Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



busy: ‘Being’ hurled
Munro said:

Thoust .shake thy words and rattle your pages , thoust spread your quill in motivation ,thoust deliverance
Measures the impedance,of paragraphing evidence supremely in the questionable eyes of experts ,amaze the critics and calm the glistening tongues that’s speak impoverished words against you ,,for hear lies the majestic human embryo of estastic youth

March 9th, 2021 11:08

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
Neville said:

pen poised and ready ...
words ragged and real, yes mighty and true .. when we have used all of our words ... what more can a mere poet do ............. well postulated my friend ...

Neville


March 9th, 2021 09:44

atoms, to Atoms
mrbleasdale said:

The wording in this poem is so beautiful and very intelligent that you that you read it like attempting a crossword puzzle. The more you read the more you understand what you’re saying. I was overwhelmed at first that it makes you read it over and over again X

March 9th, 2021 04:49

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
Goldfinch60 said:

Very profound words Mek, we all have these differences within us but hopefully we use the better versions of ourselves to create a better life for us all.

Andy

March 9th, 2021 01:15

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
MendedFences27 said:

Some people seem hollow, but have something inside not yet discovered. You have portrayed one just the opposite. I should imagine a reunion of grads would fill the halls with such shallow people, all wearing masks I hope. - Phil A.

March 8th, 2021 23:20

our Blemishes of Perfection
aDarkerMind said:

personally, I wouldnt go back to it again. If so, to only read and marvel at it!

March 8th, 2021 11:41

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
FredPeyer said:

Wow, L B, all these big words made my head swim. But it was still clear enough (my head) to appreciate your poem. Love that last line \'from that stifled gangrene: of corrosive, hollowness.\'

March 8th, 2021 11:26

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
Dove said:

Such finesse in your words to depict mundane life, but alas
No alarm bells for me I wake up naturally !
Thanks for sharing!

March 8th, 2021 09:24

busy: ‘Being’ hurled
dusk arising said:

Misogyny, envy or cool sympathy. Or are each of those too broad a concept here.
There\'s always more to a person than the outer shell we perceive.
So questions arise, but only for us, of motivation, conditioning, sexual preference etc. What a shambles of queries a honed outer shell can present to us mere mortals with everyday skin.
Even Margaret Thatcher had a soft side (when tickled with a cattle prod).

March 8th, 2021 07:49

our Blemishes of Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:

What wonderful words Mek and so very true as each of life\'s adversities come to us we survive and move forward a stronger person.

Andy

March 6th, 2021 01:34

our Blemishes of Perfection
Jerry Reynolds said:

Triumph, L.B. that’s just flawless.

March 5th, 2021 08:29

our Blemishes of Perfection
Neville said:


Dear poet,
I never saw this coming either .. so glad I kept my eyes peeled though ..
I have long thought your writing is about to come of age L.B and this page proves it ...

I sincerely take my hat off to you .. and am proud to call you friend,

Neville ..

March 5th, 2021 06:06

BOXED
yellowrose said:

Engaging write . Interesting words ,

March 4th, 2021 07:52

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
Neville said:


... made me wince, more than once, I can tell ya .......

March 1st, 2021 17:54

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
FredPeyer said:

So well written, Mek!

March 1st, 2021 16:06

I know why Cageless Birds, still sing: in Rasping tones
Goldfinch60 said:

Very true and profound words Mek, especially that last stanza.

Andy

March 1st, 2021 05:19

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
AuburnScribbler said:

A beautiful poetic summary here L. B. Mek, mightily written!

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

February 27th, 2021 02:51

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, L.B.

February 26th, 2021 09:32

Selfish-Selflessness of Love
dusk arising said:

Look after number one or you wont be able to look after anything or anyone else.

February 26th, 2021 04:39

Weather is nice today
yellowrose said:

Short and sweet poem . Nice words here , flows nicely

February 25th, 2021 07:17

Y @ Play
MendedFences27 said:

From fond memories to their crescendo in life followed by the slowing of the beat to the pace of existence in the real world. A musical journey through life and onward to wisdom and acceptance. - Phil A.

February 23rd, 2021 11:52

Y @ Play
Neville said:


you do know the rhythm of these words is gonna be with me for the rest of the day dont\'cha ... and know this .. I dont mind a single bit .... made me think and tap both feet at the same time .... mind you, I have been sitting down the whole time .....

Neville


February 23rd, 2021 07:08

Y @ Play
Olivia. said:

Wow so intrigued by this! Its amazing. I also love the presentation, really unique. X

February 23rd, 2021 06:31

Y @ Play
yellowrose said:

Beautiful poem ! Very nicely expressed and very engaging read 🙂 I enjoyed

February 23rd, 2021 06:19

Y @ Play
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful lovelorn words Mek.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:18

Y @ Play
Jerry Reynolds said:

Very nice, L.B. Enjoyable read.

February 22nd, 2021 16:29

Y @ Play
FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written and great presentation!

February 22nd, 2021 14:59

Y @ Play
Trenz Pruca said:

I was listening to Kieth Jarrett when I read your poem -- a jazz-smooth snare...

February 22nd, 2021 14:36

Y @ Play
dusk arising said:

Those younger days of untainted hope driven by enthusiasm testosterone made wholesome devotion. To the undying accompanyment of the rhythm of life with it\'s cresendos, crashes, grace notes of joy and glissando banana skins.

February 22nd, 2021 04:59

Y @ Play
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for some wonderful word-paintings in this impressive reflection on remembered togetherness. A super read L.B.

February 22nd, 2021 04:43



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