Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
An evening’s enamouring essence
Bella Shepard said:
For me, as I read this, I picture natures incredible display; that first crack of thunder and then the fireworks of lightening. I especially love the phrasing of \"In one ear, explosions continue to unnerve and delight while music serenades this sacred oneness with
\"existence. Nature keeps me in continual awe. Such a beautiful write my friend.
November 7th, 2022 14:27
Bella Shepard said:
For me, as I read this, I picture natures incredible display; that first crack of thunder and then the fireworks of lightening. I especially love the phrasing of \"In one ear, explosions continue to unnerve and delight while music serenades this sacred oneness with
\"existence. Nature keeps me in continual awe. Such a beautiful write my friend.
November 7th, 2022 14:27
An evening’s enamouring essence
Fay Slimm. said:
A fill of stunning metaphor bursts from each line as a bouquet firework magic lights sparks from your gifted phrasing dear Mek - I was there in spirit as with head lifted that ;thrill of caught ;hues brushing night sky infused the evening with colour - - a truly enamouring read.
November 7th, 2022 13:25
Fay Slimm. said:
A fill of stunning metaphor bursts from each line as a bouquet firework magic lights sparks from your gifted phrasing dear Mek - I was there in spirit as with head lifted that ;thrill of caught ;hues brushing night sky infused the evening with colour - - a truly enamouring read.
November 7th, 2022 13:25
An evening’s enamouring essence
MDStone said:
It is in those seemingly mundane moments that life reminds you that you are alive! Thank you, LB.
November 7th, 2022 06:55
MDStone said:
It is in those seemingly mundane moments that life reminds you that you are alive! Thank you, LB.
November 7th, 2022 06:55
Collective legacies, as bequeathed aftermath
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A hard-hitting sublime poem in brevity. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 08:27
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
A hard-hitting sublime poem in brevity. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
November 6th, 2022 08:27
Collective legacies, as bequeathed aftermath
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Mek. That atrocious pack of lies that brought us out of the EU has a great deal to be blamed for!
Andy
November 5th, 2022 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Mek. That atrocious pack of lies that brought us out of the EU has a great deal to be blamed for!
Andy
November 5th, 2022 02:46
Footprints of choice
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this is quite the piece. Its meaning is deeper than the footprints. In the end I wavered between the thought that the left footprint meant reentering the house with the right foot for a better start or whether it was a footprint that was \"left\" as a permanent remembrance of return. Very nice.
November 4th, 2022 06:56
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. this is quite the piece. Its meaning is deeper than the footprints. In the end I wavered between the thought that the left footprint meant reentering the house with the right foot for a better start or whether it was a footprint that was \"left\" as a permanent remembrance of return. Very nice.
November 4th, 2022 06:56
An empathetic, Fate
sorenbarrett said:
Like art, taste is an individual issue. I to enjoy the bitter and sour but also the salty and sweet. A wonderful metaphor L.B.
November 4th, 2022 06:50
sorenbarrett said:
Like art, taste is an individual issue. I to enjoy the bitter and sour but also the salty and sweet. A wonderful metaphor L.B.
November 4th, 2022 06:50
Collective legacies, as bequeathed aftermath
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. I am naïve regarding the answers but not of the frustration that accompany these problems. I keep thinking that in this world kitchen \"too many cooks spoil the broth\"
November 4th, 2022 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
L.B. I am naïve regarding the answers but not of the frustration that accompany these problems. I keep thinking that in this world kitchen \"too many cooks spoil the broth\"
November 4th, 2022 06:46
Collective legacies, as bequeathed aftermath
crypticbard said:
Oh dear me. I am not savvy in all the goings on over there but a good look at the basics should right the ship. For example, with returning to square one on the constitutional monarch that in the least would make a venue for bringing an infusion of best current practice to move into the demands of the rising future. There is yet hope in all the bleakness. At least it would be encouraging to see it that way.
November 4th, 2022 03:52
crypticbard said:
Oh dear me. I am not savvy in all the goings on over there but a good look at the basics should right the ship. For example, with returning to square one on the constitutional monarch that in the least would make a venue for bringing an infusion of best current practice to move into the demands of the rising future. There is yet hope in all the bleakness. At least it would be encouraging to see it that way.
November 4th, 2022 03:52
Collective legacies, as bequeathed aftermath
Doggerel Dave said:
Most coherent and truthful.
November 4th, 2022 03:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Most coherent and truthful.
November 4th, 2022 03:36
In each neglected minute
spilleronsheet said:
With deeper meaning shedding light upon the philosophy of life….another jewel of yours tagged priceless dear Mek…
November 2nd, 2022 12:47
spilleronsheet said:
With deeper meaning shedding light upon the philosophy of life….another jewel of yours tagged priceless dear Mek…
November 2nd, 2022 12:47
In each neglected minute
Bella Shepard said:
For me, your first stanza seems a statement on the incongruence of our human condition. The last two filled with the hope of new beginnings, at life given another opportunity. A very powerful write my friend, and a fav.
November 1st, 2022 16:24
Bella Shepard said:
For me, your first stanza seems a statement on the incongruence of our human condition. The last two filled with the hope of new beginnings, at life given another opportunity. A very powerful write my friend, and a fav.
November 1st, 2022 16:24
In each neglected minute
Neville said:
given the fact that we are not in a competition, I\'m going to agree with sorenbarrett & Rocky Lagou .. Now some might say that\'s a cop out, but having considered both of their entries .. I would be more than happy to settle for a draw .... oops ............................ N :)
October 31st, 2022 12:45
Neville said:
given the fact that we are not in a competition, I\'m going to agree with sorenbarrett & Rocky Lagou .. Now some might say that\'s a cop out, but having considered both of their entries .. I would be more than happy to settle for a draw .... oops ............................ N :)
October 31st, 2022 12:45
In each neglected minute
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Tear stained, Poetry\" 👏👏👏
And with that I\'ve said it all.
