Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



burgeoning Concerns
dusk arising said:

Ah yes that future again. How can we expect it\'s ripe fruits if all we do is pollute.

A fitting reminder in these times when we like to surround ourselves with plentys.

December 13th, 2021 03:31

A classic
SureshG said:

You have conjured up youths longing, in a collection of phrases, a rarity.

December 11th, 2021 23:41

Foreshadowed by Art
Wolf said:

I really enjoyed this. The last part with the dinosaurs roaming back reminded me of a thought I once had of what the future would be like once we\'re extinct. I use to say to myself: \"What would the new dominate species think of us when they find our remains and how will they fill in the gaps of parts of our story that\'s missing?\"

December 11th, 2021 18:11

of Malachite awareness
Poetic Dan said:

Boom! Thank you

December 11th, 2021 12:55

A classic
Goldfinch60 said:

Those lifetime memories will always be there Mek.

Andy

December 11th, 2021 01:32

A classic
dusk arising said:

You have coined exactly how my reality began to singe its way through the clouds of \"oh no, not consciousness\" as slowly and painfully the regrets of the night before cruised drunkenly through my hung-over senses.
The beauty of reality opened before me and i rushed for the bathroom overwhelmed.

December 10th, 2021 13:58

A classic
PrEm Ji said:

words crystallized into a diamond...

December 10th, 2021 11:59

A classic
spilleronsheet said:

So poetic
As always sir, your poetry is charismatic

December 10th, 2021 05:54

A classic
Teddy.15 said:

Ah so very beautiful dear Mek, 💖

December 10th, 2021 05:42

A classic
Robert Haigh said:

Very poetic imagery perfectly expressed in this poem, Mek!

December 10th, 2021 05:21

Ignited
C E Thomas said:

Fantastic. This, and your other poems, display your impressive ability to convey the deepest, most human emotions in the fewest of words. I wish you luck in your career

December 9th, 2021 06:31

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Rozina said:

Thank you for painting this vivid scene. Timely reminder for the tough life many people have to endure. Beautiful.

December 9th, 2021 05:55

unbending Pride!
KomfortKorner said:

The imagery and wordplay are incredible!!!

December 8th, 2021 22:02

Ignited
alsimmons said:

Just now
Just you
Just me
Just us_
Your word ignited and life to love and longing. great job.

December 8th, 2021 01:37

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Paul Bell said:

Life in a bag and then some.
What is it really all about. The silver spoon brigade has never changed, and even at times propped up by the people who should know better. Why are kids still dying all around the globe. What does one man need with a hundred billion in the bank? Why do three buses always turn up at once.

December 7th, 2021 08:43

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Goldfinch60 said:

That salvation is there for us all Mek.

Andy

December 7th, 2021 01:35

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
SureshG said:

just another day, maybe a little easier, when so poeticized

December 6th, 2021 15:22

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Draven said:

Beautiful yet so brooding and sad.

December 6th, 2021 12:27

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
melellendixon said:

The alliteration helps this flow so well. Bravo

December 6th, 2021 11:14

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Neville said:


I am somewhat ashamed to say, this made me smile .. Maybe because I know the truth is staring me write back in the face ...... Indeed, I would go as far as to suggest, this whole page is excellent ................................ N


December 6th, 2021 09:42

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Teddy.15 said:

Dear Mek, you always write about things that matter, i come from an incredibly poor family I had 6 siblings, and my parents, I don\'t know how they made it each Xmas but some how they did. But it was a stress, I can never fathom how so many have so much and others have nothing. Your poem is bleak and honest about how many people actually pass Xmas. Empathy and compassion always wins in my opinion. Thank you.

December 6th, 2021 08:44

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderfully constructed vivid scene here L. B. Mek, though it is mundanely bleak, it has a somewhat happy ending.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

December 6th, 2021 07:58

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
spilleronsheet said:

Fabulous yet sad
I don’t know why it sheds upon the restricted life of ours
The time passes so soon yet so many colours haven’t lived
At the end however hard we may try, what remains are just regrets of life
Yet what we have is no less
It’s better to be happy about what we possess

December 6th, 2021 06:09

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Lorna said:

Wow this was intense and a lot of feeling here in the images you painted. Good one Mek....

December 6th, 2021 05:25

of Malachite awareness
Rozina said:

Yes so much greed and injustice abound. Thank you for sharing.

December 3rd, 2021 21:57

of Malachite awareness
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, L.B.
We are loaded with \"criminal ignorance\" here.

December 3rd, 2021 16:16

of Malachite awareness
Teddy.15 said:

Brilliant Mek.

December 3rd, 2021 12:42

of Malachite awareness
SureshG said:

It’s not only ‘an eye for an eye’ that makes the whole world blind, it’s also greed that makes us oblivious and blinds us to reality. A superb post indeed.

December 3rd, 2021 11:03

of Malachite awareness
Neville said:


if ever there was a reason to write a dedication, you just hit upon that reason .. it is almost impossible to comprehend how in the 21st century so many individuals lost their lives & as many again were injured through no fault of their own but through the greed of others maybe and the age old habit of cutting corners to make a few cents more ...................... N

December 3rd, 2021 07:56

Meditation
Joe Dawson said:

There is nothing to add, save very well done. A work of some moment. Joe

December 2nd, 2021 09:33

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