Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
A Photograph Of Lemon-Grass
2781 said:
Wow, you are hard to interpret I like, better now am new.
June 14th, 2024 10:21
2781 said:
Wow, you are hard to interpret I like, better now am new.
June 14th, 2024 10:21
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
Teddy.15 said:
The third side of the coin, wow dear Melvin, such imagery has to be read over and over, something tells me of aches and pains for sure in metaphor at the least. Superb 🌹
June 13th, 2024 17:13
Teddy.15 said:
The third side of the coin, wow dear Melvin, such imagery has to be read over and over, something tells me of aches and pains for sure in metaphor at the least. Superb 🌹
June 13th, 2024 17:13
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid imagery this poem demands attention to the incongruous and juxtaposed metaphors that cover it like corpses on a battlefield. It talks more to the heart than head and leaves one dizzy with a fever. Nicely done.
June 13th, 2024 16:31
sorenbarrett said:
Full of vivid imagery this poem demands attention to the incongruous and juxtaposed metaphors that cover it like corpses on a battlefield. It talks more to the heart than head and leaves one dizzy with a fever. Nicely done.
June 13th, 2024 16:31
If You Touch Me, I Will Move
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and vivid. Tremendous work.
June 13th, 2024 11:20
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful and vivid. Tremendous work.
June 13th, 2024 11:20
Out Walking With An X
Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what an
awesomazing write! 👍
Captivating and
eloquently penned
AND a treat to recite!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards, peace. ✌️
Thad
June 12th, 2024 12:43
Thad Wilk said:
Wow, what an
awesomazing write! 👍
Captivating and
eloquently penned
AND a treat to recite!!
Thanks for sharing!!
Best regards, peace. ✌️
Thad
June 12th, 2024 12:43
Bury Me In Silver
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautiful, I\'d have to bury you in gold though. 🌹
June 12th, 2024 11:13
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautiful, I\'d have to bury you in gold though. 🌹
June 12th, 2024 11:13
Neither Of Us Mad
Cassie58 said:
Amazing lines. The imagery is so unique. Quite an experience reading you.
June 11th, 2024 14:27
Cassie58 said:
Amazing lines. The imagery is so unique. Quite an experience reading you.
June 11th, 2024 14:27
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
really pulls on the
heartstrings. 🎻
Really captivating and
awesome use of
metaphor!
Much enjoyed!!
Best regards poet!
Peace ✌️ Thad
June 10th, 2024 23:07
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!
Powerful penning,
really pulls on the
heartstrings. 🎻
Really captivating and
awesome use of
metaphor!
Much enjoyed!!
Best regards poet!
Peace ✌️ Thad
June 10th, 2024 23:07
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has suddenly and mysteriously reappeared here for me after a very long absence. \'Like to clarify your position or retreat back to safety?🤣...... Not that I can recall ever engaging with you anyway!!
June 9th, 2024 20:30
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey there, Melvin. What are you up to? The \'Send Comment\' box has suddenly and mysteriously reappeared here for me after a very long absence. \'Like to clarify your position or retreat back to safety?🤣...... Not that I can recall ever engaging with you anyway!!
June 9th, 2024 20:30
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Thomas W Case said:
Your mind and creativity are amazing. Powerful work.
June 9th, 2024 14:38
Thomas W Case said:
Your mind and creativity are amazing. Powerful work.
June 9th, 2024 14:38
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
orchidee said:
So was I, with my mobile, but - as people do - I wasn\'t looking where I was going and fell off the end of the pier! lol.
Am I telling porkies?
June 9th, 2024 13:10
orchidee said:
So was I, with my mobile, but - as people do - I wasn\'t looking where I was going and fell off the end of the pier! lol.
Am I telling porkies?
June 9th, 2024 13:10
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Neilton said:
I truly enjoyed your poem! Although sad and melancholic I was amazed by your talent!
June 9th, 2024 12:31
Neilton said:
I truly enjoyed your poem! Although sad and melancholic I was amazed by your talent!
