Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



A Dandelion lullaby
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely writing , Mek 🙂 ‘ I wish you a field of dandelions in your dreams ‘ beautiful line .. a nice expression

April 18th, 2022 02:48

Might of Swipe
Job welime said:

The truth in this piece,,,
So raw and vulnerable,,,
Nice write dear poet.

April 17th, 2022 02:52

Might of Swipe
Hakikur Rahman said:

A pertinent issue of the society. Good points.

April 16th, 2022 04:39

Might of Swipe
Eugene S. said:

I ascribe the same sentiments to physical doctors and believe that it all comes down to some form of inwardness. Inwardness seems to be the modern way of handling things. Thanks for capturing that. May we all care more about our neighbors!

April 16th, 2022 03:47

Might of Swipe
Neville said:


swipe me with a sharp bit o plastic ..
cut it off & retail me why dont\'cha ..

can\'t buy ya love tho can it ... nice one Mek :)


April 16th, 2022 01:29

Might of Swipe
Rozina said:

Powerful truth in your lines. Excellent write.

April 15th, 2022 18:10

Might of Swipe
Bella Shepard said:

Ah, the security of stuff, and more stuff, and more stuff, and then it escalates to items, objects and soon the only way you can feel better is to score some goods. A huge price to pay for that transitory feeling of well being. Unfortunately we can\'t swipe our way to happiness. Personally I opt for ice cream. A great write and right on the money.

April 15th, 2022 15:23

Might of Swipe
dusk arising said:

Call me old-fashioned if you like but retail therapy i can do without. Somehow getting older is getting far less of a needy individual for me. Indeed I rarely venture into the shopping areas downtown. Gone are those young aspiring days of window shopping, of much want and little cash. Credit cards had just become available I recall and inflation was ridiculous in double figures making it cheaper to buy on a card rather than to save-up. By the time you\'d saved up the price had gone up twice LOL.
Yes, plenty of cupboard space needed for those on a course of retail therapy. But maybe to be a real player in that game one has a very active ebay selling account too, or one of the now many derivatives.

April 15th, 2022 10:10

Might of Swipe
dean langmuir said:

Very good write LB.take care

April 15th, 2022 07:39

Might of Swipe
Draven said:

Nicely written, and some very brutal truths there.

April 15th, 2022 06:29

Might of Swipe
MDStone said:

Gives thought to the phrase In One Fell Swoop or in this case Swipe. Thanks for a glimpse into reality. Which pill will you take, Red or Blue? Enjoyed the thought provoking truth, LB.

April 15th, 2022 06:18

Might of Swipe
Fay Slimm. said:

Retail Therapy came as a shock when I first heard the phrase and your exposure of what followed seems these days to induce changes in the word security - a haunt of a read L.B. and so very succinctly presented

April 15th, 2022 05:12

Might of Swipe
Paul Bell said:

Buy today, die tomorrow, the byword to a greater life, though, granted you won\'t know anything about it.
Now, can I \'\'interest\'\' you in this new card. You can literally buy the store with it, don\'t worry about the small print, well, at least not for the moment.

April 15th, 2022 05:02

Might of Swipe
Paul Bell said:

Buy today, die tomorrow, the byword to a greater life, though, granted you won\'t know anything about it.
Now, can I \'\'interest\'\' you in this new card. You can literally buy the store with it, don\'t worry about the small print, well, at least not for the moment.

April 15th, 2022 05:02

Might of Swipe
spilleronsheet said:

Chasing for security in life
Don’t know what should be called as fiscal freedom in mind
What amount shall hold secure
What needs shall be called optimal
Truly as your poetry
Powerfully it speaks “ Might of swipe “ which reaps

April 15th, 2022 04:34

Might of Swipe
Teddy.15 said:

Fiscal freedom rings well in my ears dear Mek, as I have only recently got some security. A very powerful look deep inside society and what it means for those less fortunate. 💖

April 15th, 2022 03:02

of Chauvinist, heroic’s
chella said:

Just when I thought your previous poem had wowed me.


April 14th, 2022 10:37

of Artistry’s fuse and folly’s Muse
Neville said:



you just did the almost impossible and most certainly the enviable with this most beautiful monster you have created for those of us here .. for indeed, it has everything this fan of words is looking for in a post ... timeless & in its own write understated yet priceless n darn near perfectly pitched for the day in question ....................... Neville


April 14th, 2022 07:33

Spring!
bubblehead95 said:

Spring in its most alluring and harmonious representation. It is undoubtedly gorgeous as always. Splendid!

April 14th, 2022 03:13

Spring!
Neville said:


this whole poetic work is otherworldly and stands out as the work of art it most surely is ......................... Neville

April 12th, 2022 02:12

Spring!
rrodriguez said:

I read your poem listening to the Vivaldi video and the words you penned about spring, sprung up to exult this marvelous time of rebirth. Excellent write!

April 11th, 2022 13:19

Spring!
Rocky Lagou said:

Yes! What an enchanting and AROMATIC welcoming of Spring. I felt every word that your carefully placed into this marvel. Very well done!

April 11th, 2022 08:28

Spring!
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m often left without words after absorbing all of yours and that my friend is truly the most delightful feeling!
Nothingness can be bliss and I kid you not and bird tweets away as I write this.

Thank you for sharing my your spring be as pleasant as the soul you are!

April 11th, 2022 07:41

Spring!
Teddy.15 said:

Oh Mekky, lol did you eat a shakespeare book when you were a child? Your language is such a delight spring where for out spring? You are an emblem of hope dear friend. 💖

April 11th, 2022 07:17

Spring!
dean langmuir said:

Nice LB,take care

April 11th, 2022 07:04

Spring!
dusk arising said:

Springtime - natures effervescent refreshing of the world and boy does it get to our senses waking us up with vibrant colours, even green becomes G R E E N !!! the real verdant life of growth all around as blossoms decorate with their scented tease and again that buzzing of winged insects fills the air.

Your words have gotten me all worked up and keen to go sample some of it.

April 11th, 2022 05:22

Spring!
spilleronsheet said:

Beautiful imagery with perfect lines
The colours and emotions blended
Could see the scenes of spring on display
As if the seasons were playing in front of eyes
As always a pleasure to go through a master piece

April 11th, 2022 04:43

Spring!
Rozina said:

Wow! I can see this, feel this, hear this, smell this. Wonderful lines. Enjoy the spring.

April 11th, 2022 02:56

A common miracle
Albert Elod said:

you compare light with love right ?


April 10th, 2022 04:17

A common miracle
Albert Elod said:

wow it s so insane did you mean that
the stars the lights in the night are reflections of his love for her, almost like he could light the wat using his love like a lantern

April 10th, 2022 04:15



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