will go on for eternity.

Andy

June 4th, 2021 01:41

Stolen words!
Neville said:


and there was me, nowt but a humble hornythologist & would be scribe thought it was only jackdaws n magpies that nicked bright shiny things ...

at least you got some decent inspiration from the pc glitch .... and welcome to my world, my friend .................

Neville :)

June 3rd, 2021 09:51

Stolen words!
dusk arising said:

Oh so true. And then they want you to keep yer records on a cloud??? Dream on Bill Gates.

June 3rd, 2021 05:28

Fireflies
L. B. Mek said:

your fingers, inking your thought\'s
ergo: this is all yours
to decipher and imbue, with meaning...
thanks for sharing

June 3rd, 2021 04:22

Stolen words!
orchidee said:

You pressed \'delete\' or summat, by mistake?!
If you were in the middle of a long poem, choose a shorter one instead for the day! lol.
I thought it was going to be about plagiarising - pinching other poet\'s words - the unforgivable sin for poets!

June 3rd, 2021 01:46

Stolen words!
Fay Slimm. said:

Oh what a shock and how frustrating S.C. - -I do understand as I have recently had that happen to me - - and I couldn\'t find heart to write and post for the rest of that day.........bravo to you from me for this aptly titled and seethingly good exposure ................Fay

June 3rd, 2021 01:26

Stolen words!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good fun write SC, maybe you should get help from somebody who worked in computing?

Andy

June 3rd, 2021 01:19

Fireflies
Goldfinch60 said:

You and I know that those fireflies will always lead us to a better life of love and beauty.

Andy

June 3rd, 2021 00:29

Drifting
Fay Slimm. said:

Good questions finish this introspective verse on life and time S.C. - - drifting indeed each season that passes makes everyone value all the turns and twists of out personal journey - - thanking you muchly for the reminder.

June 2nd, 2021 15:55

Fireflies
Neville said:


I simply love to sit and watch the fireflies when I am in my little rural mountain retreat high in the Starra Planina mountains ...

I can quite easily lose myself for an hour or two ...

but enough of that ...

I was captivated from the off my friend ............

... cheers :)


June 2nd, 2021 15:07



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