Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
To Where The Seven Horses Run
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
Teddy.15 said:
lol just brilliantly executed, I cannot help but think of the number of the devil, but your title is phenominal and yes wild horses also relatable in my life. Melvin, I\'m at the sea I\'m really well but every time I read a line of Sylvia it simply sends my muse I to overdrive. Thank you. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 13:46
Another Cut This Love
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of deep loss and sorrow, you surely know how to inspire your reader dear Melvin, in the most wonderful times and the most deeply tragic. Kudos my dear friend. I absolutely love your first stanza it has emotion and imagery that cuts like a knife. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 04:46
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible sense of deep loss and sorrow, you surely know how to inspire your reader dear Melvin, in the most wonderful times and the most deeply tragic. Kudos my dear friend. I absolutely love your first stanza it has emotion and imagery that cuts like a knife. 🌹
July 22nd, 2024 04:46
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful observation. Nice work.
July 21st, 2024 23:59
Dan Williams said:
Great imagery. And \"fallen trees more opium than bark\" is graceful observation. Nice work.
July 21st, 2024 23:59
Another Cut This Love
Dan Williams said:
Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme scene . Good work
July 21st, 2024 23:55
Dan Williams said:
Rhyme seems to have fallen out of fashion so kudos the different rhyme scene . Good work
July 21st, 2024 23:55
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Bella Shepard said:
\"In the window-box where my goldfinch came to rest singing honey through the fingers of her heart\", beautiful and gentle, standing in contrast to what seems to me conflict, then resolution in the last four exquisite lines. Beautifully versed my friend!
July 21st, 2024 16:05
Bella Shepard said:
\"In the window-box where my goldfinch came to rest singing honey through the fingers of her heart\", beautiful and gentle, standing in contrast to what seems to me conflict, then resolution in the last four exquisite lines. Beautifully versed my friend!
July 21st, 2024 16:05
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
aDarkerMind said:
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much appreciated.
July 21st, 2024 09:36
aDarkerMind said:
thank you for reading, and for a most kind comment.
very much appreciated.
July 21st, 2024 09:36
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wite, DM.
Sad and soulful. I like the uplift at the end.
July 21st, 2024 07:43
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good wite, DM.
Sad and soulful. I like the uplift at the end.
July 21st, 2024 07:43
A Sudden Touch Of Wood
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and compelling internal rhyme from time to time. Metaphoric is an understatement.
July 21st, 2024 07:40
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and intriguing images presented with most interesting and compelling internal rhyme from time to time. Metaphoric is an understatement.
July 21st, 2024 07:40
Another Cut This Love
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
poignant 😢 and
heart touching and
wonderfully woven
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning,
poignant 😢 and
heart touching and
wonderfully woven
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
July 20th, 2024 21:38
Another Cut This Love
Cassie58 said:
Living with the ache of loss cuts deep. You can not escape it. If you don’t dream it, it will surely grip you on waking and it will choose when it will drown you. Deeply felt words.
July 20th, 2024 11:54
Cassie58 said:
Living with the ache of loss cuts deep. You can not escape it. If you don’t dream it, it will surely grip you on waking and it will choose when it will drown you. Deeply felt words.
July 20th, 2024 11:54
No Flesh My Iron Lung
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
Cassie58 said:
Captivating stanzas Melvin.
Drawn to the lines
my plastic is your primrose
my seed no lesser soul
too many sad goodbyes
The lines are heavy and the imagery most
unusual. The mood is melancholic. Thank you for sharing.
July 19th, 2024 16:15
No Flesh My Iron Lung
Teddy.15 said:
A soulmate on the other side of where we be is all I see. This is one that makes my heart heavy, so very very beautiful. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 13:33
Teddy.15 said:
A soulmate on the other side of where we be is all I see. This is one that makes my heart heavy, so very very beautiful. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 13:33
All The Nonesense And The Noise
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning my dear friend, I cannot choose a favourite line, an oscar also for you dearest Melvin. Ps I\'m loving the poetry I\'m reading. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
Absolutely stunning my dear friend, I cannot choose a favourite line, an oscar also for you dearest Melvin. Ps I\'m loving the poetry I\'m reading. 🌹
July 19th, 2024 03:29
All The Nonesense And The Noise
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. You nailed this.
July 19th, 2024 00:00
Thomas W Case said:
Fantastic work. You nailed this.
July 19th, 2024 00:00
Glockenspiel, My Dorset
Neville said:
Having stumbled upon this by chance, I now think today is going to be a good one .. a compelling read throughout sir Mind .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 03:09
Neville said:
Having stumbled upon this by chance, I now think today is going to be a good one .. a compelling read throughout sir Mind .. Neville
July 18th, 2024 03:09
Too Cold The Clientele\'s Philosophy
Teddy.15 said:
Trust is one of the greatest tools we can own but to trust is even greater. Magnificent once again. 🌹
July 17th, 2024 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
Trust is one of the greatest tools we can own but to trust is even greater. Magnificent once again. 🌹
July 17th, 2024 15:43
Glockenspiel, My Dorset
Thad Wilk said:
Beautifully composed,
strong feelings & message,
deep and thought provoking!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 17th, 2024 10:00
Thad Wilk said:
Beautifully composed,
strong feelings & message,
deep and thought provoking!
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards, peace Thad
July 17th, 2024 10:00
They Are Not You
Bella Shepard said:
As life changes us, and time reshapes our form, we often drift to thoughts of the past, and what was once, but is no more. It can\'t be helped, it is our human way. There is a sad and yet beautiful sentiment in the way you have phrased this poem, who else could have done it but you.
July 16th, 2024 14:47
Bella Shepard said:
As life changes us, and time reshapes our form, we often drift to thoughts of the past, and what was once, but is no more. It can\'t be helped, it is our human way. There is a sad and yet beautiful sentiment in the way you have phrased this poem, who else could have done it but you.
July 16th, 2024 14:47
They Are Not You
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and evocative
poetic pictorial,
strong feelings
and thoughts
eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 15th, 2024 19:23
Thad Wilk said:
A very poignant 😢
and evocative
poetic pictorial,
strong feelings
and thoughts
eloquently penned
my friend! 👍
Best regards ✌️. Thad
July 15th, 2024 19:23
They Are Not You
Cassie58 said:
the black rook reels me in
The mood here is heavy in this piece with perhaps thoughts of those now departed. I read several times. You create an ambience of quiet, solemn reflection. I find your poetic expression always refreshingly original Melvin. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2024 14:26
Cassie58 said:
the black rook reels me in
The mood here is heavy in this piece with perhaps thoughts of those now departed. I read several times. You create an ambience of quiet, solemn reflection. I find your poetic expression always refreshingly original Melvin. Thank you for sharing.
July 15th, 2024 14:26
They Are Not You
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, I saw the entire burial. I also felt profound loneliness wondering what it\'s all about. 🌹
July 15th, 2024 12:40
Teddy.15 said:
Dearest Melvin, I saw the entire burial. I also felt profound loneliness wondering what it\'s all about. 🌹
July 15th, 2024 12:40
Above The Water-Mark
Bella Shepard said:
Dark and sinister, you pait a picture, with wonderful imagery, of what is pervasive in our sad world. We do \"wait with baited breath\", we must. A very powerful write my friend!
July 15th, 2024 08:34
Bella Shepard said:
Dark and sinister, you pait a picture, with wonderful imagery, of what is pervasive in our sad world. We do \"wait with baited breath\", we must. A very powerful write my friend!
July 15th, 2024 08:34
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