Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



A classic
Goldfinch60 said:

Those lifetime memories will always be there Mek.

Andy

December 11th, 2021 01:32

A classic
dusk arising said:

You have coined exactly how my reality began to singe its way through the clouds of \"oh no, not consciousness\" as slowly and painfully the regrets of the night before cruised drunkenly through my hung-over senses.
The beauty of reality opened before me and i rushed for the bathroom overwhelmed.

December 10th, 2021 13:58

A classic
PrEm Ji said:

words crystallized into a diamond...

December 10th, 2021 11:59

A classic
spilleronsheet said:

So poetic
As always sir, your poetry is charismatic

December 10th, 2021 05:54

Ignited
C E Thomas said:

Fantastic. This, and your other poems, display your impressive ability to convey the deepest, most human emotions in the fewest of words. I wish you luck in your career

December 9th, 2021 06:31

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Rozina said:

Thank you for painting this vivid scene. Timely reminder for the tough life many people have to endure. Beautiful.

December 9th, 2021 05:55

unbending Pride!
KomfortKorner said:

The imagery and wordplay are incredible!!!

December 8th, 2021 22:02

Ignited
alsimmons said:

Just now
Just you
Just me
Just us_
Your word ignited and life to love and longing. great job.

December 8th, 2021 01:37

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Paul Bell said:

Life in a bag and then some.
What is it really all about. The silver spoon brigade has never changed, and even at times propped up by the people who should know better. Why are kids still dying all around the globe. What does one man need with a hundred billion in the bank? Why do three buses always turn up at once.

December 7th, 2021 08:43

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Goldfinch60 said:

That salvation is there for us all Mek.

Andy

December 7th, 2021 01:35

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
SureshG said:

just another day, maybe a little easier, when so poeticized

December 6th, 2021 15:22

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Draven said:

Beautiful yet so brooding and sad.

December 6th, 2021 12:27

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
melellendixon said:

The alliteration helps this flow so well. Bravo

December 6th, 2021 11:14

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Neville said:


I am somewhat ashamed to say, this made me smile .. Maybe because I know the truth is staring me write back in the face ...... Indeed, I would go as far as to suggest, this whole page is excellent ................................ N


December 6th, 2021 09:42

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
AuburnScribbler said:

A wonderfully constructed vivid scene here L. B. Mek, though it is mundanely bleak, it has a somewhat happy ending.

Bravo, and I hope that all is well.

December 6th, 2021 07:58

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
spilleronsheet said:

Fabulous yet sad
I don’t know why it sheds upon the restricted life of ours
The time passes so soon yet so many colours haven’t lived
At the end however hard we may try, what remains are just regrets of life
Yet what we have is no less
It’s better to be happy about what we possess

December 6th, 2021 06:09

That flipped coin of momentary, bleak
Lorna said:

Wow this was intense and a lot of feeling here in the images you painted. Good one Mek....

December 6th, 2021 05:25

of Malachite awareness
Rozina said:

Yes so much greed and injustice abound. Thank you for sharing.

December 3rd, 2021 21:57

of Malachite awareness
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done, L.B.
We are loaded with \"criminal ignorance\" here.

December 3rd, 2021 16:16

of Malachite awareness
SureshG said:

It’s not only ‘an eye for an eye’ that makes the whole world blind, it’s also greed that makes us oblivious and blinds us to reality. A superb post indeed.

December 3rd, 2021 11:03

of Malachite awareness
Neville said:


if ever there was a reason to write a dedication, you just hit upon that reason .. it is almost impossible to comprehend how in the 21st century so many individuals lost their lives & as many again were injured through no fault of their own but through the greed of others maybe and the age old habit of cutting corners to make a few cents more ...................... N

December 3rd, 2021 07:56

Meditation
Rozina said:

An important message. Thank you.

December 2nd, 2021 00:50

Meditation
John Prophet said:

Nice write LBM

November 30th, 2021 21:58

Meditation
spilleronsheet said:

Listen thyself and not shun
Carefully choosing the words to embrace
So well put dear poet
A much needed insight
Often in criticisms we forget to address the most important person and that is the voice within

November 30th, 2021 00:16

Meditation
SureshG said:

I am just a shadow of my ignorance, and pray that I learn to first understand the depth of your poetic words

November 29th, 2021 19:17

Meditation
Lorna said:

Mek - I just LOVED without

knowing that burning sensation of blisters.
A little whimsy in the mix of wisdom.. ...

November 29th, 2021 12:49

Meditation
kitty the naughty poet said:

I really like your way with words. Thank you for sharing.

November 29th, 2021 11:19

Meditation
Neville said:



sage like words from a master of words ......................................... N

November 29th, 2021 09:09

Meditation
Dove said:

Good Advice!!!!

November 29th, 2021 08:14

Meditation
Nicholas Browning said:

Always need that anchor to weigh us down in our thoughts and lives. We don\'t need another Icarus disaster. A fine work to you L.B.

November 29th, 2021 07:21



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