Comments received on poems by Dove
A Dream
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could continue.... but slowly the brain wave patterns of sleep mould into daytime patterns and last nights bliss becomes intangible. Frustration ensues..... but tonite, those places will be alive again... and.... and.... que sera sera.
August 22nd, 2021 14:07
dusk arising said:
Oh yes, those dreams are like that, leaving you wishing they could continue.... but slowly the brain wave patterns of sleep mould into daytime patterns and last nights bliss becomes intangible. Frustration ensues..... but tonite, those places will be alive again... and.... and.... que sera sera.
August 22nd, 2021 14:07
Joy Awaits
The elder poet said:
I\'m fairly new to this place but found that I really like it here . Quick to mak friends . And a place to enjoy . Poems that tell a story. I\'m glad you too find this place .Your poetic side.
August 22nd, 2021 11:00
The elder poet said:
I\'m fairly new to this place but found that I really like it here . Quick to mak friends . And a place to enjoy . Poems that tell a story. I\'m glad you too find this place .Your poetic side.
August 22nd, 2021 11:00
A Dream
The elder poet said:
Very well written. We can\'t seem to request our dreams. If we could we would never get out of the bed. Dreams of love come to us all. I write of these often .I go to bed each night hoping that a dream will bring back a lost love . Just for an instant. I enjoyed your poen very much. Thank you for sharing your dream.
August 22nd, 2021 10:57
The elder poet said:
Very well written. We can\'t seem to request our dreams. If we could we would never get out of the bed. Dreams of love come to us all. I write of these often .I go to bed each night hoping that a dream will bring back a lost love . Just for an instant. I enjoyed your poen very much. Thank you for sharing your dream.
August 22nd, 2021 10:57
A Dream
orchidee said:
Now you knew I would swoon! What can I do? Read it again! heehee.
August 22nd, 2021 10:36
orchidee said:
Now you knew I would swoon! What can I do? Read it again! heehee.
August 22nd, 2021 10:36
A Dream
Neville said:
this is so cool it is decidedly hotter than hot .. brilliantly crafted too and by Jove .. how I wish it had been writ with yours truly in mind .. but then all us blokes whether they admit it or not will be thinking the same ................... :) x
August 22nd, 2021 09:49
Neville said:
this is so cool it is decidedly hotter than hot .. brilliantly crafted too and by Jove .. how I wish it had been writ with yours truly in mind .. but then all us blokes whether they admit it or not will be thinking the same ................... :) x
August 22nd, 2021 09:49
A Dream
Accidental Poet said:
A very passionate write Dove. A dream to cherish. ๐
August 22nd, 2021 08:50
Accidental Poet said:
A very passionate write Dove. A dream to cherish. ๐
August 22nd, 2021 08:50
A Dream
aDarkerMind said:
one to read many times..to enjoy, to savour, and to read many times again;
August 22nd, 2021 08:26
aDarkerMind said:
one to read many times..to enjoy, to savour, and to read many times again;
August 22nd, 2021 08:26
The Vellichor of Canterbury Library
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
There\'s 7 million books in The Bodleian Library in Oxford, I heard. We can read them all when we got 5 minutes spare.
Sooo - we are fast readers?! lol.
August 22nd, 2021 01:50
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
There\'s 7 million books in The Bodleian Library in Oxford, I heard. We can read them all when we got 5 minutes spare.
Sooo - we are fast readers?! lol.
August 22nd, 2021 01:50
The Vellichor of Canterbury Library
Doggerel Dave said:
New word educationโฆYou are at it again, Dove. I doubt I will remember them, but in the moment they are fun.
A neat piece with plenty of dusty musty atmosphere, plus violence and destruction.
So Matters Arising: Which Canterbury Library?; Where?; Dates of mass shooting and burning?......... or must I take โCategory: Fantasyโ seriously?
August 21st, 2021 22:16
Doggerel Dave said:
New word educationโฆYou are at it again, Dove. I doubt I will remember them, but in the moment they are fun.
A neat piece with plenty of dusty musty atmosphere, plus violence and destruction.
So Matters Arising: Which Canterbury Library?; Where?; Dates of mass shooting and burning?......... or must I take โCategory: Fantasyโ seriously?
August 21st, 2021 22:16
The Vellichor of Canterbury Library
ron parrish aka wordman said:
makes you want to go and feel it yourself
August 21st, 2021 19:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
makes you want to go and feel it yourself
August 21st, 2021 19:56
The Vellichor of Canterbury Library
Neville said:
My daughter Bex\'s partner lives not that far from Canterbury Library .. and I am convince it is lived in by people that passed a very long time ago .. N
August 21st, 2021 14:15
Neville said:
My daughter Bex\'s partner lives not that far from Canterbury Library .. and I am convince it is lived in by people that passed a very long time ago .. N
August 21st, 2021 14:15
For Break it May: A Triolet
Dove said:
Awe, Thanks so much dearest Neville! I appreciate the stop over!
August 21st, 2021 11:11
Dove said:
Awe, Thanks so much dearest Neville! I appreciate the stop over!
