Comments received on poems by aDarkerMind
Where Hides Conspiracy
Teddy.15 said:
As it seems we can no longer trust anyone dear Melvin. So damn powerful my friend. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 14:26
Teddy.15 said:
As it seems we can no longer trust anyone dear Melvin. So damn powerful my friend. ❤️
September 25th, 2023 14:26
I Cannot Sleep
L. B. Mek said:
!BRILLIANT!
\'locking horns the ladybirds of wine and cenotaph\'
\'two barrels to the street-wise,
two knives but still a city sleeps his spies;\'
\'clip my heels and trade my wide awake for ice-box glee;
dismember me
a stomach full of pebbles
and asking Sylvia remembers me;\'
(finale wishes
in an oven bake of a despairing plea delivered
in gluttonously vivid poetic imagery)
I humbly bow
to your superior talent
oh lauded Poet!
(some of your lines thrilled me
like Sylvia
and her inking thumb\'s cutting poetry..)
September 25th, 2023 02:53
L. B. Mek said:
!BRILLIANT!
\'locking horns the ladybirds of wine and cenotaph\'
\'two barrels to the street-wise,
two knives but still a city sleeps his spies;\'
\'clip my heels and trade my wide awake for ice-box glee;
dismember me
a stomach full of pebbles
and asking Sylvia remembers me;\'
(finale wishes
in an oven bake of a despairing plea delivered
in gluttonously vivid poetic imagery)
I humbly bow
to your superior talent
oh lauded Poet!
(some of your lines thrilled me
like Sylvia
and her inking thumb\'s cutting poetry..)
September 25th, 2023 02:53
I Cannot Sleep
Lorenz said:
thanks for your favour !
find a compromise with your nights !
September 24th, 2023 06:45
Lorenz said:
thanks for your favour !
find a compromise with your nights !
September 24th, 2023 06:45
I Cannot Sleep
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere between an angel and the soldiers of elite;
enemies have I?
none bar those who march backward beyond;
invite me and be dared;
My dear Melvin being in the middle of anything can sometimes be overwhelming, I see a battle here but in the end you will find the peace you so desperately seek and deserve ❤️
September 24th, 2023 02:04
Teddy.15 said:
somewhere between an angel and the soldiers of elite;
enemies have I?
none bar those who march backward beyond;
invite me and be dared;
My dear Melvin being in the middle of anything can sometimes be overwhelming, I see a battle here but in the end you will find the peace you so desperately seek and deserve ❤️
September 24th, 2023 02:04
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
L. B. Mek said:
\'coincidence or planned I cannot guess of who or who,
a morning sun of sedative
white sea alive and ticking second hand,
second hand to widows tears of he of high command;
like shadow to the fog
an arctic kick through the cancer of the cold,\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
(reading your work makes
ich, itch to ink
bring the german out of me)
lol
September 22nd, 2023 03:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'coincidence or planned I cannot guess of who or who,
a morning sun of sedative
white sea alive and ticking second hand,
second hand to widows tears of he of high command;
like shadow to the fog
an arctic kick through the cancer of the cold,\'
!!!Brilliant!!!
(reading your work makes
ich, itch to ink
bring the german out of me)
lol
September 22nd, 2023 03:29
Charlie Six
L. B. Mek said:
\'Epsom now a stop-watch for the turning age of man.\'
brevity, I name thee a place
seeped in the salt of my woes
(it is a crime your poetry
is not celebrated dear friend)
Brilliant!
and so raw and brave
you and Sylvia would write
one hell of a Poem!
Thank you for sharing your talent, dear Poet
it is an honour to read your work
(i\'m sorry if I sound fake
but I genuinely mean it)
September 22nd, 2023 03:25
L. B. Mek said:
\'Epsom now a stop-watch for the turning age of man.\'
brevity, I name thee a place
seeped in the salt of my woes
(it is a crime your poetry
is not celebrated dear friend)
Brilliant!
and so raw and brave
you and Sylvia would write
one hell of a Poem!
Thank you for sharing your talent, dear Poet
it is an honour to read your work
(i\'m sorry if I sound fake
but I genuinely mean it)
September 22nd, 2023 03:25
Where Ends Eternity?
