Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
a semicolon pause
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Exquisite poetry throughout. Your last lines kudos.
where kneels
so shall I beg
a proud horn of circumspect
with a keg of ale
drinking through the torture of a dream;
Love this stanza. 🤗
November 8th, 2023 03:49
a semicolon pause
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
Yassin Tamam said:
vividly visual, adoring the pauses, the breaks and the deep breaths i can feel while i am reading it. beautifully done
November 7th, 2023 16:13
jazz
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
Teddy.15 said:
Jazz has so many faces as you have beautifully composed in this poetry, I personally love soft jazz. When I was a child I felt my life was surrounded by messy jazz which I can still hear today in dark moments. A fantastic creative piece here dearest Melvin, you have tormented and elated my very mind in less than 60 seconds.
To say you inspire is an understatement ❤️
November 4th, 2023 15:41
Under Once Of Bone When Salem Slept
Thomas W Case said:
Superb as always. The mind is strange. My mind thinks, the Beatles and great classic poetry, Lord Byron vibe.
November 3rd, 2023 12:40
Thomas W Case said:
Superb as always. The mind is strange. My mind thinks, the Beatles and great classic poetry, Lord Byron vibe.
November 3rd, 2023 12:40
a letter from the torso of sublime
Teddy.15 said:
Wow ❤️ what a poet you are.
November 1st, 2023 14:42
Teddy.15 said:
Wow ❤️ what a poet you are.
November 1st, 2023 14:42
No Deeper Than A Six
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing imagery and filled with emotions tragic and less so by the end your last lines are fabulous ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing imagery and filled with emotions tragic and less so by the end your last lines are fabulous ❤️
October 31st, 2023 01:48
No Deeper Than A Six
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Again, you amaze me. Thomas W. Case amazed...wow. Here\'s the thing, you take flash snapshots and create mood, fucking smells, sounds tastes. You bring memory flooding back like the rose colored coat my mom had on the day she died, the smell of cigarettes and tuna casserole....frozen clothes on the clothesline. I had to take down after i picked up my car from the grocery store that she died in....genius. You take the reader right to the heart of the poem, if he has heard sound...
October 30th, 2023 17:10
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Again, you amaze me. Thomas W. Case amazed...wow. Here\'s the thing, you take flash snapshots and create mood, fucking smells, sounds tastes. You bring memory flooding back like the rose colored coat my mom had on the day she died, the smell of cigarettes and tuna casserole....frozen clothes on the clothesline. I had to take down after i picked up my car from the grocery store that she died in....genius. You take the reader right to the heart of the poem, if he has heard sound...
October 30th, 2023 17:10
A Pocketful of Catacombs
rhmn_7 said:
I really like how you give a beautiful flow to your words, great work!
October 29th, 2023 07:40
rhmn_7 said:
I really like how you give a beautiful flow to your words, great work!
October 29th, 2023 07:40
A Pocketful of Catacombs
Teddy.15 said:
Bones are all that\'s left in the end, what superb poetry from you as always, what\'s it all about this life! So thought provoking dear Melvin. Bravo ❤️
October 29th, 2023 06:38
Teddy.15 said:
Bones are all that\'s left in the end, what superb poetry from you as always, what\'s it all about this life! So thought provoking dear Melvin. Bravo ❤️
October 29th, 2023 06:38
A Pocketful of Catacombs
Lorenz said:
we were absolutely synchronized !
your words my worlds !
And the opposite ...
October 29th, 2023 06:14
Lorenz said:
we were absolutely synchronized !
your words my worlds !
And the opposite ...
October 29th, 2023 06:14
A Pocketful of Catacombs
2781 said:
Made me think of that ultimate paradox, where the poor get it all.
Probably right off, to blind to understand.
October 29th, 2023 06:01
2781 said:
Made me think of that ultimate paradox, where the poor get it all.
Probably right off, to blind to understand.
October 29th, 2023 06:01
When Once Was Nothing More Than Just
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, powerful and important. I really love this.
October 29th, 2023 04:57
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful, powerful and important. I really love this.
October 29th, 2023 04:57
Crouched in Black
Thomas W Case said:
So much power in your write. You shine a light on a dark subject.
October 29th, 2023 00:37
Thomas W Case said:
So much power in your write. You shine a light on a dark subject.
October 29th, 2023 00:37
From Burlesque to Mediocre
Thomas W Case said:
BRIILIANT. i DON\'T USE THOSE WORDS LIGHTLY.
October 27th, 2023 17:29
Thomas W Case said:
BRIILIANT. i DON\'T USE THOSE WORDS LIGHTLY.
October 27th, 2023 17:29
From Burlesque to Mediocre
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing poetry. And what company you do keep my dear friend. Not bad at all. ❤️
October 27th, 2023 16:28
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing poetry. And what company you do keep my dear friend. Not bad at all. ❤️
October 27th, 2023 16:28
A Comedy Divine
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language. You really know how to paint a scene.
October 25th, 2023 17:39
Thomas W Case said:
Great use of language. You really know how to paint a scene.
October 25th, 2023 17:39
Be Strong Disheveled Entity
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language and theme to pain the poem.
October 25th, 2023 11:31
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful use of language and theme to pain the poem.
October 25th, 2023 11:31
one on one
Teddy.15 said:
I could name a thousand reasons for your insanity lol, and a million for your genius, love this poem, it creeps out at the reader like 3D art 🎨
October 23rd, 2023 14:36
Teddy.15 said:
I could name a thousand reasons for your insanity lol, and a million for your genius, love this poem, it creeps out at the reader like 3D art 🎨
October 23rd, 2023 14:36
pyramids of albatross
Thomas W Case said:
Superb imagery and fantastic flow.
October 22nd, 2023 13:08
Thomas W Case said:
Superb imagery and fantastic flow.
October 22nd, 2023 13:08
Crouched in Black
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, sad as it is this terrible dimentia you bring truth of its calamity and I hope some healing to yourself. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 12:32
Teddy.15 said:
Superb, sad as it is this terrible dimentia you bring truth of its calamity and I hope some healing to yourself. ❤️
October 22nd, 2023 12:32
Too Long Gone
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and your last stanza is probably one of your most powerful that I\'ve ever read, and you know me I also had a chuckle at your imagery lol fabuuuulous ❤️
October 21st, 2023 15:56
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and your last stanza is probably one of your most powerful that I\'ve ever read, and you know me I also had a chuckle at your imagery lol fabuuuulous ❤️
October 21st, 2023 15:56
Too Long Gone
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I like the way you use abstract images to form concrete themes.
October 21st, 2023 14:38
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. I like the way you use abstract images to form concrete themes.
October 21st, 2023 14:38
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