Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Hour of your absent, weight
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
NewWolf said:
Your comment about my work blew me away, well, ive never shared my work, ,,,,Then I read your masterpiece and OMG!! It\'s an honor to have you read my work .
February 7th, 2023 10:13
Hour of your absent, weight
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Sakwa Franc said:
I knew it ... I just knew it such great work my brother from Africa
Good work
February 6th, 2023 05:42
Hour of your absent, weight
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this one made me cry. I felt like I was reading my own story, my own emotions, my own thoughts, it was haunting. This is art, no more to be said.
February 6th, 2023 05:02
Hour of your absent, weight
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Such an attention grabber this piece of poetic mastery dear L.B. - the time of regret poised so clearly after so many years is so very relatable in this honest gem of a write - no doubt about it I must have Hour of Your Absent Weight in my list of favourites.
February 6th, 2023 04:44
Hour of your absent, weight
Neville said:
I am so glad I got up early this mane and reached this page before anyone else .. I could not have bared it had anyone got here before me .. this is a masterpiece brother Mek and no kidding .. see I even added the g at the end of kiddin as a mark of my absolute respect ... any poet regardless of who they might be or think they might be would be proud to have \'Hour of your absent, weight\' in their portfolio .. Neville
February 6th, 2023 04:05
Neville said:
I am so glad I got up early this mane and reached this page before anyone else .. I could not have bared it had anyone got here before me .. this is a masterpiece brother Mek and no kidding .. see I even added the g at the end of kiddin as a mark of my absolute respect ... any poet regardless of who they might be or think they might be would be proud to have \'Hour of your absent, weight\' in their portfolio .. Neville
February 6th, 2023 04:05
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
Joan Peters said:
The incredible talent of women.
February 3rd, 2023 09:41
Joan Peters said:
The incredible talent of women.
February 3rd, 2023 09:41
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
Neville said:
girl power eh\' quite simply amazing sir
February 3rd, 2023 08:51
Neville said:
girl power eh\' quite simply amazing sir
February 3rd, 2023 08:51
of Geometrical Substance or Mode
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so few that are willing to take the time and perservere to the end of what is needed to understand. It is your method that I have used over the years to pass exams, learn music, appreciate books and live life. You\'r last stanza rings with poetic words of truth. This one struck a chord in me that is still reverberating.
February 3rd, 2023 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
Wise words L.B. wisdom poors from your mouth like it did from his but so few that are willing to take the time and perservere to the end of what is needed to understand. It is your method that I have used over the years to pass exams, learn music, appreciate books and live life. You\'r last stanza rings with poetic words of truth. This one struck a chord in me that is still reverberating.
February 3rd, 2023 05:48
Musicality to cherish And ‘Joshiryoku’ purposed to Empower
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you L.B. for introducing me to this group. I love music as much as poetry and am always looking for out of the mainstream talent. I was taken by a group homogenized in their age, gender, I expect race, and degree of musical talent across a variety of instruments in a genre that requires so much improvixation. Joshiryoku, certainly empowerment for the women of this group much more than just what is expected. Thanks again for the introduction.
February 3rd, 2023 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you L.B. for introducing me to this group. I love music as much as poetry and am always looking for out of the mainstream talent. I was taken by a group homogenized in their age, gender, I expect race, and degree of musical talent across a variety of instruments in a genre that requires so much improvixation. Joshiryoku, certainly empowerment for the women of this group much more than just what is expected. Thanks again for the introduction.
February 3rd, 2023 05:38
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Doggerel Dave said:
No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it, appreciated it and taken it seriously.
January 30th, 2023 21:53
Doggerel Dave said:
No wish to engage here Mek, but just to add that I\'ve read it, appreciated it and taken it seriously.
January 30th, 2023 21:53
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause LB. for this well researched and powerful outcry for more awareness of society\'s free-falling into a bleak future. Without even knowing it too if chips in minds reaches reality. That kind of dictatorship is beyond appalling so before it is too late everyone seeing it needs to stand up and be counted. Thanks dear poet friend for spelling it out so clearly.
January 30th, 2023 13:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause LB. for this well researched and powerful outcry for more awareness of society\'s free-falling into a bleak future. Without even knowing it too if chips in minds reaches reality. That kind of dictatorship is beyond appalling so before it is too late everyone seeing it needs to stand up and be counted. Thanks dear poet friend for spelling it out so clearly.
