Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Clickety Clack Life
SureshG said:
Correct me, I read it you are writing about inspiration. I find it visits me often when I’m not prepared to record and soon after I forget. Then, no matter how hard I try I cannot recall. So inspiration plays this hide and seek, like the clickety clack.
A inspiring read, and most enjoyable.
June 11th, 2021 12:15
SureshG said:
Correct me, I read it you are writing about inspiration. I find it visits me often when I’m not prepared to record and soon after I forget. Then, no matter how hard I try I cannot recall. So inspiration plays this hide and seek, like the clickety clack.
A inspiring read, and most enjoyable.
June 11th, 2021 12:15
Clickety Clack Life
Neville said:
... its not the journey, but the distractions along the way .... NVP 1974
June 11th, 2021 07:20
Neville said:
... its not the journey, but the distractions along the way .... NVP 1974
June 11th, 2021 07:20
Clickety Clack Life
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m not good at metaphors, Sax – but I think I’m there with this one.
Variables present themselves – Just keep on tracking. Truth be known, I was in the carriage behind….
The write drew me right along.
June 11th, 2021 05:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I’m not good at metaphors, Sax – but I think I’m there with this one.
Variables present themselves – Just keep on tracking. Truth be known, I was in the carriage behind….
The write drew me right along.
June 11th, 2021 05:49
Clickety Clack Life
Fay Slimm. said:
An awe- inspiring read Sax -- loved the part where you cant choose the passengers.
June 11th, 2021 05:08
Fay Slimm. said:
An awe- inspiring read Sax -- loved the part where you cant choose the passengers.
June 11th, 2021 05:08
Clickety Clack Life
L. B. Mek said:
\'Inspiration always has a habit
of filling my soul
and then consuming it *whole.\'\'
lol, forgive my rudeness dear poet
my overzealous nature couldn\'t resist..
thanks for sharing
a Great read!
June 11th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
\'Inspiration always has a habit
of filling my soul
and then consuming it *whole.\'\'
lol, forgive my rudeness dear poet
my overzealous nature couldn\'t resist..
thanks for sharing
a Great read!
June 11th, 2021 04:57
Clickety Clack Life
dusk arising said:
Don\'t ever lose that ticket but be sure to get it stamped at every opportunity (wink wink).
June 11th, 2021 02:50
dusk arising said:
Don\'t ever lose that ticket but be sure to get it stamped at every opportunity (wink wink).
June 11th, 2021 02:50
Clickety Clack Life
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
If we dunno where we\'re going, how will we know when we get there?! Hmmm. lol.
June 11th, 2021 01:38
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
If we dunno where we\'re going, how will we know when we get there?! Hmmm. lol.
June 11th, 2021 01:38
Stolen moment
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds of silence takes you to a special place in your soul
June 11th, 2021 00:10
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sounds of silence takes you to a special place in your soul
June 11th, 2021 00:10
Feeling Flushed
Goldfinch60 said:
Do you always poo -dle along with your floating words that never flush away from my laughter.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Do you always poo -dle along with your floating words that never flush away from my laughter.
Andy
June 11th, 2021 00:01
Feeling Flushed
Poetic Dan said:
So bravely done, I read it 3 times. As I first thought it can\'t be once with such a spectacular rhyme!
So glad I popped by.....
June 10th, 2021 17:33
Poetic Dan said:
So bravely done, I read it 3 times. As I first thought it can\'t be once with such a spectacular rhyme!
So glad I popped by.....
June 10th, 2021 17:33
Feeling Flushed
Jerry Reynolds said:
How about taking your \"High Fiber\" shit at your house. Really great fun, S.C.- Sorry forgot you are a bird, it\'s in one out one.
June 10th, 2021 16:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
How about taking your \"High Fiber\" shit at your house. Really great fun, S.C.- Sorry forgot you are a bird, it\'s in one out one.
June 10th, 2021 16:15
Feeling Flushed
SureshG said:
The poo will doooooooooooo
What nothing else coooooould
You must feel relieved
June 10th, 2021 12:48
SureshG said:
The poo will doooooooooooo
What nothing else coooooould
You must feel relieved
June 10th, 2021 12:48
Feeling Flushed
Doggerel Dave said:
Saxon:
It will not reflect on you
You do what you gotta do
Just feel easy leaving your poo
For another to flush for you.
A big turd a marker of health
What more do you need, bar wealth?
Just do look after yourself
In this situation, only – you’re not someone who ignores yer other social responsibilities, are yer?
