Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
A common miracle
Albert Elod said:
Master piece, i understand the earthquakes it s jelousea, i like the metafoa \'\'planted\'\'
dimming shine
of a late summer’s night
unable, to dim the glow
draping them, from head to toe
this is flawless verses
but why \'\'green eyes\'\' ?
entrancing flames, emanating
from her guardian’s, chest
highlighting, the binding path
illuminated: by their drunken hearts
how much beauty hides in those final verses.
i also compared drunkenness with love in an old poem
April 10th, 2022 04:09
Albert Elod said:
Master piece, i understand the earthquakes it s jelousea, i like the metafoa \'\'planted\'\'
dimming shine
of a late summer’s night
unable, to dim the glow
draping them, from head to toe
this is flawless verses
but why \'\'green eyes\'\' ?
entrancing flames, emanating
from her guardian’s, chest
highlighting, the binding path
illuminated: by their drunken hearts
how much beauty hides in those final verses.
i also compared drunkenness with love in an old poem
April 10th, 2022 04:09
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Annemarie said:
Beautiful! Thank you for your words of such kindness and care for so many. You’re writing is a gift to others.
March 27th, 2022 08:34
Annemarie said:
Beautiful! Thank you for your words of such kindness and care for so many. You’re writing is a gift to others.
March 27th, 2022 08:34
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Neville said:
India Arie seems to have known a thing or two ... if one appreciates the cruciality of \'The unity of opposites\' and a owns a decent set of scales to balance things on .. then they wont go far wrong ... but I digress .. .. so please excuse me,
.. I too extol the virtues of the fairer sex and like you, also strive to never be an encumbrance ........ not never in a month of Ladies Days ....... Neville ............................ :)
March 10th, 2022 12:40
Neville said:
India Arie seems to have known a thing or two ... if one appreciates the cruciality of \'The unity of opposites\' and a owns a decent set of scales to balance things on .. then they wont go far wrong ... but I digress .. .. so please excuse me,
.. I too extol the virtues of the fairer sex and like you, also strive to never be an encumbrance ........ not never in a month of Ladies Days ....... Neville ............................ :)
March 10th, 2022 12:40
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Hakikur Rahman said:
Nicely crafted one. Enjoyed reading it.
March 9th, 2022 22:56
Hakikur Rahman said:
Nicely crafted one. Enjoyed reading it.
March 9th, 2022 22:56
Why, I celebrate March 8th
spilleronsheet said:
A very sincere and truthful reply
Not to pluck the stars
But adorn the earth to revive her with highest respect
No words of moon
But truly a genuine smile
Great one dear Mek
I know I am a bit late though
March 9th, 2022 14:38
spilleronsheet said:
A very sincere and truthful reply
Not to pluck the stars
But adorn the earth to revive her with highest respect
No words of moon
But truly a genuine smile
Great one dear Mek
I know I am a bit late though
March 9th, 2022 14:38
Why, I celebrate March 8th
John Prophet said:
Way to go LBM. The women that hold us together
March 8th, 2022 13:37
John Prophet said:
Way to go LBM. The women that hold us together
March 8th, 2022 13:37
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Happy Women\'s Day! \"Diving feminine energy!\" ✨
March 8th, 2022 13:30
Rocky Lagou said:
Yes Happy Women\'s Day! \"Diving feminine energy!\" ✨
March 8th, 2022 13:30
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Vamsi Sudha said:
That\'s a wonderful Promise Mek , Great Tribute !! 👍
March 8th, 2022 09:19
Vamsi Sudha said:
That\'s a wonderful Promise Mek , Great Tribute !! 👍
March 8th, 2022 09:19
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Ifeanyichukwu said:
Mek, you\'ve echoed our hearts brilliantly. Love to all women of the world!
March 8th, 2022 09:08
Ifeanyichukwu said:
Mek, you\'ve echoed our hearts brilliantly. Love to all women of the world!
March 8th, 2022 09:08
Why, I celebrate March 8th
Poetic Dan said:
Fabulously done as the least we can do is not be hindering their limits, for without a doubt there\'s more light when they are in it!
Thank you for sharing my friend
March 8th, 2022 07:03
Poetic Dan said:
Fabulously done as the least we can do is not be hindering their limits, for without a doubt there\'s more light when they are in it!
Thank you for sharing my friend
March 8th, 2022 07:03
Why, I celebrate March 8th
dusk arising said:
Your positivity shines through this one LBM.
March 8th, 2022 04:10
dusk arising said:
Your positivity shines through this one LBM.
March 8th, 2022 04:10
Love: Connate
Neville said:
my word, wot a clever fellow thou art .. a message truer than true & so very hued dear Mek ............................. N
February 18th, 2022 16:37
Neville said:
my word, wot a clever fellow thou art .. a message truer than true & so very hued dear Mek ............................. N
February 18th, 2022 16:37
Love: Connate
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, L.B.
Happy Valentine day I\'ll have cup of tea a chocolate and think of thee.
February 14th, 2022 17:15
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, L.B.
Happy Valentine day I\'ll have cup of tea a chocolate and think of thee.
