Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



A common miracle
Albert Elod said:

Master piece, i understand the earthquakes it s jelousea, i like the metafoa \'\'planted\'\'
dimming shine

of a late summer’s night

unable, to dim the glow

draping them, from head to toe
this is flawless verses
but why \'\'green eyes\'\' ?
entrancing flames, emanating

from her guardian’s, chest

highlighting, the binding path

illuminated: by their drunken hearts
how much beauty hides in those final verses.
i also compared drunkenness with love in an old poem

April 10th, 2022 04:09

lost & found
Albert Elod said:

Your vocabulary is rich, you know to tale a good story, even if it s a sad one we are broken from nature\'s hand in the modern society, it s inspireing
Love god and pray !


April 10th, 2022 03:56

of Artistry’s fuse and folly’s Muse
Hakikur Rahman said:

An elegant compose on nature, feelings and emotions. Enjoyed reading it.

April 10th, 2022 02:41

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
bubblehead95 said:

This poem is such a brutal reality of the civilization describing the thick layer of that sick mindset. I somewhere read why brothers and fathers are so protective because men don\'t even trust men, and it strikes firmly. Also, thank you for an appealing illustration of the ill-nature of the world that we associate with daily. The beauty of poesy!

April 9th, 2022 01:30

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine words Mek and very true.

Andy

April 9th, 2022 00:27

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Michael Edwards said:

A picture so well painted in such superb use of our wonderful language.

April 8th, 2022 13:58

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
spilleronsheet said:

And hats off to the words that truly represent the present grief
Unfortunately the words had to describe the dark scenes
Those marginalised and harmed on streets
But I hope word could spread around
A crowd can gather with candles
Maybe the angels shall hear the war cries
And bring a stop to this disaster


April 8th, 2022 13:15

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
dusk arising said:

I\'m most definitely on the same page as you with this one LBM as you\'ll know from my post today.

In the spirit of kudos (and acceptance of my own human failings in the ethics dept) I wish that evil leading man a similar disgusting end to his worldly existence.

You tell us here what monsters we all know we could be. Cold, harsh realism. Rarely revealed. A rare subject. Really deserving of it\'s place in my favourites.

April 8th, 2022 11:29

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Neville said:



war & all that it stands for and all that is juxtaposed against it and all that is committed in the name of it .. does not deserve such poetry ..

April 8th, 2022 08:43

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Why are people so cruel to others .. Something I will never understand . There’s no need for cruelty and war .

A good expressive writing showing the want and need for this war to stop ..

I wish the world were a lot more peaceful

April 8th, 2022 05:21

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Paul Bell said:

Just a madman wanting his dream come true before he dies. No one around him willing to do the right thing. NATO unwilling to get involved, making us even more weaker, and surely totally inept.

April 8th, 2022 04:59

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Katrina D said:

If only we could stop war, I fear it is part of human nature. Thanks for sharing

April 8th, 2022 04:35

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Teddy.15 said:

I bow to thee. 💖

April 8th, 2022 04:08

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Hakikur Rahman said:

You have spoken loudly against those repressions around the world. Very timely presentation.

April 8th, 2022 03:52

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear MeK, Could hear your Heart Yell for the oppressed.

Your words really spoke so loud and did portray and pathetic situation the daughters, mothers, wives are being subjected to, in the name of shelter.

Its time this Virus like War is
abated, and people rest in peace ..
Great yearning poetry of pain !!

April 8th, 2022 03:22

Wrinkled skin: Romance
John Prophet said:

What’s the fun in that? 🍾🥴

April 7th, 2022 06:18

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Vamsi Sudha said:

That was a Love Tact :)
Dear Mek, your poem already left me intoxicated, what would have been with the lady, not going further to spare your blushes..

Romantic feel Hidden between the lines. Great One as usual !!

April 5th, 2022 23:53

of Artistry’s fuse and folly’s Muse
bubblehead95 said:

An artist\'s pageant with a handsome pretext laid out in a captivating lingo makes me fall in love with the ode a little more.:)

April 5th, 2022 22:41

Wrinkled skin: Romance
bubblehead95 said:

A frisky refreshment. This one has coaxed me to have a teeny sip of that bubbly joy for the very first time. 🤭

April 5th, 2022 22:15

Bestest Poem, Ever!
sorenbarrett said:

Such a wonderful set up for April 1. Since I read it later it took a while to dawn on me. Shucks, your right it is just my normal slowness,. This was great.

April 5th, 2022 07:27

Bestest Poem, Ever!
Neville said:


its got to be up there somewhere .. surely, maybe ............................ N :)

April 5th, 2022 04:37

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Neville said:


enjoyed to the hilt my friend and then a bit .................................. Neville :)

April 5th, 2022 04:33

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Rocky Lagou said:

Wow. I want to soak in the bubbly fun!

April 4th, 2022 12:55

Wrinkled skin: Romance
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Metaphor or should I say allegory. My mind revolves around the image of what follows the sipping. A very nice piece though.

April 4th, 2022 12:18

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Bella Shepard said:

I love the wit and playfulness of your poem, just wish someone had told me about the benefits of bathing in champagne 50 years ago.

April 4th, 2022 11:12

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Christina8 said:

I thoroughly enjoyed your poem LB Mek, it was tantalizing!

April 4th, 2022 10:54

Wrinkled skin: Romance
dusk arising said:

And such perfume, enriched by the bringing together of two fine vintages of beauty no doubt.

April 4th, 2022 10:05

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Paul Bell said:

Don\'t touch the champagne or your sins will destroy you. I\'m thinking she didn\'t listen and is now drowning in the bath. Some just don\'t listen.

April 4th, 2022 10:04

Wrinkled skin: Romance
Teddy.15 said:

LOL 🤣 I could not promise not to sip though ☺️ 💖

April 4th, 2022 07:18

of Artistry’s fuse and folly’s Muse
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful soliloquy worthy of Shakespeare. Very moving. It cries out of destiny and demands action. Very nice.

April 1st, 2022 13:09



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