Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Necessity of Seasonal, Ignorance
Neville said:
this just had to be said .. and now it has been, I applaud you sir for saying it as I wish I had said it my self ... N
December 9th, 2022 04:43
Neville said:
this just had to be said .. and now it has been, I applaud you sir for saying it as I wish I had said it my self ... N
December 9th, 2022 04:43
of Distance
Neville said:
whereas beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I am now quite certain that distance is all in the mind ..... Neville
December 9th, 2022 00:52
Neville said:
whereas beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I am now quite certain that distance is all in the mind ..... Neville
December 9th, 2022 00:52
of Distance
Joan Peters said:
It is not a stretch to say that when I read the comments you leave on posts and the replies you write, that I feel this poem coming to life, as though you\'re reaching out through your screen to everyone who reads your incredible works.
December 8th, 2022 10:00
Joan Peters said:
It is not a stretch to say that when I read the comments you leave on posts and the replies you write, that I feel this poem coming to life, as though you\'re reaching out through your screen to everyone who reads your incredible works.
December 8th, 2022 10:00
of Distance
Poetic Dan said:
......boom! My mind is melted and gone with the wind, lost in every word you just shared from within. To fly with your spirit truly lifted me up, thank you from above all the I do give a.......
Much peace and respect
December 7th, 2022 11:40
Poetic Dan said:
......boom! My mind is melted and gone with the wind, lost in every word you just shared from within. To fly with your spirit truly lifted me up, thank you from above all the I do give a.......
Much peace and respect
December 7th, 2022 11:40
of Distance
Bella Shepard said:
The two do become one, poet and reader. I read this twice, the second time while listening to your musical choice and found that the movement of fingers on QWERTY keys, strings, piano, flowed together in beautiful harmony. We share the words dear friend, it is how they are so gracefully assembled that make this poem such a work of art. Thank You!
December 5th, 2022 15:09
Bella Shepard said:
The two do become one, poet and reader. I read this twice, the second time while listening to your musical choice and found that the movement of fingers on QWERTY keys, strings, piano, flowed together in beautiful harmony. We share the words dear friend, it is how they are so gracefully assembled that make this poem such a work of art. Thank You!
December 5th, 2022 15:09
of Distance
crypticbard said:
A poetic tapestry with countless fingers busily shuttling needlework and where one leaves off another continues seamlessly and the thread continues intertwining along an ever expanding fringe.
December 5th, 2022 06:47
crypticbard said:
A poetic tapestry with countless fingers busily shuttling needlework and where one leaves off another continues seamlessly and the thread continues intertwining along an ever expanding fringe.
December 5th, 2022 06:47
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this poem so beautifully. To bring the opposite forces of life into balance, the poet\'s pen tells all. We can hope for equilibrium, but in the end it is up to us. A wonderfully contemplative write my friend.
December 2nd, 2022 15:55
Bella Shepard said:
You have phrased this poem so beautifully. To bring the opposite forces of life into balance, the poet\'s pen tells all. We can hope for equilibrium, but in the end it is up to us. A wonderfully contemplative write my friend.
December 2nd, 2022 15:55
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I like the feeling of this write. Perfect timing.
December 2nd, 2022 12:09
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I like the feeling of this write. Perfect timing.
December 2nd, 2022 12:09
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
Joan Peters said:
I can\'t provide the same insight as the other commentators on this masterpiece, still being new to poetry myself. I will say however, that the flow and rhythm of not only your poetry but of your words as a whole are inspiring and eye catching as a new member to this poetic community.
December 2nd, 2022 09:44
Joan Peters said:
I can\'t provide the same insight as the other commentators on this masterpiece, still being new to poetry myself. I will say however, that the flow and rhythm of not only your poetry but of your words as a whole are inspiring and eye catching as a new member to this poetic community.
December 2nd, 2022 09:44
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
sorenbarrett said:
The title is truly poetic in and of itself. I loved the alternating juxtaposition of thoughts in the first and second, third and forth lines that melts into a burst of hope to finish the poem with the last line tying it up in the meaning of the season. Beautiful
December 2nd, 2022 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
The title is truly poetic in and of itself. I loved the alternating juxtaposition of thoughts in the first and second, third and forth lines that melts into a burst of hope to finish the poem with the last line tying it up in the meaning of the season. Beautiful
December 2nd, 2022 07:18
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
crypticbard said:
A lovely rendition about the power of the pen and by extension of the mind behind the pen! Thanks L.B.
December 2nd, 2022 06:03
crypticbard said:
A lovely rendition about the power of the pen and by extension of the mind behind the pen! Thanks L.B.
December 2nd, 2022 06:03
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
Neville said:
Dylan made a point of emphasising that one should always carry a spare light bulb .. Your title here kinda makes more sense, in the literal sense .. a poet would almost surely be lost & leave prospective readers in the dark without his/her minds pen being open and to hand .. a festive inspired tribute to hope and the circumstances that continue to blight the world but which are temporarily masked in the glare of so many arc lamps and fairy lights ........ If I got it all wrong .. I\'m gonna blame Dylan :)
December 2nd, 2022 05:14
Neville said:
Dylan made a point of emphasising that one should always carry a spare light bulb .. Your title here kinda makes more sense, in the literal sense .. a poet would almost surely be lost & leave prospective readers in the dark without his/her minds pen being open and to hand .. a festive inspired tribute to hope and the circumstances that continue to blight the world but which are temporarily masked in the glare of so many arc lamps and fairy lights ........ If I got it all wrong .. I\'m gonna blame Dylan :)
December 2nd, 2022 05:14
With my mind’s Pen, in hand
Fay Slimm. said:
What a seductive title to your posting today L.B. - -- I love this jaunty tribute to the draw of festivities at this time of year which herald fresh hope to struggling humanity. In my list now as one of my faves this short Audenistic style gem-of-a-write.