August 21st, 2021 11:11
For Break it May: A Triolet
Neville said:
to suggest this is impressive would be a massive understatement ..
made me come over all unnecessary so it did ..............................................N
August 19th, 2021 03:48
Neville said:
to suggest this is impressive would be a massive understatement ..
made me come over all unnecessary so it did ..............................................N
August 19th, 2021 03:48
For Break it May: A Triolet
L. B. Mek said:
this poems is a baroque teardrop
of versed emotional bravery!
deftly executed, and I\'m with Dusk
this words are impactful enough, without
the repeated chorus or colouring
(but its perfectly beautiful as it is, dear poet)
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:59
L. B. Mek said:
this poems is a baroque teardrop
of versed emotional bravery!
deftly executed, and I\'m with Dusk
this words are impactful enough, without
the repeated chorus or colouring
(but its perfectly beautiful as it is, dear poet)
thanks for sharing
August 19th, 2021 02:59
For Break it May: A Triolet
Poetic Dan said:
Took me a while as I honestly thought it was a different language but beautifully sad and each teardrop is unique to you!
Thanks for sharing
August 18th, 2021 14:37
Poetic Dan said:
Took me a while as I honestly thought it was a different language but beautifully sad and each teardrop is unique to you!
Thanks for sharing
August 18th, 2021 14:37
For Break it May: A Triolet
dusk arising said:
Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.
August 18th, 2021 14:22
dusk arising said:
Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.
August 18th, 2021 14:22
๐ซ๐๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐, ๐ป๐๐ย ๐๐ฝ๐๐ โ ๐น๐๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐ย
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good sonnet Dove.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good sonnet Dove.
Andy
August 17th, 2021 00:23
๐ซ๐๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐, ๐ป๐๐ย ๐๐ฝ๐๐ โ ๐น๐๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐ย
Caring dove said:
Lovely !๐๐ very nice poem
August 16th, 2021 15:30
Caring dove said:
Lovely !๐๐ very nice poem
August 16th, 2021 15:30
๐ซ๐๐๐พ๐๐พ๐๐๐๐ ๐ฎ๐๐, ๐ป๐๐ย ๐๐ฝ๐๐ โ ๐น๐๐๐พ๐๐ฝ๐ย
Neville said:
sonnets may come and sonnets may go, but this sonnet should stay put its so seriously good .. I\'m gonna give one a bash some day maybe ... :)
August 16th, 2021 14:27
Neville said:
sonnets may come and sonnets may go, but this sonnet should stay put its so seriously good .. I\'m gonna give one a bash some day maybe ... :)
August 16th, 2021 14:27
Ephemeral
Neville said:
your words turned what was essentially a blank page into something really quite exquisite .. top marks my friend n truly ... :)
August 15th, 2021 03:11
Neville said:
your words turned what was essentially a blank page into something really quite exquisite .. top marks my friend n truly ... :)
August 15th, 2021 03:11
Ephemeral
orchidee said:
Good write Dove.
Simples - for the pain to pass, stop listening to me singing! heehee. If only it depended on that....
August 15th, 2021 01:51
orchidee said:
Good write Dove.
Simples - for the pain to pass, stop listening to me singing! heehee. If only it depended on that....
August 15th, 2021 01:51
Ephemeral
Fay Slimm. said:
Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy when pain riddles minds and hearts my friend - - \"if only\" indeed as your versed lament imagines such aches could be more momentary. Excellent read.
August 15th, 2021 01:21
Fay Slimm. said:
Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy when pain riddles minds and hearts my friend - - \"if only\" indeed as your versed lament imagines such aches could be more momentary. Excellent read.
August 15th, 2021 01:21
Ephemeral
Arvy said:
This could be relatable to many Dove, it breaks the soul when the pain that entered the heart takes time to leave. Hope you\'re safe and well!
August 15th, 2021 01:21
Arvy said:
This could be relatable to many Dove, it breaks the soul when the pain that entered the heart takes time to leave. Hope you\'re safe and well!
August 15th, 2021 01:21
Ephemeral
Doggerel Dave said:
It will lessen eventually, Dove - like water smooths a stone ....future events will wear it down to a small (even polished) memory with time......
Wait \'till that train leaves the station.....
Rich imagery in a neat write though.
August 15th, 2021 01:19
Doggerel Dave said:
It will lessen eventually, Dove - like water smooths a stone ....future events will wear it down to a small (even polished) memory with time......
Wait \'till that train leaves the station.....
Rich imagery in a neat write though.
August 15th, 2021 01:19
Ephemeral
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Dove may that pain soon leave you and become the love that you deserve.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Dove may that pain soon leave you and become the love that you deserve.
Andy
August 15th, 2021 00:32
Joy Awaits
dusk arising said:
It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my therapy.
August 14th, 2021 03:19
dusk arising said:
It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my therapy.
August 14th, 2021 03:19
Joy Awaits
Neville said:
There is more joy here than some might well imagine ......................
Delightful & well penned my literary friend ............................................. :)
August 14th, 2021 01:42
Neville said:
There is more joy here than some might well imagine ......................
Delightful & well penned my literary friend ............................................. :)
August 14th, 2021 01:42
Joy Awaits
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
It\'s a great place, unless I start singing! It scares all the poets away. heehee.
August 14th, 2021 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Dove.
It\'s a great place, unless I start singing! It scares all the poets away. heehee.
August 14th, 2021 01:37
Joy Awaits
Goldfinch60 said:
It surely is a great place to go Dove and may we enjoy it forever.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
It surely is a great place to go Dove and may we enjoy it forever.
Andy
August 14th, 2021 00:52
Purrfectly Batman
Dove said:
Glad you enjoyed my humor! Smilez! Thanks for stopping by Mek
August 13th, 2021 19:45
Dove said:
Glad you enjoyed my humor! Smilez! Thanks for stopping by Mek
August 13th, 2021 19:45
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