Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



our Blemishes of Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:

What wonderful words Mek and so very true as each of life\'s adversities come to us we survive and move forward a stronger person.

Andy

March 6th, 2021 01:34

our Blemishes of Perfection
Jerry Reynolds said:

Triumph, L.B. that’s just flawless.

March 5th, 2021 08:29

our Blemishes of Perfection
Neville said:


Dear poet,
I never saw this coming either .. so glad I kept my eyes peeled though ..
I have long thought your writing is about to come of age L.B and this page proves it ...

I sincerely take my hat off to you .. and am proud to call you friend,

Neville ..

March 5th, 2021 06:06

BOXED
yellowrose said:

Engaging write . Interesting words ,

March 4th, 2021 07:52

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
Neville said:


... made me wince, more than once, I can tell ya .......

March 1st, 2021 17:54

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
FredPeyer said:

So well written, Mek!

March 1st, 2021 16:06

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true and profound words Mek, especially that last stanza.

Andy

March 1st, 2021 05:19

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
AuburnScribbler said:

A beautiful poetic summary here L. B. Mek, mightily written!

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

February 27th, 2021 02:51

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, L.B.

February 26th, 2021 09:32

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
dusk arising said:

Look after number one or you wont be able to look after anything or anyone else.

February 26th, 2021 04:39

Weather is nice today
yellowrose said:

Short and sweet poem . Nice words here , flows nicely

February 25th, 2021 07:17

Y @ Play
MendedFences27 said:

From fond memories to their crescendo in life followed by the slowing of the beat to the pace of existence in the real world. A musical journey through life and onward to wisdom and acceptance. - Phil A.

February 23rd, 2021 11:52

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Neville said:


you do know the rhythm of these words is gonna be with me for the rest of the day dont\'cha ... and know this .. I dont mind a single bit .... made me think and tap both feet at the same time .... mind you, I have been sitting down the whole time .....

Neville


February 23rd, 2021 07:08

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Olivia. said:

Wow so intrigued by this! Its amazing. I also love the presentation, really unique. X

February 23rd, 2021 06:31

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yellowrose said:

Beautiful poem ! Very nicely expressed and very engaging read 🙂 I enjoyed

February 23rd, 2021 06:19

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Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful lovelorn words Mek.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:18

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Very nice, L.B. Enjoyable read.

February 22nd, 2021 16:29

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FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written and great presentation!

February 22nd, 2021 14:59

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Trenz Pruca said:

I was listening to Kieth Jarrett when I read your poem -- a jazz-smooth snare...

February 22nd, 2021 14:36

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dusk arising said:

Those younger days of untainted hope driven by enthusiasm testosterone made wholesome devotion. To the undying accompanyment of the rhythm of life with it\'s cresendos, crashes, grace notes of joy and glissando banana skins.

February 22nd, 2021 04:59

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Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for some wonderful word-paintings in this impressive reflection on remembered togetherness. A super read L.B.

February 22nd, 2021 04:43

First and ever, Fiercest
AwHec8 said:

This Poem reminds me of 2 things,
1)Every time I have a dream that slips away after waking up and trying to recall the dream that was so important that had such an Earth shattering secret in my mind, Yet slipped away the harder I tried to remember like water through my hand.
2)At 63 I can\'t say I have \"memories\" especially the older 1\'s as they now are memories of memories if that makes any sense.
I do Love the thoughts this Poem strikes in me. Great Write L.B. Mek. Don

February 21st, 2021 10:40

First and ever, Fiercest
Fay Slimm. said:

This has to be one of your best L.B. - a bouquet of imagery to sigh for and the last stanza shines with romantic assurance that love is forever. One for my list of favourites for sure.

February 19th, 2021 16:52

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Munro said:

Like your poem ,,liked lines ,,
Staring match within a glass
Taut white fingerpips grip
No ice left to delve between
Swiftly swigged severance


February 19th, 2021 06:02

atoms, to Atoms
AlitaOpal said:

I wake up every morning and my thoughts are the first things to greet me, but yet I have this profound sense that each new day I\'ve been reborn. Therefore I stay in the moment and before I go to sleep l let go and hold on to nothing, for the cycle shall continue when I awaken again.. Beautiful scribble L. B

February 18th, 2021 19:42

atoms, to Atoms
Neville said:

Let\'s not mess about, let\'s cut to the chase and get straight to the point ..
Yes, to the very heart of the matter and then to look beyond our own personal double helix and into the infinitely brighter backdrop of beyond ....
Yes there, where the real answers and truths do lie, just waiting to be found ............................You have such a way with words L.B .. this pilgrim can be lost, yet find himself somewhere deep within them .........
Neville

February 18th, 2021 04:58

atoms, to Atoms
Goldfinch60 said:

Those atoms make us up into the person we have become and they will still exist when we have left this world.
Good words Mek.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 01:18

atoms, to Atoms
FredPeyer said:

Wonderfully written, L.B.
The question is if we can reduce ourselves to the infinite, to go back to the \'big bang\'?

February 15th, 2021 21:43

atoms, to Atoms
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow this is epic and impressive, you say it in a brill way indeed. It was wordy in a fab way. Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 12:33

atoms, to Atoms
John Prophet said:

Tried to wrap my head around this but failed. Yet it’s flow kept me reading as it was a well structured write.
Enjoyed!

February 15th, 2021 10:05

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