Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
With a ball at their feet
RDS said:
Not often I read poetry about the beautiful game and you do well to capture grace, strain and elation in your phrases. Thanks L. B.
November 24th, 2020 19:08
RDS said:
Not often I read poetry about the beautiful game and you do well to capture grace, strain and elation in your phrases. Thanks L. B.
November 24th, 2020 19:08
With a ball at their feet
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write LB about a game for gentleman played by hooligans where rugby is a game for hooligans played by gentlemen.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write LB about a game for gentleman played by hooligans where rugby is a game for hooligans played by gentlemen.
Andy
November 24th, 2020 01:41
With a ball at their feet
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in this game. Well, I know now! lol.
I can\'t say that T & F stanza after a couple of whiskies! (verse 2).
I don\'tsh drinksh really, you knowsh. Good acting there, innit?! lol.
November 23rd, 2020 05:54
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in this game. Well, I know now! lol.
I can\'t say that T & F stanza after a couple of whiskies! (verse 2).
I don\'tsh drinksh really, you knowsh. Good acting there, innit?! lol.
November 23rd, 2020 05:54
With a ball at their feet
Neville said:
even without the title .. it would have been impossible not to both enjoy and comprehend precisely where these words were taking the reader sir ... you are a winner mate having scored the winner well before the final whistle ...
November 23rd, 2020 05:40
Neville said:
even without the title .. it would have been impossible not to both enjoy and comprehend precisely where these words were taking the reader sir ... you are a winner mate having scored the winner well before the final whistle ...
November 23rd, 2020 05:40
With a ball at their feet
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted piece of prose-poetry into first class writing. Great read again L.B.
November 23rd, 2020 04:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Thrill of the game captured with detailed imagery throws this well-crafted piece of prose-poetry into first class writing. Great read again L.B.
November 23rd, 2020 04:51
of Immortal Poetry
Neville said:
this is one of those real one of a kind s............... enjoyed an not likely to be forgot ...
November 20th, 2020 02:06
Neville said:
this is one of those real one of a kind s............... enjoyed an not likely to be forgot ...
November 20th, 2020 02:06
Depression
Neville said:
Having spent almost the whole of my working life within the diverse field of mental health and trying to respond to the needs of the individual in various forms of distress and despair .. I can honestly say, you have come closer than most in describing and defining the beast that is depression ....
this is excellent my friend ...
Neville
November 3rd, 2020 07:47
Neville said:
Having spent almost the whole of my working life within the diverse field of mental health and trying to respond to the needs of the individual in various forms of distress and despair .. I can honestly say, you have come closer than most in describing and defining the beast that is depression ....
this is excellent my friend ...
Neville
November 3rd, 2020 07:47
Depression
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to ponder on my friend.
October 30th, 2020 07:19
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah your pen images it well this wide-spread depression - - a write to ponder on my friend.
October 30th, 2020 07:19
Depression
dusk arising said:
Wow, that must be one definitive revelation of a poets inner sadness.
October 30th, 2020 05:41
dusk arising said:
Wow, that must be one definitive revelation of a poets inner sadness.
October 30th, 2020 05:41
Unruly
Neville said:
I am write there beside you my friend ... this art, this craft of ours is big enough to encompass all styles and forms... but I know which of them I favour ............... you have just posted a very important post on a very important topic .......................... N
October 29th, 2020 04:57
Neville said:
I am write there beside you my friend ... this art, this craft of ours is big enough to encompass all styles and forms... but I know which of them I favour ............... you have just posted a very important post on a very important topic .......................... N
October 29th, 2020 04:57
Unruly
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb structure to this meangful write.
October 27th, 2020 04:27
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb structure to this meangful write.
October 27th, 2020 04:27
Unruly
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and well written LB, we use our words to put our feelings and thoughts onto the paper, sometimes they fall into rhythm and rhyme but that is just we feel as the ink goes onto the paper.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and well written LB, we use our words to put our feelings and thoughts onto the paper, sometimes they fall into rhythm and rhyme but that is just we feel as the ink goes onto the paper.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 01:17
of Immortal Poetry
Dove said:
Well I applaud your format and structure! I have struggled formatting my words here!
I enjoy the digital era of words, and no doubt , would not be exposed to fine wordsmiths!
I do say, I still need to read more works of art! Kinda stuck on Detective Mysteries!
October 26th, 2020 22:04
Dove said:
Well I applaud your format and structure! I have struggled formatting my words here!
I enjoy the digital era of words, and no doubt , would not be exposed to fine wordsmiths!
I do say, I still need to read more works of art! Kinda stuck on Detective Mysteries!
October 26th, 2020 22:04
Unruly
Dove said:
Awe my dear if I had the extensive divine vocabulary as yours,
then perhaps free Verse would spill from my tongue, but alas,
You are a divine writer! I usually have rhymes in my head, though
I have discovered new poetic forms for which I like try out,
October 26th, 2020 21:24
Dove said:
Awe my dear if I had the extensive divine vocabulary as yours,
then perhaps free Verse would spill from my tongue, but alas,
You are a divine writer! I usually have rhymes in my head, though
I have discovered new poetic forms for which I like try out,
October 26th, 2020 21:24
Unruly
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must have me metres (usually) and me melodic whims.
