Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
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twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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through the eyes of Mnemosyne\'s muse
twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Once More As Seen In Others
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Once More As Seen In Others
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
Steadfast Into Another World
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Steadfast Into Another World
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Steadfast Into Another World
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Steadfast Into Another World
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
Steadfast Into Another World
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
Cassie58 said:
time passes quickly, far too quickly
there is never enough time to do all the things we want to do or maybe should do.
Twenty years of reflection - that is a long time to consider making amends and deciding otherwise.
Some intriguing lines here, full of interesting imagery. You have such a unique writing style Melvin. I enjoyed my visit.
August 14th, 2024 14:49
Cassie58 said:
time passes quickly, far too quickly
there is never enough time to do all the things we want to do or maybe should do.
Twenty years of reflection - that is a long time to consider making amends and deciding otherwise.
Some intriguing lines here, full of interesting imagery. You have such a unique writing style Melvin. I enjoyed my visit.
August 14th, 2024 14:49
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images painted in this poem. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images painted in this poem. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 10:41
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
Teddy.15 said:
I see memories and time, which cannot be taken back. beautiful I read it a few times, gets more and more powerful. 🌹
August 14th, 2024 10:38
Teddy.15 said:
I see memories and time, which cannot be taken back. beautiful I read it a few times, gets more and more powerful. 🌹
August 14th, 2024 10:38
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent my dear friend, I couldn\'t help but to be drawn to Galway for this one. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:35
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent my dear friend, I couldn\'t help but to be drawn to Galway for this one. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:35
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of imagery and metaphors. Brilliant work.
August 13th, 2024 00:38
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of imagery and metaphors. Brilliant work.
August 13th, 2024 00:38
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
sorenbarrett said:
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55
Somewhere Between
Dan Williams said:
\"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed away\" highlight a powerful yet poignant write. Nice work.
August 12th, 2024 00:27
Dan Williams said:
\"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed away\" highlight a powerful yet poignant write. Nice work.
August 12th, 2024 00:27
Somewhere Between
2781 said:
Well it\'s certainly sounds dark.
A kind of unravelling I sense.
But then again, I haven\'t got a clue!
Intriguing though.
August 11th, 2024 08:56
2781 said:
Well it\'s certainly sounds dark.
A kind of unravelling I sense.
But then again, I haven\'t got a clue!
Intriguing though.
August 11th, 2024 08:56
Somewhere Between
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing lines dear Melvin, and as you have always done you bring your poem to a magnificent end,
I\'d like to leave some favourite lines that I just think magnificent
to roll my eyes somewhere inside
the open jars of flannels
for the cleansing hands of rich and yellow corn.
the dead shall rise once more
with tempers dull enough
to cross the palms of ridicule with spit.
my very own gravesend
it\'s iron\'s strong enough
to hold the seeds of a suicidal wren
Kudos my dear friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:48
Teddy.15 said:
Amazing lines dear Melvin, and as you have always done you bring your poem to a magnificent end,
I\'d like to leave some favourite lines that I just think magnificent
to roll my eyes somewhere inside
the open jars of flannels
for the cleansing hands of rich and yellow corn.
the dead shall rise once more
with tempers dull enough
to cross the palms of ridicule with spit.
my very own gravesend
it\'s iron\'s strong enough
to hold the seeds of a suicidal wren
Kudos my dear friend.
August 11th, 2024 07:48
Somewhere Between
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a piece with metaphoric quicksand so attractive that it shines in its own darkness. Knowing certain death I hypnotically with full free will march into its certain death. Such great lines in this poem they shine reflecting my ignorance of their meaning but sufficient to revel in their beauty. Nicely done
August 11th, 2024 07:11
sorenbarrett said:
Now here is a piece with metaphoric quicksand so attractive that it shines in its own darkness. Knowing certain death I hypnotically with full free will march into its certain death. Such great lines in this poem they shine reflecting my ignorance of their meaning but sufficient to revel in their beauty. Nicely done
August 11th, 2024 07:11
My Very Own Lemon Meringue
Cassie58 said:
I am too far south to love the artic charr
a fabulous line
you brought life to a lemon meringue pie, my senses were stirred
taste, sight, touch - a yummy poem Melvin. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:35
Cassie58 said:
I am too far south to love the artic charr
a fabulous line
you brought life to a lemon meringue pie, my senses were stirred
taste, sight, touch - a yummy poem Melvin. Happy Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 02:35
Such Rights Not Recognised
Teddy.15 said:
Believe me today I\'ve been doing much reflecting on social politics and on the way one can live as a king and another in a gutter, I\'ve been thinking a lot about acceptance and the very difference in cultures and indeed class. This is a fabulous provoking piece dear Melvin, powerful and very poetic 🌹
August 8th, 2024 14:54
Teddy.15 said:
Believe me today I\'ve been doing much reflecting on social politics and on the way one can live as a king and another in a gutter, I\'ve been thinking a lot about acceptance and the very difference in cultures and indeed class. This is a fabulous provoking piece dear Melvin, powerful and very poetic 🌹
August 8th, 2024 14:54
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