L. B. Mek said:
\'christened by the rose of melancholy Aphrodite;
confetti came with nettles in her hair,
in snare of love too dark to reminisce.\'
beautifully noir imagery, inked succinct
(serendipity delivers promises
gift wrapped in cacti thorns
to hug our destiny, prepare to bleed
and have our potholed hope leak
our fantastical grasp of serenity)
you always deliver such great imagery
I read and learn, wise Poet
September 22nd, 2023 03:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'christened by the rose of melancholy Aphrodite;
confetti came with nettles in her hair,
in snare of love too dark to reminisce.\'
beautifully noir imagery, inked succinct
(serendipity delivers promises
gift wrapped in cacti thorns
to hug our destiny, prepare to bleed
and have our potholed hope leak
our fantastical grasp of serenity)
you always deliver such great imagery
I read and learn, wise Poet
September 22nd, 2023 03:18
I Have Never Seen a Ghost So White
Teddy.15 said:
She always knew as she does now. Incredible I just had goosebumps for 30 seconds. What a stunning poetic vision of that special beauty always alive in your heart. Loss of such love could never ever be repaired. ❤️
September 21st, 2023 01:35
Teddy.15 said:
She always knew as she does now. Incredible I just had goosebumps for 30 seconds. What a stunning poetic vision of that special beauty always alive in your heart. Loss of such love could never ever be repaired. ❤️
September 21st, 2023 01:35
Charlie Six
Lorenz said:
I have plucked bunches of words from your text to imagine a haiku according to the rule !
My idle hands now twitching
time past
winds of autumn
September 19th, 2023 13:43
Lorenz said:
I have plucked bunches of words from your text to imagine a haiku according to the rule !
My idle hands now twitching
time past
winds of autumn
September 19th, 2023 13:43
Where Ends Eternity?
Teddy.15 said:
Troubadour a wonderful word and for some reason I\'m getting the message that if we wanted to we could live in peace with all this beauty and nature surrounding us. Anyway this is what I see and it\'s another blinder of uniqueness. Extraordinary really. 💖
September 18th, 2023 14:37
Teddy.15 said:
Troubadour a wonderful word and for some reason I\'m getting the message that if we wanted to we could live in peace with all this beauty and nature surrounding us. Anyway this is what I see and it\'s another blinder of uniqueness. Extraordinary really. 💖
September 18th, 2023 14:37
Only Women Die
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! dear Poet
these words echo why empathy
is a core principal of humaneness
and Truth..
(i know it\'s not my place
but could you consider
attaching the music video
\'These woman\'s work\' by Maxwell
on this page?
just a thought, just ignore it
if you think me rude for asking
or you don\'t like the song)
September 15th, 2023 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant! dear Poet
these words echo why empathy
is a core principal of humaneness
and Truth..
(i know it\'s not my place
but could you consider
attaching the music video
\'These woman\'s work\' by Maxwell
on this page?
just a thought, just ignore it
if you think me rude for asking
or you don\'t like the song)
September 15th, 2023 05:06
From where comes light
L. B. Mek said:
\'the spoils of love as brittle as the braille\'
what imagery! brilliant dear Poet
(blinded, we reach out timidly
read with our fingertips
those storm winds in our path
love, has us petrified
yet, love has us learning braille
overnight, and so
we bravely grab tight and hope!)
September 15th, 2023 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'the spoils of love as brittle as the braille\'
what imagery! brilliant dear Poet
(blinded, we reach out timidly
read with our fingertips
those storm winds in our path
love, has us petrified
yet, love has us learning braille
overnight, and so
we bravely grab tight and hope!)
September 15th, 2023 05:01
Only Women Die
Teddy.15 said:
her grieving lines once laughter through the pillars of her heart,
now dead as dormouse feeding on a drip
Marvelous Melvin. 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:44
Teddy.15 said:
her grieving lines once laughter through the pillars of her heart,
now dead as dormouse feeding on a drip
Marvelous Melvin. 💖
September 14th, 2023 15:44
From where comes light
Teddy.15 said:
You never fail to blow me away with your poetic heart and these wonderful words that come together like silk and for some reason I cannot help but feel so utterly humbled to be able to read your beautiful verses. Yet another poetry spectacular that made me just want to weep. 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:38
Teddy.15 said:
You never fail to blow me away with your poetic heart and these wonderful words that come together like silk and for some reason I cannot help but feel so utterly humbled to be able to read your beautiful verses. Yet another poetry spectacular that made me just want to weep. 💖
September 13th, 2023 11:38
To The River\'s End
Lorenz said:
We share the talent of extracting the atomic consistency of the word !
\'\'who of why and when ; who\'s who ! \"
September 11th, 2023 13:08
Lorenz said:
We share the talent of extracting the atomic consistency of the word !
