Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



fifty & Waning, witnessing rap’s Decimation
AnxiousMane said:

wow, that was FANTASTIC

February 6th, 2024 14:30

Significant, We
John Prophet said:

Sorry to see you go.
You were one of the good ones

December 7th, 2023 07:54

Bombarded
madalynsamantha said:

Absolutely love this one!❤️❤️❤️ Powerful to the day the least.

November 22nd, 2023 18:37

Significant, We
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Bravo! Matter, matters…

November 19th, 2023 14:39

Bombarded
Bella Shepard said:

I see your heart bleeding, I hear your soul weeping as you write this lament, the pain of it all becoming unbearable. Where do we go when logic and reason have fled. Perhaps, in the end, we will rise from the ashes. I can only hope for a better future for the people I love who will have to live it. You are here to remind us dearest friend, for if we do not acknowledge the pain, we never address it. Thank you!

October 28th, 2023 15:15

Poetess: that most profound, Lioness
Thomas W Case said:

Words fail me. Brilliant tribute.

October 27th, 2023 18:51

Bombarded
Neville said:


Aah now don’t that feel better .. my mental muscle thanks you bigly Mek and truly .. N

October 23rd, 2023 15:58

Significant, We
Neville said:


Reading You .. reading this, your words here made me very happy .. Not just because somehow I found my way here, but because you managed to say in my recent protracted enforced absence what I would have liked to say, but you got in first and said it better ..

Much respect brother M

Neville

October 23rd, 2023 15:52

Significant, We
Neville said:


Reading You .. reading this, your words here made me very happy .. Not just because somehow I found my way here, but because you managed to say in my recent protracted enforced absence what I would have liked to say, but you got in first and said it better ..

Much respect brother M

Neville

October 23rd, 2023 15:52

fifty & Waning, witnessing rap’s Decimation
Thomas W Case said:

You nailed it.

October 23rd, 2023 03:58

Significant, We
rhmn_7 said:

We are all significant being even if we don\'t notice that!

October 22nd, 2023 09:20

Significant, We
DLewis88 said:

This is a great poem. It\'s wonderful

October 19th, 2023 15:00

Significant, We
Thomas W Case said:

Very powerful. Insomnia is hell.

October 19th, 2023 11:54

Significant, We
Parisab said:

Proclamation that ‘we all are’ significant even if mortal after we come together, like temporary but magnificent ‘sand castles’

October 17th, 2023 00:27

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John Lee said:

Broken. This world. Controlled by broken systems and peace is held by dollars.. you explained it well throughout the imagery journey dear poet.

October 16th, 2023 22:20

Significant, We
John Lee said:

Absolutely truth.

October 16th, 2023 22:13

Significant, We
2781 said:

I\'ve pondered this recently and realised we all die, and when dead nothing more is said.
Make the most of it while we can.

October 16th, 2023 08:05

Significant, We
Pop64 said:

We all have significance, have value. Your piece truly sums it neatly with a story surrounding it. Perfect!

October 16th, 2023 06:28

Significant, We
Lorenz said:

significant we ..
The paths of everything end up intertwining ...

October 16th, 2023 06:26

Significant, We
sorenbarrett said:

\"Crimson skies when I cry\"
A wonderful line.
\"As our cacophonous
Memories, testify
Piquantly sublime…\"
The truth rings poetic in these last lines.
I think the verse that hit hardest and will remain with me is:
\"indeed, We All
Significant
In our on diverse ways\"
Such a great message my friend.