June 9th, 2024 12:31
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
peto said:
You have an excellent way with words
Can\'t help but get a deep reflection/self inventory vibe
1st I\'ve read from you
Won\'t be the last
June 9th, 2024 12:18
peto said:
You have an excellent way with words
Can\'t help but get a deep reflection/self inventory vibe
1st I\'ve read from you
Won\'t be the last
June 9th, 2024 12:18
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Cassie58 said:
You convey sadness here with such passion. Your lines remind me of Dylan Thomas. He had a remarkable way with words too. So many original lines. Fabulous poetry.
June 9th, 2024 10:33
Cassie58 said:
You convey sadness here with such passion. Your lines remind me of Dylan Thomas. He had a remarkable way with words too. So many original lines. Fabulous poetry.
June 9th, 2024 10:33
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Tony36 said:
Sad, but a great write
June 9th, 2024 09:52
Tony36 said:
Sad, but a great write
June 9th, 2024 09:52
At The End Of The Pier With My Telephone Line
Teddy.15 said:
An extreme amount of sadness and regret, as you always do dear Melvin you write with an extraordinary amount of passion and love it shows in each line, 2 days away from opening the chocolates makes me think of Christmas day. The very vision of you at the end of the pier something I feel great sadness to see. Kudos sir once again. 🌹
June 9th, 2024 02:52
Teddy.15 said:
An extreme amount of sadness and regret, as you always do dear Melvin you write with an extraordinary amount of passion and love it shows in each line, 2 days away from opening the chocolates makes me think of Christmas day. The very vision of you at the end of the pier something I feel great sadness to see. Kudos sir once again. 🌹
June 9th, 2024 02:52
Out Walking With An X
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, I could think of worst meetings, sometimes in life confronting things that need to be faced actually settles ones gut. A wonderful provocative write dear Melvin. 🌹
June 8th, 2024 13:52
Teddy.15 said:
So very beautifully crafted, I could think of worst meetings, sometimes in life confronting things that need to be faced actually settles ones gut. A wonderful provocative write dear Melvin. 🌹
June 8th, 2024 13:52
Neither Of Us Mad
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of early Bukowski. Tremendous work.
June 7th, 2024 11:33
Thomas W Case said:
Reminds me of early Bukowski. Tremendous work.
June 7th, 2024 11:33
All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
aDarkerMind said:
as kind and supportive as always Teddy.
a kiss that put a smile on my face as well.
and how true...perhaps a simple life isn\'t such a big deal.
thank you my friend x
June 7th, 2024 08:38
aDarkerMind said:
as kind and supportive as always Teddy.
a kiss that put a smile on my face as well.
and how true...perhaps a simple life isn\'t such a big deal.
thank you my friend x
June 7th, 2024 08:38
All Numbers Tell A Story\'s Solitaire
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps she will, until then here\'s a big fat kiss from your friend teddy 🤣 your words magnificent as always if life was simple you or i wouldn\'t even have met dear Melvin. 🌹
June 6th, 2024 16:35
Teddy.15 said:
Perhaps she will, until then here\'s a big fat kiss from your friend teddy 🤣 your words magnificent as always if life was simple you or i wouldn\'t even have met dear Melvin. 🌹
June 6th, 2024 16:35
Too Long
O. Ella said:
Now I really appreciate your comment on my poem because this is just fantastic, mediocre in the least.
June 6th, 2024 12:58
O. Ella said:
Now I really appreciate your comment on my poem because this is just fantastic, mediocre in the least.
June 6th, 2024 12:58
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. In the abstraction, you say a lot of concrete things. Very well done.
June 6th, 2024 07:28
An Acrylic De Ja Vue
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Teddy.15 said:
lol this is fabulous, love those last lines I really nearly did bark. 🌹
June 5th, 2024 14:08
Too Long
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
Teddy.15 said:
To admit defeat even though it breaks your heart to miss something or someone stunning dear Melvin. Always an inspiration to me. 🌹
June 4th, 2024 13:59
The Colour Clean
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Cassie58 said:
Some incredible lines here :
black- pudding proud in pots of knotted wool
mourning flowers while on a plate of steam
the raw side of the meat now vomits change
Such original poetic expression. Much enjoyed.
June 3rd, 2024 23:01
Confessions of an Oceanic Crust
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Reminds me of Leonard Cohen.
June 2nd, 2024 06:08
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