They\'re only whims. I get arrested for false pretences of singing! They say it\'s two cats fighting, and disturbs the peace. lol.
October 26th, 2020 06:21
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must have me metres (usually) and me melodic whims.
They\'re only whims. I get arrested for false pretences of singing! They say it\'s two cats fighting, and disturbs the peace. lol.
October 26th, 2020 06:21
Unruly
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing perception in poetic versing. A favourite for sure my friend.
October 26th, 2020 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing perception in poetic versing. A favourite for sure my friend.
October 26th, 2020 04:57
Unruly
dusk arising said:
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36
dusk arising said:
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36
of Immortal Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
The work of a true wordsmith in your own great style.
October 19th, 2020 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
The work of a true wordsmith in your own great style.
October 19th, 2020 13:54
of Immortal Poetry
dusk arising said:
Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor wish to be \'modern\'. That is to simply get on with it - whatever it is, and for me here it\'s poetry. Whether mine is any good, conventional, rule breaking or absurd I leave for others as I am comfortable with \'the way I do it\' and do not seek comparison. But i do like to be read lol.
I\'m not sure whether i have lost the plot in your piece today. That Bukowski root was excellent and set the tone for my interpretation of yours.
October 19th, 2020 09:28
dusk arising said:
Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor wish to be \'modern\'. That is to simply get on with it - whatever it is, and for me here it\'s poetry. Whether mine is any good, conventional, rule breaking or absurd I leave for others as I am comfortable with \'the way I do it\' and do not seek comparison. But i do like to be read lol.
I\'m not sure whether i have lost the plot in your piece today. That Bukowski root was excellent and set the tone for my interpretation of yours.
October 19th, 2020 09:28
Dear Friend
Neville said:
I am back here simply because these few words stand tall ....
and because they so deserve more attention ...
October 1st, 2020 03:55
Neville said:
I am back here simply because these few words stand tall ....
and because they so deserve more attention ...
October 1st, 2020 03:55
rude Awakenings
Dove said:
Ha, well luckily the snoring moved us apart into our own beds! But I think I remember the theme of your write, these days I get cats clawing my feet as I awaken ,
Nice GLENIT Bee, From Michael,
September 29th, 2020 10:13
Dove said:
Ha, well luckily the snoring moved us apart into our own beds! But I think I remember the theme of your write, these days I get cats clawing my feet as I awaken ,
Nice GLENIT Bee, From Michael,
September 29th, 2020 10:13
rude Awakenings
Goldfinch60 said:
This brought a big smile to my face LB, thank you for that.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:04
Goldfinch60 said:
This brought a big smile to my face LB, thank you for that.
Andy
September 29th, 2020 00:04
rude Awakenings
MendedFences27 said:
Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until they are all sorted out and feeling better. A cup of tea or coffee might have saved the day. A picture all too familiar to many folks.Well done. - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 15:59
MendedFences27 said:
Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until they are all sorted out and feeling better. A cup of tea or coffee might have saved the day. A picture all too familiar to many folks.Well done. - Phil A.
September 28th, 2020 15:59
rude Awakenings
Michael Edwards said:
A great write as I\'ve said before and I am indebted to you for your generous comments - now I\'ve got something to live up to. And I\'ll certainly save the write.
September 28th, 2020 05:30
Michael Edwards said:
A great write as I\'ve said before and I am indebted to you for your generous comments - now I\'ve got something to live up to. And I\'ll certainly save the write.
September 28th, 2020 05:30
rude Awakenings
Neville said:
Ah\' .. moments captured eh\' ... this is near perfect and all too familiar oh\' and brought a smile to my face this mid mane ....
a keeper for sure .. wish I had caught it first sir ....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 04:36
Neville said:
Ah\' .. moments captured eh\' ... this is near perfect and all too familiar oh\' and brought a smile to my face this mid mane ....
a keeper for sure .. wish I had caught it first sir ....
Neville
September 28th, 2020 04:36
rude Awakenings
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains as morning is breaking.........very well stated L.B.
September 28th, 2020 03:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A familiar picture your impressive pen paints behind many drawn curtains as morning is breaking.........very well stated L.B.
September 28th, 2020 03:44
Dear Friend
Dove said:
How beautiful a shadow is too!
Nice little verse! Much to ponder
I have a little shadow it
follows me wherever
I go, at night it takes a rest
and only in light will it show
Smilez
September 20th, 2020 00:49
Dove said:
How beautiful a shadow is too!
Nice little verse! Much to ponder
I have a little shadow it
follows me wherever
I go, at night it takes a rest
and only in light will it show
Smilez
September 20th, 2020 00:49
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