Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



of Commute’s, as Muse
Teddy.15 said:

This makes me smile and cry, absolutely gorgeous, love the song too,and for the past 20 years has meant so much. I won\'t be driving home this year,but soon again I will... You brought so much emotion with this, Merry Christmas dearest Mek. Ps I could never miss the M25 though

December 20th, 2021 08:58

of Commute’s, as Muse
kitty the naughty poet said:

M25 typical, motorway jam

never, been sweet

but definitely sticky, a situation 

at a quarter, to any Sunset hour

bumbler to bumper

ghost face, to glare

we hobble along, knowing

‘we’, are the lucky ones.

....
My favourite verse.
I really enjoyed reading this piece you have a way with words 😊

December 20th, 2021 06:51

of Commute’s, as Muse
Rozina said:

Love this poem. That\'s actually happening as we drive slowly home in the traffic jam.

December 20th, 2021 05:27

of Commute’s, as Muse
Nilanjana said:

till my desperation has me diving, mindlessly blinded I crash in, to fate’s
shallow-end, predictably.....

Fabulous line

December 20th, 2021 05:17

of Commute’s, as Muse
spilleronsheet said:

A wind just greeted me
A letter dropped by
Pinging a notification that a poetry released by
I went through the lines
That took me on a scene
Maybe it was a usual meet
A usual hi
A simple drive
But that wasn’t the scene
Th lines got me takeaways
Promises In midst of uncertainties hooked me
Maybe that kept me stuck for so long
The scenes so vivid
As if I was seating in passenger’s seat
Watching it happening in front of my eyes
The feel so real
Amazing dear Mek

December 20th, 2021 04:59

of Commute’s, as Muse
woundedheart said:

Humanity / tipped horizontally. .. windscreen world a new perspective a letterbox veiw of the world beyond the ever expanding horizons of our own expectations. Love this. ☺

December 20th, 2021 04:31

Watermelons in Winter
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully intriguing words Mek.

Andy

December 18th, 2021 01:33

Watermelons in Winter
Rozina said:

So true. Really enjoyed this poem.

December 17th, 2021 20:54

Watermelons in Winter
SureshG said:

In this world of 24/7/365, the desire to long is sacrificed, along with the flavor.
Loved it.

December 17th, 2021 19:33

Watermelons in Winter
Coyote said:

Much wisdom in this terrific piece LB. Very well done🙂

December 17th, 2021 17:23

Watermelons in Winter
Teddy.15 said:

I love the title and the ironi we always want what we don\'t have it\'s part of being human I guess, I always wanted thick curly hair. lol 😂 another thought provoking beautifully crafted peice of poetry dear Mek. Happy Friday 💖

December 17th, 2021 08:27

Watermelons in Winter
karvelD said:

Enjoyed, ty. _/\\_:)

December 17th, 2021 07:55

Ignited
kitty the naughty poet said:

Very sensual and beautiful written I really enjoyed reading

December 17th, 2021 06:24

Watermelons in Winter
spilleronsheet said:

The simplistic title spoke such depth
Sir as expected the words speak volumes again
Coming to terms is the need yet heart escapes from this term
As often it hurts to accept what life and time throws upon

December 17th, 2021 05:48

Watermelons in Winter
VINOD R S said:

Paradoxical is the life of men which he is proud of against the real course of nature which he has to pay back ....


December 17th, 2021 05:09

Watermelons in Winter
Nilanjana said:

You are good at playing with words

December 17th, 2021 03:20

Meditation
HannahElisabeth said:

I\'m so very happy I stumbled across this as I was looking for the poem you mentioned in a comment on one of mine. This song in particular always brings me back to a sense of inner peace when the world feels too busy and I forget to meditate. Thank you for the gentle reminder!

December 17th, 2021 00:25

burgeoning Concerns
SureshG said:

The ancients knew how to understand and work with nature, whereas in future everything will be provided pre packaged, where all will become void of survival techniques and won’t recognize what lies beneath their feet.

December 16th, 2021 22:12

A classic
Neville said:



.. poetry personified sir ................. you have my seal of approval :)

December 16th, 2021 14:09

burgeoning Concerns
John Prophet said:

Well done LBM

December 16th, 2021 08:28

burgeoning Concerns
Rozina said:

A real concern nowadays. Made worse by those who are thinking of making more profit. Thank you.

December 14th, 2021 00:03

burgeoning Concerns
Paul Bell said:

How the earth is changing, and right before our eyes, nowhere to hide in this big world it seems. Someday, food will be a tablet.

December 13th, 2021 12:46

burgeoning Concerns
spilleronsheet said:

A very important message stored
A poet isn’t a normal being
His power is without boundaries
And sir you truly display the versatility
Well crafted with a powerful message and much needed topic

December 13th, 2021 08:17

burgeoning Concerns
Teddy.15 said:

One of my favourite wordsmith\'s Mek, you don\'t only make it look easy but you always bring something important to the table, I\'ve seen the twisters today on TV that have made my heart beat so fast, whether it\'s global warming or just bad luck to have the biggest in History only the future will tell. Bless you for always bringing discussion and empathy and compassion. 💖

December 13th, 2021 03:36

burgeoning Concerns
dusk arising said:

Ah yes that future again. How can we expect it\'s ripe fruits if all we do is pollute.

A fitting reminder in these times when we like to surround ourselves with plentys.

December 13th, 2021 03:31

A classic
SureshG said:

You have conjured up youths longing, in a collection of phrases, a rarity.

December 11th, 2021 23:41

Foreshadowed by Art
Wolf said:

I really enjoyed this. The last part with the dinosaurs roaming back reminded me of a thought I once had of what the future would be like once we\'re extinct. I use to say to myself: \"What would the new dominate species think of us when they find our remains and how will they fill in the gaps of parts of our story that\'s missing?\"

December 11th, 2021 18:11

of Malachite awareness
Poetic Dan said:

Boom! Thank you

December 11th, 2021 12:55

A classic
Goldfinch60 said:

Those lifetime memories will always be there Mek.

Andy

December 11th, 2021 01:32

A classic
dusk arising said:

You have coined exactly how my reality began to singe its way through the clouds of \"oh no, not consciousness\" as slowly and painfully the regrets of the night before cruised drunkenly through my hung-over senses.
The beauty of reality opened before me and i rushed for the bathroom overwhelmed.

December 10th, 2021 13:58



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