Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
That vast C of Perspective
bellflower said:
I agree with you completely. Indeed we are crazy people.... sometimes we achieve in our craziness while other times we miss. Beautiful.
September 5th, 2022 01:14
bellflower said:
I agree with you completely. Indeed we are crazy people.... sometimes we achieve in our craziness while other times we miss. Beautiful.
September 5th, 2022 01:14
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
Olivia. said:
consuming any n all, momentary
escapes
thumbs, endlessly flicking up
eyes, darting wildly in search for tiktok
distractions, ignoring
that true tick-tock of our finite, futures
I really enjoyed this part especially!
Time is tic -tocking away.
August 30th, 2022 17:34
Olivia. said:
consuming any n all, momentary
escapes
thumbs, endlessly flicking up
eyes, darting wildly in search for tiktok
distractions, ignoring
that true tick-tock of our finite, futures
I really enjoyed this part especially!
Time is tic -tocking away.
August 30th, 2022 17:34
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. This was quite a bit to be said. Poetry and sincerity should go hand in hand, if not it shows. The title is the indicator. As per usual well crafted and passionately emotive.
August 27th, 2022 07:32
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. This was quite a bit to be said. Poetry and sincerity should go hand in hand, if not it shows. The title is the indicator. As per usual well crafted and passionately emotive.
August 27th, 2022 07:32
That vast C of Perspective
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and well composed poem that contains so much truth. The closer to the end I come the less time I have to waste and contemplation is not the best option. I wondered if all the lines beginning with C could be taken for \"see\" as in \"I see\" or contemplate? Sometimes I read too much into things.
August 24th, 2022 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful and well composed poem that contains so much truth. The closer to the end I come the less time I have to waste and contemplation is not the best option. I wondered if all the lines beginning with C could be taken for \"see\" as in \"I see\" or contemplate? Sometimes I read too much into things.
August 24th, 2022 07:22
That vast C of Perspective
Hakikur Rahman said:
Exactly. Many of us wilder in the past rather than living in the present. Great share.
August 24th, 2022 01:15
Hakikur Rahman said:
Exactly. Many of us wilder in the past rather than living in the present. Great share.
August 24th, 2022 01:15
That vast C of Perspective
Fay Slimm. said:
So telling these words Mek on the dangers in too much contemplation.
August 23rd, 2022 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
So telling these words Mek on the dangers in too much contemplation.
August 23rd, 2022 04:56
That vast C of Perspective
Bella Shepard said:
How true your words are. The older I get, the greater the feeling to act more and contemplate less. True words of wisdom!
August 22nd, 2022 14:12
Bella Shepard said:
How true your words are. The older I get, the greater the feeling to act more and contemplate less. True words of wisdom!
August 22nd, 2022 14:12
That vast C of Perspective
crypticbard said:
The contemplative life that is filled with action, both within and outside of!
August 22nd, 2022 05:34
crypticbard said:
The contemplative life that is filled with action, both within and outside of!
August 22nd, 2022 05:34
That vast C of Perspective
spilleronsheet said:
With the poetry flew the real lessons…wasted more time on contemplating than acting…sure a jewel of words…
August 22nd, 2022 03:57
spilleronsheet said:
With the poetry flew the real lessons…wasted more time on contemplating than acting…sure a jewel of words…
August 22nd, 2022 03:57
That vast C of Perspective
Aradhya said:
Your words feel so real and poetic at the same time. Beautifully done Mek absolutely stunning!🤩
August 22nd, 2022 03:44
Aradhya said:
Your words feel so real and poetic at the same time. Beautifully done Mek absolutely stunning!🤩
August 22nd, 2022 03:44
Regret’s, confessional
Hakikur Rahman said:
Passions and emotions flow through the entire canvas of the composition. Enjoyed reading it.
August 21st, 2022 22:37
Hakikur Rahman said:
Passions and emotions flow through the entire canvas of the composition. Enjoyed reading it.
August 21st, 2022 22:37
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
dean langmuir said:
good write LB,enjoy your day
August 19th, 2022 07:54
dean langmuir said:
good write LB,enjoy your day
August 19th, 2022 07:54
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
a thousand wishes said:
and tbh i agree with it, this poem is definitely in my top 3 favorites
August 19th, 2022 07:10
a thousand wishes said:
and tbh i agree with it, this poem is definitely in my top 3 favorites
August 19th, 2022 07:10
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
a thousand wishes said:
ummm, this is absolutely fantastic. I mean for starters, your vocabulary is so beautiful, that\'s a really nice word bank. Plus, the raw emotion in this poem is bursting at the seams. TBH c in terms of experience your work is much older and more mature. I love it
August 19th, 2022 07:09
a thousand wishes said:
ummm, this is absolutely fantastic. I mean for starters, your vocabulary is so beautiful, that\'s a really nice word bank. Plus, the raw emotion in this poem is bursting at the seams. TBH c in terms of experience your work is much older and more mature. I love it
August 19th, 2022 07:09
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
dusk arising said:
You voice well the concerns of any of us thoughtful writers who have seen many moons. Sometimes I challenge myself not to write so obviously about me but i\'m sure you, together with any who have read my outpourings on mps, can see it as just a ruse. It\'s stil decrepit old dusk waffling and whingeing away about life.
Long and short of it for me is all about what motivates me to write on any occasion. Todays missive was a spurof the moment job inspired by a quick browse through todays MPS titles. Sudden inspiration (which has been waining of late) and i went with the flow.
Enjoyed the journey reading your post today and you certainly covered some ground.
