Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



We too, were Romeo’s - once
aDarkerMind said:

a work of art for the world to read, savour, and love!

September 20th, 2021 11:34

We too, were Romeo’s - once
Neville said:


You sure know how to rub it in don\'t cha ................................................ if I may be allowed to cut and paste these words to myself as a constant reminder that I once was there etc etc .. I would for ever be in your debt ........................ maybe .. N


September 20th, 2021 07:56

We too, were Romeo’s - once
dusk arising said:

Oh so well you embroider the tapestry of a young hearts romantic desire and you bring to my old bones such memories. The stumbles along a clumsy path of endeavours to achieve those early kisses of reward. The warm glow of success and voicing that famous \"yes\" to oneself as you do a leaping heel click heading home.

Fun filled joyous memories eh LBM? If only we knew then what we learned later on, we would have been Cassanovas.

One for my favourites.

September 20th, 2021 07:35

We too, were Romeo’s - once
Thekkinkkattil said:

A trip to the past is always joyful especially those adolescent days. Thank you Mek. Enjoyed it

September 20th, 2021 06:53

We too, were Romeo’s - once
yellowrose said:

Lovely words , good poem ‘ lighthouse of hope ‘ ‘ windowsill of adoration ‘ , ‘ stars winked at us ‘

Good choice of words ... I especially liked those ones

September 20th, 2021 03:47

We too, were Romeo’s - once
Teddy.15 said:

romeo romeo where for ought thou romeo, whata thoughtful peice of poetry L.B i love your last stanza kudos dear friend. xxxxx

September 20th, 2021 03:47

Where, no Hesitation resides
Jennifer Martin said:

L.B., I\'m an optimist, so I\'d like to believe that your place and time to thrive is out there. Lovely poem! I wish you the happiness you long for!

September 19th, 2021 14:40

Denial’s
PrEm Ji said:

See, all those Differences and generational Animosity

Simply, melt away in the face: of a Rejuvenating baby

Reminding us, like that blossoming Spring

All that Peace and Harmony we truly crave.

A baby is none but the soul of innocence!

September 18th, 2021 08:53

Denial’s
Neville said:


Been back to re-visit already .. forgot to hit the heart shaped box the first n second times .................................... N

September 18th, 2021 04:30

Denial’s
Neville said:


Aargh, my thunder has been stole lad
top marks from this old scribe tho till I can return and proper ... Neville

September 18th, 2021 03:42

Denial’s
Jerry Reynolds said:

Wow! Great work, L.B.

September 17th, 2021 09:36

Denial’s
Poetic Dan said:

This has always been my birthday tune and was in the wife\'s birthing play list!

Never have enjoyed taking my time to read for your most delightful spirit.

You are legendary and at the top with many of my greatest minds!
I your day is sublime ;)

September 17th, 2021 06:29

Denial’s
Fay Slimm. said:

A brilliant lead into what parenthood at times achieves by new life that re-binds a fading relationship. Love the imagery L.B. and into my list of faves goes this poetic gem.

September 17th, 2021 03:43

Denial’s
dusk arising said:

Wow. I really enjoyed this one.
Your final words are so very true. To behold the wriggling spirit of newborn life does bring forth the finest hopes held deep within us as a species. This despite the facade behind which we tolerate the day to day abuses of our conscience whilst we quietly comply.

Strong thought provoking stuff from you.

September 17th, 2021 03:15

Denial’s
Goldfinch60 said:

Peace and harmony is what we all crave and to do that we need respect and love for all.

Andy

September 17th, 2021 03:04

Denial’s
Teddy.15 said:

I adore these lines, so poetically written



as its too rude to not greet

long lost childhood’s - whaling sermons,

veracity of beauty’s shockwaves - inspiring

unwalled mindsets to bypass: archaic hate

As ever your work is inspiring dear L.B another epic in my mind. Love the last lines of only we could have it. X

September 17th, 2021 02:49

of Love #2
Neville said:


what can this old scribe say other than epic, because that is precisely what it is L.B . .. Oh\' and please excuse my late response ..... N :)

September 16th, 2021 10:54

of Love #1
Dove said:

I’m impressed! I agree this is one of your best! Least it’s very relatable! I give this a million stars, by the way I found your ring! It was buried in my heart. As I knelt beside you at the grave



September 16th, 2021 09:10

of Love #2
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful tale of times passed Mek.

Andy

September 14th, 2021 00:48

of Love #2
Thekkinkkattil said:

Amusing nicely penned

September 13th, 2021 09:20

of Love #2
Jay-Lee Jane said:

wow, i\'m speechless...i admire your beautiful use of imagry...it has me in a daze!!

September 13th, 2021 07:06

of Love #2
Doggerel Dave said:

I\'ll be back.......

September 13th, 2021 05:14

of Love #2
Teddy.15 said:

Wow, L.B, may I just say Kudos, I\'ve also got a small scar on the left side of my forehead, your imagery is like watching a scene and your poetic pen hits that spot with incredible beauty and with imagination. Thank you for your incredibly inspiring posts. 🤗

September 13th, 2021 03:50

of Love #1
myself and me said:

Wow. I am wordless.

September 11th, 2021 12:36

of Love #1
Goldfinch60 said:

What a poem, it pulled me right into it Mek. That love will always be there no matter what the circumstances.

Andy

September 11th, 2021 00:11

of Love #1
HannahElisabeth said:

This was by far the most captivating piece of art I\'ve read in... I don\'t even have a comparison for this. This was absolutely heart-wrenchingly, breathtakingly beautiful.

September 10th, 2021 23:05

of Love #1
aDarkerMind said:

on a scale of 1 to 5 L B Mek....

this work of art gets a perfect 10;

September 10th, 2021 13:06

of Love #1
Robert Haigh said:

A highly emotive and brilliantly composed piece, L.B. Simply superb! Best poem I have read on this site, ever!

September 10th, 2021 10:20

of Love #1
Neville said:


both the old crow & DA somehow stole my thunder ...
I would like to say F\'ing brilliant but I suspect that will eventually come ......... Neville


September 10th, 2021 09:12

of Love #1
Neil Higgins said:

I don\'t know how to review this LB.So I won\'t.I will just add, magnificently composed.A startling read from start to finish.Have read each line many times over.5* plus? It\'s way too personal for that my friend.

September 10th, 2021 05:09



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