Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Beyond My Nest Of Bees
Teddy.15 said:
I reckon Sylvia Plath has a lot of gratitude for you dear Melvin, not only keeping her alive in spirit but with this glorious imagery. Wonderful poet you. 🌹
August 28th, 2024 16:50
Teddy.15 said:
I reckon Sylvia Plath has a lot of gratitude for you dear Melvin, not only keeping her alive in spirit but with this glorious imagery. Wonderful poet you. 🌹
August 28th, 2024 16:50
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Dan Williams said:
I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here \"water-stained with a shamrock on it\'s skull\" slays. Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 23:53
Dan Williams said:
I know who Mnemosyne was but I forgot . . .Seriously some great stuff here \"water-stained with a shamrock on it\'s skull\" slays. Nice work.
August 25th, 2024 23:53
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Cassie58 said:
I had to search, The Goddess of Memory.
one single rock where the black rook
stands supreme
this day it seems more ivory
It is almost time to sing and dance
I am all in white
as pale as snow
Such wonderfully creative lines here, imagery laden. Some memories can really darken our doorstep, but here I felt a move towards light.
Your uniqueness shines through Melvin.
August 25th, 2024 11:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Bella Shepard said:
Without memory we are nothing, we are full of them, they are our reality, good or bad they define us. Exquisite dear poet, exquisite!
August 25th, 2024 09:58
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words vivid images and hidden metaphors fill this piece
August 25th, 2024 05:57
Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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Through The Eyes Of Mnemosyne\'s Muse
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twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Teddy.15 said:
An outstanding piece as ever,
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through the eyes of Mnemosyne\'s muse
twelve statues stand as one this Sunday \'morn
each one no more a memory of time.
it is here below the fountain of regret
These lines just speak so much. Wonderful talent you have. 🌹
August 25th, 2024 05:29
Once More As Seen In Others
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Melvin, your imagery took me to the cemetery 🌹
August 24th, 2024 16:19
Once More As Seen In Others
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Full of imagery and metaphor this poem puzzles and engages the mind
August 24th, 2024 09:22
Steadfast Into Another World
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Cassie58 said:
A deep and thought provoking poem.
steadfast into another world
exiled
we two sons’ carved from stone
(brothers)
I am left to ponder on the other world.
Intriguing write poet.
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August 21st, 2024 15:00
Steadfast Into Another World
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Dan Williams said:
Gives cause to ponder any number of things. Brothers cast in stone? Great.
August 21st, 2024 00:09
Steadfast Into Another World
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully symbolic and filled with profound imagery! Love the Canterbury Tales reference. Great job!
August 19th, 2024 21:54
Steadfast Into Another World
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
sorenbarrett said:
Marked with symbolism this poem is a deeper read. Nicely done
August 19th, 2024 14:39
Steadfast Into Another World
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
Teddy.15 said:
Bravo dear Melvin, always magnificent I\'m imagery and in authenticity loving your final lines. Powerful 🌹
August 19th, 2024 13:14
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
Bella Shepard said:
A poem filled with unbelievable imagery, mystifying and tantalizing. Excellent write my friend!
August 19th, 2024 10:39
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
Cassie58 said:
time passes quickly, far too quickly
there is never enough time to do all the things we want to do or maybe should do.
Twenty years of reflection - that is a long time to consider making amends and deciding otherwise.
Some intriguing lines here, full of interesting imagery. You have such a unique writing style Melvin. I enjoyed my visit.
August 14th, 2024 14:49
Cassie58 said:
time passes quickly, far too quickly
there is never enough time to do all the things we want to do or maybe should do.
Twenty years of reflection - that is a long time to consider making amends and deciding otherwise.
Some intriguing lines here, full of interesting imagery. You have such a unique writing style Melvin. I enjoyed my visit.
August 14th, 2024 14:49
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images painted in this poem. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Vivid images painted in this poem. A fun read.
August 14th, 2024 10:41
Fourteen Sticks of Celery
Teddy.15 said:
I see memories and time, which cannot be taken back. beautiful I read it a few times, gets more and more powerful. 🌹
August 14th, 2024 10:38
Teddy.15 said:
I see memories and time, which cannot be taken back. beautiful I read it a few times, gets more and more powerful. 🌹
August 14th, 2024 10:38
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent my dear friend, I couldn\'t help but to be drawn to Galway for this one. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:35
Teddy.15 said:
Magnificent my dear friend, I couldn\'t help but to be drawn to Galway for this one. 🌹
August 13th, 2024 04:35
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of imagery and metaphors. Brilliant work.
August 13th, 2024 00:38
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous use of imagery and metaphors. Brilliant work.
August 13th, 2024 00:38
It Is Time It Found It\'s Hole
sorenbarrett said:
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55
sorenbarrett said:
Full of enigmatic metaphors it reads as the apocalypses great imagery here
August 12th, 2024 14:55
Somewhere Between
Dan Williams said:
\"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed away\" highlight a powerful yet poignant write. Nice work.
August 12th, 2024 00:27
Dan Williams said:
\"palms of ridicule with spit\" and \"one final taste of mercy washed away\" highlight a powerful yet poignant write. Nice work.
August 12th, 2024 00:27
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