Comments received on poems by L. B. Mek
Unruly
Neville said:
I am write there beside you my friend ... this art, this craft of ours is big enough to encompass all styles and forms... but I know which of them I favour ............... you have just posted a very important post on a very important topic .......................... N
October 29th, 2020 04:57
Neville said:
I am write there beside you my friend ... this art, this craft of ours is big enough to encompass all styles and forms... but I know which of them I favour ............... you have just posted a very important post on a very important topic .......................... N
October 29th, 2020 04:57
Unruly
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb structure to this meangful write.
October 27th, 2020 04:27
Michael Edwards said:
What a superb structure to this meangful write.
October 27th, 2020 04:27
Unruly
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and well written LB, we use our words to put our feelings and thoughts onto the paper, sometimes they fall into rhythm and rhyme but that is just we feel as the ink goes onto the paper.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
So true and well written LB, we use our words to put our feelings and thoughts onto the paper, sometimes they fall into rhythm and rhyme but that is just we feel as the ink goes onto the paper.
Andy
October 27th, 2020 01:17
of Immortal Poetry
Dove said:
Well I applaud your format and structure! I have struggled formatting my words here!
I enjoy the digital era of words, and no doubt , would not be exposed to fine wordsmiths!
I do say, I still need to read more works of art! Kinda stuck on Detective Mysteries!
October 26th, 2020 22:04
Dove said:
Well I applaud your format and structure! I have struggled formatting my words here!
I enjoy the digital era of words, and no doubt , would not be exposed to fine wordsmiths!
I do say, I still need to read more works of art! Kinda stuck on Detective Mysteries!
October 26th, 2020 22:04
Unruly
Dove said:
Awe my dear if I had the extensive divine vocabulary as yours,
then perhaps free Verse would spill from my tongue, but alas,
You are a divine writer! I usually have rhymes in my head, though
I have discovered new poetic forms for which I like try out,
October 26th, 2020 21:24
Dove said:
Awe my dear if I had the extensive divine vocabulary as yours,
then perhaps free Verse would spill from my tongue, but alas,
You are a divine writer! I usually have rhymes in my head, though
I have discovered new poetic forms for which I like try out,
October 26th, 2020 21:24
Unruly
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must have me metres (usually) and me melodic whims.
They\'re only whims. I get arrested for false pretences of singing! They say it\'s two cats fighting, and disturbs the peace. lol.
October 26th, 2020 06:21
orchidee said:
Oohh, I must have me metres (usually) and me melodic whims.
They\'re only whims. I get arrested for false pretences of singing! They say it\'s two cats fighting, and disturbs the peace. lol.
October 26th, 2020 06:21
Unruly
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing perception in poetic versing. A favourite for sure my friend.
October 26th, 2020 04:57
Fay Slimm. said:
Top drawer writing on need for true self-expression when composing perception in poetic versing. A favourite for sure my friend.
October 26th, 2020 04:57
Unruly
dusk arising said:
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36
dusk arising said:
Yep. Totally agree. Make the point rather than the rhyme.
October 26th, 2020 03:36
of Immortal Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
The work of a true wordsmith in your own great style.
October 19th, 2020 13:54
Michael Edwards said:
The work of a true wordsmith in your own great style.
October 19th, 2020 13:54
of Immortal Poetry
dusk arising said:
Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor wish to be \'modern\'. That is to simply get on with it - whatever it is, and for me here it\'s poetry. Whether mine is any good, conventional, rule breaking or absurd I leave for others as I am comfortable with \'the way I do it\' and do not seek comparison. But i do like to be read lol.
I\'m not sure whether i have lost the plot in your piece today. That Bukowski root was excellent and set the tone for my interpretation of yours.
October 19th, 2020 09:28
dusk arising said:
Hmmm I\'d like to think there is a third way as I cannot claim to be nor wish to be \'modern\'. That is to simply get on with it - whatever it is, and for me here it\'s poetry. Whether mine is any good, conventional, rule breaking or absurd I leave for others as I am comfortable with \'the way I do it\' and do not seek comparison. But i do like to be read lol.
I\'m not sure whether i have lost the plot in your piece today. That Bukowski root was excellent and set the tone for my interpretation of yours.
