Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Ink dipped, valentines
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful
Love defined by no season, so pure and charismatic
November 1st, 2021 04:38
spilleronsheet said:
It’s beautiful
Love defined by no season, so pure and charismatic
November 1st, 2021 04:38
Ink dipped, valentines
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing , Mek 🙂 one of my favourites from you ,
I really like your choice of words
November 1st, 2021 04:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A lovely writing , Mek 🙂 one of my favourites from you ,
I really like your choice of words
November 1st, 2021 04:03
Ink dipped, valentines
dusk arising said:
Sounds a lot more genuine a valentine than the presentation of a tired, shop bought token, bearing someone elses script.
November 1st, 2021 03:59
dusk arising said:
Sounds a lot more genuine a valentine than the presentation of a tired, shop bought token, bearing someone elses script.
November 1st, 2021 03:59
unbending Pride!
SureshG said:
Words to live by, not just to recall…
Thank you
October 30th, 2021 20:28
SureshG said:
Words to live by, not just to recall…
Thank you
October 30th, 2021 20:28
unbending Pride!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Mek on the horror of the past and the shame which we should have for allowing this to happen.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Mek on the horror of the past and the shame which we should have for allowing this to happen.
Andy
October 30th, 2021 00:22
unbending Pride!
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this deluge of shame - your lines expose more than injustice amid. such human courage now poetically recorded for readers to come - thank you and bravo L.B.
October 29th, 2021 15:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for this deluge of shame - your lines expose more than injustice amid. such human courage now poetically recorded for readers to come - thank you and bravo L.B.
October 29th, 2021 15:36
unbending Pride!
Neville said:
in an ideal world, these words of yours today would never have needed to be written .. but then we both know, it is a far from ideal world and injustices are taking place all the time ... furthermore, as far as I am concerned, words such as these should record every single one of them ... but we both know dont we, that aint gonna happen either .. It pleases me greatly though that these particular words have now been writ and shall now serve to preserve for all eternity the memory of but one of many ........ a great post in every respect ..
Respect, ... Neville
October 29th, 2021 13:19
Neville said:
in an ideal world, these words of yours today would never have needed to be written .. but then we both know, it is a far from ideal world and injustices are taking place all the time ... furthermore, as far as I am concerned, words such as these should record every single one of them ... but we both know dont we, that aint gonna happen either .. It pleases me greatly though that these particular words have now been writ and shall now serve to preserve for all eternity the memory of but one of many ........ a great post in every respect ..
Respect, ... Neville
October 29th, 2021 13:19
unbending Pride!
Paul Bell said:
The guilty secret of western countries, which is now coming home to roost, especially in Britain, which prospered under slavery.
October 29th, 2021 12:58
Paul Bell said:
The guilty secret of western countries, which is now coming home to roost, especially in Britain, which prospered under slavery.
October 29th, 2021 12:58
unbending Pride!
aDarkerMind said:
very good L.B.
a superb eye opener!
another one to savour;
October 29th, 2021 11:09
aDarkerMind said:
very good L.B.
a superb eye opener!
another one to savour;
October 29th, 2021 11:09
unbending Pride!
spilleronsheet said:
Such a royal poetry
Unwinding the hidden story
Stark reality
Old glories fading away
While capitalism takes its way
October 29th, 2021 05:27
spilleronsheet said:
Such a royal poetry
Unwinding the hidden story
Stark reality
Old glories fading away
While capitalism takes its way
October 29th, 2021 05:27
Blue Pills, Stolen Dreams
Meg said:
This is beyond what writing is. A true pleasure to read, thank you
October 28th, 2021 08:05
Meg said:
This is beyond what writing is. A true pleasure to read, thank you
October 28th, 2021 08:05
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
SureshG said:
Few people have the talent, and even fewer the ability to express. The tapestry of your words is truly captivating - poetry in motion
October 27th, 2021 13:19
SureshG said:
Few people have the talent, and even fewer the ability to express. The tapestry of your words is truly captivating - poetry in motion
October 27th, 2021 13:19
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
Paul Bell said:
I think rereading poetry is like rereading your favourite book, or watching your favourite film. Depending on your mood at that particular moment in time, a reread can give you another insight into the poets mind.
