Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



of Love #1
Fay Slimm. said:

Agree wholeheartedly with Sax - I was captured entirely with the opening lines of this sensational saga of undying love your pen has conjoured a compelling linguistic winner for me L.B.- a certain favourite to read over again - -- and again.

September 10th, 2021 04:29

of Love #1
Doggerel Dave said:

I suppose we don’t have to judge the character of the poet to appreciate the work as good.

September 10th, 2021 03:53

of Love #1
Teddy.15 said:

Magnificent an epic of what true love is. In every emotion infelt it all. Wow, L.B you are on fire my friend.

September 10th, 2021 03:42

of Love #1
dusk arising said:

Saxon says it for me here too LBM. I was held, gripped all the stronger as i read further.
Love does not go away, we hide from it when we must, we lie for it and we die with it. Nothing compares.
You pushed all the buttons today. A favourite for sure.

September 10th, 2021 03:14

of Love #1
Saxon Crow said:

By far, for me, the best poem you have ever created and shared. It held me prisoner from start to finish, if there was an absolute favourite button I\'d use it on this mastetpiece LB. Truly beautiful

September 10th, 2021 03:03

of Sweetness
aDarkerMind said:

has the applause for this finished yet L B ?

i doubt it!

September 8th, 2021 11:04

of Sweetness
aDarkerMind said:



September 8th, 2021 11:03

of Sweetness
myself and me said:

The sweetness of love conquered all the bitterness in life. A unique piece to enjoy.

September 7th, 2021 19:57

of Sweetness
John Prophet said:

Great write LBM

September 7th, 2021 06:16

of Sweetness
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Mek bringing that sweetness to us all.

Andy

September 7th, 2021 00:13

of Sweetness
Fay Slimm. said:

This write is so special I want it to read every time I need a dose of tonic as it brims with right attitude on life my friend. Agree too with Neville this is 21st century poetry at its very best.

September 6th, 2021 15:23

of Sweetness
Robert Haigh said:

A beautifully written piece, brimming with poetic imagery and inventive narrative! Bravo!

September 6th, 2021 08:42

of Sweetness
Neville said:

Promise me .. nah, promise us you will never tinker, jiggle or revise a single word ......................................21st century poetry has just come of age damn it ..

September 6th, 2021 08:13

of Sweetness
Neil Higgins said:

\"my ultra-HD blinkered VPN\"
I need one of these LB.
What an amazing write you have posted here.I will need to reread several times,but wow.

September 6th, 2021 04:05

of Sweetness
Teddy.15 said:

Dear L.B your poetic heart has once again showered us with a glorious thought about just loving life as it is our greatest gift, i cannot help but think this is for a particular lady in your life it\'s got a romantic tone so elegant.

I let my eyes, serenade you

with a million love poems

‘stop it’, you blush: ‘never!’ I promise.



We begin

as passing sirens, accompany

blaring obscenely, alarmingly

but

we still hear every syllable, shared

in our engrossing conversation

about, work stresses and lunch breaks;

love these lines, but i just enjoy all your writes, filled with positivity and wisdom. kudos from me my dear poet friend.

September 6th, 2021 03:56

of Sweetness
dusk arising said:

mmmm living - loving it! Who needs some remote newswriters agenda when important stuff like life is on hand.

Love the way you\'ve framed this with it\'s great intro.

September 6th, 2021 03:24

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
HannahElisabeth said:

I love that you added Moonlight Sonata to this, it was the reason I started playing piano.

September 3rd, 2021 20:36

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
Neville said:

although the whole thing is indeed a work of art .. you have most definitely incorporated and interwoven some outstanding imagery & concepts .. I bow before the golden shadow of thy pen .... N

September 3rd, 2021 06:52

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
Neil Higgins said:

You should have been my English Language teacher at school LB.Maybe I wouldn\'t have kept getting D- minus all the time.Yes.Really.

\"Somewhere – far, a butterfly flutters awareness
flustered, at its transcendent Phoenix state
revitalised yet humbled, by its transformation
begins gliding, gustily flapping its theorised chaos\"
Superb lines LB.

September 3rd, 2021 05:09

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
Fay Slimm. said:

You phrase the word discontent with the many ways in which humanity displays it my friend and adding inanimate reactions as in \"Earth\'s resentment\" makes this impressive write very special - and a favourite indeed for poets like me. Well penned L.B.

September 3rd, 2021 03:41

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Mek and a wonderful piece of music.

Andy

September 3rd, 2021 03:26

Draped, in our moonlit hues of discontent
Teddy.15 said:

your final lines always holding magnificence another extremely powerful and beautifully written poem, will we ever find what we are searching for from within? fabukous master poet.

September 3rd, 2021 03:24

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
ron parrish aka wordman said:

loved the theme of stars being herders

September 2nd, 2021 11:08

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
beano said:

A wonderfuly deep and inspiring write, dear poet!

August 31st, 2021 14:17

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
Teddy.15 said:

As you always do in your fine style dear L.B you have taught your reader that in fact nothing is impossible. You and your poetry are the great shining 🌟 here.

August 31st, 2021 09:09

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful words Mek.
Yes there is always hope for us to hold onto and that hope will become reality.

Andy

August 31st, 2021 00:42

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
Fay Slimm. said:

Quite brilliant L.B. this star-like saga of life\'s heavy burdens over-loading those who at times take escapism to extreme yet the final stanza notes how love alone can foster solace as the world spins around yet again with its shadows of better existence seen through intentional farsighteness. Sm keeping this one in my fave-list.

August 30th, 2021 16:14

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
Neil Higgins said:

Simply brilliant LB.As someone suffering from what golfers call \"the yips\" or in writing circles,\"writer\'s block\",you have produced a masterpiece my friend.

August 30th, 2021 11:29

Starlight’s, shepherding: as spatial kinesics
Neville said:


What an amazing treatise you have so eloquently laid before us here, encapsulating all that decent folk & poets, should really turn their back on, frown upon and despise .. well poemed my friend ................... N


August 30th, 2021 08:43

Where, no Hesitation resides
matthew jay said:

It is a very stirring poem L.B..

August 30th, 2021 08:18



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