August 19th, 2022 04:54
dusk arising said:
You voice well the concerns of any of us thoughtful writers who have seen many moons. Sometimes I challenge myself not to write so obviously about me but i\'m sure you, together with any who have read my outpourings on mps, can see it as just a ruse. It\'s stil decrepit old dusk waffling and whingeing away about life.
Long and short of it for me is all about what motivates me to write on any occasion. Todays missive was a spurof the moment job inspired by a quick browse through todays MPS titles. Sudden inspiration (which has been waining of late) and i went with the flow.
Enjoyed the journey reading your post today and you certainly covered some ground.
August 19th, 2022 04:54
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
crypticbard said:
One of the ways to rid poetry of the “I’s” and “me’s” is to write in 2nd or 3rd person, a projection and sublimation of sorts. Then the metaphors begin to come alive. Or so it would seem. 😊
August 19th, 2022 03:46
crypticbard said:
One of the ways to rid poetry of the “I’s” and “me’s” is to write in 2nd or 3rd person, a projection and sublimation of sorts. Then the metaphors begin to come alive. Or so it would seem. 😊
August 19th, 2022 03:46
A rudderless life’s, rhythmicality
Fay Slimm. said:
This outpouring of need for writers to reassess has to be the best of your best dear Mek - your talented word-play denounces the I-age and pleads like no other - - into my list of favourites goes this grand jewel for poets like me to read and digest.
August 19th, 2022 03:03
Fay Slimm. said:
This outpouring of need for writers to reassess has to be the best of your best dear Mek - your talented word-play denounces the I-age and pleads like no other - - into my list of favourites goes this grand jewel for poets like me to read and digest.
August 19th, 2022 03:03
Regret’s, confessional
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mek about loves ups and downs. Did you ever get together with the true love that was obviously there?
Andy
August 16th, 2022 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Mek about loves ups and downs. Did you ever get together with the true love that was obviously there?
Andy
August 16th, 2022 00:36
Regret’s, confessional
John Prophet said:
Stubbed toe once again! Been there done that. 🥶wonderful write.
August 15th, 2022 13:31
John Prophet said:
Stubbed toe once again! Been there done that. 🥶wonderful write.
August 15th, 2022 13:31
Regret’s, confessional
Bella Shepard said:
Love blossoms, suffers, cools, is lost but somehow not forgotten. You had me on every word. Great write!
August 15th, 2022 10:55
Bella Shepard said:
Love blossoms, suffers, cools, is lost but somehow not forgotten. You had me on every word. Great write!
August 15th, 2022 10:55
Regret’s, confessional
MDStone said:
Such an engaging and suspenseful read. I rode the rollercoaster of emotion through the each line of time and circumstance. Feeling the sting of regret as the last words penetrated my soul. As always, thank you LB, for sharing the stuff of life that allows us to feel, breath, and experience it with you.
August 15th, 2022 05:55
MDStone said:
Such an engaging and suspenseful read. I rode the rollercoaster of emotion through the each line of time and circumstance. Feeling the sting of regret as the last words penetrated my soul. As always, thank you LB, for sharing the stuff of life that allows us to feel, breath, and experience it with you.
August 15th, 2022 05:55
‘hot-hot!’
Goldfinch60 said:
Come on Autumn, where are you?
Good words Mek on these heated days .
Andy
August 13th, 2022 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Come on Autumn, where are you?
Good words Mek on these heated days .
Andy
August 13th, 2022 00:29
‘hot-hot!’
dusk arising said:
This summer aint happening here for me. Stay indoors and recover is my plan and live for more comfortable days.
August 12th, 2022 09:47
dusk arising said:
This summer aint happening here for me. Stay indoors and recover is my plan and live for more comfortable days.
August 12th, 2022 09:47
‘hot-hot!’
dean langmuir said:
Stay cool,LB,we had a wave last year and us canucks in Alberta are really not use to that,-35c is just another day but 35+c we\'re cranky,oh ya nice write,you take care
August 12th, 2022 08:57
dean langmuir said:
Stay cool,LB,we had a wave last year and us canucks in Alberta are really not use to that,-35c is just another day but 35+c we\'re cranky,oh ya nice write,you take care
August 12th, 2022 08:57
‘hot-hot!’
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write LB. Me? I always say I\'d rather sweat than shiver.
August 12th, 2022 05:01
Accidental Poet said:
Awesome write LB. Me? I always say I\'d rather sweat than shiver.
August 12th, 2022 05:01
‘hot-hot!’
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Spring is so much nicer and this heat this summer is uncomfortable .
A good writing Mek .. love your mention of butterfly’s
The grass looks so dry and almost like hay .. wjth all this heat
August 12th, 2022 03:25
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Spring is so much nicer and this heat this summer is uncomfortable .
A good writing Mek .. love your mention of butterfly’s
The grass looks so dry and almost like hay .. wjth all this heat
August 12th, 2022 03:25
That who in me, I’d like to be
MendedFences27 said:
As they say, \"Money can\'t buy you Love, but it can buy you a car, so that you can drive around looking for it.\" Hell, I\'d rather be washing lettuce than counting money any day. You can\'t eat money. Money is for the Power brokers. It\'s their way of keeping score. Take away money, and they are just like us, washing lettuce to prep the salad. An excellent poem. Nature over material things. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2022 11:56
MendedFences27 said:
As they say, \"Money can\'t buy you Love, but it can buy you a car, so that you can drive around looking for it.\" Hell, I\'d rather be washing lettuce than counting money any day. You can\'t eat money. Money is for the Power brokers. It\'s their way of keeping score. Take away money, and they are just like us, washing lettuce to prep the salad. An excellent poem. Nature over material things. - Phil A.
August 11th, 2022 11:56
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