January 30th, 2023 13:44
So far, removed
amepiesces said:
automated greetings... on apps screen .so well written ..that line in the start....and it took its legacy to the end... great read
January 30th, 2023 05:59
amepiesces said:
automated greetings... on apps screen .so well written ..that line in the start....and it took its legacy to the end... great read
January 30th, 2023 05:59
of Saturday’s
sorenbarrett said:
From beginning to end memories, most all fond and desirable. Heart warming, wistful, at most a bit melancholic. Thanks for the memories L.B.
January 30th, 2023 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
From beginning to end memories, most all fond and desirable. Heart warming, wistful, at most a bit melancholic. Thanks for the memories L.B.
January 30th, 2023 05:46
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
Neville said:
I often wonder where we would all be today if Nostradamus & Mother Shipton each sat down together with their lap tops open .. nice one Mek
January 30th, 2023 05:17
Neville said:
I often wonder where we would all be today if Nostradamus & Mother Shipton each sat down together with their lap tops open .. nice one Mek
January 30th, 2023 05:17
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
crypticbard said:
What a deadly cocktail: herding of humans, abuse and recycled patterns. Something dark and fearful looming before us.
January 30th, 2023 05:08
crypticbard said:
What a deadly cocktail: herding of humans, abuse and recycled patterns. Something dark and fearful looming before us.
January 30th, 2023 05:08
Dawning of Open-Sourced Inevitabilities
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski was much more right than society wanted to believe. Much of modern technolgy has come from Sci-fi all the way back to Jules Vern. Are we becoming a part of the Matrix. It would appear so. Great write L.B.
January 30th, 2023 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. or should I now call you Isaiah? Yes I have seen it too Ted Kaczynski was much more right than society wanted to believe. Much of modern technolgy has come from Sci-fi all the way back to Jules Vern. Are we becoming a part of the Matrix. It would appear so. Great write L.B.
January 30th, 2023 04:42
Old face
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. The first stanza caught me. I was hooked. Time should not take away the childlike virtue of gaiety, wonder, or innocence. I still look with ah at the world and laughter and joy should only grow greater with the years. There is much deep philosophy in these next lines. The third and fourth stanzas drip with wisdom but the gaiety is gone as the poem states. Do we loose the vitality and merriment of childhood innocence with the gaining of wisdom? I dare not think so. But maybe so.
January 29th, 2023 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. The first stanza caught me. I was hooked. Time should not take away the childlike virtue of gaiety, wonder, or innocence. I still look with ah at the world and laughter and joy should only grow greater with the years. There is much deep philosophy in these next lines. The third and fourth stanzas drip with wisdom but the gaiety is gone as the poem states. Do we loose the vitality and merriment of childhood innocence with the gaining of wisdom? I dare not think so. But maybe so.
January 29th, 2023 16:19
Shakespeare, I fail to be (after Sonnet 18)
sorenbarrett said:
True love is eternal and is not corrupted by time. The intent of Sonnet 18 is encapsulated here. Just as true love is immortal so are some poems, those that spring from the human soul and speak the truth of the human condition. This is a beautiful rendition L.B.
January 29th, 2023 16:05
sorenbarrett said:
True love is eternal and is not corrupted by time. The intent of Sonnet 18 is encapsulated here. Just as true love is immortal so are some poems, those that spring from the human soul and speak the truth of the human condition. This is a beautiful rendition L.B.
January 29th, 2023 16:05
So far, removed
M. C. Vollmann said:
This was reality to my ears, Thanks L.B. Mek, I Honestly don\'t know what to say. Again Thank You...
January 28th, 2023 19:16
M. C. Vollmann said:
This was reality to my ears, Thanks L.B. Mek, I Honestly don\'t know what to say. Again Thank You...