October 26th, 2021 09:15
Paul Bell said:
I think rereading poetry is like rereading your favourite book, or watching your favourite film. Depending on your mood at that particular moment in time, a reread can give you another insight into the poets mind.
October 26th, 2021 09:15
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
Jeremy Leach said:
Very well written, enjoyable to read and hits the target in many ways as to what motivates me. It fascinates me how spilling a few words on virtual paper can instantly communicate rich imagery.
October 26th, 2021 02:27
Jeremy Leach said:
Very well written, enjoyable to read and hits the target in many ways as to what motivates me. It fascinates me how spilling a few words on virtual paper can instantly communicate rich imagery.
October 26th, 2021 02:27
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry is beautiful in all it\'s forms LB. And no exception here. So often a poem takes on a life of it\'s own, and in doing so it bewilders the reader to keep reading. Well penned LB. 👍
October 25th, 2021 19:54
Accidental Poet said:
Poetry is beautiful in all it\'s forms LB. And no exception here. So often a poem takes on a life of it\'s own, and in doing so it bewilders the reader to keep reading. Well penned LB. 👍
October 25th, 2021 19:54
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
Neville said:
The very first time I began to read this, my mind began to effervesce .. even before my eyes began to feast on skylark .. then with every mid line reached, I think, tiny bubbles began to collide & subsequently explode with silent gasps and sighs behind my eyelids .. moving on I felt like slowly imploding outwards, as if that were not some contradiction in terms .. but finally as the pulsing and twitching subsided fell exhausted .. my appetite for words wholly sated
.. I hardly ever have more than one orgasm whilst reading poetry these day .. so thanks Mek I owe ya sir :)
October 25th, 2021 10:26
Neville said:
The very first time I began to read this, my mind began to effervesce .. even before my eyes began to feast on skylark .. then with every mid line reached, I think, tiny bubbles began to collide & subsequently explode with silent gasps and sighs behind my eyelids .. moving on I felt like slowly imploding outwards, as if that were not some contradiction in terms .. but finally as the pulsing and twitching subsided fell exhausted .. my appetite for words wholly sated
.. I hardly ever have more than one orgasm whilst reading poetry these day .. so thanks Mek I owe ya sir :)
October 25th, 2021 10:26
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
dusk arising said:
Lovely wordage lol i mean poetry of course but so well crafted.....
... indeed what IS poetry and why? Dunno really, but it\'s become an essential outlet in this being.
October 25th, 2021 03:23
dusk arising said:
Lovely wordage lol i mean poetry of course but so well crafted.....
... indeed what IS poetry and why? Dunno really, but it\'s become an essential outlet in this being.
October 25th, 2021 03:23
What is this Animal, we Tame momentarily to label: Poetry
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful and so enthralling
Each words creates a scene
Displaying the creator and its deeds
So true poet
So true
Such a powerful poetry
This beast inside
Growing with delight
With every expression it roars
How wonderful when it soar
Thanks for sharing such a powerful poetry
And for encouraging the poets too
October 25th, 2021 03:04
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful and so enthralling
Each words creates a scene
Displaying the creator and its deeds
So true poet
So true
Such a powerful poetry
This beast inside
Growing with delight
With every expression it roars
How wonderful when it soar
Thanks for sharing such a powerful poetry
And for encouraging the poets too
October 25th, 2021 03:04
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
Dove said:
Regrets they have whispered to my soul,
but whether I’ve broken or not, Loneliness
always whips me slowly
October 24th, 2021 19:02
Dove said:
Regrets they have whispered to my soul,
but whether I’ve broken or not, Loneliness
always whips me slowly
October 24th, 2021 19:02
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
Goldfinch60 said:
Those regrets can always be overcome by a positive mind Mek.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Those regrets can always be overcome by a positive mind Mek.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:33
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
spilleronsheet said:
Regrets are heavier than loss
Indeed a lot of regrets I carry myself
But soon to realise I don’t wish to live the rest with anymore regrets
The poetry is striking the chords
Nice one dear poet
October 22nd, 2021 15:17
spilleronsheet said:
Regrets are heavier than loss
Indeed a lot of regrets I carry myself
But soon to realise I don’t wish to live the rest with anymore regrets
The poetry is striking the chords
Nice one dear poet
October 22nd, 2021 15:17
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
aDarkerMind said:
another poem full of emotion L.B.
