Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
a more amicable approach
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your use of language and imagery is tremendous. I\'m reminded of Neruda. You paint the scene well.
March 31st, 2024 20:56
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. Your use of language and imagery is tremendous. I\'m reminded of Neruda. You paint the scene well.
March 31st, 2024 20:56
My Inanimate Sounds
Lorenz said:
An expression that borrows from a psychic force freed from the weight of reason ! (André Breton )
March 24th, 2024 14:21
Lorenz said:
An expression that borrows from a psychic force freed from the weight of reason ! (André Breton )
March 24th, 2024 14:21
Another Side Of This
Lorenz said:
\'Sleeping with a crucifix hanging upside-down ! The sentence delighted me !
November 26th, 2023 14:07
Lorenz said:
\'Sleeping with a crucifix hanging upside-down ! The sentence delighted me !
November 26th, 2023 14:07
Another Side Of This
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language.
November 26th, 2023 09:56
Thomas W Case said:
Great imagery and use of language.
November 26th, 2023 09:56
beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Ellen.
very kind.
November 25th, 2023 17:45
aDarkerMind said:
thank you Ellen.
very kind.
November 25th, 2023 17:45
beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock
Ellen Marsell said:
\"what do I now
deep beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock?\"
Some extraordinary impression after reading it. You just sit in a daze and then read it again.
That\'s great!
November 25th, 2023 17:36
Ellen Marsell said:
\"what do I now
deep beneath a shade of 3 o\'clock?\"
Some extraordinary impression after reading it. You just sit in a daze and then read it again.
That\'s great!
November 25th, 2023 17:36
a silent rage of anguish
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and flow. Superb work.
November 20th, 2023 14:33
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant use of language and flow. Superb work.
November 20th, 2023 14:33
a silent rage of anguish
Teddy.15 said:
You just ripped everything from my gut. Wow it just gets better and better. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I see every detail and hear every whisper. ❤️
November 19th, 2023 17:27
Teddy.15 said:
You just ripped everything from my gut. Wow it just gets better and better. Absolutely beautiful poetry. I see every detail and hear every whisper. ❤️
November 19th, 2023 17:27
a silent rage of anguish
aDarkerMind said:
and sinks a little deeper day by day!
November 19th, 2023 10:39
aDarkerMind said:
and sinks a little deeper day by day!
November 19th, 2023 10:39
a silent rage of anguish
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger that lacerates souls !
November 19th, 2023 10:19
Lorenz said:
Poetry is a dagger that lacerates souls !
November 19th, 2023 10:19
A Pocketful of Catacombs
jarcher54 said:
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my all-time go-to songs for solace and inspiration... your striking Alice is a wonderful reimagination... getting lost in your catacomb-poem is pretty cool too!
November 18th, 2023 19:39
jarcher54 said:
Streets of London has inspired and haunted me for decades... one of my all-time go-to songs for solace and inspiration... your striking Alice is a wonderful reimagination... getting lost in your catacomb-poem is pretty cool too!
November 18th, 2023 19:39
an energy of change
jarcher54 said:
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27
jarcher54 said:
Chilling... and HOW did you know June 14 is my birthday?
November 18th, 2023 19:27
a letter from the torso of sublime
Lil said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Lil said:
Love this your do talented but how many shades of dark??
November 14th, 2023 18:56
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Reminds me of Cohen. Great mood setting.
November 12th, 2023 14:59
Not Pity\'s Sake; Nor Anger;
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
Teddy.15 said:
Beautifully dark 🖤
Every last line... Extraordinary with imagery
November 12th, 2023 04:50
an energy of change
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic. I love the abstract vibe.
November 11th, 2023 09:32
protocol and weather
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Teddy.15 said:
Your last lines wow.
where does our hunger hide?
in our country clouded
bent and buckled
fishing for a lobster in a heart.
So many metaphor in this. Beautiful dear friend. 🩷
November 11th, 2023 01:43
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Thomas W Case said:
I love your use of language. The flow is great.
November 8th, 2023 20:53
Canto; In a Summers Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
Teddy.15 said:
lol very romantic 💜 poetry of love uniquely entwined. I\'m loving your new twist on poetry.
November 8th, 2023 15:39
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