Comments received on poems by Saxon Crow
Finite
L. B. Mek said:
(if dust, eventually
floats up, and up
far above cloud
will we, too
become space dwellers?
this space
we\'re all so desperate
to conquer
is it merely, accumulative
of death\'s debris, be it stars
or what was once, living matter...
or does the universe, end
when we take our last breath
like this is all a reality attuned
to one individual
like the truman show, but more
morbid, more perverse
and thus all life, is less meaningful
a lie, far beyond that Matrix
horror
or maybe, it\'s all
just cyclic nature...)
always endlessly, intriguing
to dive down that \'great perhaps\'
rabbit hole
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2023 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
(if dust, eventually
floats up, and up
far above cloud
will we, too
become space dwellers?
this space
we\'re all so desperate
to conquer
is it merely, accumulative
of death\'s debris, be it stars
or what was once, living matter...
or does the universe, end
when we take our last breath
like this is all a reality attuned
to one individual
like the truman show, but more
morbid, more perverse
and thus all life, is less meaningful
a lie, far beyond that Matrix
horror
or maybe, it\'s all
just cyclic nature...)
always endlessly, intriguing
to dive down that \'great perhaps\'
rabbit hole
a great write, dear Poet
thanks for sharing
May 26th, 2023 04:53
Life Line
hotidris said:
Excellent poem about how we bury ourselves while avoiding the fact that we all shall one day die.
May 25th, 2023 11:35
hotidris said:
Excellent poem about how we bury ourselves while avoiding the fact that we all shall one day die.
May 25th, 2023 11:35
Life Line
Neville said:
say it like it is why don\'tcha ..
I thoroughly enjoyed Life Line and must confess, such thoughts have been going round and round in my head for some time now ... Neville
May 25th, 2023 01:43
Neville said:
say it like it is why don\'tcha ..
I thoroughly enjoyed Life Line and must confess, such thoughts have been going round and round in my head for some time now ... Neville
May 25th, 2023 01:43
Life Line
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words SC. Our time on this earth is but a microsecond of our life.
Andy
May 25th, 2023 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words SC. Our time on this earth is but a microsecond of our life.
Andy
May 25th, 2023 01:14
Drifting sands
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
It reminds me - I can never find \'tomorrow\'. When it gets here, it\'s always \'today\'. Doh! Strange that! lol.
I can\'t say I know more than a smattering of Tennyson myself.
May 24th, 2023 02:06
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
It reminds me - I can never find \'tomorrow\'. When it gets here, it\'s always \'today\'. Doh! Strange that! lol.
I can\'t say I know more than a smattering of Tennyson myself.
May 24th, 2023 02:06
Drifting sands
Goldfinch60 said:
May that journey never end and be filled with joy and love.
Andy
May 24th, 2023 02:01
Goldfinch60 said:
May that journey never end and be filled with joy and love.
Andy
May 24th, 2023 02:01
Drifting sands
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Drifting sands” by Saxon Crow
You speak of the currents taking you along. See the poem “The brook” by Tennyson.
“I chatter, chatter, as I flow
To join the brimming river,
For men may come and men may go,
But I go on forever.”
--Alfred Tennyson (1709-1892) : “The brook.”
As a poet, you go on forever…
Soman Ragavan. 24 May, 2023. //
May 24th, 2023 01:38
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Drifting sands” by Saxon Crow
You speak of the currents taking you along. See the poem “The brook” by Tennyson.
“I chatter, chatter, as I flow
To join the brimming river,
For men may come and men may go,
But I go on forever.”
--Alfred Tennyson (1709-1892) : “The brook.”
As a poet, you go on forever…
Soman Ragavan. 24 May, 2023. //
May 24th, 2023 01:38
Remember that time is finite
Accidental Poet said:
Time is a fine line between what we do and don\'t do. Well penned Sax. 😉
May 14th, 2023 05:42
Accidental Poet said:
Time is a fine line between what we do and don\'t do. Well penned Sax. 😉
May 14th, 2023 05:42
Remember that time is finite
orchidee said:
We can spend a moment being annoyed at those who say \'At this moment in time....\' or who say \'Basically....\' in every sentence, or other waffle! lol.