January 28th, 2023 19:16
So far, removed
Neville said:
I first read these fine words yesterday and was struck dumb .. now returning this mane, I find that others have stolen my thunder .. suffice to say, you said it, just as it truly is, better even better if you understand what I mean .. Neville
January 28th, 2023 03:41
Neville said:
I first read these fine words yesterday and was struck dumb .. now returning this mane, I find that others have stolen my thunder .. suffice to say, you said it, just as it truly is, better even better if you understand what I mean .. Neville
January 28th, 2023 03:41
So far, removed
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Mek, many are just not connecting with others. We go regularly to a coffee house and so many people just sit at table with each other staring into the cell phones. We must talk to each other in person.
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:53
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Mek, many are just not connecting with others. We go regularly to a coffee house and so many people just sit at table with each other staring into the cell phones. We must talk to each other in person.
Andy
January 28th, 2023 02:53
So far, removed
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this struck home. I remember 50 years ago going to stay for a few months in a place that had no electricity. In this community everyone knew everyone and the only form of entertainment was sitting and talking to one\'s neighbor. There was little crime because if someone stole they would be ostracized. One could leave things outside and they would be there a week later, there were no locks on doors and you could go away for months and nothing would disappear. Then came electricity, radio, television, the internet and video games. No one talked to anyone anymore, the old died and no one knows anyone anymore. The community has not grown but crime has gone up and nothing is safe, everything has to be locked up and even then they disappear. A sad commentary of technology and its effect on society. Loved the write L.B.
January 27th, 2023 05:48
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this struck home. I remember 50 years ago going to stay for a few months in a place that had no electricity. In this community everyone knew everyone and the only form of entertainment was sitting and talking to one\'s neighbor. There was little crime because if someone stole they would be ostracized. One could leave things outside and they would be there a week later, there were no locks on doors and you could go away for months and nothing would disappear. Then came electricity, radio, television, the internet and video games. No one talked to anyone anymore, the old died and no one knows anyone anymore. The community has not grown but crime has gone up and nothing is safe, everything has to be locked up and even then they disappear. A sad commentary of technology and its effect on society. Loved the write L.B.
January 27th, 2023 05:48
So far, removed
Fay Slimm. said:
The list of reasons given so poetically in this revealing post makes for the saddest of reading dear Mek - - we live in a generation of what you wisely call mere \"smoke signals\" while loneliness grows ever toxic to many - far far too many . - - this needed reminder goes into my list of favourites.
January 27th, 2023 04:07
Fay Slimm. said:
The list of reasons given so poetically in this revealing post makes for the saddest of reading dear Mek - - we live in a generation of what you wisely call mere \"smoke signals\" while loneliness grows ever toxic to many - far far too many . - - this needed reminder goes into my list of favourites.
January 27th, 2023 04:07
A lifetime’s vista
Neville said:
how well you wield words brother Mek .. be proud .. I know I am for you ..
January 25th, 2023 03:49
Neville said:
how well you wield words brother Mek .. be proud .. I know I am for you ..
January 25th, 2023 03:49
A lifetime’s vista
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful moment you capture in this poem, the power of touch which says it all. I love the image of laying fingers upon your chest to stir a memory so sweet. Thank you dear poet, it is such a fav!
January 24th, 2023 13:44
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful moment you capture in this poem, the power of touch which says it all. I love the image of laying fingers upon your chest to stir a memory so sweet. Thank you dear poet, it is such a fav!
January 24th, 2023 13:44
A lifetime’s vista
Jane Frye said:
I hope everyone who reads your beautiful words can relate.
January 23rd, 2023 12:40
Jane Frye said:
I hope everyone who reads your beautiful words can relate.
January 23rd, 2023 12:40
A lifetime’s vista
John Prophet said:
So well said. Your usual lovely words.
JP
January 23rd, 2023 08:03
John Prophet said:
So well said. Your usual lovely words.
JP
January 23rd, 2023 08:03
A lifetime’s vista
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. I dive deeper than the surface of this loving song of praise to love. To me it encompasses love of all that one holds dear that \"wars and inflated bank accounts\" can never take away from us. A lovely ode.
January 23rd, 2023 05:39
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. I dive deeper than the surface of this loving song of praise to love. To me it encompasses love of all that one holds dear that \"wars and inflated bank accounts\" can never take away from us. A lovely ode.
January 23rd, 2023 05:39
A lifetime’s vista
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing Mek )) lovely words
January 23rd, 2023 05:07
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful writing Mek )) lovely words
January 23rd, 2023 05:07
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