October 19th, 2020 09:28
life’s Tempo
Dove said:
Superb Write! Regrets we all have a few! My favorite line
“as youth’s vigour fades within life’s subtle breeze” You’ve inspired a poem in my mind! Now to write it!
Smilez
October 17th, 2020 11:43
Dove said:
Superb Write! Regrets we all have a few! My favorite line
“as youth’s vigour fades within life’s subtle breeze” You’ve inspired a poem in my mind! Now to write it!
Smilez
October 17th, 2020 11:43
life’s Tempo
Neville said:
what an absolutely divine intro you have placed at the top of the page sir .. and then, you capture a life gently and oh\' so perfectly, incorporating into the convoluted folds so many of its nuances that no matter who stumbles or falls upon these words by design ... they will each be able to relate ...
Stunning poetry L.B and without any doubt, truly..
Neville
October 17th, 2020 04:27
Neville said:
what an absolutely divine intro you have placed at the top of the page sir .. and then, you capture a life gently and oh\' so perfectly, incorporating into the convoluted folds so many of its nuances that no matter who stumbles or falls upon these words by design ... they will each be able to relate ...
Stunning poetry L.B and without any doubt, truly..
Neville
October 17th, 2020 04:27
life’s Tempo
Goldfinch60 said:
Many of our achievements are behind us as we live longer in our lives. We can look back at them and be thankful that we have done them.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Many of our achievements are behind us as we live longer in our lives. We can look back at them and be thankful that we have done them.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:33
life’s Tempo
orchidee said:
A fine write LB.
Oh woe, yes! The camera broke when one took pics of me for memory! lol.
October 16th, 2020 05:19
orchidee said:
A fine write LB.
Oh woe, yes! The camera broke when one took pics of me for memory! lol.
October 16th, 2020 05:19
life’s Tempo
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah this my friend is a well picked bouquet of fine-flowered reasons to do and be what we can while time allows.......... Love the imagery used.
October 16th, 2020 04:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah this my friend is a well picked bouquet of fine-flowered reasons to do and be what we can while time allows.......... Love the imagery used.
October 16th, 2020 04:33
life’s Tempo
dusk arising said:
Ah yes achievements, my land of yesterday. Superceeded of course by the relaxation into ageing and insight into the unnecessary.
Enjoyed reading your words.
October 16th, 2020 03:30
dusk arising said:
Ah yes achievements, my land of yesterday. Superceeded of course by the relaxation into ageing and insight into the unnecessary.
Enjoyed reading your words.
October 16th, 2020 03:30
In the Quite
Neville said:
I popped back here to take a peek and stayed for longer than I had anticipated .... some might say I was loitering .. I would rather suggest it was a linger .... still beautifully crafted and otherwise timeless ...
Neville
October 15th, 2020 05:37
Neville said:
I popped back here to take a peek and stayed for longer than I had anticipated .... some might say I was loitering .. I would rather suggest it was a linger .... still beautifully crafted and otherwise timeless ...
Neville
October 15th, 2020 05:37
of Trust
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong that even jumping off the cliff together is ok as your Spirits will be together as one.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Love can be so strong that even jumping off the cliff together is ok as your Spirits will be together as one.
Andy
October 13th, 2020 00:35
of Trust
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Thanks LBM for an intriguing poem of Ladies & Love ! For Millenia Ladies have used Cosmetics to enhance their Natural Beauty ! However for Brian to love me I have no need of Warpaint ~ He loves me *au naturelle* ! Over the last three years the TRUST based on our LOVE has grown to the extent that we could react the scenario vividly described in the final three stanzas ! I trust this reflects the TRUST Brian has in ME !
Blessings & Peace to You & Your
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
October 12th, 2020 14:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here - Thanks LBM for an intriguing poem of Ladies & Love ! For Millenia Ladies have used Cosmetics to enhance their Natural Beauty ! However for Brian to love me I have no need of Warpaint ~ He loves me *au naturelle* ! Over the last three years the TRUST based on our LOVE has grown to the extent that we could react the scenario vividly described in the final three stanzas ! I trust this reflects the TRUST Brian has in ME !