May 14th, 2023 05:23
orchidee said:
We can spend a moment being annoyed at those who say \'At this moment in time....\' or who say \'Basically....\' in every sentence, or other waffle! lol.
May 14th, 2023 05:23
Civilization
Doggerel Dave said:
As a steam train aficionado I like it even if the ending, more than likely the right conclusion, I cannot.
Got the rhythm, I like; I’m no museo, but get your blues man on to it, if possible….
Worth the effort you took, Sax.
March 19th, 2023 18:14
Doggerel Dave said:
As a steam train aficionado I like it even if the ending, more than likely the right conclusion, I cannot.
Got the rhythm, I like; I’m no museo, but get your blues man on to it, if possible….
Worth the effort you took, Sax.
March 19th, 2023 18:14
Enigma
Doggerel Dave said:
You may never know in this wonderful world of wallopers....
February 10th, 2023 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
You may never know in this wonderful world of wallopers....
February 10th, 2023 19:40
Christmas
orchidee said:
Good write SC. I saw a robin in, erm, June, I think it was! So it must be Happy Easter by now. lol. Yep, I reckon so!
December 26th, 2022 03:28
orchidee said:
Good write SC. I saw a robin in, erm, June, I think it was! So it must be Happy Easter by now. lol. Yep, I reckon so!
December 26th, 2022 03:28
Christmas
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it has gone but all is well with us SC.
Dad.
December 26th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it has gone but all is well with us SC.
Dad.
December 26th, 2022 01:58
Wonderful World
L. B. Mek said:
at a time when even imagining such a world
is a stretch, for most
your words offer comfort, in their own way
for we must first, be able to envision
the future\'s we wish, to cultivate
however utopianly unlikely, they may be..
lol
thank you! a necessary write
with wonderful flow
December 23rd, 2022 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
at a time when even imagining such a world
is a stretch, for most
your words offer comfort, in their own way
for we must first, be able to envision
the future\'s we wish, to cultivate
however utopianly unlikely, they may be..
lol
thank you! a necessary write
with wonderful flow
December 23rd, 2022 05:24
Wonderful World
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
I got muddled - Re 8 billion. Does a billion have 9 or 12 zeros? In more modern \'today\' times, it\'s 9 zeros now.
I was involved in some daft puzzle - how many paper clips joined together would be needed to make a chain around the Earth?
Sort of everyday things one need to know. Doh! Several million (which has 6 zeros!).
December 20th, 2022 03:12
orchidee said:
Good write SC.
I got muddled - Re 8 billion. Does a billion have 9 or 12 zeros? In more modern \'today\' times, it\'s 9 zeros now.
I was involved in some daft puzzle - how many paper clips joined together would be needed to make a chain around the Earth?
Sort of everyday things one need to know. Doh! Several million (which has 6 zeros!).
December 20th, 2022 03:12
Wonderful World
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing)) I actually believe the world will be a more peaceful place one day
December 20th, 2022 03:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing)) I actually believe the world will be a more peaceful place one day
December 20th, 2022 03:04
Wonderful World
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautiful irony/satire/fantasy there, Sax.
December 20th, 2022 01:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Beautiful irony/satire/fantasy there, Sax.
December 20th, 2022 01:42
Wonderful World
Goldfinch60 said:
It may happen one day SC where harmony is there for all of us. What a wonderful world it would be.
Andy
December 20th, 2022 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
It may happen one day SC where harmony is there for all of us. What a wonderful world it would be.
Andy
December 20th, 2022 01:38
Naturally Tidy?
Doggerel Dave said:
Great imagery in this parable, Sax.
Unfortunately Mum will be exerting more punishment yet. I hope her very immature child eventually grows up and takes some responsibility.
December 19th, 2022 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Great imagery in this parable, Sax.
Unfortunately Mum will be exerting more punishment yet. I hope her very immature child eventually grows up and takes some responsibility.
December 19th, 2022 18:59
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