Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies
Saxon Crow said:

A very beautiful poem today LB.

July 26th, 2021 14:25

Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies
SureshG said:

There’s beauty everywhere within the nature’s course of life, in birth and yes also in death, for one nurtures the other, as do your words nurture us today.

July 26th, 2021 13:03

Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies
Neville said:


there is absolutely nothing I dont like about your latest poem L.B ..

pleasing to the eye with great form flow throughout .. masterfully metaphored if ever there was such a thing and a super joyous celebratory message bathed in natures splendid hues ....... I ask ya, wots not to like ......................... N


July 26th, 2021 10:25

Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, L.B.
As sweet as the girl withe the flowers in her hair. Good casting.

July 26th, 2021 07:53

Invitation, to fireworks: of fireflies
Thekkinkkattil said:

You have described the breeze ,clouds,dawn and dusk and the colours of nature aptly

July 26th, 2021 03:51

Ink forged: Soulmates
Goldfinch60 said:

That sincerity is so important in any relationship Mek.

Andy

July 17th, 2021 00:08

Ink forged: Soulmates
myself and me said:

Ink forged? Still soulmate. The words just perfect.

July 16th, 2021 22:05

Ink forged: Soulmates
SureshG said:

If pleasant dreams can become reality,
my poetry may also increase in quality,
from ten percent, for all to see, for all to see.

But will I be able to write like you, is another case.

July 16th, 2021 15:59

Ink forged: Soulmates
aDarkerMind said:

an outstanding write!
listen to, and enjoy the applayse;

July 16th, 2021 15:12

Ink forged: Soulmates
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, L.B.
Soulmates for sure, but I have to read things more than once before it sinks in. Red dirt roads are hard.

July 16th, 2021 15:03

Ink forged: Soulmates
Saxon Crow said:

Yes. Simply yes

July 16th, 2021 14:28

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Kurt Philip Behm said:

\"Capacity to excavate\". very, very nice!

July 16th, 2021 09:09

Ink forged: Soulmates
Thekkinkkattil said:

The simplicity integrity and sincerity is highly appreciated and valued

July 16th, 2021 07:27

Ink forged: Soulmates
Neville said:


back at you brother
I do believe we are in the same corner


July 16th, 2021 07:21

Ink forged: Soulmates
Accidental Poet said:

You nailed it LB. Awesome write. ; )

July 16th, 2021 05:12

Ink forged: Soulmates
Poetic Dan said:

Love where you take it, places I would never go! Together we truly deeper and enrich the soul

Always a pleasure dear poetic brother!
Much peace and respect
Keep writing and living it

July 16th, 2021 05:01

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Poetic Dan said:

My first read of the day and given me so much to spray as I am what i am and whatever I can be, the shedding of one moment to the next never comes easily.

Unless a poet opens their soul with inspirational flow, turning my blink of existence into (we\'re) incredible!

July 16th, 2021 01:29

Ephemeral: ‘We’
MendedFences27 said:

\'We are\" not what we wish we were, or something greater or more meaningful. \"We are\" what others see and not the image blurred by the mirror. Ego distorts, so does lack of self-esteem. In our \"blinked existences\" we leave a trail, hardly ever the one we set out upon.
Some very fine words with a sincere and truthful message. - Phil A.

July 13th, 2021 16:13

Ephemeral: ‘We’
SureshG said:

‘ Oui’

what more is necessary to say, but

‘Oui’

July 13th, 2021 12:11

Ephemeral: ‘We’
illia said:

Read a few times over. Isn\'t it wonderful when you can expand your vocabulary in such short sentences. To imbue is our only option. Beautiful piece.

July 13th, 2021 08:43

Ephemeral: ‘We’
myself and me said:

A blink indeed. that\'s it.

July 12th, 2021 22:27

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Goldfinch60 said:

We are within ourselves and will always progress from within.

Andy

July 12th, 2021 15:13

Ephemeral: ‘We’
PrEm Ji said:

we are that...
that present moment,
which is ephemeral...
that\'s the only moment we exist...
still we prefer the past and some
hopes for the future...

July 12th, 2021 12:39

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, L.B.
You stretch me, my friend. Had to go and learn how to say \"purposiveness.\"

July 12th, 2021 09:26

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine reflective write on how to stay who we are and from inside bring out the purpose of living here on the planet - - this one goes into my list of favourites and thank you for it sharing it dear friend.

July 12th, 2021 06:18

Ephemeral: ‘We’
Neville said:


Liked more than liked allows .. just before the profoundly awesome mark and then some ...

July 12th, 2021 03:10

A common miracle
SureshG said:

Loved the crescendo ending “drunken hearts”

June 23rd, 2021 12:47

A common miracle
SureshG said:

Entwined, your words display a scene, memorable

June 22nd, 2021 01:22

A common miracle
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Mek.

Like the artwork as well.

Andy

June 22nd, 2021 00:09

A common miracle
Caring dove said:

Very lovely , lovely feel to your words 🙂

June 21st, 2021 09:24



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