Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek



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Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful lovelorn words Mek.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:18

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Very nice, L.B. Enjoyable read.

February 22nd, 2021 16:29

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FredPeyer said:

Beautifully written and great presentation!

February 22nd, 2021 14:59

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Trenz Pruca said:

I was listening to Kieth Jarrett when I read your poem -- a jazz-smooth snare...

February 22nd, 2021 14:36

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dusk arising said:

Those younger days of untainted hope driven by enthusiasm testosterone made wholesome devotion. To the undying accompanyment of the rhythm of life with it\'s cresendos, crashes, grace notes of joy and glissando banana skins.

February 22nd, 2021 04:59

Y @ Play
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for some wonderful word-paintings in this impressive reflection on remembered togetherness. A super read L.B.

February 22nd, 2021 04:43

First and ever, Fiercest
AwHec8 said:

This Poem reminds me of 2 things,
1)Every time I have a dream that slips away after waking up and trying to recall the dream that was so important that had such an Earth shattering secret in my mind, Yet slipped away the harder I tried to remember like water through my hand.
2)At 63 I can\'t say I have \"memories\" especially the older 1\'s as they now are memories of memories if that makes any sense.
I do Love the thoughts this Poem strikes in me. Great Write L.B. Mek. Don

February 21st, 2021 10:40

First and ever, Fiercest
Fay Slimm. said:

This has to be one of your best L.B. - a bouquet of imagery to sigh for and the last stanza shines with romantic assurance that love is forever. One for my list of favourites for sure.

February 19th, 2021 16:52

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Munro said:

Like your poem ,,liked lines ,,
Staring match within a glass
Taut white fingerpips grip
No ice left to delve between
Swiftly swigged severance


February 19th, 2021 06:02

atoms, to Atoms
AlitaOpal said:

I wake up every morning and my thoughts are the first things to greet me, but yet I have this profound sense that each new day I\'ve been reborn. Therefore I stay in the moment and before I go to sleep l let go and hold on to nothing, for the cycle shall continue when I awaken again.. Beautiful scribble L. B

February 18th, 2021 19:42

atoms, to Atoms
Neville said:

Let\'s not mess about, let\'s cut to the chase and get straight to the point ..
Yes, to the very heart of the matter and then to look beyond our own personal double helix and into the infinitely brighter backdrop of beyond ....
Yes there, where the real answers and truths do lie, just waiting to be found ............................You have such a way with words L.B .. this pilgrim can be lost, yet find himself somewhere deep within them .........
Neville

February 18th, 2021 04:58

atoms, to Atoms
Goldfinch60 said:

Those atoms make us up into the person we have become and they will still exist when we have left this world.
Good words Mek.

Andy

February 16th, 2021 01:18

atoms, to Atoms
FredPeyer said:

Wonderfully written, L.B.
The question is if we can reduce ourselves to the infinite, to go back to the \'big bang\'?

February 15th, 2021 21:43

atoms, to Atoms
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow this is epic and impressive, you say it in a brill way indeed. It was wordy in a fab way. Kudos!!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

February 15th, 2021 12:33

atoms, to Atoms
John Prophet said:

Tried to wrap my head around this but failed. Yet it’s flow kept me reading as it was a well structured write.
Enjoyed!

February 15th, 2021 10:05

atoms, to Atoms
dusk arising said:

There is something here for anyone who has, through meditation reached that altered mental state and touched the energy aura of the spiritual reality which eludes our day to day.

Such experience is life changing and the birth of \'faith\'. A faith held personal, unnecessary to share, deeply reassuring.

February 15th, 2021 04:28

Hegemony in Romance
FredPeyer said:

A very witty and accurate take on Valentine\'s Day. I enjoyed the read.

February 12th, 2021 11:46

Hegemony in Romance
Jerry Reynolds said:

Happy Valentines Day L.B

February 12th, 2021 10:38

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
AlitaOpal said:

I\'m in awe, I hope one day my husband and and I can have a moment so precious like this.. my children are now teenagers almost young adults.. blessings to you and the special lady. 🌹

February 11th, 2021 21:49

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
nicolibellamont said:

I like \"to youths distant golden hue\" as I get older I find that hue fading to a distance farther each day. Kind of numbing. Very good. Thank you for sharing

February 11th, 2021 09:05

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Neville said:



what a remarkably good reminisce my friend ..
my glass is both lifted and poised ready to drink to your health and in anticipation of a further sip and savoured swallow ....

Make mine a double single malt if you please ........................



February 9th, 2021 05:08

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Goldfinch60 said:

The toughs within us can lead to such places Mek.

Andy

February 9th, 2021 01:17

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Jerry Reynolds said:

Reflective L.B. I surely can relate to those ponderings over whisky.

February 8th, 2021 09:46

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
dusk arising said:

Is it the drink you are missing or that long lost feeling something somewhere once overpowered your senses with and left a tease of memory just beyond grasp.

February 8th, 2021 08:10

Saudade, in a Savoured cup
Fay Slimm. said:

Top marks for this metaphoric inventiveness which asks how the furnace of love becomes all too soon ash......... a remarkable and very relatable read my friend.

February 8th, 2021 06:24

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
Goldfinch60 said:

That explanation is unnecessary your Queen will always be with you - as mine is.

Andy

February 6th, 2021 01:32

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
dusk arising said:

Straight to the heartstrings with that punch line L B M.

\'Only the lonely, know the way I feel tonight\'

February 5th, 2021 10:14

I, lower myself: to One And rise A Man of virtue and pride
Jerry Reynolds said:

A really fine poem L.B.

February 5th, 2021 09:33

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
Dove said:

Quite profound, if I allow the rules to guide me, then be it so, but I never let it distract me from the pleasure of rhymes and rhythm, in poetry as well as life

February 4th, 2021 14:39

Adorned: with their petals of Thorns
SureshG said:

It\'s so important to differentiate oneself, specially when it comes to poetry, as you have so eloquently done here.

February 3rd, 2021 13:16



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