Comments received on poems by Dove



For Break it May: A Triolet
Neville said:


to suggest this is impressive would be a massive understatement ..
made me come over all unnecessary so it did ..............................................N

August 19th, 2021 03:48

For Break it May: A Triolet
L. B. Mek said:

this poems is a baroque teardrop
of versed emotional bravery!
deftly executed, and I\'m with Dusk
this words are impactful enough, without
the repeated chorus or colouring
(but its perfectly beautiful as it is, dear poet)
thanks for sharing

August 19th, 2021 02:59

For Break it May: A Triolet
Poetic Dan said:

Took me a while as I honestly thought it was a different language but beautifully sad and each teardrop is unique to you!

Thanks for sharing

August 18th, 2021 14:37

For Break it May: A Triolet
dusk arising said:

Dove, I can\'t read that font I\'m sorry.

August 18th, 2021 14:22




Ephemeral
Neville said:


your words turned what was essentially a blank page into something really quite exquisite .. top marks my friend n truly ... :)

August 15th, 2021 03:11

Ephemeral
orchidee said:

Good write Dove.
Simples - for the pain to pass, stop listening to me singing! heehee. If only it depended on that....

August 15th, 2021 01:51

Ephemeral
Fay Slimm. said:

Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy when pain riddles minds and hearts my friend - - \"if only\" indeed as your versed lament imagines such aches could be more momentary. Excellent read.

August 15th, 2021 01:21

Ephemeral
Arvy said:

This could be relatable to many Dove, it breaks the soul when the pain that entered the heart takes time to leave. Hope you\'re safe and well!

August 15th, 2021 01:21

Ephemeral
Doggerel Dave said:

It will lessen eventually, Dove - like water smooths a stone ....future events will wear it down to a small (even polished) memory with time......
Wait \'till that train leaves the station.....

Rich imagery in a neat write though.

August 15th, 2021 01:19

Ephemeral
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Dove may that pain soon leave you and become the love that you deserve.

Andy

August 15th, 2021 00:32

Joy Awaits
dusk arising said:

It is indeed a great place to visit. I\'m seen there regularly for my therapy.

August 14th, 2021 03:19

Joy Awaits
Neville said:


There is more joy here than some might well imagine ......................

Delightful & well penned my literary friend ............................................. :)


August 14th, 2021 01:42

Joy Awaits
orchidee said:

A fine write Dove.
It\'s a great place, unless I start singing! It scares all the poets away. heehee.

August 14th, 2021 01:37

Joy Awaits
Goldfinch60 said:

It surely is a great place to go Dove and may we enjoy it forever.

Andy

August 14th, 2021 00:52

Purrfectly Batman
Dove said:

Glad you enjoyed my humor! Smilez! Thanks for stopping by Mek

August 13th, 2021 19:45

Purrfectly Batman
L. B. Mek said:

lol,
those guns can get excited
at the most inopportune of times..
a fun read, thanks for sharing


August 13th, 2021 05:28

The Petrichor - A sonnet
L. B. Mek said:

this is such an immersive read
thanks for sharing, dear poet

August 13th, 2021 05:23

Purrfectly Batman
Doggerel Dave said:

Wow, ah corrrr - I shall certainly be viewing Dove(s) in a different light in future....
I\'m not keen on any reference to guns, actually but given that I have a feeling this is wot they term a metaphor, then I think I might just conceivably remember wot yer mean......

August 12th, 2021 20:54

Purrfectly Batman
dusk arising said:

Come into the barn dear pussy cat and let us hang upside down together.

August 12th, 2021 14:04

Purrfectly Batman
Neville said:


Ooh err matron .. or should that be ding dong my lady purrrfect now ya made me wish I was a bat and that just aint cricket ...................................... :)




August 12th, 2021 13:07

The Petrichor - A sonnet
Accidental Poet said:

Very inspirational Dove. Love it. ๐Ÿ˜‰

August 8th, 2021 19:31

The Petrichor - A sonnet
orchidee said:

Good write Dove. Petri-wotsit?! heehee.

August 8th, 2021 01:47

The Petrichor - A sonnet
Doggerel Dave said:

....And need I add? ....Know and am exhilarated by that smell also.

Keep on educating me, Dove.

August 7th, 2021 22:08

The Petrichor - A sonnet
flyingfish said:

Very inspiring - a new word for me \'Petrichor\' the smell of rain - charming piece. Very well done. Cheers

August 7th, 2021 13:14

Kyrielle Sonnet: A Delicate Flower
Neville said:


.. I dont know how or why I missed this little gem until just now .......... a real treat this wet n windy Saturday eve .. โค๏ธ :)

August 7th, 2021 11:52

The Petrichor - A sonnet
Neville said:


simply beautiful dear Dove ... you may not post that often these days .. but when you do .. you do it so splendidly ..

and what\'s more, you have used one of my most favouritest words in your title .... N :)

August 7th, 2021 11:47

The Fairies Cast A Spell- Triolet
๐Ÿคs.zaynab.kamoonpuri๐ŸŒท๐Ÿฆ๐Ÿ˜ฝ said:

Aw yayy same with me, i love flowers so much and find them so enchanting and spellbinding , so i enjoyed your little beautiful poem on your admiration for them. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

July 22nd, 2021 11:39



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