Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
of Attraction’s chemistry
SureshG said:
Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.
November 28th, 2022 17:10
SureshG said:
Your poetry today immediately reminded me of the song SWAY by Dean Martin, and the lines -
I can hear the sound of violins
Long before it begins -
and the dance moves therein, so personify the creative so expressed here.
November 28th, 2022 17:10
of Attraction’s chemistry
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enchanting write my friend. How to explain body language, chemistry, a glance that can draw two people together at first sight. You have captured this so well, a true joy to read!
November 28th, 2022 13:29
Bella Shepard said:
Such an enchanting write my friend. How to explain body language, chemistry, a glance that can draw two people together at first sight. You have captured this so well, a true joy to read!
November 28th, 2022 13:29
of Attraction’s chemistry
sorenbarrett said:
You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line \"like a battlefield, but\" and its rhyme in the last line \"games, as romancing playfields\" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.
November 28th, 2022 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
You have described it well, the small things that let us know that the match is right. I was struck by the third stanza where the rhyme came on the second to the last word in the line \"like a battlefield, but\" and its rhyme in the last line \"games, as romancing playfields\" This small break, so subtle left shadows in my mind like an echo bringing me back again and again. It was a wonderful ploy.
November 28th, 2022 07:52
of Attraction’s chemistry
Neville said:
there is something so very attractive .. indeed, alluring about a sway isn\'t there .. now captured here for all eternity .. damned near perfect if you ask me .. Neville
November 28th, 2022 06:57
Neville said:
there is something so very attractive .. indeed, alluring about a sway isn\'t there .. now captured here for all eternity .. damned near perfect if you ask me .. Neville
November 28th, 2022 06:57
of Attraction’s chemistry
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words .. nicely expressed
November 28th, 2022 06:12
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely words .. nicely expressed
November 28th, 2022 06:12
of Attraction’s chemistry
crypticbard said:
We can see the \'sway\' is somewhat the personification of \'chemistry\' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.
November 28th, 2022 04:07
crypticbard said:
We can see the \'sway\' is somewhat the personification of \'chemistry\' between individuals. In other kingdoms it is likened to a mating dance.
November 28th, 2022 04:07
You, knew me well
Eugene S. said:
Really like the tangerine allusion. Great poem!
November 25th, 2022 18:14
Eugene S. said:
Really like the tangerine allusion. Great poem!
November 25th, 2022 18:14
You, knew me well
SureshG said:
As the flow goes, it’s immaculate. While reading my mind wandered off to many scenarios - a seduction of a female, or that of a string instrument
November 25th, 2022 18:07
SureshG said:
As the flow goes, it’s immaculate. While reading my mind wandered off to many scenarios - a seduction of a female, or that of a string instrument
November 25th, 2022 18:07
You, knew me well
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Neville - this is certainly one of your best and so readably penned it goes straight into my list of favourites with top marks my friend.
November 25th, 2022 12:36
Fay Slimm. said:
I agree with Neville - this is certainly one of your best and so readably penned it goes straight into my list of favourites with top marks my friend.
November 25th, 2022 12:36
You, knew me well
Neville said:
Be proud of this Mek, very proud indeed sir ...................... Neville
November 25th, 2022 07:53
Neville said:
Be proud of this Mek, very proud indeed sir ...................... Neville
November 25th, 2022 07:53
You, knew me well
sorenbarrett said:
Your wording and gradual buildup was seductive and alluring. So tastefully written it was enticing and drew me in. Very nicely done.
November 25th, 2022 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
Your wording and gradual buildup was seductive and alluring. So tastefully written it was enticing and drew me in. Very nicely done.
November 25th, 2022 07:05
You, knew me well
crypticbard said:
Best be careful there, friend; for zip to lip often draws blood and a lasting painful warning. Awesome poem.
November 25th, 2022 03:32
crypticbard said:
Best be careful there, friend; for zip to lip often draws blood and a lasting painful warning. Awesome poem.
November 25th, 2022 03:32
Cursor and I
John Prophet said:
Wow, deep, sophistication.
Wonderful work LBM!
November 23rd, 2022 06:46
John Prophet said:
Wow, deep, sophistication.
Wonderful work LBM!
November 23rd, 2022 06:46
When I seek solace from within
Neville said:
I have now lost count of the times I have read & re-read this epic reflection back on back and shall no doubt re-visit again from time to time .. each time, by the way, I get the feeling I enjoyed it more and more ............... Neville
November 22nd, 2022 02:36
Neville said:
I have now lost count of the times I have read & re-read this epic reflection back on back and shall no doubt re-visit again from time to time .. each time, by the way, I get the feeling I enjoyed it more and more ............... Neville
November 22nd, 2022 02:36
Cursor and I
Neville said:
Hey Mek, I know it might sound like a cop out, but I find myself agreeing with every single word MendedFences27 aka Phil has already said ......... Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:40
Neville said:
Hey Mek, I know it might sound like a cop out, but I find myself agreeing with every single word MendedFences27 aka Phil has already said ......... Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:40
tighter, Still!
Neville said:
I think that which follows my next full stop would be nigh on impossible to better.
this, a wild ride upon love’s seats
surviving by investing, and
gripping
each other, ever tighter
Still!
Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:36
Neville said:
I think that which follows my next full stop would be nigh on impossible to better.
this, a wild ride upon love’s seats
surviving by investing, and
gripping
each other, ever tighter
Still!
Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:36
Cursor and I
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Very imaginative write. Kept me spellbound through its entirety. But now I can\'t stand my bloody cursor. It\'s going to drive me mad. Your poem is well constructed, expressed, and true to its mission. I cannot bear to look at that little arrowed sucker any longer. Thank you. You have made my day. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2022 10:04
MendedFences27 said:
Wow! Very imaginative write. Kept me spellbound through its entirety. But now I can\'t stand my bloody cursor. It\'s going to drive me mad. Your poem is well constructed, expressed, and true to its mission. I cannot bear to look at that little arrowed sucker any longer. Thank you. You have made my day. - Phil A.
November 21st, 2022 10:04
Cursor and I
crypticbard said:
never a cursory glance
that blinkin\' cursor
wouldn\'t stand a chance
keyboard\'s clacking, prance
November 21st, 2022 08:30
crypticbard said:
never a cursory glance
that blinkin\' cursor
wouldn\'t stand a chance
keyboard\'s clacking, prance
November 21st, 2022 08:30
Cursor and I
Poetic Dan said:
.... just wow... goosebumps on top of my goosebumps just the way it ended... keep shining that beautiful unique shine of yours!
Thanks for sharing and the journey
November 21st, 2022 08:17
Poetic Dan said:
.... just wow... goosebumps on top of my goosebumps just the way it ended... keep shining that beautiful unique shine of yours!
Thanks for sharing and the journey
November 21st, 2022 08:17
Cursor and I
MDStone said:
“I type, we type
To give voice
And seek understanding
To this wonder, called living.”
That is the ever blinking cursor in the heart of every wordsmith. Thank You, LB.
November 21st, 2022 07:03
MDStone said:
“I type, we type
To give voice
And seek understanding
To this wonder, called living.”
That is the ever blinking cursor in the heart of every wordsmith. Thank You, LB.
November 21st, 2022 07:03
tighter, Still!
SureshG said:
Love - unrelenting in or out of it, and then when poetically framed by you.
November 18th, 2022 17:27
SureshG said:
Love - unrelenting in or out of it, and then when poetically framed by you.
November 18th, 2022 17:27
tighter, Still!
Bella Shepard said:
When caught in the grip of love, the heart may supersede the brain, and override logic and reason, unable to know when to let go. You propose quite a quandary my friend, a very good write.
November 18th, 2022 15:52
Bella Shepard said:
When caught in the grip of love, the heart may supersede the brain, and override logic and reason, unable to know when to let go. You propose quite a quandary my friend, a very good write.
November 18th, 2022 15:52
tighter, Still!
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes the ride can be very wild in love\'s unpredictable seats. A pleasure to read your advice Mek on being at all times wary of falling and clinging on tighter.
November 18th, 2022 09:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh yes the ride can be very wild in love\'s unpredictable seats. A pleasure to read your advice Mek on being at all times wary of falling and clinging on tighter.
November 18th, 2022 09:01
tighter, Still!
crypticbard said:
Some of us are aware of that untameable track that we have been put on. The struggle is real.
November 18th, 2022 07:38
crypticbard said:
Some of us are aware of that untameable track that we have been put on. The struggle is real.
November 18th, 2022 07:38
tighter, Still!
LauraBerry said:
A great depiction of how we fight our emotions rather than feel safe to feel them.
November 18th, 2022 04:35
LauraBerry said:
A great depiction of how we fight our emotions rather than feel safe to feel them.
November 18th, 2022 04:35
An evening’s enamouring essence
Neville said:
I seriously hope that you are seriously proud of this fine composition brother Mek because, if it were mine, I seriously would be ......... Neville
November 18th, 2022 03:55
Neville said:
I seriously hope that you are seriously proud of this fine composition brother Mek because, if it were mine, I seriously would be ......... Neville
November 18th, 2022 03:55
When I seek solace from within
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, you speak so fluently of the human condition. The feeling that life is fleeting, that time an illusion. Fears that cause us to distract ourselves daily, and we must somehow reconcile to. Yet to share this uncertain life with another eases the disquietude, and we can fine peace, perhaps joy in acceptance. A sublime write my dear friend!
November 16th, 2022 16:45
Bella Shepard said:
My dear friend, you speak so fluently of the human condition. The feeling that life is fleeting, that time an illusion. Fears that cause us to distract ourselves daily, and we must somehow reconcile to. Yet to share this uncertain life with another eases the disquietude, and we can fine peace, perhaps joy in acceptance. A sublime write my dear friend!
November 16th, 2022 16:45
When I seek solace from within
Joan Peters said:
Have you ever read the secret history by Donna Tartt? Her language is exquisite- same as yours. You weave such strong emotion with seemingly so little effort it is inspiring. You remind me of my favourite author. Please take this as a compliment- as that is what it is.
November 16th, 2022 08:54
Joan Peters said:
Have you ever read the secret history by Donna Tartt? Her language is exquisite- same as yours. You weave such strong emotion with seemingly so little effort it is inspiring. You remind me of my favourite author. Please take this as a compliment- as that is what it is.
November 16th, 2022 08:54
Docking station
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! My head just swirled with delight
Thank you
November 15th, 2022 11:41
Poetic Dan said:
Yes! My head just swirled with delight
Thank you
November 15th, 2022 11:41
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