\'\'who of why and when ; who\'s who ! \"
September 11th, 2023 13:08
Three Brothers We
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
(I always wished for brothers
so this hits home for me
I connect to it pleading tone
worded, with a defiant ink)
thank you! dear Poet
September 8th, 2023 03:48
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
(I always wished for brothers
so this hits home for me
I connect to it pleading tone
worded, with a defiant ink)
thank you! dear Poet
September 8th, 2023 03:48
From Genesis to Dartmoor
L. B. Mek said:
\'“I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart. I am, I am, I am.”
from the Bell Jar
\'from brightness to the dark side of the fruit.
in foreign voice I crawl between the curtains of reprieve.
hanging shapeless with the hero and the twitch,
our shadows hanging taller than our souls;\'
you ASTOUND, cherished Poet
(I gladly bow to your superior talent)
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 03:45
L. B. Mek said:
\'“I took a deep breath and listened to the old brag of my heart. I am, I am, I am.”
from the Bell Jar
\'from brightness to the dark side of the fruit.
in foreign voice I crawl between the curtains of reprieve.
hanging shapeless with the hero and the twitch,
our shadows hanging taller than our souls;\'
you ASTOUND, cherished Poet
(I gladly bow to your superior talent)
thank you!
September 8th, 2023 03:45
Three Brothers We
Teddy.15 said:
what now we do,
we strangers in our perfect pose of sorrow?
we have walked more miles than the roots left unattended.
hungry men no older than the sleeping violin;
too proud to beg a solitary tear
You could have written this for me dear Melvin. Pain and sorrow loss yet such an amazing amount of dignity. Kudos. 💖
September 7th, 2023 17:07
Teddy.15 said:
what now we do,
we strangers in our perfect pose of sorrow?
we have walked more miles than the roots left unattended.
hungry men no older than the sleeping violin;
too proud to beg a solitary tear
You could have written this for me dear Melvin. Pain and sorrow loss yet such an amazing amount of dignity. Kudos. 💖
September 7th, 2023 17:07
As Broad as an Elephants Claw
Teddy.15 said:
four clouds of dust as risen as the dead.
slight-of-hand hides the Tarots card of god
from the drowning man, the pillow and the squawk
diving deep into the wounds of heavens well;
still comes the water. thick as candle-blood
For some reason I see Africa in this one. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:19
Teddy.15 said:
four clouds of dust as risen as the dead.
slight-of-hand hides the Tarots card of god
from the drowning man, the pillow and the squawk
diving deep into the wounds of heavens well;
still comes the water. thick as candle-blood
For some reason I see Africa in this one. 💖
September 6th, 2023 02:19
From Genesis to Dartmoor
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece that made me want to weep. 💖 welcome back my dear friend.
September 4th, 2023 10:23
Teddy.15 said:
An extraordinary piece that made me want to weep. 💖 welcome back my dear friend.
September 4th, 2023 10:23
The Wheel That Turns Immortal
Lorenz said:
An enigmatic mercurian thought that dares to challenge the threshold dragon.
September 3rd, 2023 16:26
Lorenz said:
An enigmatic mercurian thought that dares to challenge the threshold dragon.
September 3rd, 2023 16:26
where hides my sun and moon
Teddy.15 said:
From the mouth of poetry itself as it always is dear Melvin it\'s extraordinary I can never ever choose just one favourite line, your last stanza marvelous 💖 so wonderful to see you my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 08:43
Teddy.15 said:
From the mouth of poetry itself as it always is dear Melvin it\'s extraordinary I can never ever choose just one favourite line, your last stanza marvelous 💖 so wonderful to see you my friend.
September 3rd, 2023 08:43
Kingfishers Eyes
jarcher54 said:
I love it but haven\'t figured it all out! But that my friend is a good thing.
August 19th, 2023 10:40
jarcher54 said:
I love it but haven\'t figured it all out! But that my friend is a good thing.
August 19th, 2023 10:40
If I Take No Turn
L. B. Mek said:
(thank you for sharing such a revealing and honest write, dear Masterful Poet
and for inspiring my own little scribbled reply..
\'What a Talent!)
\'when we, but flesh and pulsing hope
meet, without first learning to greet
where do we acquire the fortitude
to stand erect, in that familiar face
of dread?
I seek, comfort in the absence
of parenthood, that chose to exist
as silent investor\'s in a portfolio
they stumbled upon, on a drunken night
and were too prideful
to open, that morning-after pill
of salvation and instead, caged us all
in this sinking fate
without Houdini\'s, tricks
to grant us a chance: for escape...\'
November 4th, 2021 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
(thank you for sharing such a revealing and honest write, dear Masterful Poet
and for inspiring my own little scribbled reply..
\'What a Talent!)
\'when we, but flesh and pulsing hope
meet, without first learning to greet
where do we acquire the fortitude
to stand erect, in that familiar face
of dread?
I seek, comfort in the absence
of parenthood, that chose to exist
as silent investor\'s in a portfolio
they stumbled upon, on a drunken night
and were too prideful
to open, that morning-after pill
of salvation and instead, caged us all
in this sinking fate
without Houdini\'s, tricks
to grant us a chance: for escape...\'
November 4th, 2021 03:20
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