Glorious and so introspective.
October 31st, 2022 12:09
Rocky Lagou said:
\"Tear stained, Poetry\" 👏👏👏
And with that I\'ve said it all.
Glorious and so introspective.
October 31st, 2022 12:09
Droplets of cooling lava leaves (After Keats)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Mek ) some beautiful words and an interesting read ))
October 31st, 2022 10:47
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great writing Mek ) some beautiful words and an interesting read ))
October 31st, 2022 10:47
That vast C of Perspective
Coffee and Chaos said:
The distance of the future, the suddenness of the past... This is stunning, sad but true. Thank you so much for sharing!
October 31st, 2022 09:10
Coffee and Chaos said:
The distance of the future, the suddenness of the past... This is stunning, sad but true. Thank you so much for sharing!
October 31st, 2022 09:10
In each neglected minute
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed this theme of the circle of life and its extension in each new birth. Your first stanza so pregnant with meaning. Your balance of the old and new is marvelous. The last stanza ties all together with the knowledge that with new life comes new pain as well as beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this.
October 31st, 2022 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
So well expressed this theme of the circle of life and its extension in each new birth. Your first stanza so pregnant with meaning. Your balance of the old and new is marvelous. The last stanza ties all together with the knowledge that with new life comes new pain as well as beauty. Thank you so much for sharing this.
October 31st, 2022 08:45
An empathetic, Fate
hzugman said:
Yes, how can you ever know sweet if you\'re not familiar with sour and bitter? Well done.
October 31st, 2022 08:19
hzugman said:
Yes, how can you ever know sweet if you\'re not familiar with sour and bitter? Well done.
October 31st, 2022 08:19
An empathetic, Fate
Poetic Dan said:
All things are good in a mix, like your words that bring together many poets as I\'m a huge lover of everything sweet!
..
Lemon cake
Go on!
October 29th, 2022 05:49
Poetic Dan said:
All things are good in a mix, like your words that bring together many poets as I\'m a huge lover of everything sweet!
..
Lemon cake
Go on!
October 29th, 2022 05:49
An empathetic, Fate
Fay Slimm. said:
The taste for life\'\'s tang can be sour at time and has been outlined so well here with imageryr and bitter-sweet meanings - - a fine read L.B.
October 28th, 2022 05:55
Fay Slimm. said:
The taste for life\'\'s tang can be sour at time and has been outlined so well here with imageryr and bitter-sweet meanings - - a fine read L.B.
October 28th, 2022 05:55
An empathetic, Fate
Neville said:
it seems we have similar tastes and a predilection for honesty, justice and universal truth ............ Neville
October 28th, 2022 05:28
Neville said:
it seems we have similar tastes and a predilection for honesty, justice and universal truth ............ Neville
October 28th, 2022 05:28
An empathetic, Fate
crypticbard said:
It still amazes me that sourness and bitterness are so closely related, a very striking metaphor. Can’t wait to drizzle a meal in lemon, lime and a dash of balsamic vinegar…. You have made me hungry Mek!
October 28th, 2022 04:56
crypticbard said:
It still amazes me that sourness and bitterness are so closely related, a very striking metaphor. Can’t wait to drizzle a meal in lemon, lime and a dash of balsamic vinegar…. You have made me hungry Mek!
October 28th, 2022 04:56
Droplets of cooling lava leaves (After Keats)
Poetic Dan said:
Great tune to start or rearrange my morning mood
October 26th, 2022 02:56
Poetic Dan said:
Great tune to start or rearrange my morning mood
October 26th, 2022 02:56
Droplets of cooling lava leaves (After Keats)
Poetic Dan said:
No one does it quite like you my friend! Keep up the write and thank you for sharing
October 26th, 2022 02:54
Poetic Dan said:
No one does it quite like you my friend! Keep up the write and thank you for sharing
October 26th, 2022 02:54
Footprints of choice
Bella Shepard said:
I love the emotion you instill in the hurricane hair and earthquake footprint, it becomes quite tangible. Such a good write my friend!
October 25th, 2022 13:48
Bella Shepard said:
I love the emotion you instill in the hurricane hair and earthquake footprint, it becomes quite tangible. Such a good write my friend!
October 25th, 2022 13:48
Footprints of choice
Neville said:
What an intro ...
there will always be the odd occasion, when and wherever one treads, & leaves their mark, the left foot will never be quite write :)
Neville
October 24th, 2022 11:45
Neville said:
What an intro ...
there will always be the odd occasion, when and wherever one treads, & leaves their mark, the left foot will never be quite write :)
Neville
October 24th, 2022 11:45
Footprints of choice
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunning metaphor used in this eloquent write on stamping a print of considered full weight when returning to a once meaningful relationship. Your opening line had all the hallmarks of classic poetry which attracts the read to learn more. Thank you for sharing Footprints of Choice dear L.B.
October 24th, 2022 07:38
Fay Slimm. said:
Stunning metaphor used in this eloquent write on stamping a print of considered full weight when returning to a once meaningful relationship. Your opening line had all the hallmarks of classic poetry which attracts the read to learn more. Thank you for sharing Footprints of Choice dear L.B.
October 24th, 2022 07:38
That vast C of Perspective
John Prophet said:
But contemplation is living! No?
Wonderful verse.
JP
October 23rd, 2022 16:01
John Prophet said:
But contemplation is living! No?
Wonderful verse.
JP
October 23rd, 2022 16:01
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