Blessings & Peace to You & Your
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
October 12th, 2020 14:56
How to distinguish: A Poet
Poetic Dan said:
Bam! What an ending... They are sometime because of good but what started it all was that one day back before I even knew what was under my hood!
Thank you for sharing!
October 12th, 2020 10:26
Poetic Dan said:
Bam! What an ending... They are sometime because of good but what started it all was that one day back before I even knew what was under my hood!
Thank you for sharing!
October 12th, 2020 10:26
of Trust
Fay Slimm. said:
This write of deep and vulnerable love is so vividly portrayed by your potent words hear L.B.
October 12th, 2020 06:39
Fay Slimm. said:
This write of deep and vulnerable love is so vividly portrayed by your potent words hear L.B.
October 12th, 2020 06:39
of Trust
Lorna said:
Wonderful love story so beautifully done.... it just struck me that if this goes on too long, so many young pretty faces will never be seen while they are still fresh! Yikes what a pity.
October 12th, 2020 05:45
Lorna said:
Wonderful love story so beautifully done.... it just struck me that if this goes on too long, so many young pretty faces will never be seen while they are still fresh! Yikes what a pity.
October 12th, 2020 05:45
of Trust
orchidee said:
I\'m missing out, ya know! I gotta meet these gals in these poems - or some of them anyway. Will they be too much for me? lol.
October 12th, 2020 05:02
orchidee said:
I\'m missing out, ya know! I gotta meet these gals in these poems - or some of them anyway. Will they be too much for me? lol.
October 12th, 2020 05:02
of Trust
Neville said:
Ye gods L.B .. what faith and trust doth love bestow .......
stirring stuff indeed .. well penned my friend..............
Neville
October 12th, 2020 04:18
Neville said:
Ye gods L.B .. what faith and trust doth love bestow .......
stirring stuff indeed .. well penned my friend..............
Neville
October 12th, 2020 04:18
A panic of Familiarity
Fay Slimm. said:
A sure-fire hit at what we are all experiencing in this Covid- 19 take-over from long-ago plague-related reality......... ........\"screaming cities silenced\" indeed.
October 9th, 2020 14:57
Fay Slimm. said:
A sure-fire hit at what we are all experiencing in this Covid- 19 take-over from long-ago plague-related reality......... ........\"screaming cities silenced\" indeed.
October 9th, 2020 14:57
A panic of Familiarity
Michael Edwards said:
A telling read in troubled times.
October 9th, 2020 13:19
Michael Edwards said:
A telling read in troubled times.
October 9th, 2020 13:19
A panic of Familiarity
Neville said:
... I dont know whether you are familiar with the Carlsberg lager ads on tv etc .. but most Brits will be I\'m sure ... anyway ... suffice to say & to coin a phrase ...
This is probably the best Covid-19 related poem in the world ....
Neville
October 9th, 2020 07:52
Neville said:
... I dont know whether you are familiar with the Carlsberg lager ads on tv etc .. but most Brits will be I\'m sure ... anyway ... suffice to say & to coin a phrase ...
This is probably the best Covid-19 related poem in the world ....
Neville
October 9th, 2020 07:52
A panic of Familiarity
orchidee said:
A fine write LB.
We\'re still not helping ourselves sometimes. We \'forget\' to social distance, and simple things like that.
The Days of The Black Death - and me singing. Dunno which was worse! The latter caused, and causes, endless torments! lol.
October 9th, 2020 05:21
orchidee said:
A fine write LB.
We\'re still not helping ourselves sometimes. We \'forget\' to social distance, and simple things like that.
The Days of The Black Death - and me singing. Dunno which was worse! The latter caused, and causes, endless torments! lol.
October 9th, 2020 05:21
A panic of Familiarity
Lorna said:
Whoa! This is a wonderful landscape of Covid...... and a reminder that we\'re not that far away from the Dark Ages when we could easily have been wiped out.......... spooky....
October 9th, 2020 05:00
Lorna said:
Whoa! This is a wonderful landscape of Covid...... and a reminder that we\'re not that far away from the Dark Ages when we could easily have been wiped out.......... spooky....
October 9th, 2020 05:00
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