February 14th, 2022 17:15
Love: Connate
spilleronsheet said:
An ode to true love
A selfless one
Not obscure
Not insane
No contours defined
No one soul identified
But love for all
And so dignified
Which lines keeps me hooked
It’s a fraternity that keeps me booked
Nothing but this poetry in all kind
A love for all, not human but humanity defined
Totally bow in honours of the beautiful write
And the ending a thunder claps defined
“ refute hate and choose, love’s warmth of oneness”
February 14th, 2022 13:37
spilleronsheet said:
An ode to true love
A selfless one
Not obscure
Not insane
No contours defined
No one soul identified
But love for all
And so dignified
Which lines keeps me hooked
It’s a fraternity that keeps me booked
Nothing but this poetry in all kind
A love for all, not human but humanity defined
Totally bow in honours of the beautiful write
And the ending a thunder claps defined
“ refute hate and choose, love’s warmth of oneness”
February 14th, 2022 13:37
Love: Connate
Rocky Lagou said:
This was written with a certain finesse that I just can\'t pin down but can definitely appreciate. Beautifully written! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 10:04
Rocky Lagou said:
This was written with a certain finesse that I just can\'t pin down but can definitely appreciate. Beautifully written! 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 10:04
Love: Connate
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read the classic approach to this special day of reviewing what love really means - A beautiful rendering of the message behind Keat\'s quoted reminder dear Mek.
February 14th, 2022 06:38
Fay Slimm. said:
A pleasure to read the classic approach to this special day of reviewing what love really means - A beautiful rendering of the message behind Keat\'s quoted reminder dear Mek.
February 14th, 2022 06:38
Love: Connate
Rozina said:
Fine writing indeed. So appropriate for all today.
February 14th, 2022 06:04
Rozina said:
Fine writing indeed. So appropriate for all today.
February 14th, 2022 06:04
Love: Connate
Vamsi Sudha said:
Lovely poem Mek !! Happy valentines day , and have a great Day !!
February 14th, 2022 05:58
Vamsi Sudha said:
Lovely poem Mek !! Happy valentines day , and have a great Day !!
February 14th, 2022 05:58
Love: Connate
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem of love and love for all, a token of compassion and loving vibes. Loved the poetic lines lots as well. . Kudos. !!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:49
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A lovely poem of love and love for all, a token of compassion and loving vibes. Loved the poetic lines lots as well. . Kudos. !!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
And
Happy valentines day, poets.
February 14th, 2022 05:49
Love: Connate
dusk arising said:
She counted the number of times
she\'d had it off on valentines
\"dear you are my seventh
or is it eleventh?
you\'re all such randy old swines\"
just keeping it in the classical poetic style for you sir.
February 14th, 2022 04:50
dusk arising said:
She counted the number of times
she\'d had it off on valentines
\"dear you are my seventh
or is it eleventh?
you\'re all such randy old swines\"
just keeping it in the classical poetic style for you sir.
February 14th, 2022 04:50
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
sorenbarrett said:
Inspiring words. There are too few who are willing to do what it takes
February 1st, 2022 21:47
sorenbarrett said:
Inspiring words. There are too few who are willing to do what it takes
February 1st, 2022 21:47
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
Hakikur Rahman said:
A nice portray on life. Yes, it is good to be grow together.
January 27th, 2022 22:02
Hakikur Rahman said:
A nice portray on life. Yes, it is good to be grow together.
January 27th, 2022 22:02
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
Neville said:
as far as I am concerned, these are fitting words indeed for a thoroughly fine & otherwise decent fellow ... RIP big man the long gig is over ................................ Neville
January 27th, 2022 09:00
Neville said:
as far as I am concerned, these are fitting words indeed for a thoroughly fine & otherwise decent fellow ... RIP big man the long gig is over ................................ Neville
January 27th, 2022 09:00
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
Dove said:
Beautiful tribute, and words to heed by!
January 25th, 2022 10:45
Dove said:
Beautiful tribute, and words to heed by!
January 25th, 2022 10:45
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
Jerry Reynolds said:
Splendid write, L.B.
January 24th, 2022 16:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Splendid write, L.B.
January 24th, 2022 16:32
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The story of how he got his nickname was in the news,.. When he was on his school football team,he accidentally stepped on the coaches foot,and the coach said \"get off my foot you hunk of meatloaf\"😂 He was a talent to be rivaled with,but now he\'s forever in the hearts of so many,..all you have to do is take a drive,turn on the radio and he\'ll be there in the paradise by the dashboard light. Great message here L.B.😀
January 24th, 2022 12:44
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
The story of how he got his nickname was in the news,.. When he was on his school football team,he accidentally stepped on the coaches foot,and the coach said \"get off my foot you hunk of meatloaf\"😂 He was a talent to be rivaled with,but now he\'s forever in the hearts of so many,..all you have to do is take a drive,turn on the radio and he\'ll be there in the paradise by the dashboard light. Great message here L.B.😀
January 24th, 2022 12:44
Dawning of the Once lost and now, Found
dusk arising said:
Yep, but i feel like I\'m a boy scout now dib dib dib. I\'ve always been the careless selfish type and will rob old ladies without a second thought but on reading your words today something came over me and i don\'t mean the pigeon on next doors roof just shat on me.
Do you really think i could turn myself around and become a do gooder? Most of the old ladies round here hide when i\'m around so i dont think theyre going to let me be nice. I suppose I could try.
Always sad when a \'star\' dies ut its what we all are destined to do.
January 24th, 2022 11:32
dusk arising said:
Yep, but i feel like I\'m a boy scout now dib dib dib. I\'ve always been the careless selfish type and will rob old ladies without a second thought but on reading your words today something came over me and i don\'t mean the pigeon on next doors roof just shat on me.
Do you really think i could turn myself around and become a do gooder? Most of the old ladies round here hide when i\'m around so i dont think theyre going to let me be nice. I suppose I could try.
Always sad when a \'star\' dies ut its what we all are destined to do.
January 24th, 2022 11:32
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