Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



distilled, Miscommunication
Jon Nakapalau said:

Powerful meditation!

May 20th, 2022 15:03

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
Michael Edwards said:

An epic write which held me pending the great conclusion.

May 20th, 2022 14:42

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
Saxon Crow said:

Marriage. It\'s the only solution!

A great epic piece of poetry LB. Some boundaries cannot be crossed!

May 20th, 2022 13:55

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
Saxon Crow said:

Marriage. It\'s the only solution!

A great epic piece of poetry LB. Some boundaries cannot be crossed!

May 20th, 2022 13:54

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
MendedFences27 said:

This sexually charged lament draws the reader along to its hopeful end. A truly poetic slide. I loved this poem. - Phil A.

May 20th, 2022 11:06

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow L.B. this was one rollercoaster of a poem. I\'ve never heard sex so aptly euphemized until I read \"sensual gymnastics\" haha. No but seriously this was such a spot-on descriptor of how complex relationships are. It can start as a \"one night stand\" and end in never talking again. Hope you can see eye-to-eye again.

May 20th, 2022 08:30

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
MDStone said:

Love the expression and passion LB. Oh the slippery slope of connection, the messiness of relationships, and the beauty of fulfillment.

May 20th, 2022 05:55

of BFF’s till we trespass, attraction’s gates
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful words Mek .. engaging and interesting to read . ))

May 20th, 2022 03:16

distilled, Miscommunication
MendedFences27 said:

I\'ll just say that there are not enough adjectives to describe everyone in this world. Men will never understand women and vice versa. And that is the spice of life.
A thoughtful and well written poem that makes one think. Poetry at its prime purpose. - Phil A

May 19th, 2022 13:26

distilled, Miscommunication
Paul Bell said:

From what I\'ve seen out there, the roles could be reversed. Guys seem to bitch more than women, stay in the toilet longer getting ready, and have stopped drinking in favour of the gym. Give me back the cave man, you know that guy

May 17th, 2022 11:41

distilled, Miscommunication
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Mek, patience is a virtue that must be within us all.

Andy

May 17th, 2022 00:27

distilled, Miscommunication
Rozina said:

I believe the message is we should not jump to conclusions and make a judgement before having all the facts. All of us. Key word is patience.

May 17th, 2022 00:11

distilled, Miscommunication
Saxon Crow said:

LB you wrote it perfectly! Every word so very true.

May 16th, 2022 15:20

distilled, Miscommunication
Rocky Lagou said:

This is great L.B.! Sometimes we\'re quick to judge another or to interpret something wrong without giving it a second thought. Especially when it comes to love. A wonderful poem!

May 16th, 2022 09:15

distilled, Miscommunication
Teddy.15 said:

LoL are you the best marriage councillor in the world mek? LoL loved this so much 😂

May 16th, 2022 08:17

distilled, Miscommunication
crypticbard said:

All for that - patience and working things out! Thanks for sharing. /Rik.

May 16th, 2022 07:08

distilled, Miscommunication
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear Mek !!
True to eyes but tough to heart !! Loved this line.. \"has been marinated and lamented - upon
for hours, days, weeks
or a lifetime \"
Ladies wait a long time before a burst out. This should not be advantage for the men. Better they understand us before the hurricane sets in..:) Indeed a thoughtful write !!

Was this from your experiences Mek ?? 🤣😂

May 16th, 2022 03:59

Empower, your awareness!
Hakikur Rahman said:

An expressive composition. Delighted to read.

May 15th, 2022 21:08

Empower, your awareness!
Neville said:


these words were simply crying out to be writ .. I personally believe a lot of decisions & actions either one way or another are not taken through fear of maybe getting it wrong .. I shall send you Mek my treatise on risk assessment, risk management and positive risk .. in the meantime, we need more of this ............................. Neville


May 14th, 2022 02:13

Empower, your awareness!
Goldfinch60 said:

Integrity is another one of those things that have gone missing in our world. Always help others in trouble.

Andy

May 14th, 2022 00:49

A Rodeo of A Poem
blacksparrow79 said:

Sometimes, even bookended rhymes

or schemes, can’t make

our posing for effect, half

-truth’s flow, between doubting pulses

I love this line. My poetic pulse is often full of doubt. Your work is magical. And I look forward to reading so much here.

May 13th, 2022 20:00

Empower, your awareness!
Rozina said:

Compassion. Very, very true Mek. Thank you for this poem.

May 13th, 2022 18:14

Empower, your awareness!
dusk arising said:

So sad that we need to be reminded.

May 13th, 2022 09:13

Empower, your awareness!
Rocky Lagou said:

A beautiful poem L.B. I feel so many overlook and neglect other\'s feelings and emotions and would rather pass it off than try to communicate and share compassion. I know in this hateful world, it\'s abundant. I hope for more kindness.


May 13th, 2022 08:41

Empower, your awareness!
dean langmuir said:

Nice write,LB,you take care.

May 13th, 2022 07:58

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Distant View said:

We are made more aware of children suffering, yet still it goes on. The system is failing many of them, for sure. So sad.

May 13th, 2022 04:46

Empower, your awareness!
Paul Bell said:

A lot of the time the public do get involved, social workers get involved, yet at the end a kid will die, then the inquiry starts, and it goes on and on.
In a lot of these cases, the signs are stark, yet they give the parents the benifit of the doubt.

May 13th, 2022 04:40

Empower, your awareness!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

An expressive writing , Mek . So important to show compassion towards those who may be suffering .. in any way , I guess .

You know some people can be so cold and lacking in compassion towards people who are hurting in life

I know it’s not the same thing but I have mental health problems .. and my neighbours have acted unkind and sometimes rude

Compassion is so important .. a cold uncaring behaviour truly helps nobody

May 13th, 2022 03:51

Empower, your awareness!
Saxon Crow said:

Help, in whatever way you can

and above all else

just demonstrate a little

Compassion

let that scared, haunted individual

you Witness,

Recognise

Empathy’s existence: in our world!

So very true. Compassion is so underrated but far more definite and real than the subtle ambiguities of love.

May 13th, 2022 03:44

May’s magic
crypticbard said:

That can only be described as melifluous. And the music of Helene Smith, that brought it to a whole new level. Reminded me somehow of that old Sidney Pottier film To Sir With Love, somehow. Random, but there. thanks L.B. for sharing. /Rik.

May 12th, 2022 23:36



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