Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



if Choice remains choose Kindness, I beg
Fay Slimm. said:

How you emphasize kindness brings its value right in front of readers\' eyes as the most valuable of all traits - your word will surely help activate those who really want to change and thank you for sharing this impressive advice.

October 8th, 2021 13:14

if Choice remains choose Kindness, I beg
aDarkerMind said:

a subject very close to my heart L B Mek;
and this superb right has brought it closer still;


October 8th, 2021 10:38

if Choice remains choose Kindness, I beg
Teddy.15 said:

My dearest Mek, I\'m going to say what a empathetic poem you write today, I feel you work within an office environment, but I have always thought you could also be a social worker for teenagers, you have a special gift of saying it in poetry yet exactly as it is the truth even when it\'s ugly yet always with such hope and passion in your belief that if we can change one young mind and help we can also climb Everest together. Wow that all just came out of me. Thank you ... You are a beautiful poet my friend. 🌞

October 8th, 2021 03:03

of Geometrical Substance or Mode
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... and wow again I\'ll really not sure what I just took in but as I blinked twice I was definitely glad for your magnificent spirit.

As always my friend in so glad I looked you up and picked this one at random or was it!

Time standing still in ever visit.

Much peace and respect
Keep up the write

October 7th, 2021 08:13

London’s, scarlet seasons
Robert Haigh said:

My eldest son and family used to live in South London, and it can be a scary place to be at night, especially if you are alone. They relocated to Bristol, mainly for work opportunities - that may sound strange, but it is true. Ironically, he has since found himself commuting to London for some of his work activity. Any big city can be menacing after dark. Your poem makes the reader stop and think! The future looks bleak, in some ways, but hope is not quite dead yet. Yes, a thought-provoking poem!

October 4th, 2021 17:21

London’s, scarlet seasons
aDarkerMind said:

oh my!!!!
a talent far beyond the norm;


October 4th, 2021 13:23

London’s, scarlet seasons
Sibo said:

Gentle prayer
Feels so softly
Like a sunset in a rain

Thank you so much for such well- felting beauty!)

October 4th, 2021 09:11

Dear Friend
yellowrose said:

Lovely writing , Mek

Sweet words )

October 4th, 2021 05:06

London’s, scarlet seasons
Teddy.15 said:

Do damn powerful, having been born and bred in the streets of South London, I so appreciate this magnificent realistic piece of poetry, a few years ago I was watching from afar yet horrified of the youth battle with knives, I see so much in here as I always do but because I too have a passion for young people and showing that even in the most dire of surcamstances there can always be hope I applaud this poem with sincere applause and Kudos on your last lines. Very clever to use the seasons L.B Bravo.

October 4th, 2021 03:52

Denial’s
MendedFences27 said:

To escape the weariness of day to day living spend but a few minutes with a new born. What is it about babies that break down the powerful walls of humanity? Sad men laugh. Lonely men smile. Brokenhearted men are healed. All by the gurgling, giggling, little infant.
Oh by the way, nice poem. - Phil A.

October 3rd, 2021 18:15

of Geometrical Substance or Mode
orchidee said:

Aww, I fancied a bit of metaphysical theorising - if I knew what it was! heehee.

October 1st, 2021 06:33

of Geometrical Substance or Mode
John Prophet said:

Philosophical musings and enjoying existence can go hand in hand. For some, philosophical musings is enjoying existence.
Great write.

October 1st, 2021 06:28

of Geometrical Substance or Mode
Teddy.15 said:



Now, forget all that futile philosophy

and Time wasting, metaphysical theorising

instead, go out

enjoy your experience of existence

We all need to look up sometimes and simply adore the surroundings dear L.B we too often forget these days. Cleverly crafted as ever poet dear. X

October 1st, 2021 05:29

These, Words
aRCane said:

are you a prolific sinner?

October 1st, 2021 04:30

These, Words
aRCane said:

i like your conjecture, consider being succinct with your words

October 1st, 2021 04:27

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
MendedFences27 said:

Saving a love through music. A plausible event with the right romantic conductor. An interesting tale of resurgent love and musical appreciation. They say that \"music is the shorthand of emotion\" and that love is the greatest emotion. The power of one is expressed by the other.
You have married the two, music and love , in a very unique way. And your poem ends on a crescendo. - Phil A.

September 30th, 2021 22:24

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
yellowrose said:

An engaging interesting read .., nicely expressed , Mek 🙂

September 28th, 2021 03:28

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
Thekkinkkattil said:

Revitalizing and rhythmic even without lyrics a good write Mek

September 28th, 2021 02:41

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Mek may that crescendo always bring joy and wonder to all.

Andy

September 28th, 2021 00:14

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
Trenz Pruca said:

Wow! music for my mind. Thank you.

September 27th, 2021 18:02

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
aDarkerMind said:

here here....
stunning poetry L B;

September 27th, 2021 11:43

of Love #1
Floreann said:

A heartfelt beautiful write of love..

September 27th, 2021 07:01

A conductor: entrusted, A muse: beloved, Fate: melodically entwined
Teddy.15 said:

In true L.B style you got me on your first two lines, so clever and as ever stunning poetry. X

September 27th, 2021 05:42

These, Words
Goldfinch60 said:

Those feelings and worries can be in us all but knowing that there will always be a home for all is so powerful hence \'My Porch Light\' is always on.

Andy

September 25th, 2021 00:18

These, Words
Neville said:


Master, never call me master again .. He bows, then kneels before thy pen ....... Neville

September 24th, 2021 09:39

These, Words
Fay Slimm. said:

Putting so plainly the other side of the \"treatment\" coin makes my anger boil when a bit of non-judgement could make all the difference. This is piece of pleading suggestions for us all to remember my friend. A favourite with me for sure.

September 24th, 2021 09:30

These, Words
dusk arising said:

There are some battles, ever ongoing, hidden from uncaring eyes yet deep felt in those to whom they matter. For some it is a struggle within themselves for the narrow shoreline of sanity\'s ebb, for another it may be that of a damaged friend or loved one out on the edges of realities fringe. Yet others where the battle is not fought, just lost. Or (important to stress) just \'different\'
THis has brought tears to my eyes for i love someone dearly who I would love to \'make it home\'.

Had to come back and edit this to add a huge thank you for handling this subject with such finesse.


September 24th, 2021 04:20

These, Words
rebmasters said:

A beautiful, secret message to all those \'fighting this long.\' Words that make us want to carry on ❤

September 24th, 2021 03:48

We too, were Romeo’s - once
beano said:

Ah, young love. Nothing hits the same. A fine poetic reminiscence, dear Poet.

September 23rd, 2021 04:44

We too, were Romeo’s - once
John Prophet said:

Once again the sophistication of your writing is amazing!

September 21st, 2021 04:38



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