Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



Power of a single, Waterfall
Bella Shepard said:

As I read each line I can hear that waterfall, see it cascading. On this earth day thank you for such a beautiful poem, celebrating the beauty of our home, our earth!

April 22nd, 2022 16:56

Power of a single, Waterfall
Michael Edwards said:

Beautiful scenes invoked in the mind\'s eye - a great read. But \'even sat here far removed\' - please rewrite it as \'even sitting here\' - unless someone sat you there of course = sorry for being pedantic - please forgive me. lol

April 22nd, 2022 14:28

Power of a single, Waterfall
Paul Bell said:

Seen the odd waterfall in Scotland, would like to see the big ones though.
There\'s something exciting about cascading water.

April 22nd, 2022 10:31

Power of a single, Waterfall
empty vial said:

wow,
your poems never fail to amaze me.
the pictures that were just created,
they were beutiful.
like Teddy.15 said, \"what a beutiful nostalgic write this is for me\"
it truly is.
have a good day, L.B.!

April 22nd, 2022 10:03

Power of a single, Waterfall
Vamsi Sudha said:

Dear MEK , Happy Earth Day..
You really filled up the earth with you lavish and ever enthralling poetry..
We really did get drenched in your flow of words..
Loved this usage.. \" marinates, deeper within \" ..wonderful !!

Thanks a lot for the wonderful words from your pen !!

April 22nd, 2022 09:04

Power of a single, Waterfall
Rocky Lagou said:

I\'m going to be honest. Your imagery is incomporable. You truly have such a gift for evoking strong images into a reader\'s imagination, it\'s astounding. I adore this Earth Day poem, it\'s Earth Day everyday, we must always seek to better our world. After all it\'s all we got. Thanks for the spectacle.


April 22nd, 2022 08:08

Power of a single, Waterfall
Saxon Crow said:

I love this poem and that you can relate the waterfall to even a drop of rain. Brilliant and beautiful

April 22nd, 2022 07:04

Power of a single, Waterfall
Laura🌻 said:

Dear L.B.,

You’ve penned a super poem. It has inspired me to write an acrostic about today’s special day—Earth Day. I cannot post it now because I’ve met today’s limit to post. I will post it tomorrow. In my humble opinion, every day is Earth Day. Thank you for sharing and for your inspiration.

Wishing you a happy Earth Day! 🌱 🌳

Laura🌻


April 22nd, 2022 06:45

Power of a single, Waterfall
sorenbarrett said:

Waterfalls are wonderful and ah inspiring. I\'ve seen many and bathed in a few. One of natures presents to be respected and protected. I enjoyed your poem that led my memory back through these moments.

April 22nd, 2022 06:32

Power of a single, Waterfall
MDStone said:

LB,
Ah, I heard the thunder of Niagara yet again when your words cascaded over my soul. Thank you for the plunge deep into the wonder of our world, “to that spot where time stilled as I rebelled in natures iridescent majesty.”
MD

April 22nd, 2022 06:04

Power of a single, Waterfall
Teddy.15 said:

I\'ve seen a few waterfalls in the world including in Jamaica, Madagascar and right here in Tuscany what a beautiful nostalgic write this is for me, I find so much peace and tranquility. 💖

April 22nd, 2022 05:27

of Trust
empty vial said:

such a wonderful poem..
this poem is so vivid; it makes me feel like i\'m there, right in the moment
beautifully done, L.B

April 21st, 2022 10:33

Might of Swipe
sorenbarrett said:

A prophesy fulfilled, now tap, soon too to be gone. The divide grows greater. Here in Brazil one of the greatest impediments of democracy is too many have nots.

April 21st, 2022 06:56

A Dandelion lullaby
Neville said:



.. as far as poetry is concerned Mek, you just smashed it with this one sir
.. N

April 19th, 2022 13:48

Bestest Poem, Ever!
Paul Bell said:

I\'ll second that.Bestest poem ever, and that\'s just for using the word, bestest.

April 19th, 2022 10:00

A Dandelion lullaby
Dove said:

Superbly written, oh such beauty from a weed blown into a magnificent piece a work

April 19th, 2022 09:04

Might of Swipe
Kittykoala said:

\"salvation

with shackles, as its reward\"
Very impactful poem. Our constant reliance on instant gratification to satisfy ourselves and take nothing of value past that moment, it is terrifying. The more we buy, the more we need, the less we have. A dangerous cycle indeed.
Great and horrible truths here.

April 19th, 2022 06:48

Spring!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

A beautifully expressed poem .. I think this is one of my favourites from you .. so engaging and some very lovely lines ! 🙂

April 19th, 2022 05:57

A Dandelion lullaby
Goldfinch60 said:

Kindness, respect and love should be the way to be in everybody Mek.
If only?

Andy

April 19th, 2022 00:26

A Dandelion lullaby
spilleronsheet said:

Profound words webbed together
Lines which convey greater depth
As if telling me what to do next
Just adored this poetry within my heart
Wish to cherish as a guide to my life
Wonderful dear Mek


April 18th, 2022 21:25

A Dandelion lullaby
Rozina said:

Kindness is in short supply right now. But let\'s hope for better times. Great poem.

April 18th, 2022 18:02

A Dandelion lullaby
Luna Nera said:

very nice! I really like the closing lines

April 18th, 2022 12:55

A Dandelion lullaby
Dahlia said:

Lovely & wholehearted advice we all need it from to time, Have a great kick start of the week!💖

April 18th, 2022 12:24

A Dandelion lullaby
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine write, L.B.
Hope springs eternal over my morning tea.

April 18th, 2022 09:12

A Dandelion lullaby
Rocky Lagou said:

\"Choose, kindness as your legacy!\" \"CHOOSE, KINDESS AS YOUR LEGACY!\"
I mean, do I need to say anything else. This, right here, is beyond words.
All I can say is..... awestruck.

April 18th, 2022 08:45

A Dandelion lullaby
sorenbarrett said:

A truly beautiful poem and metaphor full of reassuring wisdom. Aside from the great image of a field of wish fulfilling dandelions, the last stanza packed more power and glory to the poem. I not only loved this piece it set the tone for my day. Thank you for sharing.

April 18th, 2022 07:22

A Dandelion lullaby
dusk arising said:

Oh those poor dandelions, for i shall be forever blowing them in my dreams now in the hope of finding the morning has brought to my plate the gift of meekness.

April 18th, 2022 05:29

A Dandelion lullaby
Paul Bell said:

Isn\'t that hate so tangible, as we see in Ukraine. One man\'s hate for a country, and the outcome that brings.
There\'s a fine line between love and hate, and maybe that\'s why the two words always stand side by side.



April 18th, 2022 03:48

A Dandelion lullaby
Teddy.15 said:

A very lovely title and I wouldn\'t mind being remembered for my kindness dear Mek. 💖

April 18th, 2022 03:11

A Dandelion lullaby
Vamsi Sudha said:

So much positivity and filled with hope !!
Great lines..

Choose humility’s, bravery
Choose, kindness as your legacy!

Humility\'s bravery, wonderful comparison. There is for sure bravery hidden in Humility, as it take to be very brave to be humble.
Kindness as legacy ! Omg , totally impressed me !!

Thanks dear Poet !!

April 18th, 2022 02:59



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