and one to savour;
and save;
October 22nd, 2021 12:06
aDarkerMind said:
another poem full of emotion L.B.
and one to savour;
and save;
October 22nd, 2021 12:06
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
Neville said:
I was very tempted just to cut & paste Dusk Arising\'s perfect review note .. but then checked myself when the thought scribes & poets write plagiarists & forgers cut n paste ... right .................. interesting form & the message is spot on ... plus what Dusk Arising said again for good measure .. N :)
October 22nd, 2021 07:43
Neville said:
I was very tempted just to cut & paste Dusk Arising\'s perfect review note .. but then checked myself when the thought scribes & poets write plagiarists & forgers cut n paste ... right .................. interesting form & the message is spot on ... plus what Dusk Arising said again for good measure .. N :)
October 22nd, 2021 07:43
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
John Prophet said:
So true LBM, and written in your beautiful style.
JP
October 22nd, 2021 06:43
John Prophet said:
So true LBM, and written in your beautiful style.
JP
October 22nd, 2021 06:43
Lonesome, divided by Eight billion
dusk arising said:
Ah, but..... my poetic friend... regrets make for great poetry.
October 22nd, 2021 03:19
dusk arising said:
Ah, but..... my poetic friend... regrets make for great poetry.
October 22nd, 2021 03:19
if Choice remains choose Kindness, I beg
Neville said:
Is there any other way .. sadly and all too often, the answer is a deafening YES ..
However, if we each scribed a little poem or a note and left them here and there, containing the humanistic message embedded in todays post .. Then just maybe one or two might be found and read and acted upon accordingly .... Maybe ... and for all those who refused to do so without good reason, then may their beards grow backwards and choke em .......... N :)
October 21st, 2021 11:11
Neville said:
Is there any other way .. sadly and all too often, the answer is a deafening YES ..
However, if we each scribed a little poem or a note and left them here and there, containing the humanistic message embedded in todays post .. Then just maybe one or two might be found and read and acted upon accordingly .... Maybe ... and for all those who refused to do so without good reason, then may their beards grow backwards and choke em .......... N :)
October 21st, 2021 11:11
Seep deep, Drip of Sleep or A, slip?
aDarkerMind said:
very enjoyable L.B.
and share your view...\'Birds\' beats \'gory\' every time.
October 19th, 2021 10:36
aDarkerMind said:
very enjoyable L.B.
and share your view...\'Birds\' beats \'gory\' every time.
October 19th, 2021 10:36
London’s, scarlet seasons
Neville said:
Oh\' how I do hanker for those halcyon days of steam when if there was ever a riff then each would be encouraged to don a pair of gloves and slug it out outside the school gates or on the rec .. When kidney punches, head buts, biting. kneeing and elbows were frowned upon and would lead to disqualification .. When a bloody nose and a black eye or two would be worn like campaign medals and determine the winner ... Knives were for whittling, cutting string and a million other legitimate daily chores .. Sadly, those days are long gone and unlikely to return .... Even sadder the fact that your poem today paints the grimmest picture of an increasingly accurate state of affairs that frightens me shitless .. so much so that I have stopped carrying my old pocket knife that has been a trusty friend for more years than I can remember ... and was my fathers friend before me ... Yes indeed, you reference London, but sadly those scarlet and crimson stained sidewalks are an all too familiar sight right across the country and even beyond .... Well done Mek .. rant over N
October 19th, 2021 10:05
Neville said:
Oh\' how I do hanker for those halcyon days of steam when if there was ever a riff then each would be encouraged to don a pair of gloves and slug it out outside the school gates or on the rec .. When kidney punches, head buts, biting. kneeing and elbows were frowned upon and would lead to disqualification .. When a bloody nose and a black eye or two would be worn like campaign medals and determine the winner ... Knives were for whittling, cutting string and a million other legitimate daily chores .. Sadly, those days are long gone and unlikely to return .... Even sadder the fact that your poem today paints the grimmest picture of an increasingly accurate state of affairs that frightens me shitless .. so much so that I have stopped carrying my old pocket knife that has been a trusty friend for more years than I can remember ... and was my fathers friend before me ... Yes indeed, you reference London, but sadly those scarlet and crimson stained sidewalks are an all too familiar sight right across the country and even beyond .... Well done Mek .. rant over N
October 19th, 2021 10:05
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