of Attraction’s chemistry
SureshG said:

Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.

November 28th, 2022 17:10

of Attraction’s chemistry
sorenbarrett said:

You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line \"like a battlefield, but\" and its rhyme in the last line \"games, as romancing playfields\" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.

November 28th, 2022 07:52

of Attraction’s chemistry
JoyJoy said:

I love the melody of this poem


November 28th, 2022 06:37

of Attraction’s chemistry
crypticbard said:

We can see the \'sway\' is somewhat the personification of \'chemistry\' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.

November 28th, 2022 04:07

You, knew me well
SureshG said:

As the flow goes, it’s immaculate. While reading my mind wandered off to many scenarios - a seduction of a female, or that of a string instrument

November 25th, 2022 18:07

You, knew me well
Neville said:


Be proud of this Mek, very proud indeed sir ...................... Neville

November 25th, 2022 07:53

You, knew me well
crypticbard said:

Best be careful there, friend; for zip to lip often draws blood and a lasting painful warning. Awesome poem.

November 25th, 2022 03:32

When I seek solace from within
Neville said:


I have now lost count of the times I have read & re-read this epic reflection back on back and shall no doubt re-visit again from time to time .. each time, by the way, I get the feeling I enjoyed it more and more ............... Neville


November 22nd, 2022 02:36

tighter, Still!
Neville said:

I think that which follows my next full stop would be nigh on impossible to better.

this, a wild ride upon love’s seats
surviving by investing, and
gripping
each other, ever tighter
Still!

Neville


November 21st, 2022 13:36

Cursor and I
crypticbard said:

never a cursory glance
that blinkin\' cursor
wouldn\'t stand a chance
keyboard\'s clacking, prance

November 21st, 2022 08:30

Cursor and I
MDStone said:

“I type, we type
To give voice
And seek understanding
To this wonder, called living.”
That is the ever blinking cursor in the heart of every wordsmith. Thank You, LB.

November 21st, 2022 07:03

tighter, Still!
Bella Shepard said:

When caught in the grip of love, the heart may supersede the brain, and override logic and reason, unable to know when to let go. You propose quite a quandary my friend, a very good write.

November 18th, 2022 15:52

tighter, Still!
crypticbard said:

Some of us are aware of that untameable track that we have been put on. The struggle is real.

November 18th, 2022 07:38

An evening’s enamouring essence
Neville said:


I seriously hope that you are seriously proud of this fine composition brother Mek because, if it were mine, I seriously would be ......... Neville

November 18th, 2022 03:55

When I seek solace from within
Joan Peters said:

Have you ever read the secret history by Donna Tartt? Her language is exquisite- same as yours. You weave such strong emotion with seemingly so little effort it is inspiring. You remind me of my favourite author. Please take this as a compliment- as that is what it is.

November 16th, 2022 08:54