Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
The Last Dark Day
Dan Williams said:
As bitter as me, but the last line tempers it. Nice work.
September 9th, 2024 00:24
Dan Williams said:
As bitter as me, but the last line tempers it. Nice work.
September 9th, 2024 00:24
The Last Dark Day
Cassie58 said:
You take your readers on a fascinating journey with such creative and imaginative imagery and description. I felt as though I had waded through black treacle to find the tea and biscuits. The final four lines end in positivity. A sparkle in the eyes has to be a good sign and the last dark day has to be welcomed with arms wide open. Intriguing write Melvin. Have a super Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 10:22
Cassie58 said:
You take your readers on a fascinating journey with such creative and imaginative imagery and description. I felt as though I had waded through black treacle to find the tea and biscuits. The final four lines end in positivity. A sparkle in the eyes has to be a good sign and the last dark day has to be welcomed with arms wide open. Intriguing write Melvin. Have a super Sunday.
September 8th, 2024 10:22
The Last Dark Day
Teddy.15 said:
Wow and wow dear Melvin, incredible imagery and kudos on that last line. 🌹
September 8th, 2024 08:29
Teddy.15 said:
Wow and wow dear Melvin, incredible imagery and kudos on that last line. 🌹
September 8th, 2024 08:29
The Last Dark Day
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic, lines evoking images and painting patterns I`ve not seen..Curiously entertaining.
September 8th, 2024 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
Enigmatic, lines evoking images and painting patterns I`ve not seen..Curiously entertaining.
September 8th, 2024 06:21
It Is Over
Cassie58 said:
It is over
By the grace of God Almighty
I felt the weight of an albatross around the neck lift.
hell has served its purpose
I enjoyed the references to the goddess Bastet and searched for meaning
Some amazing lines here, brimful of imagery.
I sensed an easing of darkness but felt it might only be a temporary pause. Grief does that to you. Fab poetry. Not easy to decipher, but well worth the trying.
September 4th, 2024 04:36
Cassie58 said:
It is over
By the grace of God Almighty
I felt the weight of an albatross around the neck lift.
hell has served its purpose
I enjoyed the references to the goddess Bastet and searched for meaning
Some amazing lines here, brimful of imagery.
I sensed an easing of darkness but felt it might only be a temporary pause. Grief does that to you. Fab poetry. Not easy to decipher, but well worth the trying.
September 4th, 2024 04:36
It Is Over
sorenbarrett said:
Darker, this poem is crammed full of ancient images. I haven’t heard of Bastet for some time. Many of your lines are somewhat cryptic and evoke images of complicated metaphor. Love the poem
September 3rd, 2024 16:39
sorenbarrett said:
Darker, this poem is crammed full of ancient images. I haven’t heard of Bastet for some time. Many of your lines are somewhat cryptic and evoke images of complicated metaphor. Love the poem
September 3rd, 2024 16:39
Beyond My Nest Of Bees
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a master flow of imagery here aDarkerMind.
You have jam packed a modern tale, like a mini classical epic!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:43
AuburnScribbler said:
Such a master flow of imagery here aDarkerMind.
You have jam packed a modern tale, like a mini classical epic!
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
September 2nd, 2024 13:43
It Is Over
Teddy.15 said:
Something tells me somethings can never change, love every line the magnificent power I your imagery is always brought to life dearest Melvin. 🌹
September 1st, 2024 11:06
Teddy.15 said:
Something tells me somethings can never change, love every line the magnificent power I your imagery is always brought to life dearest Melvin. 🌹
September 1st, 2024 11:06
Beyond My Nest Of Bees
Teddy.15 said:
I reckon Sylvia Plath has a lot of gratitude for you dear Melvin, not only keeping her alive in spirit but with this glorious imagery. Wonderful poet you. 🌹
August 28th, 2024 16:50
Teddy.15 said:
I reckon Sylvia Plath has a lot of gratitude for you dear Melvin, not only keeping her alive in spirit but with this glorious imagery. Wonderful poet you. 🌹
August 28th, 2024 16:50
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Dan Williams said:
I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here \"water-stained with a shamrock on it\'s skull\" slays. Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 23:53
Dan Williams said:
I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here \"water-stained with a shamrock on it\'s skull\" slays. Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 23:53
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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through the eyes of Mnemosyne\'s muse
twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Once More As Seen In Others
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Once More As Seen In Others
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
Steadfast Into Another World
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Steadfast Into Another World
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Steadfast Into Another World
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Steadfast Into Another World
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
Steadfast Into Another World
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
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