October 16th, 2023 05:19

Significant, We
LIZ said:

Powerful!! Through every storm, hurt and pain. Even after all the struggles and heartache….the universe knows….\"I am no mere mortal\" \"Oh no no no, my dear friends I Am Significant!\" Hell Yeah!! Bring it on baby!!!! The power of self-expression! 💫💫💫💫 Our individualism adds to our collective heritage. Accepting our deepest aspirations and personal journey. Being free to be ourselves. Because the reality is…we can belong anywhere we choose. True fulfillment is within, and by discovering ourselves, we can find comfort anywhere we choose to go. Able to….be… ….in our own different way simply adds to the colors of life! I SEE you! \"Know thyself\" 😉

And of course, this melody goes perfectly with your message!
Your mind is a treasure! Thankful for you! My wise poet!! 😌

October 16th, 2023 04:07

Significant, We
Teddy.15 said:

What an incredibly powerful poem. We should all be free to live safe and as we choose and how. I really feel this stanza

Crimson skies when I cry

Thunderstorms, all night

When my insomnia

Keeps me waging wars

With a moonless fate

I\'d like to believe London is still so versatile that nobody would suffer for being different at anytime and I do realize that at this moment it is a very worrying time. I would encourage everyone just to be kind. Try to keep your poets heart quiet and tranquil my dear Mek even when we are all facing such turbulent times. ❤️

October 16th, 2023 02:59

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Thomas W Case said:

Great flow and use of language.

October 14th, 2023 11:46

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Introverted Sage said:

\'And is it bad.. that I go a bit mad when I hear everyones \"that\'s crazy\" and \"oh, yeahs\"... \"Yeah, you\'re right\" but keep on playing along.. where the f.. is our fight? We are just one voice - but together we\'re strong.
It seems by design these
like-minds are scattered through the globe making it harder to find - as if stars sprinkled in the skies - only grouping together the shallow minds...\'

Most things \"aren\'t real\" or are hard to believe by so many until they experience it first hand.
Is it from the constant need for instant gratification that emotion has been completely sucked out?

When is it enough? What will it take for people to see the bottomless pit we continuously dig ourselves in just by being what we aren\'t?

So many are \"all for it\" but if a call comes in, saying \'drop everything, we need you to help put an end to this\'
How many could so easily detach?

Thanks for sharing this one\'s a soul stirrer

October 13th, 2023 23:21

Voilà ! here I am, here We be
Thomas W Case said:

Great poem. Seize the day.

October 13th, 2023 19:51

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Teddy.15 said:

I never thought I\'d truly say the words gone bonkers but it has. And your poem is a testament to it, only you can write like this Mek ❤️ I\'m really in a state of what next? Stay safe in London I\'ve already heard there\'s a bit of trouble. Big hugs 🤗

October 13th, 2023 11:24

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Parisab said:

Mind bending and maddening as is the reaction to the states of affaires! ‘Evolution of inversion’ I’m afraid could be a thing. I’m happy that you don’t simplify the turmoil of it all…Well done as always…lovin’ the video too-

October 13th, 2023 10:46

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sorenbarrett said:

I have often questioned is it just more visible with media in every place and time, or are we more deadened to it with its constant exposure, are we more corrupt due to a change in societal morals,? Regardless we have not evolved in the right direction it seems devolution and yes inversion. Loved the lines :
\"Our capacity to verify black-eye lies
surrendered
Just as long as they feed us escapism
makeups,\"
Do we throw our hands in the air saying, nothing can be done? Or do we become numb and ignore everything outside of ourselves? It\'s a bloody well good time for a social revolution, where values are put toward helping not hurting others.

October 13th, 2023 07:48

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LIZ said:

The atrocities of life!! \"click, tic, flic\"---this is so, to your face!!!The struggles of life!! Lies we accept as a way to escape. So much going on; torture; rape!

Sexual slavery, forced pregnancy, enforced sterilization....so much we fail to see! Because it\'s normalized....as... It is, what it is!

We\'re so used to the lies....and the ridiculous ways of life that we fail to question it all. So we keep doing the same things over and over again....expecting a different result.

Our leaders don\'t talk anymore! They\'re occupied making sure to keep us in the dark....to treat us like puppets with no minds.

In looking back, at each path taken, every decision, will we be proud?....will it be \"all we ever wanted?\" or did we just cowered out?

Bombarded much? DAMN!!

THIS SONG/VIDEO....MY GOD!!!
By the way, doesn\'t he look a little like Teddy Swims? 😳

I love your mind!!



October 13th, 2023 05:04

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Lorenz said:

we implore you great god of the final bug !

October 13th, 2023 04:10

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