December 2nd, 2022 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
What a seductive title to your posting today L.B. - -- I love this jaunty tribute to the draw of festivities at this time of year which herald fresh hope to struggling humanity. In my list now as one of my faves this short Audenistic style gem-of-a-write.
December 2nd, 2022 03:23
In each neglected minute
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Well Put, Brother L.B. Keep It Moving, My Friend.
December 2nd, 2022 02:33
Jerry Wayne Lawrence said:
Well Put, Brother L.B. Keep It Moving, My Friend.
December 2nd, 2022 02:33
of Attraction’s chemistry
Rocky Lagou said:
This is killer.
\"They, write about love
like it’s a battlefield, but
we’re just having fun, teasing
games, as romancing playfields\"
Jeez can your metaphors get any better?
Like that is so true, there be writers, and I\'m talking even outside of poetry, like songwriters and playwrights, who torment the sweet love tale into toxicity. But this poem felt just right.
Beautifully versified.
November 29th, 2022 10:49
Rocky Lagou said:
This is killer.
\"They, write about love
like it’s a battlefield, but
we’re just having fun, teasing
games, as romancing playfields\"
Jeez can your metaphors get any better?
Like that is so true, there be writers, and I\'m talking even outside of poetry, like songwriters and playwrights, who torment the sweet love tale into toxicity. But this poem felt just right.
Beautifully versified.
November 29th, 2022 10:49
of Attraction’s chemistry
Joan Peters said:
Your word choice is as exquisite as always. \"fervently\" and \"playfields\" words that I would likely overlook that you brought into this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing :)
November 29th, 2022 09:02
Joan Peters said:
Your word choice is as exquisite as always. \"fervently\" and \"playfields\" words that I would likely overlook that you brought into this masterpiece. Thank you for sharing :)
November 29th, 2022 09:02
of Attraction’s chemistry
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Very sweet and romantic verse.
November 28th, 2022 19:45
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Very sweet and romantic verse.
November 28th, 2022 19:45
of Attraction’s chemistry
SureshG said:
Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.
November 28th, 2022 17:10
SureshG said:
Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.
November 28th, 2022 17:10
of Attraction’s chemistry
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enchanting write my friend. How to explain body language, chemistry, a glance that can draw two people together at first sight. You have captured this so well, a true joy to read!
November 28th, 2022 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enchanting write my friend. How to explain body language, chemistry, a glance that can draw two people together at first sight. You have captured this so well, a true joy to read!
November 28th, 2022 13:29
of Attraction’s chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line \"like a battlefield, but\" and its rhyme in the last line \"games, as romancing playfields\" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.
November 28th, 2022 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line \"like a battlefield, but\" and its rhyme in the last line \"games, as romancing playfields\" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.
November 28th, 2022 07:52
of Attraction’s chemistry
Neville said:
there is something so very attractive .. indeed, alluring about a sway isn\'t there .. now captured here for all eternity .. damned near perfect if you ask me .. Neville
November 28th, 2022 06:57
Neville said:
there is something so very attractive .. indeed, alluring about a sway isn\'t there .. now captured here for all eternity .. damned near perfect if you ask me .. Neville
November 28th, 2022 06:57
of Attraction’s chemistry
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words .. nicely expressed
November 28th, 2022 06:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words .. nicely expressed
November 28th, 2022 06:12
of Attraction’s chemistry
crypticbard said:
We can see the \'sway\' is somewhat the personification of \'chemistry\' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.
November 28th, 2022 04:07
crypticbard said:
We can see the \'sway\' is somewhat the personification of \'chemistry\' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.
November 28th, 2022 04:07
You, knew me well
Eugene S. said:
Really like the tangerine allusion. Great poem!
November 25th, 2022 18:14
Eugene S. said:
Really like the tangerine allusion. Great poem!
November 25th, 2022 18:14
You, knew me well
SureshG said:
As the flow goes, it’s immaculate. While reading my mind wandered off to many scenarios - a seduction of a female, or that of a string instrument
November 25th, 2022 18:07
SureshG said:
As the flow goes, it’s immaculate. While reading my mind wandered off to many scenarios - a seduction of a female, or that of a string instrument
November 25th, 2022 18:07
You, knew me well
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Neville - this is certainly one of your best and so readably penned it goes straight into my list of favourites with top marks my friend.
November 25th, 2022 12:36
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Neville - this is certainly one of your best and so readably penned it goes straight into my list of favourites with top marks my friend.
November 25th, 2022 12:36
You, knew me well
Neville said:
Be proud of this Mek, very proud indeed sir ...................... Neville
November 25th, 2022 07:53
Neville said:
Be proud of this Mek, very proud indeed sir ...................... Neville
November 25th, 2022 07:53
You, knew me well
sorenbarrett said:
Your wording and gradual buildup was seductive and alluring. So tastefully written it was enticing and drew me in. Very nicely done.
November 25th, 2022 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Your wording and gradual buildup was seductive and alluring. So tastefully written it was enticing and drew me in. Very nicely done.
November 25th, 2022 07:05
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