Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind



At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!
Powerful penning,
really pulls on the
heartstrings. 🎻
Really captivating and
awesome use of
metaphor!
Much enjoyed!!
Best regards poet!
Peace ✌️ Thad

June 10th, 2024 23:07

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Doggerel Dave said:

Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has suddenly and mysteriously reappeared here for me after a very long absence. \'Like to clarify your position or retreat back to safety?🤣...... Not that I can recall ever engaging with you anyway!!

June 9th, 2024 20:30

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thomas W Case said:

Your mind and creativity are amazing. Powerful work.

June 9th, 2024 14:38

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
orchidee said:

So was I, with my mobile, but - as people do - I wasn\'t looking where I was going and fell off the end of the pier! lol.
Am I telling porkies?

June 9th, 2024 13:10

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Neilton said:

I truly enjoyed your poem! Although sad and melancholic I was amazed by your talent!

June 9th, 2024 12:31

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
peto said:

You have an excellent way with words
Can\'t help but get a deep reflection/self inventory vibe
1st I\'ve read from you
Won\'t be the last

June 9th, 2024 12:18

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Cassie58 said:

You convey sadness here with such passion. Your lines remind me of Dylan Thomas. He had a remarkable way with words too. So many original lines. Fabulous poetry.

June 9th, 2024 10:33

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Tony36 said:

Sad, but a great write

June 9th, 2024 09:52

At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Teddy.15 said:

An extreme amount of sadness and regret, as you always do dear Melvin you write with an extraordinary amount of passion and love it shows in each line, 2 days away from opening the chocolates makes me think of Christmas day. The very vision of you at the end of the pier something I feel great sadness to see. Kudos sir once again. 🌹

June 9th, 2024 02:52

Out Walking With An X
Teddy.15 said:

So very beautifully crafted, I could think of worst meetings, sometimes in life confronting things that need to be faced actually settles ones gut. A wonderful provocative write dear Melvin. 🌹

June 8th, 2024 13:52

Neither Of Us Mad
Teddy.15 said:

As always your imagery twists my mind. 🌹

June 7th, 2024 15:11

Neither Of Us Mad
Thomas W Case said:

Reminds me of early Bukowski. Tremendous work.

June 7th, 2024 11:33

All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
aDarkerMind said:

as kind and supportive as always Teddy.
a kiss that put a smile on my face as well.
and how true...perhaps a simple life isn\'t such a big deal.
thank you my friend x

June 7th, 2024 08:38

All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
Teddy.15 said:

Perhaps she will, until then here\'s a big fat kiss from your friend teddy 🤣 your words magnificent as always if life was simple you or i wouldn\'t even have met dear Melvin. 🌹

June 6th, 2024 16:35

Too Long
O. Ella said:

Now I really appreciate your comment on my poem because this is just fantastic, mediocre in the least.

June 6th, 2024 12:58

An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.

June 6th, 2024 07:28

An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Teddy.15 said:

lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹

June 5th, 2024 14:08

Too Long
Teddy.15 said:

To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹

June 4th, 2024 13:59

The Colour Clean
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

June 3rd, 2024 23:15

The Colour Clean
Cassie58 said:

Some incredible lines here :

black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool

mourning flowers while on a plate of steam

the raw side of the meat now vomits change

Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.

June 3rd, 2024 23:01

The Colour Clean
Teddy.15 said:

Extraordinary 🌹

June 3rd, 2024 14:30

Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.

June 2nd, 2024 06:08

Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Teddy.15 said:

It\'s all so very deep within. Oh extraordinary stunning lines. 🌹

June 2nd, 2024 06:00

An Atlas on a String of Steel Erect
Teddy.15 said:

My dear Melvin,hopelessness and Helplessness within a dream that\'s what I see, Powerful and absolutely wonderful. Your ending is magnificent. 🌹

June 2nd, 2024 02:16

An Atlas on a String of Steel Erect
2781 said:

Certainly intriguing

June 2nd, 2024 00:25

Placebo Pink
Neville said:


A compelling read well crafted and with no rough edges to tear apart .. just about perfect in my humble opinion .. Neville

May 31st, 2024 12:17

Placebo Pink
Teddy.15 said:

Your emotions speak so loud and clear I feel your pain. 🌹 never the less writing that for me is quite extraordinary and most inspiring. ❤️

May 30th, 2024 00:53

Placebo Pink
Thomas W Case said:

Superb work. You paint the scene well.

May 29th, 2024 15:50

Fourteen Days Of June
Cassie58 said:

The first of yours I have read, I am so pleased to have stopped by.

one flower each for the birds who cannot sing

Anniversaries can be so painful. I felt the depth of that pain in the wonderful choice of language and poetic expression. The finest poetry.



May 29th, 2024 05:47

King of a Lost Frontier
Eugene S. said:

You can feel the heavy weight of time and suffering in each stanza. Regimented frustrations: \"two cocktail sticks for supper dead on nine.\". Such an artistic way to describe it all.

May 29th, 2024 03:47



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