June 10th, 2021 06:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Saxon:
It will not reflect on you
You do what you gotta do
Just feel easy leaving your poo
For another to flush for you.
A big turd a marker of health
What more do you need, bar wealth?
Just do look after yourself
In this situation, only – you’re not someone who ignores yer other social responsibilities, are yer?
June 10th, 2021 06:01
Feeling Flushed
Accidental Poet said:
No apology necessary SC. You do what you got to poo. ; )
June 10th, 2021 05:01
Accidental Poet said:
No apology necessary SC. You do what you got to poo. ; )
June 10th, 2021 05:01
Feeling Flushed
dusk arising said:
Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was someone elses before i started but my need was so urgent. Damn thing was still there winking at me. Now i get the blame for someone elses turd with its built in gas pocket of a fart.
June 10th, 2021 04:03
dusk arising said:
Oh horror of horrors..... the last time this happened to me it was someone elses before i started but my need was so urgent. Damn thing was still there winking at me. Now i get the blame for someone elses turd with its built in gas pocket of a fart.
June 10th, 2021 04:03
Feeling Flushed
orchidee said:
I didn\'t explain it well. Oops, now it\'s deleted your reply too!
June 10th, 2021 01:35
orchidee said:
I didn\'t explain it well. Oops, now it\'s deleted your reply too!
June 10th, 2021 01:35
Stolen moment
Accidental Poet said:
\"everything listens to everything else,\" that is brilliant SC. This whole poem is a masterpiece. Certainly a fav. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:35
Accidental Poet said:
\"everything listens to everything else,\" that is brilliant SC. This whole poem is a masterpiece. Certainly a fav. ; )
June 9th, 2021 19:35
Stolen moment
SureshG said:
The ultimate silence is when your mind is at rest.
The silence in your words is well displayed.
June 9th, 2021 12:06
SureshG said:
The ultimate silence is when your mind is at rest.
The silence in your words is well displayed.
June 9th, 2021 12:06
Stolen moment
dusk arising said:
Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does happen.... at least it does for me.
Living with tinitus those moments are rare.
June 9th, 2021 02:44
dusk arising said:
Yes, you have captured something intangible here which really does happen.... at least it does for me.
Living with tinitus those moments are rare.
June 9th, 2021 02:44
Stolen moment
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, that silence that comes into our lives can be so meaningful within us.
Andy
https://youtu.be/AWVUp12XPpU
June 9th, 2021 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words SC, that silence that comes into our lives can be so meaningful within us.
Andy
https://youtu.be/AWVUp12XPpU
June 9th, 2021 00:59
Stolen moment
orchidee said:
A fine write SC.
We\'re ranting about annoying expressions, such as \'At this moment in time\', and \'Basically...\' starting every sentence! lol.
June 9th, 2021 00:58
orchidee said:
A fine write SC.
We\'re ranting about annoying expressions, such as \'At this moment in time\', and \'Basically...\' starting every sentence! lol.
June 9th, 2021 00:58
Stolen moment
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. The sound of silence also soothes you. It connects you with God.
June 9th, 2021 00:40
Jayasree said:
Beautiful. The sound of silence also soothes you. It connects you with God.
June 9th, 2021 00:40
A taste of salt in the air
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery that brings the scene so alive - - this must fly into my faves for future reads my friend.
June 8th, 2021 15:58
Fay Slimm. said:
What a fine tale of the sea and those who go down to it and such imagery that brings the scene so alive - - this must fly into my faves for future reads my friend.
June 8th, 2021 15:58
A taste of salt in the air
SureshG said:
Loved your post and the imagery it portrayed.
June 8th, 2021 12:32
SureshG said:
Loved your post and the imagery it portrayed.
June 8th, 2021 12:32
A taste of salt in the air
L. B. Mek said:
\'The nets are cast
like whirling dervishes
through skillfully sculpted hands,
Fairies momentarily tattoo
upon the seas amebous body
before absorbing away
into translucency\'..
fantastic imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 8th, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'The nets are cast
like whirling dervishes
through skillfully sculpted hands,
Fairies momentarily tattoo
upon the seas amebous body
before absorbing away
into translucency\'..
fantastic imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
June 8th, 2021 06:09
A taste of salt in the air
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a great deal of respect for those who tackle the sea in their boats and bring food back for others.
Good words SC.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I have a great deal of respect for those who tackle the sea in their boats and bring food back for others.
Good words SC.
Andy
June 8th, 2021 00:34
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